Hey Guys, ive been questioned if we have a faanfiction thread-basically just the ff without the commentary! As we havent ive done this one so can you copy your ff and paste here so whoever just wants a read or a cheer up can come to the 1 thread- thanks Shasha
ps part 1 2 & 3 of aik kamre mein bandho are all together so its LONG! Spoiler alert part 4 will be the last and will end on cliff hanger!
Raining outside.
Inside the Punj house celebration of Tanu and Rohit wedding.
Rahul has come with NainaO as his guest.
Aman to KK mockingly: seems my brother has a thing for girls with the name Naina.
KK turns to Aman- eyes full of pain,softly: there was a time when my pain meant something to you-i wish i had never found the truth about you. i wish i could just forget for 1 moment what you did-i would've of happily of lived with you as your wife if you'd not killed Naina, my sister. i.......
Aman watching KK: so you want to forget for a moment? then my dear your wish is my command and in that moment you will be forever mine.
Tanu to KK: Bhabhi thank you so much for everything, if it wasnt for you and Rahul Bhai i wouldn't be.....
KK to Tanu: quiet-you silly child. i've done nothing.
KK: Sid Bhai thank you but y u know i don't drink and Tanu can't either.
Sid: Bhabhi these are just special juices don't worry- i don't want you and Tanu falling around drunk what would people think!- Sid winks at them
KK and Tanu both laugh and take a glass and drink.
KK walks away and giggles out aloud.
Waiter to KK with note-we have some unfinished business meet me in the out house. no name. KK looks around her eyes catch Rahul who lifts his glass slightly to her.
KK: the air will be good for me and it may have something to do with Tanu and Rohit.
KK goes to the out house and gets wet, she still feels slightly off balance, in out house the light flickers and goes out. moon light streams in through the open window. door opens and shuts
Rahul: what do i want shouldnt the question be but what do YOU want KK? it is OVER between us, i've told you. you are Aman Punj biwi not mine!
KK: dont Rahul...-giggles again and as she walks to him is unsteady and trips. Rahul catches her
Rahul: KK if your playing a game....
KK: what big eyes you have Rahul. they always made me feel special-KK gives sloppy smile
KK: nope just special juice Sid Bhai gave me and Tanu-another silly smile and puts arms around Rahul neck
Rahul: lets get out. wait till i get a hold of Sid Bhai.
Rahul carries KK to door and tries to open but it wont open. he drops KK on sofa and twist and turns door handle but still wont open. he bangs and shout dawaza collo but only thunder can be heard.
Rahul: KK please, your not yourself. please sit down
KK is dancing and singing out of Rahul reach. Rahul tries to grab her but misses.
Rahul: KK please mere baat soono....
KK is in a world of her own. Rahul tries to be angry but cant help smiling for KK looks so cute.
Rahul: KK your not yourself and your going to hate yourself tomorrow please we need to get out everyone will be looking for us
Rahul rolls his eyes and as she comes pass grabs her but loses balance and falls on the sofa with KK underneath him.
Rahul looks annoyed but slowly his eyes change and their is a look of tenderness. he brushes KK hair away from her face
Rahul in anguish: you'll not remember any of this but i wont forget a moment. give me strength, please my lord, for i know its wrong but even now i love you KK with every part that i am. when i am angry with you i hate myself. i hate telling you to be Aman biwi, its like a knife in my heart. but what can i do....?
KK- giggles: in my dreams you've been always so loving but never kissed me, why don't you find me pretty? my dream Rahul kiss me, love me....
Rahul softly to himself: is this all a dream to you? then let it be mine too..
Rahul heads moves slowly down. shot to open window and full moon.
Sid: Aman you worry too much of course i did-but i dont get why it was so special and why you didnt give it?
Sid laughs and walks off. Aman goes to his bedroom-the room is set as a romantic scene with flowers and candlelight.
Aman to himeself: damn whats happened? i had the drink made specially so KK would forget and lose control over her emotions! she wouldve remembered i was her best friend, support, guide and fallen into my arms. this wouldve been a new beginning for us and she wouldve never of been able leave me after tonight! damn it where is she!?
NainaO: its a party and i was invited...
FatimaB: but you were suppose....
Waiter: Rahul saab...
out house. its late the rain has stopped.
