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Hey Guys, ive been questioned if we have a faanfiction thread-basically just the ff without the commentary! As we havent ive done this one so can you copy your ff and paste here so whoever just wants a read or a cheer up can come to the 1 thread- thanks Shasha
ps part 1 2 & 3 of aik kamre mein bandho are all together so its LONG! Spoiler alert part 4 will be the last and will end on cliff hanger!
Part 1:
Raining outside.
Inside the Punj house celebration of Tanu and Rohit wedding.
Rahul has come with NainaO as his guest.
Aman to KK mockingly: seems my brother has a thing for girls with the name Naina.
KK turns to Aman- eyes full of pain,softly: there was a time when my pain meant something to you-i wish i had never found the truth about you. i wish i could just forget for 1 moment what you did-i would've of happily of lived with you as your wife if you'd not killed Naina, my sister. i.......
KK just looks at Aman sighs and turns away and walks to Tanu
Aman watching KK: so you want to forget for a moment? then my dear your wish is my command and in that moment you will be forever mine.
Tanu to KK: Bhabhi thank you so much for everything, if it wasnt for you and Rahul Bhai i wouldn't be.....
KK to Tanu: quiet-you silly child. i've done nothing.
Tanu: Bhabhi i'll make it up to you and Rahul Bhai
Both look at Rahul who is on the otherside of the room with NainaO
Sid: drinks for the 2 most lovely ladies in the room!
KK: Sid Bhai thank you but y u know i don't drink and Tanu can't either.
Sid: Bhabhi these are just special juices don't worry- i don't want you and Tanu falling around drunk what would people think!- Sid winks at them
KK and Tanu both laugh and take a glass and drink.
KK walks away and giggles out aloud.
KK: was that me? and giggles again
Waiter to KK with note-we have some unfinished business meet me in the out house. no name. KK looks around her eyes catch Rahul who lifts his glass slightly to her.
KK: what does he want now? how much more can i take?
KK looks again and sees Rahul watching her
KK: the air will be good for me and it may have something to do with Tanu and Rohit.
KK goes to the out house and gets wet, she still feels slightly off balance, in out house the light flickers and goes out. moon light streams in through the open window. door opens and shuts
KK's back is to the person entering
KK: what do you want Rahul?
Rahul: what do i want shouldnt the question be but what do YOU want KK? it is OVER between us, i've told you. you are Aman Punj biwi not mine!
KK: fine then why did you call me out here?
Rahul: i didn't! you called me!
KK: no i didnt-giggles
Both are shocked
Rahul: fine lets leave before someone wonders where we are
KK: i suppose you mean Naina- giggles again
Rahul: my personal life is none of your business KAKOON BHABHI!
KK: dont Rahul...-giggles again and as she walks to him is unsteady and trips. Rahul catches her
Rahul: KK if your playing a game....
KK: what big eyes you have Rahul. they always made me feel special-KK gives sloppy smile
Rahul: what the heck! have u been drinking? answer me!
KK: nope just special juice Sid Bhai gave me and Tanu-another silly smile and puts arms around Rahul neck
KK: your sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo handsome-giggles
Rahul swears under breath
Rahul: lets get out. wait till i get a hold of Sid Bhai.
Rahul carries KK to door and tries to open but it wont open. he drops KK on sofa and twist and turns door handle but still wont open. he bangs and shout dawaza collo but only thunder can be heard.
behind him he hears singing:
KK singing and dancing around the room-
KK: hum aik kamre mein band ho....- (sings the song from Bobby?)
Rahul just looks on with annoyance
Rahul: KK please, your not yourself. please sit down
KK is dancing and singing out of Rahul reach. Rahul tries to grab her but misses.
Rahul: KK please mere baat soono....
KK is in a world of her own. Rahul tries to be angry but cant help smiling for KK looks so cute.
Rahul: KK your not yourself and your going to hate yourself tomorrow please we need to get out everyone will be looking for us
KK turns, smiles, curtsey and blows Rahul a kiss
KK: come and get me-giggles
Rahul rolls his eyes and as she comes pass grabs her but loses balance and falls on the sofa with KK underneath him.
KK: my my arent you strong and handsome!- fluttering of eyes and giggles
Rahul looks annoyed but slowly his eyes change and their is a look of tenderness. he brushes KK hair away from her face
Rahul softly to KK: your going to have a heck of a headache tomorrow KK
KK looking at Rahul and singing softly hum aik kamre meer bandho
Rahul in anguish: you'll not remember any of this but i wont forget a moment. give me strength, please my lord, for i know its wrong but even now i love you KK with every part that i am. when i am angry with you i hate myself. i hate telling you to be Aman biwi, its like a knife in my heart. but what can i do....?
KK: kiss me
Rahul: what?!
KK- giggles: in my dreams you've been always so loving but never kissed me, why don't you find me pretty? my dream Rahul kiss me, love me....
Rahul softly to himself: is this all a dream to you? then let it be mine too..
Rahul heads moves slowly down. shot to open window and full moon.
in Punj house:
Aman to Sid: Bhai have you seen KK?
Sid: not since i gave her and Tanu the drinks
Aman: you did give KK the drink i had specially made for her?
Sid: Aman you worry too much of course i did-but i dont get why it was so special and why you didnt give it?
Aman: you know Bhai one of those husband-wife things
Sid laughs and walks off. Aman goes to his bedroom-the room is set as a romantic scene with flowers and candlelight.
