Fellow travelers(Spin-off of Kumkum Kumkum Bhagya)(Rajveer Monisha TS)

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Fellow travelers(Spin-off of Kumkum Kumkum Bhagya) Part 1

I dedicate this TS to heavenlybliss who wanted a Part 2 of my OS Kumkum Kumkum Bhagya to know about Monisha's love life.Instead of writing Part2,I am presenting the spin off of my OS Kumkum Kumkum Bhagya which focuses on Monisha's love story.

On wattpad my friend Moumi Das had started a Rajveer Monisha FF combining Kundali bhagya and Kumkum bhagya.I found her idea interesting and unique.But after Part1 she quit writing.So I decided to pair Monisha opposite Rajveer in my TS also.

A train....

A boy got inside the train and sat near a girl.The girl ignored him.

After some time the boy said:I am getting bored.I am sure that even you are bored.So shall we talk?

She:I am not bored.So why should I talk to you?

He:See...now you talked to me.That means you are also bored like me.

She:Nonsense!

He:Hi..I am Rajveer Luthra.

She:I don't want to reveal my name to you.

He:No problem.I will call you Durga as you are short tempered like Durga Devi.

She:You are crazy.

He giggled.

Rajveer:Where are you going?

Durga:I am not going to any particular place.I will go to any place on the way.I am just trying a solo trip to forget my pain.

Rajveer:What pain?

Durga:Why should I share my pain with a stranger like you?

Rajveer:Strangers are the best people to share your pain with.They won't judge you.

Durga was silent for a moment.

Suddenly Durga noticed that the train stopped near a beautiful green place.

She got down from the train.

Rajveer:Why are you getting down here?

She did not reply.

Rajveer:Crazy girl!

Rajveer too got down from the train and followed her.She was shocked.

She:Why are you following me?Don't come after me.Okay?

Rajveer:First you tell me why you got down here?

She:Because I find this place beautiful...look at the greenery.

Rajveer:This is a forest area.That's why it is green.This place is very dangerous.That's why I followed you to protect you.

She:First of all no animal can hurt me.Because I am more dangerous than them.

Rajveer:Yes.After all you are Durga who sits on the tiger.And I am trying to protect you out of humanity.I travelled with you in the train for some time.I can't think of you getting eaten by a wild animal.

She stared at him deeply.

They both walked silently.After some time Rajveer broke the silence.

Rajveer:You did not tell me about your pain.

Durga:I loved a person named RV.I waited for him for years.But he broke my heart by loving that stupid Purvi.Instead of marrying me,he married that Purvi and produced kids.

Rajveer:That's why you are bitter and frustrated.Let go of your pain.

Durga:I am trying for that.I will get the best man in this world...better than RV.

Rajveer smiled:That's the spirit.

She smiled slightly.

Rajveer:Well...I also have a similar past.

She:What?

Rajveer:Yes.I loved a girl named Palki.But like TV serial female leads she preferred to marry the red flag twin brother of mine Shaurya.But I don't care.I did not even wait for her for a single second.Because I believe that someone unique is made for me.

She:Wow!You are really positive minded.I think I should learn from you.

He smiled.

Suddenly they heard an animal's sound and ran away.

They saw a small hut and went there.

An old couple came out.

Old man:Who are you both?

Rajveer:We came to this area by mistake.We heard an animal's sound.We came here to escape from them.

Old man:This place is not that safe for outsiders.

Old woman:You both can stay here and go back in the morning.

Rajveer:Thank you very much.


Rajveer and Durga went to their room.They freshened up and changed their clothes.

Durga:I will sleep on the bed.You sleep on the floor.

Rajveer:Why?

Durga:Because I need a bed to sleep.I am used to luxurious life style.

Rajveer:Not only you,even I belong to a rich family.I also need a bed to sleep.

Durga:Whatever!I need this bed.

Rajveer:Then half of the time you be on the bed.After that I will sleep on the bed.

Durga:What nonsense!

Rajveer walked towards her asking:What nonsense?

Suddenly he tripped and fell upon her.She also lost balance and fell on the bed.He fell on top of her.

