The Father's Embrace RaSiya Rajveer Chandni SS - Page 2

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Posted: 10 months ago
#11

Very interesting update dear 🙂

Just loved it 🤗

Raj is really trying hard

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 10 months ago
#12

Glad that Siya didn't misunderstand Raghav. Unlike TV serials, here u showed what Rajveer thought, most of the time the villain's thoughts aren't exposed. Here the FL#2 got attracted towards ML#2 unlike TV serials where it's boy who gets attracted. Fake mole can also be stuck haha, I remember in SNS Radha stuck a fake mole on Meera's back and brought a stranger lady who claimed to be her mother saying she has a mole on her back, but the mole wasn't stuck properly, it fell. Even in Makdee movie when one of the twins who had a mole on face went missing, the other twin stuck a mole on her face pretending to be her as well as herself. Poor Daya and Siya. It's natural for Siya to react that ways. Rajveer Chandni scene was nice. Rajveer claims Raghav to be his father, means he never had a father figure in his life, so the song really didn't suit here. But him recalling Preeta was sad. The friends were commenting on Raghav or Rajveer? Haha. So it was Rajveer haha, I feel like laughing. Perfect pics, waiting for next

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Posted: 10 months ago
#13

Palki was attracted towards Rajveer in kdb.

You are right.Since father is mentioned in the song it didn't suit them.But since they played this song in kdb I used it here also.



Really loved your comment.Thanks a lot.


Originally posted by: salley145

Glad that Siya didn't misunderstand Raghav. Unlike TV serials, here u showed what Rajveer thought, most of the time the villain's thoughts aren't exposed. Here the FL#2 got attracted towards ML#2 unlike TV serials where it's boy who gets attracted. Fake mole can also be stuck haha, I remember in SNS Radha stuck a fake mole on Meera's back and brought a stranger lady who claimed to be her mother saying she has a mole on her back, but the mole wasn't stuck properly, it fell. Even in Makdee movie when one of the twins who had a mole on face went missing, the other twin stuck a mole on her face pretending to be her as well as herself. Poor Daya and Siya. It's natural for Siya to react that ways. Rajveer Chandni scene was nice. Rajveer claims Raghav to be his father, means he never had a father figure in his life, so the song really didn't suit here. But him recalling Preeta was sad. The friends were commenting on Raghav or Rajveer? Haha. So it was Rajveer haha, I feel like laughing. Perfect pics, waiting for next

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Posted: 10 months ago
#14

Part 1

Majestic update.... nicely written

thanks for the pm

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Posted: 10 months ago
#15

Sorry I Don't Like Raghav And Siya At All

😠

Both Are Horrible To Rajveer

Poor Preeta Is Gone

Sad

Update Soon

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Posted: 10 months ago
#16

Salley

Silverbell

GOLDIE ABROL

khwaishfan

Thank you so much for the comments



The Father's Embrace Part 3

Rajveer sat near Daya.

Rajveer:Badi dadi,I feel awkward to eat and drink without doing any work.

Daya:But you are not simply sitting here.You are helping me in household chores.

Rajveer:Not that Badi dadi.Can you please tell papa to arrange a small job for me?I have done B.Com.

Daya:Why not?Raghav runs a company of his own.It's easy for him to hire you.

Rajveer smiled.



Daya told Raghav:Raghav,you give a good post to Rajveer in your company.

Raghav was stunned.

Raghav:Dadi,I am thinking how to drive him away.But you want me to give him a Permanant post in my company?

Daya:Raghav,if he is lying,it's obvious that, it is because he is alone,homeless and jobless.So even if he is proved to be guilty,if we give him a job and help him,it will be a good deed and God will bless us.

Raghav:Dadi!

Daya:Raghav,I have always told you to help others.Won't you help this poor boy?

Raghav:Your emotional blackmailing makes me say 'yes' to everything.Okay fine.

Daya became very happy.