Aman to himeself: damn whats happened? i had the drink made specially so KK would forget and lose control over her emotions! she wouldve remembered i was her best friend, support, guide and fallen into my arms. this wouldve been a new beginning for us and she wouldve never of been able leave me after tonight! damn it where is she!?
FatimaB to NainaO: what you doing here?
NainaO: its a party and i was invited...
FatimaB: but you were suppose....
FatimaB walks quickly away and grabs waiter
NainaO: kya hoga app ko? turns to talk to another guest
FatimaB to waiter in angry whisper: app nay daydia woh notes?
Waiter: ji mamsaab
FatimaB: kis ko?
Waiter: Rahul saab...
FatimaB: aur..?
Waiter: woh mamsaab jist app nay point out kia
FatimaB points to NainaO: woh?
Waiter: nahi woh nahi thi
FatimaB mutters under her breath and walks away
out house. its late the rain has stopped.
Rahul is buttoning his shirt. his back to KK. KK is looking at him lovingly hair messed up. Rahul turns KK shuts eyes pretends to be asleep. Rahul comes to KK- kneels and brushes her hair softly off face
Rahul: for you this will be a dream but for me this is my reality. forgive me KK but im not as strong as you. having you in my arms after all this time, so loving i couldnt say no. this memory is what i'll live on; you and me together, a moment out of time -(touches her face gently)
Rahul very softly: my love....
Rahul leans down and gently kisses KK on the forehead, a final stroke of her face and after one last long loving look quickly turns away and climbs out the window-running away from his love and his pain.
KK watches him leave and touches her forehead and lips with her fingers slowly gently. tears gather in her eyes
KK: Rahul do you really think i would remember this as a dream? this moment is my life-you do love me as i love you, how can this become just a memory? but how can i tell you the truth about Aman? without proof no one would believe me least of all you.
KK turns into the sofa pillow and weeps as her heart is breaking again.on the floor are her broken chooriyan and dupatta.
Part 2 Guys-but dont know how good. Anyway continuation after last scene:
Rahul comes to garden doors of Punj house, people are still mingling-he looks weary, run hands through hair and is about to step inside house but turns around and has 1 last look at outhouse. straightens shoulders and walks in
NainaO-with smile: Hello stranger where did you disappear to?
Rahul: sorry got sent on a wild goose chase-someones idea of a practical joke. Anyway how are you finding the party?
NainaO: its lovely! your family are so welcoming. You must of had so much fun growing up!
Rahul: Yeah if you count all the fights and Tanu getting us all into trouble!
NainaO: I bet you wouldnt change a thing
Rahul looks at Tanu with Rohit
Rahul: Your right-even those fights were a sign of our love. We thought nothing could break our bonds- looks at Aman.
NainaO: Why has something broken your bonds?
Rahul-looks down at NainaO: No of course not! But things change and Tanu 1st haq belongs to Rohit now. Anyway why arent you eating?
NainaO: Im stuffed!
Rahul: Oh no you dont. FatimaB made me eat and eat and eat and you didnt even try to rescue me-so tough luck, come on food madam lawyer.
Drags NainaO to buffet table
Aman to Sid: Bhai have you seen Kakun?
Sid: How many times have you asked me? No i havent she'll be around somewhere-Aman ive got to teach 1.how not to lose your biwi and 2.be cool- if our biwis see us worried theyll take advantage of it and let me tell you they dont need anymore advantages!
Both laugh. Sid walks away, Aman calls out
Aman: Sid Bhai have you seen Rahul?
Sid: No....yeah there he is- and points to Rahul with NainaO at buffet table- think we've got another wedding!-
smiles at Aman and walks away
Aman to himself: at least thats something-Rahul and Kakun are not together. Damn it i have to find her,anything can happen. Let me ask Bebe and Mum.
DP to Sid: Someone mentioned seeing lights on in the outhouse check it out.
Sid: Sure Dad
Sid goes out and while walking to outhouse bumbs into KK-she is still unsteady
Sid: Bhabhi? Are you ok?
KK: Sid Bhai-no i felt dizzy so i came out for some fresh air but still...
Sid holds up KK and helps her to walk to house
Sid: Bhabhi have you eaten or drank something?
KK: No just that special jucie you gave Tanu and me
Sid goans
Sid: Oh hell, im going to kill Aman..
KK: What has Aman to do with anything?
Sid: Oops sorry Bhabhi you werent suppose to know....
KK: Know what?
Sid: Aman gave me the drink to give to you-he said it was a husband and wife thing and it was going to make this a night you would never forget.
KK silent
Sid: Bhabhi you ok?
KK: Fine dont worry i wont tell Aman-i'll pretend i didnt know
Sid: thanks Bhabhi
They reach the party inside.
Rahul and NainaO are by buffet table.
Aman is with his Dad and Tanu in-laws
Bebe,Gayo,Preeti and Tanu are together
Sid and KK walk in
KK eyes go straight to Rahul who is laughing at something NainaO is saying
KK eyes fill with hurt
Bebe-sees Sid with KK-with concern: Kya hoga Kakun puta?
Bebe, Gayo and Tanu rush to KK
Rahul takes a step but stops.
Aman takes over from Sid
Gayo-to Sid: Kya hoga?
KK to Bebe and Gayo: Kuch bhi nay, bus assi chakha aye.
Bebe: have you eaten anything?
KK shakes head
Bebe to Gayo: No wonder it ni sara kaam Kakun nay kiya party kilay abhi tak kuch kalinay. Quickly bring a thali. Aman puta take her upstairs.
Aman: Ji Bebe
Aman takes KK upstairs-Rahul watches on
NainaO: I hope Kakun will be ok?
