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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
thanx dat was superb u shud be a writer and direct kyunki instead of ekta kapoor lolxxxxx
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62
part 14
THE NEXT MORNING
kt wakes up...still reflecting on wat tulsi said last night....she decides to goo to theterrace to meet lakshya as she knoe dat every morning after taking a shower he stays thr for sum time in his thoughts....

ON TERRACE
lakshya is think....think abt...kt ofcourse....he decided to tell tulsi n everyone the truth abt how they wanna get together....
jus then kt cums up...
kt sees lakshya... "lakshya"...lakshya turns around...see his dreamgirl n smiles....
kt; arre kt...tum yaha abhi... wow...
kt cums forth....
L: oh ya...tum janti ho mein abhi yeh hi soch raha tha...keh abh hum sabh koh bata i daite hai keh humare beech mein kya hai....


will continue soooon

rani
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
PArt 14
ON TERRACE
lakshya is think....think abt...kt ofcourse....he decided to tell tulsi n everyone the truth abt how they wanna get together....
jus then kt cums up...
kt sees lakshya... "lakshya"...lakshya turns around...see his dreamgirl n smiles....
kt; arre kt...tum yaha abhi... wow...
kt cums forth....
L: oh ya...tum janti ho mein abhi yeh hi soch raha tha...keh abh hum sabh koh bata daite hai keh humare beech mein kya hai.... kyun tum kya sooch ti ho
kt: muhje tumse kuch zarori baat karnihai...mein voh...
lakshya cums close to her...making kt even for nervous...
L: kya huwa itni dari huvi kyun ho
acchita cums from behind...she interrupts their conversation
A: lakshya, kt....donno koh neechai dadi neh bulaya hai...
L: ok...aatai hai...
L: chalo...
KT: tum jaoo mein ayi....
L: (raises his eyebrow) ok...jaise tumhari eecha./
he follows archita...kt stops him from behind "sunno", he turns
L: kya...
KT: aaj raat koh yaha plz aogeh ... muhje very important thing discuss karenah hai....
L:( smiles....he has a complete differnt thinking abt wat she'll say) okk.....
lakshya leaves....kt starts to cry.....
KT: kaash lakshya mere eecha sabh mein chalti....
she wipes her tears.... n walks downstairs....

DOWNSTAIRS: (living ROOM)
tulsi, tripti, tanya, damini, baa....poonam n manthan are downstairs.....along with a panditji
Lakshya cums down....poonam runs to him...n gives him a warm hug....
L: (confused) yeh sabh kya hora ha hai
poonam smiles....n pulls him toward tulsi...
tu: mein samja ti huan.... panditji...tumhari aur poonam aur kt aur manthan ki shaadi ki date fix kareneh aayai hai....
lakshya raises him eyebrows n gives a fake smile....
tulsi starts talking to panditji....
tu: yeh...char baache ki kundliya hai...mein chati huan keh aap... acchhi date aur.... unka future wedded life ki baare mein kuch baataiye...
P: theek hai....
panditji picks up 2 kundlis...
P: wow...(hee smiles) yeh dono kah wedded life iz awesome..... they will b really succesful in life together..any wedding dates are great for this couple....but it has to b this year...
tulsi, tanya, tritpi, poonam, n manthan both smile...
po: wow...yeh toh zaror mere aur lakshya ki hogi...
tulsi n tripti starts to laugh
tu; panditji...yeh kiski hai...
P: yeh....(searches for the names) lakshya aur krishna tulsi....
tripti , manthan, poonam , tulsi get a very shocked expresions on their faces.....while lakshya n baa smile
tu: inne dono ki nahi dekhneki nahi hai.... lakshya aur poonam ki dekho....aur krishna tulsi aur manthan ki dekhyai...
P: oh....(he picks up lakshya n poonam's kundlis n matfches it)...the wedding can only b held after 6mnths... on may 14
tulsi smiles....
tu: chalo mithai lekar dulhan aur dulha koh khila oh...
tripti n damini run to the kitchen n get the sweets ..
poonam n lakshya are fed the sweets by tripti...ponam looks at lakshya's frown face....n gets an ichy feeling...
kt cums downstairs puting a 5000watt smile...lakshya hears her footsteps n tursn to look at her...
poonam runs to kt....
po: hamari shaadi 14 may ki paaki hogayi hai....(n hugs her)
kt hugs bak n congratulates her
tulsi then shows kt n manthan's kundli....
panditji looks at it ....
P: yeh dono ki shaddi 2wks mein hojani chaye....varna 2ysaal tak nahi ho sakti....
tulsi makes a confused expression
tu: itni jaldi....tayari keh liya tuyyme chayai nah...
tanya innterupts...
Ta: its k maa.... hum sabh hai nah.....
manthan smiles....
damini feeds kt n manthan the sweets...
lakshya frowns n walks away instantly hearing it....
he walks outside....kt sees him goo....says nuthin....pooonam follows him///wonderng wats wrong with him.....

