is this nt Love???updated.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Suhasi-Mona's confrontation is coming.some crazy ideas has come to my head,am jst scribbling it here.this is the vry first time am writing something like this.hp u all like it,atleast.i know hw bad i write.
Suhasi is surprised to know abt Vineet's proposal to Mona frm Pradeep.Wonders, y Mona didn't share this with her.Decides to talk to mona.
Mona in her room,standing near the window,by the side of her dressing table,thinking, whether to call Vineet or nt?She takes the phone,dials his no n then suddenly disconnects the call.She is contemplating whether it is needed to call him n thank for the cake.Decides nt to call him.Keeps the phone on the table n moves to the other side.soon she finds her shawl being stucked in the dressing table.It reminded her of the incident with her shawl in the office.she feels so embarrass at first n then smiles.With determination,Mona takes the phone n dials Vineet's no.Wn she heard ,'ha Mona',frm the other side of the phone,she is actually in lose of words.Hastily said:'thanks,thanks for the cake'.Vineet firmly,'i did it for Rano n nt to hurt anyone's feeling.Knew that u would be late frm work. Aft all, time n tide never waits for anyone.One must know hw to walk with time.Good nite'.He cuts the call.Mona is totally taken back.
Suhasi,already at the entrance of the room,realised Mona was talking with Vineet,comes into the room n ask if Mona is free.She would want to talk with Mona.Mona ask,kya baat hai Ma.Is evy thing fine at home?

Suhasi: Ha...evything is fine at home.u tell me,hws ur office work?is evything fine with u?
Mona: ha Ma(in low voice)evything is fine.wts the matter?

Suhasi:mona,tell me hw was the party?has vineet selected anyone?read in the paper wt he said at the party abt his lifepartner.is there anyone already in his heart?
Mona:Ma,don't know.y u r asking me?
Suhasi:thought,u w'll know it.Aft all u both r vry good friends.he might hv told u?
Mona:(stammering)don't know.u tell me,hw was the fashion show?u must hv had a grt time.am sorry.i couldn't make it.
Suhasi:mona,r u hiding smthing frm me.hv i become a stranger?
Mona:(interfering)Ma...
Suhasi:r u nt hiding smthing frm me?tell me mona?
Mona:hw can i ever hide smthing frm u,Ma?ha Ma, smthing unaccepted has happened.never ever thought such a thing will happen with me?am so lost.can't understand anything,can't decipher a thing.

Suhasi:(interfering)still u r nt telling wt the matter is,mona?
Mona:Lst nite,Vineet sir confessed his love to me.never expected such a thing frm him.He is my close friend.hw could he think of me like that?can't understand anything.

Suhasi:(aft a pause)time has come to think abt a good future.y should u bear the burden of a broken relation?don't clinch to it,mona.move on.am with u.

Mona:(interfering)i don't want to marry.am living only for my children.am happy with it.don't want anything more in life.

Suhasi:life can't be lived alone,its hard.wn life is giving new opportunity,new happiness,y
should u ignore it?if u hvn't thought abt it,mona,its time to think.
Mona:(emotionally)i don't want to think.i know he is only my friend,a good friend.i don't,i don't love him.
to be continued...
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Pooja_0910 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome..you write this situation beautifuly..i would love to see this type of scene in tomorros episod...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Are Wah ... nice try. Looking forward to read the next chapter 😊 Also nicely written.

I hope the Vineet/ Mona part actually happens tomorrow, but I think even here Mona is going to act weird.

A supportive Suhasi is not what we are going to in the show for a while, so it is nice to read that she is positive in your story or is there a twist 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I forgot about the cake in the preview. I think it might be Anushka who brought the cake. Mona will call Vineet to thank him (or maybe scold him for interfering in her matters!) and he will act all cold and sarcastic, saying, "I have no idea what you are talking about, and I don't care."

Nice try. Hope to see something on those lines.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this seems too good to be true.. we cant expect this from the cvs :P. but then umeed pe duniya kaayam hain :)) thanks for sharing :)

and you write very nice.. do continue.. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: blyton

I forgot about the cake in the preview. I think it might be Anushka who brought the cake. Mona will call Vineet to thank him (or maybe scold him for interfering in her matters!) and he will act all cold and sarcastic, saying, "I have no idea what you are talking about, and I don't care."

Nice try. Hope to see something on those lines.



The receipt was on Vineet Raizada's Name 😕 But I guess you could be right. Anu is a master in playing games 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice :)
I would love to see Suhasi like this in the show!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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here v continue...

He came in the most darkest phase of my life.He was my biggest supporter.He has always fought my battles n helped me fight them.It is because of him,i hv moved on in life
(Suhasi,with surprise n wonder looks at Mona.Can't believe wt she jst nw heard frm Mona.Keeps looking at Mona with wonder.)
He accepted me for wt i was.He never stopped believing in me n had never let me go even wn the situation was hard.He was the one with whom i shared all my thoughts.Wnever i needed someone,he was the one who was always there for me.He is a nice person.I hv never seen or known a person so simple,humble,friendly,loving,understanding n straight forward as him.There is something that assimilates me mentally to him.He understands the language of my countenance n movements.But i can't be the reason for his happiness.He deserves the best in life.I can't be the...(in tears)
( Suhasi can clearly read Mona's mind.She understands the turmoil that Mona is going through.)
Suhasi:(Aside) Isn't this love, mona???Vineet has become a part of ur life.It is jst a matter of time for u to realise it.I nw know wt i should do.(To Mona)Don't think to much.Evy thing happens for a reason.u tk rest nw.Am with u.Kisses Mona's forehead n leaves.
( At the door,Suhasi turns back,looks at Mona n then smiles!!!(Aside)'This time i won't let the happiness go away frm ur life.nt for a single reason,Mona.' )
Sweetsang's FF has inspired me to write this.I know nothing of this kind is going to happen in the show.This is too good to be true.Here i hv jst considered Suhasi as a good n understanding mother of Mona as it is SAID in the show.For me the highlight of this confrontation is Mona's feelings n emotions which am dying to see n hear in the show n this people never shows it.
Edited by rtms - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the support.👍🏼
Edited by rtms - 13 years ago

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