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Posted: 19 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Niki_18

As requested by Ziddi and Twinkle I hope u dont more bored reading this.

Story continued...

Nimmo is in the bathroom getting changed into a long lavender skirt and a white laced top (she had decided to wear western clothes for a change) and she was in deep thought 'Wat is wrong wiv that guy?!!! 2 months of our marriage hav gone by and he still behaves like an annoying, stupid spoilt flirt!!!' She looks up2 Baghwan 'Y do u keep letting him behave like that wiv me?! For once can u jus teach HIM a lesson instead of making me a fool outa myself?! Tum meri madath Kabhi nahi Karogi!! 😑' She brushes her hair (not forgetting to put the sindoor) and she makes her way down for dinner.

At the table evry1 is tucking away except Kunal. Dadi notices this and 'Beta tum kuch kai kyun nahi? U avn touched NEting!'
Kunal:'Nahi Dadi.. Bus mein.. Kuch nahi... I was jus waiting for Nimmo' (Dadi wasn pleased at all)
Jus then Dadaji goes 'Lo Agayi tumhari Nimmo'
Nimmo gives a coy smile and makes her way to sit down. (Kunal cant take his eyes off her πŸ˜³πŸ˜†)
Dadi:'Jus a minute'...Nimmo stopped in her tracks, evry1 looks up nervously and wiv unease.. 'I would like Nimmo to serve me some chicken curry please...'Goes Dadi. A sigh of relief is breathed and there goes our Nimmo to serve Dadi.

As she opened the pot of chicken curry, a 'woof woof' is heard nearby... Evry1 froze... (including the maids and servants) Slowly slowly Nimmo turns around to face... a dog(Oscar-oops!) charging at full speed right 2wards her. Oscar takes a huge leap...
The next minute, there laid Nimmo on the floor... chicken curry split all over her... and there was Oscar licking her away!

Wat a dinner aiy?!

Hope u guys liked that. πŸ˜ƒ

thanks nikki it was too good and something expected to happenπŸ˜†πŸ‘πŸ˜†
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
okay so i tried too.. its not that good.. but have fun .. and contribute..

FROM 27th... wer kunal and nimz go to his home


nimmo and kunal go 2 his home.. everyone waiting..while coming in
nimmo breaks another vase..and kunal just looks embarassed..
kunal's dadaji along w/ the entire family looks surprised..
dadi: "what kind of a joke is this kunal? eey ladki iss ghar
main kya kaar rahein hai?"
dadi looks at nimmo with a snake-eyed face.. "get out now"
dadaji: "nahin preet, agar kunal ki yeh choice hai. to hum uska
saat zaroor dhene wale hain"
nimmo walks towards dadaji and takes ashirwaad..
evil chachi: "maiji, yeh is ghar main nahi reh sakti.."
nimmo starts tearing...kunal notices and says: 'nimmo lets go..
we will come back later..."
they leave..
in the Mercedes:
kunal: "im sry nimmo.. i didnt know you would get hurt...
i thought that u wud be okay... "
nimz: "when i agreed to the contract.. i knew this would happen..
maybe it might take time for me to adjust.."
kunal stops his car.. and they stop at a restaurant..
"uhh .. wanna have something to eat? i dunno what ur fav food is
but u can uhhh tell me and we can go.."
nimz: "uhh.. kante bhain mere liya ghar wait kaar rahi hogi..
uhh i think i should go"
kunal: "u can call her and tell her.. u will be there.. soon..here"
he hands her his cell.. suddenly..it rings.. its a call from his gf..
nimmo picks up..

"hello?"
gf: who is this?
nimz: this is kunals fiance
kunal and nimz stare at each other... then nimz calls..
nimz: masi.. main kunal ke saath lunch kaarne wali hoon..
masi: woh!? uske saath??!! thik hai thik.. paar jaldi ghar aajana!
nimz: ok.. thik hai..

THE LUNCH SCENE>. U GUYZ CONTINUE>>1
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
Aww well done prettygurl! That was really nice.
I'll try nd giv it a shot nd continue! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
wow!! all of u r so creative! great job πŸ‘ πŸ‘

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Posted: 19 years ago
#35

ok.... i'll try my hand at this one....its NOT a sequel to anything.......... this is my first time guys, so be kind!