end of part 14

continur sooon

rani
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
part 15
OUTSIDE...
lakshya leaning at a pole...poonam cums from behind...
Po: hey
lakshya turns, sees poonam...smiles
L: hi...
po: tum toh aise mooo latka kare khadeh ho jaise shaadi hogayi ho...waise yeh hal ladko ka shaadi keh baad hota hai... ( and smiles)
lakshya smirks....
Po: kaun hai woh??? (seriosuly)
L: (sadly) pooooooooonam.....
po: (smiels) kash eh naam hota....paar nahi hai...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
part 15 (continue)
OUTSIDE...
lakshya leaning at a pole...poonam cums from behind...
Po: hey
lakshya turns, sees poonam...smiles
L: hi...
po: tum toh aise mooo latka kare khadeh ho jaise shaadi hogayi ho...waise yeh hal ladko ka shaadi keh baad hota hai... ( and smiles)
lakshya smirks....
Po: kaun hai woh??? (seriosuly)
L: (sadly) pooooooooonam.....
po: (smiles) kash eh naam hota....paar nahi hai...
her eyes become watery....
po: meinai tumhe hamesha pyaare kiya hai...but dat doesnt mean u hv to love me too dekho....tum tumhari love story definately khatem karnah .... plz....mere khatir....
l: ( looks at her tearful eyes) poonam....can i get a hug
po: no....1st promise me dat u will finish ur love story.....for me.....
L:(tears cum into lakshya's eyes) i promise!...
poonam gives him a smile.....
po: ok...now...say wateever u want quickly....before i cry.....
L: i'll cry too....gimme a hug plz...
P: noooo...
she comes forth n hugs him......lakshya hugs her tightly
L: i m sorry...!!
po: its ok....

end of part15
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
ur soo good at this.plzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
part 16
at nite....
everyone has had dinner....damini, tanya, tulsi, karan, n gautam r buzy with manthasn n kt wedding preperations.....
lakshya has his dinner.... n suddenly remembers dat kt called him upstairs....