Rahul is buttoning his shirt. his back to KK. KK is looking at him lovingly hair messed up. Rahul turns KK shuts eyes pretends to be asleep. Rahul comes to KK- kneels and brushes her hair softly off face
Rahul: for you this will be a dream but for me this is my reality. forgive me KK but im not as strong as you. having you in my arms after all this time, so loving i couldnt say no. this memory is what i'll live on; you and me together, a moment out of time -(touches her face gently)
Rahul very softly: my love....
Rahul leans down and gently kisses KK on the forehead, a final stroke of her face and after one last long loving look quickly turns away and climbs out the window-running away from his love and his pain.
KK watches him leave and touches her forehead and lips with her fingers slowly gently. tears gather in her eyes
KK: Rahul do you really think i would remember this as a dream? this moment is my life-you do love me as i love you, how can this become just a memory? but how can i tell you the truth about Aman? without proof no one would believe me least of all you.
KK turns into the sofa pillow and weeps as her heart is breaking again.on the floor are her broken chooriyan and dupatta.
Part 2 Guys-but dont know how good. Anyway continuation after last scene:
Rahul comes to garden doors of Punj house, people are still mingling-he looks weary, run hands through hair and is about to step inside house but turns around and has 1 last look at outhouse. straightens shoulders and walks in
NainaO-with smile: Hello stranger where did you disappear to?
Rahul: sorry got sent on a wild goose chase-someones idea of a practical joke. Anyway how are you finding the party?
NainaO: its lovely! your family are so welcoming. You must of had so much fun growing up!
Rahul: Yeah if you count all the fights and Tanu getting us all into trouble!
NainaO: I bet you wouldnt change a thing
Rahul looks at Tanu with Rohit
Rahul: Your right-even those fights were a sign of our love. We thought nothing could break our bonds- looks at Aman.
NainaO: Why has something broken your bonds?
Rahul-looks down at NainaO: No of course not! But things change and Tanu 1st haq belongs to Rohit now. Anyway why arent you eating?
NainaO: Im stuffed!
Rahul: Oh no you dont. FatimaB made me eat and eat and eat and you didnt even try to rescue me-so tough luck, come on food madam lawyer.
Drags NainaO to buffet table
Aman to Sid: Bhai have you seen Kakun?
Sid: How many times have you asked me? No i havent she'll be around somewhere-Aman ive got to teach 1.how not to lose your biwi and 2.be cool- if our biwis see us worried theyll take advantage of it and let me tell you they dont need anymore advantages!
Both laugh. Sid walks away, Aman calls out
Aman: Sid Bhai have you seen Rahul?
Sid: No....yeah there he is- and points to Rahul with NainaO at buffet table- think we've got another wedding!-
smiles at Aman and walks away
Aman to himself: at least thats something-Rahul and Kakun are not together. Damn it i have to find her,anything can happen. Let me ask Bebe and Mum.
DP to Sid: Someone mentioned seeing lights on in the outhouse check it out.
Sid: Sure Dad
Sid goes out and while walking to outhouse bumbs into KK-she is still unsteady
Sid: Bhabhi? Are you ok?
KK: Sid Bhai-no i felt dizzy so i came out for some fresh air but still...
Sid holds up KK and helps her to walk to house
Sid: Bhabhi have you eaten or drank something?
KK: No just that special jucie you gave Tanu and me
Sid goans
Sid: Oh hell, im going to kill Aman..
KK: What has Aman to do with anything?
Sid: Oops sorry Bhabhi you werent suppose to know....
KK: Know what?
Sid: Aman gave me the drink to give to you-he said it was a husband and wife thing and it was going to make this a night you would never forget.
KK silent
Sid: Bhabhi you ok?
KK: Fine dont worry i wont tell Aman-i'll pretend i didnt know
Sid: thanks Bhabhi
They reach the party inside.
Rahul and NainaO are by buffet table.
Aman is with his Dad and Tanu in-laws
Bebe,Gayo,Preeti and Tanu are together
Sid and KK walk in
KK eyes go straight to Rahul who is laughing at something NainaO is saying
KK eyes fill with hurt
Bebe-sees Sid with KK-with concern: Kya hoga Kakun puta?
Bebe, Gayo and Tanu rush to KK
Rahul takes a step but stops.
Aman takes over from Sid
Gayo-to Sid: Kya hoga?