Rahul: Im sure she'll be fine
NainaO: How lucky she is that everyone cares for her and that Aman takes such good care of her too.
Rahul-still looking at Aman+KK as they go up: yes Aman Bhai loves Kakun a lot, she's his life.
Aman brings KK into room. KK enters and stops, shocked at the scene.
KK: What the hell is this?
Aman: Our bedroom- he enters and lies on bed which is covered in petals
KK: You know what im talking about-dont play dumb!
Aman: I thought you wanted to forget? So how better then a romantic scene between husband and wife?
KK: You disgust me!
KK opens all lights and walks over to dressing table and starts to blow out the candles
Aman gets up and grabs KK arms and turns her around
Aman: I disgust you?! Why cause i wanted to please you? Wanted to be romantic with MY WIFE? And thats disgusting? Oh wait a minute could it that whats disgusting is the fact im the wrong husband?!
KK slaps Aman
KK-shouts: Rahul has nothing to do with this! Can your pea brain not understand that I HATE YOU! YOU ARE A MURDERER! YOU KILLED MY SISTER! YOU KILLED MY MOTHER HAPPINESS AND MINE AND YOU THINK I'LL FORGET BECAUSE TO DID THIS?
KK swings arm around the room-knocking a vase full of roses. She goes to bed and throws the cover on the floor.
Aman: It was a mistake...heat of the moment....
KK: Murder is never a mistake! And what came afterwards the setting up of Rahul, that was a mistake too?!
Aman: I didnt want to lose you.
KK: I was never yours to lose. I have and will always belong to Rahul
Aman furious grabs hold of KK and throws her on bed, him on top of her.
Aman-furiously: NEVER! You are mine now and forever and this night was going to be the beginning, so app khosh mein ho so what? Im going to take whats mine.
Aman starts to kiss KK on face. KK struggling
KK: Nahi Aman! Get off me-this isnt right. Aman please dont do this
Aman: Thats right beg KK but beg me to continue not stop. If it helps think that Im Rahul!
KK-crying: Aman no, please no-this is RAPE!
Knock on door-Aman stops
Tanu: Aman Bhai? Kakun Bhabhi? Its me, Tanu, Mama sent a thali for Kakun Bhabhi and told me to sit with her. Bhai? Bhabhi?
Aman gets off KK
Aman to KK: sort yourself out. Tanu im just coming.
Aman walks to door, KK runs to bathroom, Aman opens door Tanu has tray in hand
Aman: Tanu dont worry, you go down i'll stay with kakun.
Tanu smiles: No problem Bhai, id like to spend some time with her especially as this is no longer my home.
Aman: This will always be your home, Brat!
Tanu-laughs: Thanks Bhai anyway dad wants you too something about some case you guys are working on?
Aman: Dad and business, never 1 to relax. Fine i'll go down
Opens door and Tanu walks in and sees mess, looks at Aman
Aman: Kakun was still giddy and this is the result
Tanu smiles: Dont worry i'll take care of it, i owe her.
Aman: Thanks- and walks out of room.
Tanu closes door and tidies up room. shower can be heard in background. KK comes out, wearing white and looking very pale and plain.
Tanu-tentalively: Bhabhi...?
KK is startled, jumps and takes a couple of steps back. she looks around nervously.
Tanu-gently: Ive brought you something to eat Bhabhi, Aman Bhai has gone downstairs.
KK looking lost, notices the room has been tidyed up
KK-bewildered: it was a mess.....my fault .....
Tanu-strongly: NO Bhabhi it wasnt your fault!
Tanu takes KK gently by the arm and seats her, she slowly feeds KK
Tanu: How are you feeling now Bhabhi?
KK-smiles but eyes full of pain: Better and all the more so for seeing you and seeing you in this role
Tanu: role?
KK: the carer, the giver
Tanu smiles shyly
Tanu: i'll be back in a minute Bhabhi
KK looks frightened
Tanu: Not even a minute, 30 secs promise
Tanu leaves room but is is back quickly
Tanu: Bhabhi take this-holds out white pill- it'll help you sleep and that is what you need right now
Tanu and KK just stare at each for a few minutes. KK takes pills and swallows. Tanu takes KK to bed and tucks her in.
Tanu: I'll stay till you fall asleep.
KK nods and closes eyes a few minutes later is asleep
Tanu to herself: can ive of heard right?-
Flashback Tanu bringing up thali at bedroom door hears KK pleading 'No,no it'll be RAPE'. Then remembers the state of the bedroom
Tanu thoughts: Aman Bhai wouldnt, couldnt, but Kakun Bhabhi...- looks down at her sleeping- ..what do i do? I owe my life, my baby life, my happiness to Kakun Bhabhi, Lord help me?!
Tanu looks down on KK
PART 3:
Morning after Tanu and Rohit wedding.
Aman and Kakun bedroom
Kakun in bed looking ill-speaking on phone
KK: Tanu good morning.
Tanu: Bhabhi? Good morning,-hesitant-how are you feeling?
KK-with false cheer: Besides at though ive 10 workmen hammering in my head fine!
Tanu-again hesitant: Bhabhi are you sure? You seemed upset and....
KK cuts in: No no Sweetie, it was just not having eaten anything i was just giddy and light headed, thats all.
Tanu protest: But Bhabhi i saw.....
KK-forcefully: YOU DIDNT SEE ANYTHING!
SILENCE
KK: Tanu not everything we see is what we think it is. Sweetheart you are now married and are going to be a mother,you must learn that the relationship between husband and wife is not like any other and so you cant put the same expectations on it as other relationships.
