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Posted: 17 years ago
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her babes have you read mine you joka what did you think about it
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Posted: 17 years ago
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No, hun. Where did you post it? 😲
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Posted: 17 years ago
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on the previousl page below shashas
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I JUST READ IT! RaKun, hun, that was absolutely, breathtakingly, incredibly, supremely BEAUTIFUL 😲 It was the sweetest and somehow saddest ending I've read, but still it was perfect 😭 I simply love it. Wauw. Who knew such amazing writers are hiding out in this little forum - EKTA, OPEN YOUR EYES! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww elysia you really know all of the right thing to say babes luv ya you are simply the best also you better start writing aswell you know lol🤣 AND SOON
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey shasha it was briliant
awsom ff every body

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hats off 2 u guys...u guys seam 2 b hard core romantics!!!😉
cant wait 4 de next part of both de fanfics!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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well your writing is also amazing mable
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CHAPTER 3




it was the morin after and kk was getting the breakfast table ready for every one. the sound of footsteps cumin dwn and kk knew straight away that it was rahul. she was standing there and looking really nerves it was like she didnt know how to act after what had happened last night. her heart beating faster and faster as the footstep cum closer and closer until finally he was there staring into her eyes and so was she.
rahul kakoon...
kakoon rahul.. ive got to go and get the tea and breakfast for all of yours
kk went before rahul could finish his sentence. rahul just stood there flashback of the night came bck to him. he closed his eyes thinking about it.
gaya rahul
rahul suddenly opened his eyes and looked towards gayo direction
rahul ma
gaya what wrong you seemed abit dazed
rahul kuch nahein im fine mom i just havent been sleeping rite thats all
gayo why whats wrong aap tubyate tho tike hai
rahul je ma im fine its just ive been a bit stressed anyway ma cum and have your breakfast
gaya okay but dnt stress yourself out too much [smiles]
both of them sit at thier seats
gaya where is kakoon? turns towards rahul
rahul shes in the kitchen [looks down at his plate]
kakoon enters with the tea and breakfast
kakoon mumma
gaya kaokoon i was just telling rahul were you had gone
kk looks straight at rahul and so does rahul
aman goodmorning everyone
kk looks at aman and rahul looks into his direction
aman sits dwn and looks at kk
aman so kk where were you last night i was lookin for you every where[gives a wicked smile to kk]
rahul eyes shoots toward kk direction
gaya looks at kk
gaya kakoon aap kahain thi itni raat mein
rahul eyes just couldnt move away from kk direction
kakoon wo mamma i was just finishing up in the kitchen[ looks toward rahul and rahul looking bck at her] aaand
gaya eye catches the bandage on kk hand
gaya quickly get up off her seat and hold kk hand
gaya yeh kya hai
kakoon kuch nahein its just a scratch
gaya a scratch kakoon this doesnt look like a scratch how did this happen
kk i was cleaning up then i came across the knife when i picked it up i accidently slit my palm. so that why i was late going to bed i went to get it cleared up
aman smirk turns to a frown
rahul sighs out of relief
aman you sit dwn kk i will personally look after you today firstly i will feed you your breakfast[kk face turns towards aman and give him a look of disgust aman just smirking away]
kk no aman im fine you dnt worry just eat your breakfast
rahul is slowly getting irritated with aman
aman no darly why dnt you just sit here, have my seat
aman grabs kk hand where aman had hurt her he presses dwn tight
kk trys not to let the pain out her eyes are filling up with the pain the bruise is giving. rahul is getting angrer and angrer watching his hand on her aswell as watching her in pain. kk cant hold back her tears so she bites onto her lip.
aman here sit right here he pushes kk onto his chair
kk closes her eyes and the pain is finally fading away rahul looking at her he starts feeling her pain and wants to just hold her in his arms
kk quickly wipes her tear before gaya sees them
aman here you are my darling here is your toast [he breaks the toast in half and starts to feed kk]
kk is protesting saying that she can eat herself but aman is forcefully putting the toast in her mouth. gaya their smilling away at aman
rahul trying to control his anger hes tryin to stop himself but how much can he take.
gaya see kakoon how much aman cares for you
kk gives a fake smile to gaya then she turns towards rahul the pain in her eyes starts to get unbearable for rahul to see. he clutches on to the the glass full of orange juice so much so that it breaks in his hand.
gaya looks shockedly towards rahul so does kk aman staring at him in total amazment
gaya rahul!
kk gets off her seat
kk ma im just going to get the first aid box il be right bck looks toward rahul and rahul glances bck at her she runs to find the first aid box.
gaya yeh tumna kya kiya
rahul cant feel anything he just keeps getting flashback of aman touching kk
gaya RAHUL
rahul snapped out of it by gaya voice
gaya yeh tumne kya kiya
rahul sorry mum i just
gaya just what look at all of this blood first kk now you what has happened to both of yours cant you be careful . aman looks towards rahul
rahul ma ill be fine dnt worry
kk enters with the first aid box
kk mamma dnt worry ill tend to it
kk looks towards rahul direction
aman looks at kk and starts to get irritated
aman kk havent you also hurt your hand
kk aman dnt worry about that im fine
rahul looks at aman and then bck to kk
gaya im going to call the doctor
rahul mama im fine
gaya dnt to mama me Aman cum with me
aman turns towards gaya
aman but ma
gaya aman dnt worry kk will be be rahul to take care of him cum on we must call the doctors straight away your the only one in the house that knows the number.
aman angrily walk towards gaya both of them go to get the doc
kk what is wrong with you rahul it could have been worse i couldnt bear it if anything happened to you {stops looks up at rahul]
rahul worse then what i was watching
kk what are you talkin about rahul look at your hand [she gently clears the blood around the wound, kk starts to get emotional and cant stop her tears so much that a tear falls on rahul wound]
rahul feels the tear drop fall into his wound he lifts kk head towards his
rahul please kk dnt cry you now i dnt like seeing you like this, i just [paused] couldnt bear him touching you
kk rahul please dnt
rahul kakoon he was hurting you and i could see the pain in your eyes i just wanted to hold you in my arms just like last night
kk rahul
rahul please let me speak i love you kk i alway have and will continue to love you nothing in this world can take that away from me
kk slowly turning the bandage around rahuls wound still lookin at him.
kk lookin at kakoon with the loving look
gaya rahul
kk quickly turns towards gaya and sees aman there staring at her with a cold look
gaya runs towards rahul. rahul lookin at kk before turning towards gaya
gaya are you okay know let me look
rahul im fine mom dnt worry
gaya the doctors going to be hear any minute
kk finishes closing the bandage, glances at rahul rahul glances bck at kk


Edited by RaKun17 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its so intense!!!!!!!
lovely!!!!!!!
seriously....cant wait 4 de next part!!!!

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