Unknowingly they got lost in each other's eyes.

Both came back to consciousness.

She:Get up.

He got up from her.

Rajveer:I have no interest to lie over you.

She just gave him an angry expression.

She:Anyways I am going to sleep.

Durga slept on the bed.

Rajveer:This girl!

Rajveer slept on the floor.


In the morning Durga woke up.She saw Rajveer wiping his wet hair after bathing.

Durga:You woke up early?

Rajveer:Yes.Actually uncle and aunty told us to join them to go to the temple.

Durga:What?We have to go to the temple?

Rajveer:Hey Durga...what's wrong in going to the temple?Your mind is not calm now.It will be peaceful after going to the temple.

Durga was silent.


They went to the temple.

The old man:This is the temple for couples.God blesses the couples who come here.

Old woman:Beta...you carry your wife in your arms and take her to the temple.That's the ritual here.

Rajveer and Durga were shocked.

Durga murmured: What is this?

Rajveer whispered:They allowed us to stay in their house thinking that we are married.We can't break their trust now.So we have to behave like a couple.

Durga nodded with a dull expression.

Rajveer lifted her up in his arms and walked.

Slowly they looked at each other and a sweet smile appeared on their lips.

After reaching inside the temple,he made her stand.

They both prayed.

Durga prayed:God,please give me the best life partner.I don't want to lead a sad life thinking about that RV who did not value me.

After coming back from the temple,she told Rajveer:You are right.After the temple visit I feel peaceful.

Rajveer smiled.


After bidding farewell to the old couple they left from there.

While walking suddenly some red drops fell on her body.

Rajveer gave a shocked expression.

Rajveer:Blood!

She was shocked:Blood?

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Posted: 7 months ago
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I am loving this pair already....please continue...but its only a TSsmiley19

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Thanks.

Have u seen their show Meri Durga?


Originally posted by: heavenlybliss

I am loving this pair already....please continue...but its only a TSsmiley19

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Nice Its From Meri Durga

I Have Seen The Show

Even Liked Rajveer And Durga 's Story

Glad To Read This TS

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Glad that u have seen Meri Durga.I have not seen it.I saw a few clips recently which I liked.How was the pair in Meri Durga?

Thank you.

Originally posted by: SilverBell

Nice Its From Meri Durga

I Have Seen The Show

Even Liked Rajveer And Durga 's Story

Glad To Read This TS

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Posted: 7 months ago
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It's funny how he gave her a name of his own choice and assumed she's bored, even began following her. If it's to protect her, it's really sweet of him. Sad that the one she loved, loved someone else, married and had kids. At least here Shaurya got Palki. Good that they got a shelter. Both falling over each other was romantic. He made her stand, you've made a typo. Rajveer carrying Durga was sweet. How did suddenly blood appear? So this is a suspense story? Perfect pics, waiting for next.

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Glad that u have seen Meri Durga.I have not seen it.I saw a few clips recently which I liked.How was the pair in Meri Durga?

Thank you.

It Was Nice

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Meri_Durga


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Posted: 7 months ago
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Amazing start dear 😍

Just loved it 🤗

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Part 1

Majestic update... well written

thanks for the pm

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Posted: 7 months ago
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Salley

Silverbell

Heavenlybliss

GOLDIEABROL

khwaishfan

Thank u very much for the lovely comments



Fellow travelers Part 2


While walking suddenly some red drops fell on Durga's body.

Rajveer gave a shocked expression.

Rajveer:Blood!

She was shocked:Blood?

Rajveer:I think there is an animal on the top of the tree.That animal is eating human flesh.So the blood fell on your body.This is normal in forest area.

Durga got scared:Let us escape from here.

Suddenly Rajveer laughed.

Rajveer:Hey..this is not blood.This is honey.

Rajveer pointed his finger towards the honeycomb which was hanging on the tree branch.

Durga frowned:You fooled me.Get lost.

Rajveer:Durga...don't get angry always.

He pulled his own ears and said:Sorry!

Slowly she smiled:Ok.

He smiled happily.

They continued walking.


Finally they reached the town.