he runs up....
he sees kt waiting on the terrace loking at the beautiful full moon. her hair laid on one side....she waz deep in her thoughs, thoughts abt how lakshya wud feel when he hears this...
lakshya cums up stairs....he slowly walks towards....n grabs her by the waist....
kt suddenly shruggs....
lakshya cums towards her eaar n wissphers, " sorry ...late hogaya"...
kt: choodo muhje....plz...
she takes lakshya's hands off her waist...
l; kya huwa...tum theek toh ho....kabse dekh raha huan keh tum kuch differently behave kar rahi ho...
KT: woh shaadi...
lakshya interupts...
L: i knoe u got scared...but trust me tomm i m gona tell tulsi dadi dat v love each n wanna marry....
KT: wat abt manthan???
L: i'll talk to him...i m sure he'll understand........oh ya....bat bbat mein tumhe baata nah bhul gaya...poonam nai shaadi keh liya nah kardiya hai...
kt is shocked...
kt: kyaaa????wat?? how???
L: ( touches kt by the shoulders) yes....meinai useh nahi bataya...usneh meri expressions koh dekar samaj gayi...
kt looks down...
L: abh hamare beech mein koi nahi hai...
kt: hai....
laskshya looks confused
kt: meinai fasla kiya hai.. keh mein manthan seh shaadi karoongi....
Lakshya's eyes widen....
l: kya???? ( holds her tight by the shoulder)
kt: aouchhh...ur hurting me...
L; wat...i m hurting u....wat rite who gave u the rite to make dicisions abt us....wat is this...tumne mere feelings n emotions koh kya ek game samja hai...jab chaiyai tab use kiya kab tod (break) diya....i want an answer kt...y? y do u always do this to mee????
KT: pehele... joh mera hota hai nah ....uske liya mein decisions ofcourse make karesakti huan...i dunt hv to ask anyone....n speaking abt ur feelings.... DO u think i m happy abt saying this.... ofcourse not...jabse meinai pyaare koh samja hai sirf tumse pyaare kiya hai... mere liya yeh easy nahi hai lakshya....but im helpless...mein majboor huan....
she tells the entire conversation she had with tulsi the other night....lakshya's eyes get watery....
kt: mein kya karo.... chahateh huwai bhi mein tumhe pyaare nahi kare sakti, sirf baa aur this family keh liya.... u tell me....if baa has these kind of expectations then....how can i let her down....she brought me up... sent me to skool, fulfilled my every desire ....how can i not do one thing for her.....
tears roll down her cheeks....
L: every tyme kt....har bar....always... tum dusroh keh bare mein his sooch ti ho....
kt: (wipes her tears) sooo u see i cant let down baa's expectations.... i cant....u knoe when she waz telling me this mein usse aakha nahi mila sakhi... y because muhje pata tha keh mein guilty huan.... i hope u can understand this/!!!
kt starts to leave
Lakshya holds her hand...
L: tumhe har baar dusroki khushi dikti hai....meri khushi kah kya...jab chahe mmeri zindagi mein aa gayi jabh chahe chali gayi....
kt:mere liya baa ki khushi tumse zada important hai...
lakshya lets go of kt in a shock.....
kt starts to leave....
betab dil hai (sad) plays in the bakground from phir milengai....{ u shud hear the song while reading this}
kt leaves crying....lakshya...sees her goo with a sad tearful face.....tears roll down lakshya's innocent frowning face

END OF PART1 6

rani~~
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
Part 17
kt runs to her her bedroom... she drops her self on her her....n cries her eyes out!!!....
she takes out lakshya's picfrom her side table drawer n holds it agaisnst her chest...
KT: (crying) i m sorry lakshya.... !!!
"lakshya koh kyun sorry bol rahi ho" a voice calls from behind....
kt turns... n a scared face pops up on her face
kt: aap yaha ....
it waz tripti
Tr:haan, tumne hi poonam koh kuch kaha hoga..
kt: yeh aap kya keh rahi hai....mein nai toh aisa kuch bhi
tripti interrupts her...
Tr: zada bholi baneki klooshish mat karo...
kt; lekin huwa kya...
tripti mimicks her
Tr: lekin huwa kya, aise bol rahi hai keh kuch janti hi nahi
kt is confused....
Tr: poonam ki mom kah phone aya ...aur janti ho kya kaha....poonam neh lakshya keh sath shaadi kareneh keh liya no kaha hai
kt: WAT!!!!(shee yells in a shock)
Tr: y r u surprised....tumne hi toda nah rista....
kt: meinai kuch nahi kiya....
Tr: kitne paise chaiya tumhe , mere lakshya ki zindagi seh hatnekeh liya.....
kt: (shocked) wat r u saying?????
Tr: u alraeady are cheating on manthan.... ur teaching my son the same thing rnt u.....
she leaves.....
kt:i think dats wat lakshya waz trying to tell me.....


part 17 continue nxt...wk

rani


rupi b thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
👏 👏 its really good plz continue 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
😭 😭 That was a bit sad. But do continue next week soon.

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