KK to Bebe and Gayo: Kuch bhi nay, bus assi chakha aye.
Bebe: have you eaten anything?
KK shakes head
Bebe to Gayo: No wonder it ni sara kaam Kakun nay kiya party kilay abhi tak kuch kalinay. Quickly bring a thali. Aman puta take her upstairs.
Aman: Ji Bebe
Aman takes KK upstairs-Rahul watches on
NainaO: I hope Kakun will be ok?
Rahul: Im sure she'll be fine
NainaO: How lucky she is that everyone cares for her and that Aman takes such good care of her too.
Rahul-still looking at Aman+KK as they go up: yes Aman Bhai loves Kakun a lot, she's his life.
Aman brings KK into room. KK enters and stops, shocked at the scene.
KK: What the hell is this?
Aman: Our bedroom- he enters and lies on bed which is covered in petals
KK: You know what im talking about-dont play dumb!
Aman: I thought you wanted to forget? So how better then a romantic scene between husband and wife?
KK: You disgust me!
KK opens all lights and walks over to dressing table and starts to blow out the candles
Aman gets up and grabs KK arms and turns her around
Aman: I disgust you?! Why cause i wanted to please you? Wanted to be romantic with MY WIFE? And thats disgusting? Oh wait a minute could it that whats disgusting is the fact im the wrong husband?!
KK slaps Aman
KK-shouts: Rahul has nothing to do with this! Can your pea brain not understand that I HATE YOU! YOU ARE A MURDERER! YOU KILLED MY SISTER! YOU KILLED MY MOTHER HAPPINESS AND MINE AND YOU THINK I'LL FORGET BECAUSE TO DID THIS?
KK swings arm around the room-knocking a vase full of roses. She goes to bed and throws the cover on the floor.
Aman: It was a mistake...heat of the moment....
KK: Murder is never a mistake! And what came afterwards the setting up of Rahul, that was a mistake too?!
Aman: I didnt want to lose you.
KK: I was never yours to lose. I have and will always belong to Rahul
Aman furious grabs hold of KK and throws her on bed, him on top of her.
Aman-furiously: NEVER! You are mine now and forever and this night was going to be the beginning, so app khosh mein ho so what? Im going to take whats mine.
Aman starts to kiss KK on face. KK struggling
KK: Nahi Aman! Get off me-this isnt right. Aman please dont do this
Aman: Thats right beg KK but beg me to continue not stop. If it helps think that Im Rahul!
KK-crying: Aman no, please no-this is RAPE!
Knock on door-Aman stops
Tanu: Aman Bhai? Kakun Bhabhi? Its me, Tanu, Mama sent a thali for Kakun Bhabhi and told me to sit with her. Bhai? Bhabhi?
Aman gets off KK
Aman to KK: sort yourself out. Tanu im just coming.
Aman walks to door, KK runs to bathroom, Aman opens door Tanu has tray in hand
Aman: Tanu dont worry, you go down i'll stay with kakun.
Tanu smiles: No problem Bhai, id like to spend some time with her especially as this is no longer my home.
Aman: This will always be your home, Brat!
Tanu-laughs: Thanks Bhai anyway dad wants you too something about some case you guys are working on?
Aman: Dad and business, never 1 to relax. Fine i'll go down
Opens door and Tanu walks in and sees mess, looks at Aman
Aman: Kakun was still giddy and this is the result
Tanu smiles: Dont worry i'll take care of it, i owe her.
Aman: Thanks- and walks out of room.
Tanu closes door and tidies up room. shower can be heard in background. KK comes out, wearing white and looking very pale and plain.
Tanu-tentalively: Bhabhi...?
KK is startled, jumps and takes a couple of steps back. she looks around nervously.
Tanu-gently: Ive brought you something to eat Bhabhi, Aman Bhai has gone downstairs.
KK looking lost, notices the room has been tidyed up
KK-bewildered: it was a mess.....my fault .....
Tanu-strongly: NO Bhabhi it wasnt your fault!
Tanu takes KK gently by the arm and seats her, she slowly feeds KK
Tanu: How are you feeling now Bhabhi?
KK-smiles but eyes full of pain: Better and all the more so for seeing you and seeing you in this role
Tanu: role?