Tanu: But...
KK-with false laughter: But nothing-im fine your Aman Bhai is fine and in fact if i dont get his breakfast hes going to kill me!
Tanu-cheerfully: I know hes so particular about his breakfast! It was nice speaking to you Bhabhi and im so glad i was wrong, i was really worried....
KK: You are not to worry about anyone else but you and the baby-got it
Tanu: Whatever you say Bhabhi, speak you later.
KK: Take care- ends call-
Kakun head falls in to hands,eyes closed, shoulders slumped, tears seeping from eyes.
KK to herself: Oh Tanu how could i spoil your happiness-you have married the man you love and who loves you. You have moved into a pariwa that have welcomed you with open arms and you are having a baby that has brought so much happiness-how selfish would i be if for 1minute i caused you to worry.
KK runs from bed to bathroom and violently sick.
Knock on bedroom door
Rahul: Kakun? Bha...? Kakun?
Rahul opens doors and sees room is empty, he hears KK being sick. He walks in has tray in hand, puts it down on table and goes into bathroom.
KK is sitting on floor by basin eyes closed looking weary, Rahul washes face cloth with cool water and wipes KK face
Rahul-gently: I told you. Come on back to bed.
Rahul helps KK up and back to bed
Rahul: i bet you head hurts so much you want to rip it off! this will help,
He picks up tray
KK-angerily: HOW DARE YOU ENTER MY BEDROOM. GET OUT GET OUT NOW.
Rahul: Kakun......
KK: GET OUT! I DIDNT ASK YOU TO BRING ME ANYTHING!
Aman-by bedroom door: Sorry love that was my fault-smiles and enters room-i knew you would be feeling unwell so i had they tray made up with coffee and toast. i was going to bring it myself but a call came, Rahul was coming up so i asked him to bring it.
Takes tray from Rahul
Aman: Sorry didnt expect you to get you head bitten off-but hey im glad it was yours and not mine!- sits on bed next to KK-
Rahul-shrugs: No problem Bhai, glad I could take it for you. Well im late for the office, hope you feel better
-walks out of room-
Aman: here drink this-puts cup in KK hands-KK flinches-
Aman: Kakun last night....im so sorry...i dont know what got into me.
KK has flasheback to scene of Aman on top of her, hurting her. She draws as far back from him as she can
KK-frightenly: stay away from me your a monster!
Aman: i didnt mean it -tries to touch her face-
KK: NO! -drops coffee over him
Aman: Why you.......
Bebe: Kakun puta how you feeling now?
Bebe enters room and walks over to bed
Bebe: Aman puta DP is calling you
Aman: Ji Bebe im just going-walks away but turns to KK and mouths-this is not over.
Rahul is in his office, hes sitting back and thinking of last night-flashback to KK singing, but then this morning of her shouting at him.
Rahul to himself: Bloody hell what a mess ive made out of mine and Kakun lives! i never thought that going to kolkatta would be the cause of so much anguish for so many people! -rubs face- if only i could turn the clock back and told NainaB no -another flashback to KK memories- but then i wouldve never of learnt what true love was.
Hits hand on table. Phone rings.
Rahul-grumpily: Hello?
NainaO: Oh someone woke from the wrong side of the bed? or didnt you have enough coffee this morning-should i send FatimB with a flask?
Rahul-laughs: Please no! Knowing her the coffee will come with a 10 course breakfast and i can just about fit the clothes i have!
NainaO-laughs: OK, hey hows Kakun?
Rahul-short: Fine-changes topic quickly-so what can i do for you madam lawyer?
SILENCE
Rahul: Naina you there?
NainaO: yes sorry, mind wondered for a sec, just wanted to see if we were playing basketball today?
Rahul: im not sure...
NainaO: Come on this is possibly my last free afternoon.
Rahul: How comes?
NainaO: Court coming back in session, in fact ive a meeting to go so yes or no and if its no im sending FatimaB!
Rahul-laughs: In that case yes-see you there -closes phone-
NainaO holds phone against cheek and murmurs: Yeah see you there -has soppy smile on face-
FatimaB-clears throat: Madam breakfast -nothing from NainaO- Breakfast -again nothing from NainaO. goes close to her and shouts in ear- NAINA BREAKFAST!
NainaO: Ow! FatimaB you didnt have to shout at me
FatimaB: No of course not, thats why breakfast has been sitting on the table for the last 15minutes-you like you coffee cold, you like your toast cold you like your eggs hard, you like.....
NainaO laughs and hugs FatimaB: OK Baba im sorry, come lets eat ive got to leave soon.
NainaO at breakfast table, FatimaB buttering her toast
FatimaB: So...?
NainaO: Kya so...?
FatimaB: Phone mein kaun tah?
NainaO-blushes: Phone? oh no one just Rahul
FatimaB-raises 1 eyebrow: Just Rahul?
NainaO-starts fidgeting: Yes just Rahul, i called to confirm if we're playing basketball today-we are. Wasnt the party lovely yesterday and Tanu looked so happy. His, Rahul family are so nice and welcoming!
NainaO peeps at FatimaB who is looking at her sternly
FatimaB: Very nice family, the perfect susral for someone and only the 1 son left to marry off.
NainaO: Well i cant spend all day chatting one of us has to pay the bills.
FatimaB: So i do nothing all day? Just sit and watch ekta kapoor dramas? Ive got better things to do then watch that rubbish!
NainaO-kisses FatimaB on cheek: I didnt say that, but remember to tell me what happens kahe na kahe when i get home.
winks and leaves
FatimaB: That girl! Well ihad better sort it out, left to her we wont get pass the basketball court!
