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Posted: 10 months ago
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The Father's Embrace Part 5

Raghav took Rajveer to the hospital with Siya.

Raghav:Siya,you all think that Rajveer is my son.Right?In a very short time, you all will get to know the truth that he is not my son.

Rajveer and Siya became dull.

Suddenly Daya reached there.

Raghav:Dadi!

Daya:I came to know why you brought Rajveer here.Are you not ashamed to do DNA test?

Raghav:Dadi,this is a good chance to prove that he is not my son.

Daya:You can do such a test here and the doctor may write the result as per your wish.In the court you can prove that Rajveer is not your son.But can you betray your own conscience?

Raghav:Dadi!You really believe that Rajveer is my son?

Daya:Yes.Rajveer's mannerisms are exactly like yours.His favourite food is your favourite food.He has a mole on his finger like yours.He sings like you.

Raghav:Dadi,these are just coincidences. There are many people who behave like me or sing.Many people love the food which I love.There may be so many people with a mole on their finger.That does not mean that they all are my children.

Daya:But I have accepted him as my great grand son.I don't need any DNA result to prove whether he is my grandson or not.My husband and my son did not do any test to prove that my son and you are their own sons.So I will not let you take any test now.Because it is an insult to Rajveer and have you ever thought how much pain will he have because of this test?

Daya grabbed Rajveer's hand and walked out angrily.Raghav became upset.

Raghav:Everything got spoiled.Atleast you believe me Siya.

His eyes became wet.

Siya became sad.

Siya:To be frank seeing Rajveer's innocence I really thought that you did a mistake to his mother.But since it was past,I did not ask you what happened between you and his mother or why you deserted the mother and the son.But now...seeing your tears,I am sure that you are not lying.There is some mystery behind Rajveer.We need to find it out Raghav.

Raghav;Thanks for supporting me Siya.I have decided to go to Mumbai;the place where I stayed and worked years back,

I want to trace his background there.

I want to find out why he is saying with confidence that I am his father.

There is something fishy about Rajveer.

Siya:I will also come with you to Mumbai Raghav.

Raghav:Okay Siya.



Siya and Raghav went to Mumbai.

Siya:How will we find out Rajveer's details?

Raghav:I know someone in Mumbai.I stayed in his house as a paying guest.Film Photographer Mahesh.He used to work in small movies as a still photographer.He had a small studio also.I hope he can help me to find out the place where Rajveer stayed. I hope like Rajveer said he is really from Mumbai and not from any other place.

Siya:But are you sure that the photographer Mahesh stays in the same house?

Raghav:No.But he is my only hope here.Let's check whether he stays there itself or not.



Raghav and Siya went to Mahesh's house.Somebody opened the door.

Raghav was relieved and happy as he was Mahesh.

Raghav:Maheshji....

Siya was also happy.

Raghav:Do you remember me?I am Raghav.

Mahesh:I remember you.After all you stayed with me for some time.

Raghav smiled.

Raghav:This is my fiancee Siya.

Siya:Namaste!

Mahesh:Namaste!Come inside.

They both sat inside.

Mahesh:After so many years what made you come here Raghav?

Raghav:I am in a trouble Maheshji.

Mahesh:What trouble?

Raghav took Rajveer's photograph from his pocket and gave it to Mahesh.

Raghav:Do you know him?

Mahesh became dull.

Mahesh:Yes.I know him and his mother very well.

Raghav and Siya smiled with relief.

Raghav:Where is their house?

Mahesh:In this area itself.

Raghav:This boy has ruined my life.

Mahesh was shocked:What?How?

Raghav told him everything.Mahesh was shocked.

Mahesh:Rajveer went missing suddenly.We could not find where he went or whether he was alive or dead.I am relieved that he is safe in your house.But I never expected him to come to your house.

Raghav:I don't know why Rajveer is lying.I thought it was for my property.But now I doubt whether there is some other mystery behind it.You know him very well.Please tell me where he studied.I want to know where he studied.I want to go there to check whether he has any criminal background.

Mahesh:I will tell you everything.Infact I know why Rajveer says that he is your son.

Raghav and Siya were stunned.


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Posted: 10 months ago
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Didn't expect Daya to reach there. How did this Pic of Rasiya look originally? Interesting, they r going back to Mumbai. Hope they get details. Yayy so the mystery will finally be unraveled. Perfect pics, waiting for next. Okay so I don't have any predictions, I love the built up of suspense

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Posted: 10 months ago
#33

In the real pic,Raghav was smiling.I replaced his smiling face with a serious face.glad that it looks original.


Thanks a lot.


Originally posted by: salley145

Didn't expect Daya to reach there. How did this Pic of Rasiya look originally? Interesting, they r going back to Mumbai. Hope they get details. Yayy so the mystery will finally be unraveled. Perfect pics, waiting for next. Okay so I don't have any predictions, I love the built up of suspense

Edited by jasminerahul - 10 months ago
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Posted: 10 months ago
#34

So Is Rajveer Lying Then?

Is He A Bad Guy?

😔

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Posted: 10 months ago
#35

Interesting update dear 🙂

Just loved it 🤗

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 10 months ago
#36
Rajveer is not a bad boy. Thank you very much.

Originally posted by: SilverBell

So Is Rajveer Lying Then?

Is He A Bad Guy?

😔

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Posted: 10 months ago
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thanks for the pm

Riveting update.... finely written

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Posted: 10 months ago
#38

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Rajveer is not a bad boy. Thank you very much.