KK: the carer, the giver
Tanu smiles shyly
Tanu: i'll be back in a minute Bhabhi
KK looks frightened
Tanu: Not even a minute, 30 secs promise
Tanu leaves room but is is back quickly
Tanu: Bhabhi take this-holds out white pill- it'll help you sleep and that is what you need right now
Tanu and KK just stare at each for a few minutes. KK takes pills and swallows. Tanu takes KK to bed and tucks her in.
Tanu: I'll stay till you fall asleep.
KK nods and closes eyes a few minutes later is asleep
Tanu to herself: can ive of heard right?-
Flashback Tanu bringing up thali at bedroom door hears KK pleading 'No,no it'll be RAPE'. Then remembers the state of the bedroom
Tanu thoughts: Aman Bhai wouldnt, couldnt, but Kakun Bhabhi...- looks down at her sleeping- ..what do i do? I owe my life, my baby life, my happiness to Kakun Bhabhi, Lord help me?!
Tanu looks down on KK
PART 3:
Morning after Tanu and Rohit wedding.
Aman and Kakun bedroom
Kakun in bed looking ill-speaking on phone
KK: Tanu good morning.
Tanu: Bhabhi? Good morning,-hesitant-how are you feeling?
KK-with false cheer: Besides at though ive 10 workmen hammering in my head fine!
Tanu-again hesitant: Bhabhi are you sure? You seemed upset and....
KK cuts in: No no Sweetie, it was just not having eaten anything i was just giddy and light headed, thats all.
Tanu protest: But Bhabhi i saw.....
KK-forcefully: YOU DIDNT SEE ANYTHING!
SILENCE
KK: Tanu not everything we see is what we think it is. Sweetheart you are now married and are going to be a mother,you must learn that the relationship between husband and wife is not like any other and so you cant put the same expectations on it as other relationships.
Tanu: But...
KK-with false laughter: But nothing-im fine your Aman Bhai is fine and in fact if i dont get his breakfast hes going to kill me!
Tanu-cheerfully: I know hes so particular about his breakfast! It was nice speaking to you Bhabhi and im so glad i was wrong, i was really worried....
KK: You are not to worry about anyone else but you and the baby-got it
Tanu: Whatever you say Bhabhi, speak you later.
KK: Take care- ends call-
Kakun head falls in to hands,eyes closed, shoulders slumped, tears seeping from eyes.
KK to herself: Oh Tanu how could i spoil your happiness-you have married the man you love and who loves you. You have moved into a pariwa that have welcomed you with open arms and you are having a baby that has brought so much happiness-how selfish would i be if for 1minute i caused you to worry.
KK runs from bed to bathroom and violently sick.
Knock on bedroom door
Rahul: Kakun? Bha...? Kakun?
Rahul opens doors and sees room is empty, he hears KK being sick. He walks in has tray in hand, puts it down on table and goes into bathroom.
KK is sitting on floor by basin eyes closed looking weary, Rahul washes face cloth with cool water and wipes KK face
Rahul-gently: I told you. Come on back to bed.
Rahul helps KK up and back to bed
Rahul: i bet you head hurts so much you want to rip it off! this will help,
He picks up tray
KK-angerily: HOW DARE YOU ENTER MY BEDROOM. GET OUT GET OUT NOW.
Rahul: Kakun......
KK: GET OUT! I DIDNT ASK YOU TO BRING ME ANYTHING!
Aman-by bedroom door: Sorry love that was my fault-smiles and enters room-i knew you would be feeling unwell so i had they tray made up with coffee and toast. i was going to bring it myself but a call came, Rahul was coming up so i asked him to bring it.
Takes tray from Rahul
Aman: Sorry didnt expect you to get you head bitten off-but hey im glad it was yours and not mine!- sits on bed next to KK-
Rahul-shrugs: No problem Bhai, glad I could take it for you. Well im late for the office, hope you feel better
-walks out of room-
Aman: here drink this-puts cup in KK hands-KK flinches-
Aman: Kakun last night....im so sorry...i dont know what got into me.
KK has flasheback to scene of Aman on top of her, hurting her. She draws as far back from him as she can
KK-frightenly: stay away from me your a monster!
Aman: i didnt mean it -tries to touch her face-
KK: NO! -drops coffee over him
Aman: Why you.......
Bebe: Kakun puta how you feeling now?