FatimaB picks up phone and dials
Kakun sitting in her bedroom staring outside window-looking very tired, phone rings
KK: Hello?
FatimaB: Kakun Beti, mein hu FatimaB app kasai hu?
KK: FatimaB? Im fine thank you for asking-im sorry i didnt get to spend anytime with you yesterday....
FatimaB: Nay nay you had more important things to do.
KK: Thank you, was there anything else?
FatimaB: Well... Beti Naina wont say this but she really likes Rahul and your pariwa. She would be perfect for him, in fact their playing basketball this afternoon.
KK: Are they?
FatimaB: Yes they speak everyday and i think Rahul likes Naina too. Kakun Beti i know i asked this but would you talk to Bebe and gayo about Rahul and Naina ki rishta?
KK-small pause-quietly: Ji FatimaB. What could be more appropiate then me speaking about Rahul rishta to Naina. I'll speak to them anything else.
FatimaB-happy: Lakh lakh shukar Kakun beti thats it. Take care of yourself -closes phone-
KK laughs bitterly
KK to herself: once again mere zindigi aik mor mein aye! Chello yeah bhi mein Rahul kiliay kurti hu-woh toh khush toh mein bhi khush?
Sign reads Aman Punj Attorney at Law
Knock on door
PA: Sir your next appointment is here
Aman: Send them in
NainaO walks in
Aman stands
Aman: What a pleasant surprise, but.....ah i see youve taken over the Sinha case
NainaO: Hi Aman, yes i was asked to take over, thought id tell you yesterday but with everything.....how is Kakun?
Aman: A little bit worse for wear but she'll be fine and im glad you didnt tell me i hate mixing business with pleasure thats more Dad and Rahul style-looks intently at NainaO
NainaO: Well until recently is was always business for me so not sure which camp i fall into. Shall we get down to it?
A few hours later
NainaO: Rahul was right you never lose, ive learnt a lot-thank you
Aman-laughs: And he was right about you; you love to win and i return the compliment back. How about some luch? tea? coffee? juice?
NainaO: Just juice ive got a basketball match and my opponent is very tricky-smiles-
Aman-lifts phone: 2 fresh juices
Aman: So did you have agood time last night?
NainaO: Yes great. i was telling rahul how much fun it must of been growing up in such a large loving family.
Aman: It was even the fights were fun too
NainaO: Thats what exactly what Rahul said.
Aman: You 2 seemed to have become very good friends, surprising consdiering..?
NainaO: Considering?
Aman: That you tried to put him away for murder?
NainaO-cooly: That was the job i was hired to do and i am a professional.
Aman: hmmm true but i thought i wouldve had a harder battle against you?
NainaO: What can i say the better lawyer won -has flashback to tape-
Knock on door juice is brought in
PA: Sir the gifts? -shows gift boxes-
Aman: They've come give me-turns to Naina- what you think?
Opens boxes-1 has a diamond set, the other a sari
NainaO: Georgous for Kakun?
Aman-laughs: No for my mistress! Of couse for Kakun thought it would cheer her up -turns to PA- send them and a bouquet of flowers to my wife.
NainaO: Did you choose them yourself?
Aman: Yes-when you love someone there is great pleasure in choosing things for them, in wanting to make them happy especially if youve made them unhappy or they feel unwell.
NainaO: I suppose your right, anyway if thats it?
Aman: Yes but 1 thing id like you to consider...
NainaO: Yes?
Aman: My practise is growing in leaps in fact way to fast for me to handle alone would consider coming into partnership with me?
NainaO-surprised: Hadnt ever thought of partnership before? Im very independent and i like not having to take orders from anyone.
Aman: I understand but i said partnership, you would still be independent to take on whatever cases you wanted but we would share the work load. To be honest i want to be able to spend more time at home.
NainaO: How come?
Aman: Would you believe it Kakun and I have yet to go on honeymoon! Ever since we've married i havent been ablt to spend anytime with her its been 1 case after another. she doesnt complain but its not fair on her also i dont want to get into the workaholic habit like Dad and Rahul.
Naina O: Rahul?
Aman: Yeah Rahul-hes like Dad work is paramont oh they love their family and Rahul will put his family 1st but he wants someone who doesnt hang onto him. He wants someone who is independent and has her own life but combines it with the family. I suppose he knows that he wouldnt be able to spend great amounts of time with her and doesnt want her to mope around the house getting bored!
NainaO: You think so?
Aman: Well ive known some of girls hes liked and they all had careers, but im different ive always loved watching Bebe and Mum at work, making the house a home. I suppose thats 1 of the reasons i love Kakun so much; she loves the home, take pleasure in doing things for the family, we both want kids, in fact shes a replica of Mum. Work has never been my top pirority and i want to be able to spend time with my family, so im sorting it out from now-thats why the offer.
NainaO: Why me?
Aman: I like fighters and your excellant at what you do also if im honest i cant see you wasting your talants sitting at home watching ekta kapoor dramas!
NainaO-laughs: Ektas dramas seem to be following me around but your right however i need time to think. Your sure it has nothing to do with keeping 'your friends close but your competitors closer?'
Aman-laughs:You could be right! But no hurry, take care.