Situation:
After Kunal and Nimmo gets married and have grown to become good friends and are cordial to each other. They have started caring about each other.
Example.... Kunal jumps to Nimmmo's defence everytime dadi or parminder aunty say anything mean about her class or accuses her of being a "gold digger". Nimmo tries to lessen the tension between kunal and his mom. and genuinely wants them to get back on good terms. everything is goody goody.

Until........ Kunal accidentally comes to know about Nimmo's "feelings" for Vikrant.


Scene:
Kunal is in his bedroom. Pacing around, confused!..... fuming with …. with …. with what? He stares at himself in the mirror and starts wondering when ..... suddenly .... his reflection starts talking!

Kunal's reflection: why do you even bother? Or care?
Kunal(surprised) : huh?

Kunal's reflection: tumhe itna takleef kyu ho raha hai? who tumhara asli biwi thodi hai…. who jisko chahe usse pyar kar sakti hai …uski life lai….. tumhe isse kya?

Kunal: lekin woh toh keh rahi thi ke pyar karna sab se badi musibat hai…?

Kunal's reflection: idiot! Uska matlab hoga TUMSE pyar karna sab se badi musibaat hai….. πŸ˜•

Kunal: ok….. lekin …. Of all people, why Vik yaar??
Kunal's reflection: kyuki vikrant ek accha ladka hai …. Tumhari tarah bewakoof nahi…. He knows how to respect women.

Kunal: hoga, lekin Vik me aisa kya hai jo mujh me nahi?….. (more haughtily) mere peeche to hazaaron ladkiya marti hai 😳

Kunal's reflection: Kunal, when will you come into reality? tumse toh KK ko zyada aakal hai!πŸ˜† ..... Aadhi se zyada ladkiya toh tumse badhke tumhare bank balance pe marte hai ….. haan, thodi bahut charm toh hai, lekin vikrant wali baat nai….

Kunal: kyun nahi?

Kunal's reflection: wohi baat dus baar bolna padhega kya? πŸ˜• Waise bhi…. Tum kyo apne aap ko vikrant se compare kar rahe ho? Nimmo ke liye vikrant se kusti ladho ge kya? πŸ˜†

Kunal: haan haan …. Haso haso …. Bahut hasi aa rahi hai na…. But this is not funny!

Kunal's reflection: why not? Tumhe ho kya gaya hai Kunal? uski zingadi hai…. let her live her life…. Remember the contract?

Kunal: haan haan mujhe saab yaad hai …

Kunal's reflection: toh fir problem kya hai?…..kahi tum vikrant se jealous toh nahi ho?

Kunal: hmm…...... kyaa….????? Nahi!!!... Mujhe kahase jalan hone lagi? wooh bhi Vik see? ?...Kabhi nahi! ….. aur wooh bhi Nimmo ke like????? NEVER!!!

At this moment, Nimmo enters the room,

Nimmo: Kya huwa? Kisse batein kar rahe ho? Nimmo ke liye kya?

Kunal(embarresed and flustering): huh? … nahi … woh kuch nahi…. Yuhi…… tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Kuch kaam tha?

Nimmo: niche khane pe tumhara sab intezaar kar rahe hai …. Toh mai bulane chali ayi
Kunal: tum chalo main aata hu

Nimmo leaves (giving Kunal a weird look) πŸ˜• ..... thinking "Yeh aaj Kunal ko ho kya gaya hai!"

Kunal(looking back at his reflection angrily 😑 ): kya yaar! Uske hi saamne bhanda phodne laga tha??