Bebe enters room and walks over to bed
Bebe: Aman puta DP is calling you
Aman: Ji Bebe im just going-walks away but turns to KK and mouths-this is not over.
Rahul is in his office, hes sitting back and thinking of last night-flashback to KK singing, but then this morning of her shouting at him.
Rahul to himself: Bloody hell what a mess ive made out of mine and Kakun lives! i never thought that going to kolkatta would be the cause of so much anguish for so many people! -rubs face- if only i could turn the clock back and told NainaB no -another flashback to KK memories- but then i wouldve never of learnt what true love was.
Hits hand on table. Phone rings.
Rahul-grumpily: Hello?
NainaO: Oh someone woke from the wrong side of the bed? or didnt you have enough coffee this morning-should i send FatimB with a flask?
Rahul-laughs: Please no! Knowing her the coffee will come with a 10 course breakfast and i can just about fit the clothes i have!
NainaO-laughs: OK, hey hows Kakun?
Rahul-short: Fine-changes topic quickly-so what can i do for you madam lawyer?
SILENCE
Rahul: Naina you there?
NainaO: yes sorry, mind wondered for a sec, just wanted to see if we were playing basketball today?
Rahul: im not sure...
NainaO: Come on this is possibly my last free afternoon.
Rahul: How comes?
NainaO: Court coming back in session, in fact ive a meeting to go so yes or no and if its no im sending FatimaB!
Rahul-laughs: In that case yes-see you there -closes phone-
NainaO holds phone against cheek and murmurs: Yeah see you there -has soppy smile on face-
FatimaB-clears throat: Madam breakfast -nothing from NainaO- Breakfast -again nothing from NainaO. goes close to her and shouts in ear- NAINA BREAKFAST!
NainaO: Ow! FatimaB you didnt have to shout at me
FatimaB: No of course not, thats why breakfast has been sitting on the table for the last 15minutes-you like you coffee cold, you like your toast cold you like your eggs hard, you like.....
NainaO laughs and hugs FatimaB: OK Baba im sorry, come lets eat ive got to leave soon.
NainaO at breakfast table, FatimaB buttering her toast
FatimaB: So...?
NainaO: Kya so...?
FatimaB: Phone mein kaun tah?
NainaO-blushes: Phone? oh no one just Rahul
FatimaB-raises 1 eyebrow: Just Rahul?
NainaO-starts fidgeting: Yes just Rahul, i called to confirm if we're playing basketball today-we are. Wasnt the party lovely yesterday and Tanu looked so happy. His, Rahul family are so nice and welcoming!
NainaO peeps at FatimaB who is looking at her sternly
FatimaB: Very nice family, the perfect susral for someone and only the 1 son left to marry off.
NainaO: Well i cant spend all day chatting one of us has to pay the bills.
FatimaB: So i do nothing all day? Just sit and watch ekta kapoor dramas? Ive got better things to do then watch that rubbish!
NainaO-kisses FatimaB on cheek: I didnt say that, but remember to tell me what happens kahe na kahe when i get home.
winks and leaves
FatimaB: That girl! Well ihad better sort it out, left to her we wont get pass the basketball court!
FatimaB picks up phone and dials
Kakun sitting in her bedroom staring outside window-looking very tired, phone rings
KK: Hello?
FatimaB: Kakun Beti, mein hu FatimaB app kasai hu?
KK: FatimaB? Im fine thank you for asking-im sorry i didnt get to spend anytime with you yesterday....
FatimaB: Nay nay you had more important things to do.
KK: Thank you, was there anything else?
FatimaB: Well... Beti Naina wont say this but she really likes Rahul and your pariwa. She would be perfect for him, in fact their playing basketball this afternoon.
KK: Are they?
FatimaB: Yes they speak everyday and i think Rahul likes Naina too. Kakun Beti i know i asked this but would you talk to Bebe and gayo about Rahul and Naina ki rishta?
KK-small pause-quietly: Ji FatimaB. What could be more appropiate then me speaking about Rahul rishta to Naina. I'll speak to them anything else.
FatimaB-happy: Lakh lakh shukar Kakun beti thats it. Take care of yourself -closes phone-
KK laughs bitterly
KK to herself: once again mere zindigi aik mor mein aye! Chello yeah bhi mein Rahul kiliay kurti hu-woh toh khush toh mein bhi khush?