Very Nice

Please Update Soon

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Posted: 10 months ago
#39

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The Father's Embrace Part 6

Mahesh:Rajveer's mother Preeta was a junior artist in movies.Being a still photographer in movies I got to meet her and developed a good relationship with her.She was like a daughter to me.Preeta was always dressed up for her movies.Seeing that Rajveer thought that Preeta was colourful.But actually her life was colourless.It's was not ornaments which gave colour to her life,but Rajveer.

Preeta's life changed when she got raped by a film producer.It became an issue and the producer got jailed.But shockingly she got pregnant.Being an orphan her life became really hard.



Flash back...

Mahesh told Preeta:Like a father I will be always with you.Come with me to the hospital.You can abort the baby.

Preeta:No Mahesh uncle.I don't want to abort the baby.I am an orphan.God may have given me this baby to give me a company.Now this baby is my hope to live.

Mahesh was shocked.

Mahesh:But Preeta...you are young.You need to get married.This baby can be an obstacle.

Preeta:I don't want to get married Mahesh uncle.No man wants to marry a rape victim.I am already insulted by everyone.I just want my baby.

Mahesh felt sad for her.

Mahesh held her hand and said:Whatever decision you will take,I will always support you.

Preeta smiled.

Present....

Mahesh:Preeta gave birth to a baby boy and named him Rajveer.She struggled hard to teach him.She gave him good education.She did not want Rajveer to know that he was the result of rape which she never wanted to remember.Because she knew that it will break his heart.So she always lied to him that his father was a lovely person,but due to circumstance they got separated and he did not come back in search of him because he was unaware of her pregnancy.Destiny again played a cruel game in the form of cancer.Preeta passed away due to cancer.Rajveer became all alone.He slipped into depression and tried to commit suicide.

Raghav and Siya were shocked.



Flash back...

Mahesh threw away the sleeping pills Rajveer was going to consume.

Mahesh:What are you doing Rajveer?Your mother gave you good education to make your life secure,not to kill yourself.

Rajveer:Why should I live in this world without my mother?I have no one now.I am all alone.

Mahesh became upset.



Present....

Mahesh:I was scared whether he will try to commit suicide again.So I decided to lie that he has a nice father who lives in another state. Accidentally my eyes fell on the old photographs I had taken.I saw your photograph which you made me take to submit it along with your biodata for the job interview.I kept that photograph in Preeta's cupboard when he was sleeping.Later I lied to him that you are his father and he found your photograph in the cupboard.

Raghav:To keep Rajveer's life safe you spoiled my life Maheshji.Now everyone including my mother thinks that I am Rajveer's father.I have been ashamed in front of the public.

Siya:Yes Maheshji.Not even Raghav's mother is believing him.

Mahesh became upset.

Mahesh:I am sorry Raghav.I lied just to make Rajveer feel that he is not alone.But I never thought that Rajveer will really come to your place in search of you.

Raghav:But why did you lie like that?There are so many orphans in this world.Are they not living?Can't Rajveer also live like them?

Mahesh:It's very easy for you to say that.But only an orphan knows the pain of loneliness.You know?I can relate to Rajveer.Because my parents got divorced when I was a baby.But before my mother passed away she confessed to me about the existence of my father.Though I did not enquire about my father or went to meet him,I was relieved that I was not an orphan.That's why I could understand Rajveer's feelings very well and lied to him.But I never intended to spoil your life Raghav.I am really sorry.

Raghav did not know what to say.

Siya:Can you please come with us and tell everyone the truth?Especially to Raghav's mother.

Mahesh:Okay.I will correct my mistake by telling the truth to everyone.I will bring back Rajveer here.I promise that there won't be any kind of trouble from Rajveer from now onwards.

Raghav and Siya were relieved.



Rajveer packed his luggage.

Chandni and Daya were stunned.

Rajveer:I am leaving badi dadi.

They were shocked.

Daya:Why beta?

Rajveer:I realized that papa can never accept me as his son.That's why he took me to the hospital for the medical test.I should not hurt my own father by living here as a burden for him.So I have to leave.

Daya's eyes got filled with tears.

Daya:Rajveer beta!

Rajveer touched her feet tearfully:Please bless me badi dadi.

Daya put her hands on his head weeping.

Daya:You will get everything you wish for.

Rajveer's tears rolled down his cheeks.

He thought:I just wished for my father's love which will remain unfulfilled.

Chandni looked at Rajveer tearfully:Rajveer!Are you really leaving?

Rajveer nodded tearfully.

Chandni:Won't you ever come back?

Rajveer shook his head signifying 'no'.

Chandni:Won't you miss me?

Rajveer looked at her silently.

They shared an emotional eye lock.

Rajveer:I am going.

Suddenly Daya hugged him and cried.Rajveer too cried.

Raghav and Siya reached the Jindal house with Mahesh.

Raghav told Daya:Dadi..this is Maheshji with whom I stayed in Mumbai years back.

Mahesh:Namaste!

Daya:Namaste!

Raghav:Where is Rajveer?

Daya replied sadly:Rajveer has gone.

They were shocked.

Raghav:What?

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Posted: 10 months ago
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Surprising that Preeta was a junior artist. Sad that she got raped and pregnant. I recalled spotlight where the girl Tridha Choudhary got raped, but she wasn't pregnant. Preeta wanting the baby was nice. So she kept lying to Rajveer, of course no mother would want her child's heart to break. Shocking that Rajveer tried to commit suicide. Glad that Mahesh has agreed to tell the truth. Rajveer's moments with Chandni and Daya were emotional. Wonder what will happen. Perfect pics, waiting for next

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