NainaO: Bye -leaves room-
Aman walks to cupboard and opens it takes out bottle and pours drink into glass and drinks in 1 go, pours another glass. Relaxs in chair
Aman to himself: No Naina not about keeping the competition close but about destroying it! Having you in Rahul orbit makes it check and that means the queen is defenseless so checkmate! -salutes with drink-

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ur main blowing shasha thank uuuuuuuuu so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Thank you so much Shasha loved reading cant wait to read the next chapter
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wow thats really gd....cnt wait
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Talk about a shocker- Rahul marries NainaO; bloody hell can Ekta heep any of her promises?! Anyway I hope this cheers you guys up keep smiling guys😊 for at least we have each other
-virtual hug🤗
Kakun in bedroom, rolling up her long sleaves looks down at arms and sees bruises on wrist and arms.
KK to self: So this is what my life has come too? Ive become everything that i detested in other women-weak, stupid, letting a man dictate terms to me! Hell i deserve everything that Aman does, for i allow him to do it!
Knock at door Kammu enters with bouquet of flowers and gift boxes
Kammu: App kilay Aman Bhai say
KK: just put it down anywhere
Kammu puts everything on bed and hands note to KK
KK reads note
Aman voice: My dear they say all is fair in love and war-well im in love with you and at war with you. You will surrender to me one way or the other, the choice is yours to whether it is a sweet surrender of a painful one! Always remember i made you and i can destroy you-Rahul is beginning to hate you and by the time i am finished he wont even be able to bare the sight of you! Give in Kakun it'll save you from more pain in the long run for I WILL WIN!
KK: NEVER! -throws all gifts onto floor storms out of room-
KK goes to sitting room to where Bebe and Gayo are having tea
Gayo: Perfect timing kakun, tea?
KK: No thanks Mum, but i wanted to speak to you and Bebe
Bebe: Kya hai puta?
KK: What do you think of NainaO for Rahul?
Gayo & Bebe-surprise: NainaO?
KK: Ji they are spending a lot of time together and seem to enjoy each others company. In fact they're playing basketball today. She comes from a good background and everyone likes her.
Gayo: Yes but isnt she rather career minded?
KK-laughs: If thats what Rahul likes?
Bebe: Gayo not a bad idea-she is a sweet girl and Rahul seems fond of her, i have no objections.
Gayo: Then i dont have a problem either, Kakun speak to Rahul....
KK: No Mum, better coming from you. Last time he said he'll tell YOU his decision.
Gayo: Fine i'll speak to him when he comes home
KK: I need to check something, i'll see you later
KK goes into garden and sits on joola
KK to herself: Part 1 finished-at least Aman can stop using Rahul to blackmail me. If hes married to NainaO then Aman will back off and leave him alone.-looks at outhouse-
KK gets up and walks to outhouse and enters walks around room slowly, comes to sofa and drops on floor, head rest on her arm on sofa-flashback to previous evening-we see more of what occured between them-
Rahul enters in sports gear
Gayo: Rahul come here i havent seen you all day.
Rahul-kisses Gayo: Hi Mum you know what its like work,work and more work!
Gayo: so you go to work wearing sweaty sports clothes!
Rahul-laughs: No Mum ive just come from playing basketball
Gayo: Who with? NainaO?
Rahul: How did you know?
Gayo-ignores question: Beta, look Tanu is now married, your brothers are settled, its time you were too.
Rahul-protest: Mum....
Gayo-sternly: No! Enough youve had your single time and i want to see you married now not when im too old to play with your childern. Your Father and I want you ALL settled so we can relax and that means you are to marry. We all like NainaO; she's pretty, smart and you 2 seem to like each other-so whats wrong?
Rahul-angry: Im not ready and who the he...sorry Mum who put the idea of me and NainaO in your head? Shes JUST A FRIEND nothing more!
Gayo: Rahul everyone agrees that you 2 seem to have a connection, Kakun just thought......
Rahul-furious: HOW DARE SHE! IVE TOLD HER NOT TO INTERFER IN MY LIFE. WHAT I DO OR DONT DO IS NO ONES BUSINESS BUT MINE WHO THE HELL DOES SHE THINK SHE IS?1
Gayo-angerily: RAHUL, thats no way to talk. Kakun is your Bhabhi and she has every right to be concerned about you..
Rahul-not listening: Had enough of her interfering in my life! Where is she?
Rahul storms off
Gayo: Rahul? Rahul come back
Rahul goes upstairs and forcefully open Aman bedroom door
Rahul-shouts: KAKUN!
Sees Kammu outside room
Rahul-angry: Kammu where is Kakun?
Kammu-hesitant: She was in the garden-Kammu walks away quickly
Rahul is about to leave room when something catches eyes, he looks closer and sees Aman gifts on floor. Flashback-
Aman in Rahul office: Hey Bro, busy
Rahul-goans: Like a bee in summer! What can i do for you?
Aman: Just wanted to apologise for Kakun, she didnt mean to shout at you just want feeling well.
Rahul-fake smile: No worries i understood. -thinks it still hurt-
Aman: Anyway look i got her these so hopefully she'll be in a better mood-shows the diamond set and sari-
Rahul-questioningly: Nice but didnt take her for a materialistic person?
Aman-laughs: You have a lot to learn-no matter how simple they are show them some sparkle and a designer dress they just cant resist-Kakun included. Anyway got to run, see you at home.
Back to room
Rahul-angerily: So thats how you treat a gift from your husband-i had you all wrong Kakun and im not going to let you get away with treating my brother like this when all hes done is love you!
Storms out of room and goes into garden cannot find KK. about to head back but glances over to outhouse and is drawn to it. Looks as though no one is there about to turn away but turns back and opens door.