Sign reads Aman Punj Attorney at Law
Knock on door
PA: Sir your next appointment is here
Aman: Send them in
NainaO walks in
Aman stands
Aman: What a pleasant surprise, but.....ah i see youve taken over the Sinha case
NainaO: Hi Aman, yes i was asked to take over, thought id tell you yesterday but with everything.....how is Kakun?
Aman: A little bit worse for wear but she'll be fine and im glad you didnt tell me i hate mixing business with pleasure thats more Dad and Rahul style-looks intently at NainaO
NainaO: Well until recently is was always business for me so not sure which camp i fall into. Shall we get down to it?
A few hours later
NainaO: Rahul was right you never lose, ive learnt a lot-thank you
Aman-laughs: And he was right about you; you love to win and i return the compliment back. How about some luch? tea? coffee? juice?
NainaO: Just juice ive got a basketball match and my opponent is very tricky-smiles-
Aman-lifts phone: 2 fresh juices
Aman: So did you have agood time last night?
NainaO: Yes great. i was telling rahul how much fun it must of been growing up in such a large loving family.
Aman: It was even the fights were fun too
NainaO: Thats what exactly what Rahul said.
Aman: You 2 seemed to have become very good friends, surprising consdiering..?
NainaO: Considering?
Aman: That you tried to put him away for murder?
NainaO-cooly: That was the job i was hired to do and i am a professional.
Aman: hmmm true but i thought i wouldve had a harder battle against you?
NainaO: What can i say the better lawyer won -has flashback to tape-
Knock on door juice is brought in
PA: Sir the gifts? -shows gift boxes-
Aman: They've come give me-turns to Naina- what you think?
Opens boxes-1 has a diamond set, the other a sari
NainaO: Georgous for Kakun?
Aman-laughs: No for my mistress! Of couse for Kakun thought it would cheer her up -turns to PA- send them and a bouquet of flowers to my wife.
NainaO: Did you choose them yourself?
Aman: Yes-when you love someone there is great pleasure in choosing things for them, in wanting to make them happy especially if youve made them unhappy or they feel unwell.
NainaO: I suppose your right, anyway if thats it?
Aman: Yes but 1 thing id like you to consider...
NainaO: Yes?
Aman: My practise is growing in leaps in fact way to fast for me to handle alone would consider coming into partnership with me?
NainaO-surprised: Hadnt ever thought of partnership before? Im very independent and i like not having to take orders from anyone.
Aman: I understand but i said partnership, you would still be independent to take on whatever cases you wanted but we would share the work load. To be honest i want to be able to spend more time at home.
NainaO: How come?
Aman: Would you believe it Kakun and I have yet to go on honeymoon! Ever since we've married i havent been ablt to spend anytime with her its been 1 case after another. she doesnt complain but its not fair on her also i dont want to get into the workaholic habit like Dad and Rahul.
Naina O: Rahul?
Aman: Yeah Rahul-hes like Dad work is paramont oh they love their family and Rahul will put his family 1st but he wants someone who doesnt hang onto him. He wants someone who is independent and has her own life but combines it with the family. I suppose he knows that he wouldnt be able to spend great amounts of time with her and doesnt want her to mope around the house getting bored!
NainaO: You think so?
Aman: Well ive known some of girls hes liked and they all had careers, but im different ive always loved watching Bebe and Mum at work, making the house a home. I suppose thats 1 of the reasons i love Kakun so much; she loves the home, take pleasure in doing things for the family, we both want kids, in fact shes a replica of Mum. Work has never been my top pirority and i want to be able to spend time with my family, so im sorting it out from now-thats why the offer.
NainaO: Why me?
Aman: I like fighters and your excellant at what you do also if im honest i cant see you wasting your talants sitting at home watching ekta kapoor dramas!
NainaO-laughs: Ektas dramas seem to be following me around but your right however i need time to think. Your sure it has nothing to do with keeping 'your friends close but your competitors closer?'
Aman-laughs:You could be right! But no hurry, take care.
NainaO: Bye -leaves room-
Aman walks to cupboard and opens it takes out bottle and pours drink into glass and drinks in 1 go, pours another glass. Relaxs in chair
Aman to himself: No Naina not about keeping the competition close but about destroying it! Having you in Rahul orbit makes it check and that means the queen is defenseless so checkmate! -salutes with drink-