Kunal walks out of the room thinking, "sach, yeh mujhe ho kya raha hai?"

~~~ THE END ~~~

Tell me howz my first try!

Edited by coolfire - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
coolfire ur story is really cool
πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
please keep posting more
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
coolfire your story is great
please continue soon πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
Here's my story:

This is Nimmo and Kunal's wedding day. πŸ˜†

The pandit has just called the bride. As Nimmo is coming down the stairs. Kunal thinks "bas ab meri sab problem solve ho jayengi. Nimmo thoughts, "mein yeh shadi sirf apni family ke liye kar rahi hon. Kanta Ben, "hey baghvan please Nimmo stairs se mat gire."
But our clumsy Nimmo trips our gown at hte end of the stairs and falls down. the whole media was there to take pictures. Kunal thinks "ab to yehi baki tha."
Nimmo fights with God. "main ne tumse kha tha ke tum break mein chala jao. Lekin tum to har waqt mera bora chate hoon na. Kya mere Kunal se shadi ho rehi hai woh kam nahin tha jo mujhe gira diye or who bhi sari duniya ke samne. I hate you god. Aur ab please koi hor panga mat karna." 😑 😑
Nimmo's sisters help her up and the wedding happens. As the pheras are happening Nimmo and Kunal are saying there own wording. Kunal is saying that Bas ek saal nimmo ko sehana hogo. uske baad to sab daulat meri ho gayi. Mera freedom mere paas hoga. Mera divorce bhi hoga.I wish ke jaldi ho. Nimmo is saying bas ek saal Kunal ko sehna hoga. Is shadi seh mujhe bahut paise millenge aur un paise se mein apne mama ki help karongi.

THE END for rite now
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
πŸ‘πŸΌ job guys.....i made one but now i'm thinking it's not good enough πŸ˜•
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
Very Nice stories guys!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ Luvd them! Please write more! πŸ˜ƒ

Ok let me try another one:

Kunal: 'Are u gona come or not?!!'
'Kaha?! Tumhari ex-GIRLFRIEND ki party- NOWAY!!! I told at first I hate parties...if u wana go- u can go!' Said Nimmo drying her hair as she jus had gotten outa the bath.
Kunal:'NAHI... NOWAY! I cant go wivout u!' he sed in desparation!!
Nimmo:'Kyun?!! I wont die... jus GO!!Plus its ur EX-GIRLFRIEND's party, wat on earth am I gona do there?'
Kunal:'Ur Kantaben Mujhe Chodunda Nahi!!!And Id rather go wiv u than embarass myself wiv Khantaben.-Pleeeeease can u come-Mereliye?!' He begged.
'Does ur girlfriend know that we r married?' Nimmo asked Kunal suspiciously.
'Yes Yes-ofcourse she knows-Obviously, Nimmo the wedding hit the HEADLINES!!! She jus wants to see u and me turn up at her party!'Said Kunal with an aura of impatience.
Aftr a few minutes (Nimmo was giving it a thought) she finally agreed-reluctantly! πŸ€”
'Oh thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! I'll giv u a bonus salary next month!' Said Kunal relievd.

'Wat a boring life she mustav lead!!'thought Kunal to himself. He had decided to go and wait at the car for Nimmo. 'No parties..No discos...No clubbing... Kya hai yeh ladki? huh?' he thought shaking his head!!
Jus then, right behind him he head...'um..chale'. He turned around and saw our pretty Nimmo dressed in tight black jeans with a nice silver and grey Kurta top. She had done her hair up in low flower bun wiv matchin dangling earings, necklace and THE 5million rupee wedding ring 😳.
Kunal was definitly impressed. 'Oh um... errr... tum.. umm... '
Nimmo:'Kya?' she sed confused
Kunal:'Kuch Nahi.. Ur looking very pretty! 😳'
Nimmo:'Oh... thanx! she said πŸ˜ƒ 'Ur looking very HOT πŸ˜‰ urself' (He was! He was wearing a midnight blue silk shirt and blue jeans)
They both got in the car and drove of to the party.

At the party...

Kunal's entry was greeted wiv screaming gals evrywhere. Nimmo however, looked around in disgust and thought to herself 'Oh get over urselves!!-He aint all u think he is!😑'
Nimmo looked upto Kunal. He seemed to be suffering... there was a look of dread and annoyance on his face.
Nimmo:'Kya hua tumko?'
Kunal:'I can already see 7 ex-girlfriends of mine!!'
Nimmo'KYA?!!!' she said shocked 'Magar u sed...'
She looked around once again at the girls in the party and turns to Kunal... with a red face (she was getting madder every second)
'Is this a Kunal Sehgal's EX-GIRLFRIENDS REUNION PARTY or what?!!' 😑

How was that? Tell me if u liked it, I'll writing a continuation of this-only if u guys want me too!
tc! πŸ˜ƒ

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