It is dark inside the only light comes from the flickering of the flames in fireplace -goes in and by sofa sees an outline knows its KK
Rahul has totally lost control! Grabs KK by upper arm and lifts her against him:
Rahul: You selfish money grabbing witch! i regret from the bottom of my heart that i ever met you or fell in love with you! All you've ever done is cause pain to those that love you-well ive had enough and im not going to let you hurt my brother!
KK: Rahul your hurting me!
Rahul: Not how much id like too! I wish i could break your bloody neck-why NainaB had to die i dont know but as far as im concerned the wrong sister died that day!
KK wrenches herself out of Rahul grip
KK loses control
KK: You bas***d! How dare you! How dare you speak about love-you have no idea of what it means! You made me fall in love with you just so that you could get my land! You lied and put out me in prison so that i would get out of you life. You treated me like dirt and deframed me in front of everyone me all because you couldnt bare to lose your golden boy image!
You call me selfish? You call me greedy? No Rahul your talking about yourself! Your nothing but a spoilt brat whos never heard the word NO! If anyone is the cause of my sister death its you for like me we had the misfortune to fall in love with you-the one person on this entire earth who is UNWORTHY OF ANYONES LOVE.
You say you regret having met me-not more then i do! I LOST EVERYTHING FOR YOU INCLUDING MY SISTER!
You regret loving me? You dont even know the meaning of the word, asked me who has scarificed just about everything for you; her home, her pariwa, her sister and now even her izaart and for what-looks up and down at Rahul- you?!
Dadu was right about love it doesnt exist, its false made up to fool people like me! And you know what the biggest irony of all this is...
KK pulls Rahul by his shirt so their face to face
KK: I STILL LOVE YOU! -laughs but full of pain- isnt that funny after EVERYTHING you are stil in my heart, in every heartbeat, in every breath that i take! -KK lets go off Rahul turns around and walks a few steps back-
Hears clapping-KK turns around
Rahul: You shouldve become an actress, bravo! Love me? What a joke thats why your pushing me to marry NainaO! That really shows your love for me; what do you want the name and money of Aman Punj and from me, Rahul Punj your lover?
KK slaps him hard
KK-disgusted: So i married Aman for his name and money? who gave you that idea i wonder- your beloved brother Aman by any chance?! You think you know him, but im the only one who does! The saintly son and brother in everyones eyes is nothing but a SHITAN!
Rahul-grabs KK by hair: You bitch! Hes done nothing but love you and defend you to everyone and this is how you treat him?!
KK-head back looking at Rahul: Love me? Defend me? What would Aman know about love or izzart? In his mind the world revolves around the wants and needs of Aman Punj and if he cant get what he wants he'll use what ever means at his disposal to get it no matter what the cost is to anyone else!
Rahul: And you would know wouldnt you? After all thats what you did to me-you wanted me and you got me-flashback to Nainab and Rahul wedding but its KK under the gunghat-
KK: I learnd everything i know from the master -Aman Punj!
Rahul-grabs KK by the arms and shakes her: painfully You have no shame!
KK cries out in pain
Rahul: Kakun...?
KK-mocking: My pain means something to you? Are you sure im not just acting!
KK turns away quickly, smooths shaking hands gently over arms making sure her arms are covered, wipes away tears.
KK-turning back to Rahul: So where were we? -jumps back as Rahul is right behind her-
Rahul-sternly: Let me see!
KK-puts arms behind her back: See what? Im an actress remember? Im not worthy of your concern! I think enough has been said and ive got better things to do with my time then waste it over a little boy crying over split milk! Did you know my darling husband sent me a diamond set? Well he must get his just rewards for such an expensive gift!
Rahul-threateningly: LET-ME-SEE!
KK-walking backwards: See what?
Rahul grabs KK into a hold with 1 arm with the other he lifts her arms up. Her sleaves fall to her elbow and in the flickering light Rahul sees deep purple bruises on KK arms.
Flashback to night before Tanu is leaving Punj home, she is by herself looking upset, Rahul finds her-
Rahul: Hey Brat why so sad? We're not a million miles away and you know this will always be your home.
Tanu-quick smile: I know, Aman Bhai said the same thing when i went to give the food to Kakun Bhabhi.
Rahul-looks intently-softly: Hey kiddo whats wrong? You know you can always come to me?
Tanu-nods: I know but what if i couldnt? What if i knew something about someone but no one would believe me? What if i knew someone i loved was hurting, physically, someone i loved?
Rahul-urgently: Tanu-tell me the truth everything is ok with you and Rohit? If hes hurting you then i dont care your not going anywhere!
Tanu-vehmently: No Bhai its not me!
Rahul: Then who?
Tanu: I...-Rohit comes-
Rohit: Tanu we've got to go now Mum and Dad are expeting us.
Tanu-turns to Rahul and hugs him-whisper beggingly: PLEASE look after Kakun Bhabhi!
Rahul steps back and looks at Tanu. Tanu looks beseachingly at him Rahul nods
Back to outhouse room
KK-panic in voice: Let me go! Let me go right now Rahul Punj! Remember its me the selfish lying witch. Let me go!
Rahul lets go from hold and brings KK arms down but he holds one wrist in each of his hands and kisses the bruises.
KK-shocked: Ra...Rahul no
Rahul draws KK closer to him and holds her tightly-remember 1st time Anurag held KK like that
KK: Rahul please no
Rahul lifts KK head from his shoulder and starts to gently drop kisses on KK face
KK shocked whisper: Rahul!
