FF: Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain...update on pg18 - Page 12

zabar ka phal mitha hota hai
truthhhh
yaar ur a great writter
u should do a drama lol
its greatttttttt

brilliant!!

it was seriously worth the wait!!

keep going and i wonder what manthan will say when he realises KT is there
to wake him up!

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The story is buliding up beautifully 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: destinyz

uffff itna wait karwayaa!!!!!! i thought ud never update again.... and now uv left the best part out!!!!
no fair.... dont make me wait for soo long for the next update...

loved this one... spec the way manthan seems to flrt with tulsi... too bad we dont get that in the tv serial!

OMG! you're GIFTED! probably the best fanfic writer on these forums! I love your work! Wonder what'll ahppen when Kt goes to wake Manthan up. Keep it up.😃

great part!!!wanna see Manthan's reaction when he opens his eyes and sees KT there 😆 !!!!pls continue soon

great!!!! n yes....itz beena very looong time....
so..hope 2 hear frm u soon.......

Wowww!! 👏 👏 👏 Great part!! Hope U wont take much time to update the next one.... Waiting for it!!

you still havent updated its been to long canyou plz update

omg this is awesome
cant wait fo tha nxt prt

fantastic part...i cant wait till the next part...continue soon pls