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Posted: 17 years ago
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WILL YOU COME SHOPPING WITH ME?

Its early morning and everyone is sitting at the breakfast table.

AMAN
-kakun..great that your here..come,come sit down and have some breakfast.

KAKUN
-
no aman i'm..i'm not hungry

AMAN
-oh come on kakun please...
kakun gives a smile and walks towards the chair next to aman when rahul pushes past her and sits down on the chair.

RAHUL
-sorry kakun..i didn't know you wanted to sit here..neways never mind theres a seat next to me....you could sit here if you want.(rahul rolls his eyes to the chair hinting to kakun to sit next to him)
An annoyed kakun sits down on the chair next to rahul.(giving him the how dare you look)
rahul looks at kakun and smirks at her..

RAHUL
-erm kakun i'm going to go shopping to buy naina a saree..but...i'm not sure what colour to buy...and since everyone is busy,maybe you could help me choose a saree for her...

KAKUN
-me?well?i don't know..how...

RAHUL
-mama...come on you explain to kakun that she goes with me....pleeease...
kakun looked at rahul with bigs eyes and looks around to see that everyone is staring at her..and gives a big fake smile.....

RAHUL'S MUM-
if rahul is insisting then go along with him darling.

RAHUL
-yes kakun..come on i need you help...pweeeeese!

KAKUN
-erm rahul...can i,can i speak to you alone for a minute please

RAHUL
-kakun whats there to hide,whatever you wan't to say you could say it here

KAKUN
-i'm kind off busy later so i won't be able to go with you

RAHUL
-fine kakun..its cool...but.....if you don't go with me then i won't be able to buy a gift for naina and then she'll be upset but its ok..its upto you. (acting that he is upset rahul looks down)

KAKUN-ok fine,i'll go with you....(gritting her teeths)

RAHUL-really kakun! you'll make time for me even though your soooo busy?
wow! i feel sooo special!
thanks kakun...your shaaaw shweet!
anyways i'm full now....
i'm going to go to the office bye everyone...

(rahul's sarcasm made kakun sooo angry)

Rahul walks off but then comes back and whispers to kakun
RAHUL-
make sure your ready...i'll pick you up later..don't be late honey

kakun stares at rahul
as he walks off with a big grin on his face leaving
her annoyed than ever.


HOPE YOU ENJOYED MY 1ST FANFIC 😳
THERES MORE TO COME 😉
please leave your view so i could know if i should carry on writing my fanfics or not😳






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287432 thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
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i was waiting for someone to write a fan fic on them

cute start...hope it gets better
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice start
Can't wait to see wat happens on the shopping trip
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooooooooooooooon
gansteress thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank you😳
i would write my next ff soon xxx

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Posted: 17 years ago
#5
niceeeee.
im gonna post my FF in a biiiitt after im donee tyypinngg. iitt.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#6
haaaa too gooddd a Kakoon Rahul ff
i was searching for one for so long...you r just great
anyway love it
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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LOVE IS IN THE CAR?
Rahul was standing next his car waiting anxiously for kakun,he looked at his watch to see what time it is and thought to himself how long is she going to take.
He then started walking back and forth and started to think kakun was not going to come.

RAHUL
-kakun..where are you....(sigh)
just as rahul turned around he then saw kakun was walking towards him.
rahul's heart just dropped as he stared at kakun so lovingly and started to fall into another world....his smile grew bigger and bigger as kakun walked closer towards him.

RAHUL-erm...you...
he had no words to say to kakun how beautiful she looked in her blue and white dress.
he wanted to but words just won't come out of his mouth.
kakun looked at him with a confused face and ask if he was feeling alright.

RAHUL
-erm..lets go...
kakun rolled her eyes and as she walked towards the door,rahul quickly grabbed the car door handle and opened it for her and then smiled like her never smiled before.

KAKUN
-i can open the door myself rahul...

RAHUL
-yes i know you can but as your husband i wanted to open it for you

KAKUN
-your not my husband...don't forget i signed the divorce paper....

RAHUL
-again with this rubbish talk..kakun you might not accept me as your husband but i accept you as my wife and you can't stop me...and don't you forget..i haven't signed the divorce paper..so technically your my wife and i'm still your husband...
if you can accept that then tough...
rahul slammed the door shut and walked to the other side of the car,
sat down in the car and
drove off.

KAKUN
-so where are we going?

RAHUL
-out..where else?

KAKUN
-rahul i know that but where are we sh
opping?

RAHUL
-shopping?and us?what..what you on about?

Rahul smirked as kakun stared at him worried...
rahul knew what she meant but acted as if he didn't know what kakun was saying.

KAKUN
-rahul don't joke!you know that we are going shopping to by a saree for naina...

RAHUL
-huh?really....i didn't know that
all i know is that i'm taking you out...(and then whispered)...on..a..date....
kakun stared to boil with anger..she couldn't believe that rahul would lie to her so he could take her......

Rahul drove the car faraway where there was no way of kakun finding her way home...where there was no buses or any cars about.
kakun asked rahul that she wants to go home...but rahul didn't not listen to her

RAHUL-you wan't to..go...i'm not stopping you..but i'm not going anywhere...
i'm going stay here and relax...

KAKUN-rahul...theres no buses or any transport....how am ...

RAHUL
-not my problem....if u want to go home you have to wait when i take you or you could make your own way...upto you....

KAKUN
-fine!i'll make my own way!
kakun got out of the car and walked and walked until she met a dead end where a sign was written...
DANGER! DO NOT ENTER!

RAHUL-BOO!
hmmm kakun if you wanted to die so quickly theres a cliff right there....
kakun looked at him with big eyes and tightened her fist really hard...
RAHUL-i'm just saying...
KAKUN-CHUP!
RAHUL-ok..(and put one finger on his lip and then looked down)
erm one more thing....

but before rahul could could say anything...kakun just walked in the jungle so she could get away from rahul,
just as she thought she did manage to get rid off him,rahul started to follow her.....

Hey guys hope you enjoyed it...😊
next ff is going to be lost in the jungle or in love...😉
please do leave your opinions about my ff so i could make it better.😳

ALL OF MY FF IS DEDICATED TO ALL KAKUN AND RAHUL FANS!😃






ahada thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#8
I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#9

cute...I have been wating for the fanfic on them ...and it is after sometime that Im on if..and I just saw ur fanfic...i love it..keep it up

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Haaaaaaaaaaa continue sooOoooonnnn
Love it yaar ...
Its great , that great that i can see rahul expression lol
^^

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