FF: LOVING AN ANGEL *Part-11 Pg-48* - Page 30

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: SAMAR KAPOOR

ya actually quite busy these days in my MBA. That's why, but will try my best to read ur ff. Because i love it. And i know that everything that is going to be in ur ff will be great. So please post the next part as soon as possible😊

wowww MBA!! datz gr8.....hope u doin well😃 ma xamz gona finish tomoz so after dat i ll post da next part😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

thnx so much😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

PART NINE

Is Pal main hoon

Ya tum bhi ho

Ya dono hoke bhi na hain

Kyun ho kya ho

Ho bhi ki na ho

Ya kehna sunna mana hai

Is pal main hoon

Ya tum bhi ho

Ya dono hoke bhi na hain

Tumhe dekh ke yaad aai wahi bishri kahani

Deewane ka kissa ya phir ek deewani

Dono sang sang rehte har dam

Aisa ye maine suna hai

Is pal main hoon

Ya tum bhi ho

Ya dono hoke bhi na hai

Kyun ho kya ho

Ho bhi ki na ho

Ya kehna sunna mana hain

Tum batado yaad koi kya purani leke aau

Ya nishani dete jau

Ya kahani leke jau

Ya ki mann ko chodd di jaye

Ye jataaaaaa jata jaha hai

Is pal main hoon

Ya tum bhi ho

Ya dono ho ke bhi na hain

Kyun ho kya ho

Ho bhi ki na ho

Ya kehna sunna mana hain

Is pal main hoon………

It was just the two of them. A secluded area by the beach and a dinner table set for two. The atmosphere itself spelt romance and it was just a perfect time for being there with the one you love.

It felt so right being in her arms. He closed his eyes bringing her closer to him. They belonged together. Time had stopped and there was nothing but the two of them and the soft music and the magic of this moment. They could have gone dancing forever in each other's arms. He felt that she had relaxed and gave herself up to him completely. She looked up at him and he could see nothing but those eyes full with desire. Wanting her right at that moment he pressed his lips against hers and kissed her in such urgency he never felt. She went weak in her knees and put her arms around his neck for support. The touch of her skin on his, burned his skin, such was the passion and want….when suddenly, he saw it was actually GAURI he was kissing. With a jerk he woke up.

"Now what the f*** was that all about…Mr Pratham Mittal you need a psychiatrist," he muttered to himself. Just think about it. Just think with a cool mind and you'll know. Gauri and you making out. Gosh NO WAY!!

His phone stared ringing at that moment.

What a dream!! Looking at the caller id on his cell he got irritated. Getting out of bed and walking out of his room he barged in Gauri's room. Why does she always have such bad timing!!

"What the hell is wrong with you woman?!?!" he shouted at the top of his voice.

"Pratham actually I wasn't sleepy at all…"

"Oh right…Miss Gauri wasn't sleepy so what she decided was that she wont let anyone else sleep as well…woman do you have any idea what time it is" he shouted again.

"Well of course I do," she replied looking at the watch. Taking a small pause she said, "It…It is 3 in the morning," she replied gulping down a worry of what Pratham might actually do to her right then.

"Gosh!! U say as if it is nothing…you ruined my sleep you dumb head"

Pouting she stared, "Pratham…"

"Before you start on what I just said to you let me tell you that you just ruined the most beautiful dream that I ever had…do you by any chance have any idea what I feel right now…OK correction…slip of tongue…it was actually the scariest dream I ever had!! I wanted to think about it a little and that's when you call…."

"Chill Pratham…it's not like I've never did this before…you know how I always have had bad timings!" she replied.

"Like tell me about it" he said rolling his eyes.

"Anyways…the reason I called you here is that I'm not sleepy at all and so could you please sleep with me in my room tonight"

Now how could anyone in this world ever say no to that face she always made when she requested?!? Help me God, he thought to himself.