Rajveer:From here you can catch a bus and go.I will go my way.

Suddenly Durga became dull.

She thought:I spent very less time with Rajveer.Still why I feel sad to part my way with him?

A bus came.

Rajveer:You can get inside now.

She nodded.

She stepped inside the bus and turned back.

She looked at him painfully.

Rajveer:May I know your real name atleast now?

She:Mon...Monisha.

He smiled:Your real name is very sweet Monisha.

She was still looking at him painfully.

Monisha:Bye!

Rajveer:Bye!

While waving hands at each other,the bus left.

Suddenly Rajveer's eyes became wet.

Rajveer:Why I feel so upset?She is no one to me.She is just a person I met during my journey.



After some months....

Rajveer was walking through the market area.While walking by mistake he hit someone.

It was a girl.In anger the girl said:How dare you?Can't you see?

He looked at her.

They both were stunned to see each other.

Rajveer:Monisha!

Monisha:So you remember me.

Rajveer:You also remember me.I thought we will never see each other in this life.

Monisha:Me too.But I am glad that I could see you again.

Rajveer:Why are you glad to see me again?

Monisha thought:Guess like RV,he also did not care about me or think about me after we parted our ways.Look at my fate.Nobody is interested in Monisha.Am I that bad?

Rajveer:You did not say anything.

Monisha:Nothing to say.I am Monisha.Monisha will speak when she wants.

Rajveer:Now also you are Durga.

Monisha:Whatever!

He smiled.

Suddenly his phone rang.He attended the call.

Rajveer:Oh,I am coming now.

Rajveer looked at Monisha:Monisha,I have to leave now.

He ran away.

Monisha got irritated.

Monisha:He just left without even talking to me properly.




After some days....

Monisha came out of a shop.Rajveer was coming there.They both saw each other.

Rajveer's face became pleasant.

Rajveer:Monisha!

Monisha yelled at him.

Monisha:Don't utter my name.You just left without even saying good bye properly.You did not even ask my phone number.

Rajveer became sad as her anger towards him was unexpected.

Rajveer:I am sorry Monisha.I did'nt do it purposefully.I got a call that my friend met with an accident.That's why I left immediately.I was worried about his condition.But now he is out of danger.

Monisha became guilty.

Monisha:I am sorry for misunderstanding you.

Rajveer:I am glad that Durga's anger has melted.

She smiled slightly.

Rajveer:Can you give me your phone number?

Monisha got excited,but she hid it.

Monisha:Monisha will not simply give her phone number to anyone.My phone number is precious.I will give you my number only on one demand.You should give me your phone number first.

Rajveer chuckled:Such a small demand?I will give my number to you.

She smiled.

They exchanged their phone number.


They started chatting over the phone.

Rajveer's mother Preeta went near him.

Preeta:Rajveer,these days you look very happy.After a long time I am seeing you really happy.

Rajveer smiled:Yes Maa.I am very haappy now.

Preeta:I feel nice to see you happy.

Rajveer:Maa,I told you about Monisha whom I met during my train journey.

Preeta:Yes.You were upset after parting ways with her even though you both were only fellow travelers.

You even tried to trace her.When you could'nt find her you were so upset.

Rajveer:I had lost my hope to find her.But God made me meet her again.Now we are very good friends.

Preeta:That's such a big surprise.I am so happy for you Rajveer.

Preeta hugged Rajveer.

Rajveer and Monisha were seated in a restaurant.

Monisha:Last 6 months how was your life?

Rajveer:It was nice.I am a happy person.I find happiness in everything.

Monisha:But my life was depressing. I was feeling empty and lonely.You are lucky to be happy.

Rajveer:The happiness is in our hands Monisha.If we try,we can be happy.

Monisha:Now without trying itself I feel happy Rajveer.Because you are with me.

He smiled looking at her eyes deeply.

They shared a deep eye lock.

Monisha:My dad has arranged a party for tomorrow.He told me that it's a surprise.You also come.You can meet my parents.

Rajveer:Sure.I will come.

She smiled.


Edited by jasminerahul - 7 months ago

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