Rahul lips inch away from KK
Rahul with gentle force: Your mine Kakun and will always be mine as I will be yours. Nothing on earth can change that, we have tried to, everyone around us has tried too-but we've all have failed and thats because our love is true. This is what was meant to be, this is what is suppose to be, this is right. Nothing else matters
Rahul head moves down that final inch and he completes the kiss.
Well guys hoped you enjoyed, im doing an ekta and not keeping my word so looks like its going to go on for a bit longer-say another 100 parts or so😉
Edited by shasha74 - 17 years ago
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have i told you how much i love you shasha well im telling you again you have completely restored my fait in rahul and kakoons love for each other you are an amzing person shahsa i swear man virtual 100 hugs and 100 kisses from me love you babes you are great please im begging you carry on the story for chap 5 i want to see what happenes next you are the best more rakun passionate moments lol
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thanks rakun thats exactly how i feel about your videos!
to be honest- i know its unlikely for kakun to swear but im so FED UP of there being no REAL EMOTION between rahul and kakun that i did the scene delibrately to get SOMETHING OUT OF HER! shes been such a wet blanket and from the sounds of things she hasnt changed!
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yeah totally and you are amazing shahsha really
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God, Shasha, thank you so much for such wonderful parts. I really needed that. You're incredible. This is all that's keeping me smiling concerning RaKun right now; your fiction.
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CHAPTER 1



okay so i have thought about a RaKun moment here it goes
it was getting dark and kakoon was finishing cleaning the kitchen she sees a knife on the draw , pickes it up and accidently slits the palm of her hand.
kk. aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh
rahul is passing by the kithen and hears kk voice rahul thinks to himself [ was that kk voice that is cumin from the kitchen is something wrong let me go and check it out}. rahul rushes into the kitchen and sees blood on the floor he looks up and sees blood cumming out of the palm of kk hand.
rahul. KAKOON what happened? {rushes towards her and hold her hand puts his hand ontop of the wound trying to stop the blood from cumin out.
kk. kuch nahin bus thori se chaut aiya.
rahul you call this small.blood is gusing out and you call this small
kk dnt worry it will be fine just like everthing else i can handle it on my own, dnt need anyones help
rahul looks at her not knowing what she meant by that kk eyes filled with pain and rahul starts to feel her pain
rahul come here let me get the first aid kit
kk i can do it my self you go and get some rest
rahul and leave you like this please kk let me help you
kk looks at rahul and nods assuring him that she will let him help her
rahul tries lookin for the first aid box and remmember that it was left in the out house from when tanu had hurt herself so him and kk go to the out house and rahul finally find the box
rahul sit down
kk sits dwn rahul sits nxt to her he starts to clear up the blood
rahul does it hurt
kk no its fina holding her tears bck
rahul kk you know that i always know when your lying
kk i know
rahul so how did this happen
kk i was cleaning up then i accidently hurt myself with the knife
rahul kakoon were you daydreaming what if you had hurt yourself badly then what how do you think i would have coped knowing twith what you were in pain[rahul stops knowing that he has gone to far with wat he has said] kk looks at him and gves him alight smile
kk dnt worry ill be fine
rahul kakoon please youve got to take better care of yourself i couldnt bare it if anything happened to you
rahul finally clears up the blood and starts rapping her wound up
kk rahul what were you doing at this time of night
rahul i couldnt sleep so i was just talkin a walk around the house
kk why is everything okay
rahul dnt worry everything is fine
rahul notices a bruise on kk arm
rahul what happened here
kk pulls away and quickly pulls down her sleeve
rahul what happened
kk kuch nahin its getting late so ive got to go and so do you
kk gets up and as she walks away rahul grabs her wrist kk looks at him
rahul tell me kk whats wrong what is this bruise doing on your arm tell me his words so forceful
kk like i said its nothing
rahul pushes kk near to him and looks deep into her eyes kk eyes are filling up with tears rahul lifts his finger and just as a tear cums out of her eyes rahul quickly grabs it
rahul know tell me that nothing is wrong
kk its ....... its
rahul its what
kk i cant tell you
rahul why cant you
kk becoz if i did it would hurt you and i cant bear that hurting you
rahul what are you tryin to say
rahul and kk face an inch apart
rahul if you cant bear to see me hurt what makes you think that i can bear to see you hurt
kk please rahul just let go
rahul i cant
kk why
rahul becoz i........ becoz i
kk becoz what
rahul becoz i love you dammit there you go i love you more then anything ive never stopped loving you every breath i take is for you you are the reason i still breath
rahul relieved to finally let it out
kk lookin at rahul suprisingly
kk please dnt rahul [she cant stop her crying]
rahul please kakoon i didnt mean to hurt you
kk you havent hurt me you are makin me feel weak again whenever i hear those three word from your mouth my heart melts. all i can think is about you and then everything cums rushing back my marriage to your brother everthing and its starts hurting me .
rahul i dont know what came over me i just want you to be happy kakoon and im seeing that you are not
kk rahul how can i be happy when you are the only person in this whole world that is my happiness and i couldnt have you. you are the only reason that i am here today.
rahul grabs kakoon and presses her head against his chest
kk i cant live without you it kills me to think of you with another women
rahul lifts her head and presses his lips against her tears a flashback is shown of rahul doing that the kakoon before. rahul slowly moves his head away from kk, kk lookin at him in a loving way.
rahul i love you and cant be with out you it kills me the fact that you are with aman but what can i do whenever we finally find our way to each other something always cums in the way
kk rahul what are we going to do
rahul i dnt know kk i dnt know
they both stare at each other and embraces each other again


hope that was okay
thats chap one chap too cumin soon

Edited by RaKun17 - 16 years ago

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