"Alright fine…only if you move over to the left"

Smiling she quickly moved over to the left side of the bed while Pratham crawled in the right side of the bed. And within the next five minutes, yes you guessed it right, Gauri was asleep.

Looking at his angel sleeping with her lips curved in a smile, he fell asleep too. Not knowing that after an hour or so both cuddled together and fell in a blissful sleep in each other's arms.

A Month Later:

Pratham was quite happy. Mostly because he never had that scary dream…sorry NIGHTMARE again. Everything was normal. And the best thing was he was finding himself drawn towards Nandini. Nandini Thakkar. The name itself had this beauty in it. Pratham was walking down the street when he found himself face-to-face with the girl ruling his mind for days now. Yes, it was Nandini. Just a glimpse of her could make him smile and a bad day would not seem so bad after all. She was like a breath of fresh air in his life.

Pratham and Nandini had been dating each other for quite a while now. And life was going smooth for Pratham. And he gelled so well with her. Never before had he been happy dating a girl. And maybe, he thought she was the one he had always been looking for. Pratham at first tried to impress Nandini with his PM style, which DID NOT work. That was the first time Pratham actually met a girl, besides his angel of course, who wasn't wooed by his charismatic PM charms.

Smiling at her he hugged her tight.

"What's up beautiful?" he asked beaming with happiness. Seeing her after a hard day at the university campus was such a relief.

"Not bad…just had a very bad day!" she replied all tired.

"Aww my baby had a bad day…no fear when I am here" he replied with a wink.

Walking up close to her he kissed her. He even liked kissing her. Am I really falling in LOVE?!?! He thought to himself. Hugging her he closed his eyes and thought about all the moments he shared with Nandini. They just made him so happy. In all this time he never even thought about other women. Was this really love? He asked himself confused.

He needed to talk to his angel about this. So making up his mind that tonight he will sit with Gauri in this matter, he took Nandini for a long drive downtown.

HIGHLIGHTS: Pratham heartbroken!

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song: Is Pal

Movie: Aaja Nachle

plz do leave ur comments😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey.. awesome part
loved prathamz dream.. its so beautifully written and depicted..
PM heart borken 😭
am waiting for the next part..
plzz post ASAP
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Posted: 17 years ago
superb himu.da dream waz da best & da introductory hindi poem waz da perfect 1 for 2 luvers in sum isolated place.wow!!!wht a passion ,warmth,feeling of togetherness b/w PG.its indeed surprising tht pratham iz in luv wid gauri but still not ready 2 accept.foolish fellow!!!ur angel iz dere 4 u why confused whether u luve nandini or not.

i'm addicted 2 ur ff himu.it completely rokzz!!!!in theze lovey dovey situations don't 4get our cassanova PM .waiting 4 more sweet pg moments.more PG romance plzz!!!no rang mein bhang ok.i hope u got wht i wanna say.no prem trikon plzz!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Lovely part...the dream part was the best...lol he was calling it a nightmare......Awwwwwwww poor thing his heart is going to be broken by Nandini...hope Gauri will be there to help him. please post the next part soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: stylishgal

hey.. awesome part
loved prathamz dream.. its so beautifully written and depicted..
PM heart borken 😭
am waiting for the next part..
plzz post ASAP

thnx simi😃it took me 1 hr to write dat dream😆😆had to make it special init😳 dnt cry😆ur gona b happy wen u knw da reason😆

yea gona try postin soon!!😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

thnx so much😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey himuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu 😆

i see now we share more than this 1 thing 😉 😆

naughty dream with u 2 eh ? 😉 😆

loved the part

hey just thought 1 more coincidence karan & pratham, will be depressed in the next parts in our ff's simultaneously 😃

wow hon tht's called being friends i say 😳 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
it's so cool you've posted the nine part so quickly thank you so much himu...
first when you started the scene I thought what is he kissing nandani 😛 😆
but thank God it wasn't her 😉 well, he is so passionate and hot☺️, wow I just love it 😉
you wrote it so perfactly 😃

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