Raghav took Rajveer to his office.

Raghav:I am giving you the post of a clerk now.Based on your performance,I will decide what to do next.If you don't do your job properly I will fire you the next moment.

Rajveer:I promise you that I will try my level best.I will do 100 percent justice to my job.

Raghav reacted with an attitude:Okay..fine.



After a month....

Rajveer was very happy to receive his first salary.

Rajveer thanked Raghav:Thank you so much.This is very precious for me.

Raghav smiled unknowingly.

Raghav:I must say that you are very sincere in your job.Keep it up.

Rajveer became very happy to get appreciated by Raghav.



Rajveer bought a saree for Daya and gave it to her.

Daya:This looks so pretty.But what was the need of buying it for me?

Rajveer:This is my first salary.If I don't buy anything for you,then for whom should I buy?

Daya smiled emotionally.

Rajveer went near Siya.Siya turned off her face.

Rajveer gave her a jewellery box.Siya was surprised that Rajveer bought gifts for her also.

Rajveer:This box has earrings,necklace and bangles.These are artificial jewellery as I cannot afford anything expensive at this moment.See whether you liked it.

Siya was touched by this.

Siya opened the box and saw the ornaments.

Siya:These are very pretty.I loved it.

Rajveer smiled very happily as Siya talked to him softly for the first time.

Immediately Siya wore them.

Siya:How am I looking now?

Rajveer remembered his mother Preeta adorned with ornaments.

Rajveer:You are looking very beautiful Siya aunty.

Siya smiled.

Rajveer:You remind me of my mother.

Siya smiled:Really?I remind you of your mother?

Rajveer:Yes.My mother does not look like you.But she was pretty like you.She used to wear jewellery like you.

Siya smiled.

Siya:Can I see your mother's photograph?

Rajveer:Yes.

Rajveer went to his room.

Siya told Daya:Dadi,you are right.Rajveer is actually a nice boy.

Daya smiled as Siya's anger for Rajveer has melted.

Rajveer brought a photograph from his room.It was a photograph where Rajveer was with Preeta.

Daya and Siya smiled seeing the photograph.

Siya:Your mother is lovely.

Rajveer:Yes,she is.Siya aunty...can I join your dance school to learn dance?I would like to learn dance.

Siya:What a surprise!Sure.You can come there.

Rajveer smiled.



Rajveer entered Raghav's room and extended a shirt towards Raghav.

Raghav:What is this?

Rajveer:I bought this specially for you with my first salary.

Raghav:Why did you buy a shirt for me?I only gave you salary and with that you bought it for me?What was the need of buying a shirt for me when I have many shirts?

Rajveer said emotionally:Because you are my father and I love you the most.

Raghav became emotional and inorder to hide it from Rajveer,he looked down.

He took the shirt from him and said:Thank you.But don't spend and finish your salary so fast.Learn to save money.

Rajveer:Yes,I will.

Rajveer walked out of the room happily as Raghav accepted his gift.



Rajveer joined Siya's dance school.Chandni was surprised to see Rajveer there.

Chandni:Rajveer!What a pleasant surprise!

Siya:Rajveer is my student now.

Chandni:Really?

Rajveer:Yes.

Siya:I am going to teach him salsa.But I need a partner for him.

Chandni:When I am here,Rajveer does not need anyone else as a partner.Right?

Rajveer and Siya stared at her.

Siya:What?

Chandni:I mean..I also love Salsa.So I will become Rajveer's partner.

Rajveer smiled happily.

Siya:That's perfect.So let's start the class.

Rajveer-Chandni:Yes.


Rajveer and Chandni danced according to Siya's instructions.


( Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahaani Suno

Ek Ladka Tha Ek Ladki Thi

Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Suno

Ek Ladka Tha, Ek Ladki Thi

Woh Bhi Ek Daur Tha

Waqt Hi Aur Tha

Jab Woh The Ajnabi

Dono Tanaha Se The

Par Woh Kehte Kise

Baat Jo Dil Mein Thi )... (x2)

Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahaani Suno

Ek Ladka Tha Ek Ladki Thi

Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Suno

Ek Ladka Tha Ek Ladki Thi

Gumsum Gumsum Rehte The Dono

Phir Bhi Dil Mein Kehte The Dono

Koyi Sapana Hum Bhi To Paayein

Ek Din Tute Ghum Ke Woh Ghere

Jhilmil Jhilmil Aaye Savere

Mausam Badala Jaagi Fizaayein

Woh Mil Gaye, Woh Khil Gaye

Aur Pyaar Ho Hi Gaya

Jo Maanga Tha, Woh Paaya To

Hosh Kho Hi Gaya

Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahaani Suno

Ek Ladka Tha Ek Ladki Thi

Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Suno

Ek Ladka Tha Ek Ladki Thi

Haule Haule Abb Woh Deewaane

Gun Gun Gaaye Dil Ke Taraane

Sun Sun Jhumein Saari Hawaanyein

Dhadkan Dhadkan Hai Behaki Behaki

Mann Mann Mann Mann Chaahat Hai Mehaki

Sapane Apane Jaadu Jagaayein

Phir Dekhoge Toh Jaanoge

Kya Hai Nasha Pyaar Ka

Yahi Sochoge Yahi Chaahoge

Sun Rahi Ye Sada

Pyaar Ki Yeh Kahaani Suno

Ek Ladka Tha Ek Ladki Thi

Hoti Kya Hai Jawaani Suno

Ek Ladka Tha, Ek Ladki Thi

Woh Bhi Ek Daur Tha

Waqt Hi Aur Tha

Jab Woh The Ajnabi

Dono Tanaha Se The

Par Woh Kehte Kise

Baat Jo Dil Mein Thi(Honeymoon Travels Pvt.ltd)

Siya:Perfect!

They smiled.

Siya:Chandni is always the best.I did'nt expect this much from you Rajveer.You danced so well.

Rajveer:Thank you Siya aunty.

They smiled.



Raghav was walking on the road.He overheard some men gossiping.

"Look at Raghav Jindal.He is so shameless.He pretended to be a gentleman who sacrificed married life to look after his family.But actually he was having numerous affairs and he has an illegitimate son also.Who knows whether he has more illegitimate children or not?"

They laughed.

Raghav felt insulted as their words pricked his heart.

He thought:Because of that fraud Rajveer,my reputation in this society itself got ruined.I will not leave him.

Raghav gave money and Rajveer's photograph to some goons.

Raghav:Don't touch his body.Just warn him to leave this state.

One goon:Are you paying money to us to advise him?That even you could have done.

Raghav got irritated:Stop this nonsense and do what I say.

I am paying you all money to warn him.Scare him without touching his body.Understand?

Goons:Okay.


When Rajveer was walking on the road,the goons surrounded him.


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Posted: 10 months ago
#17

Wow Raghav Is A Goon smiley7

Even If Rajveer Isn't His Son He Shouldn't Try To Get Rajveer killed

At Siya Is Nice To Rajveer Now

I Liked Rajveer-Chandni Paring The Most

Its Cute

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Posted: 10 months ago
#18

Don't worry.Raghav just asked the goons to warn Rajveer to leave the place without physical violence,not to kill him.

Thanks a lot.



Originally posted by: SilverBell

Wow Raghav Is A Goon smiley7

Even If Rajveer Isn't His Son He Shouldn't Try To Get Rajveer killed

At Siya Is Nice To Rajveer Now

I Liked Rajveer-Chandni Paring The Most

Its Cute

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Posted: 10 months ago
#19

Very interesting update dear 🙂

Just loved it

Hopefully Raj tackle there goons

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 10 months ago
#20

Raghav agreeing only because of her blackmailing was funny. Him giving Rajveer the job of a clerk was so rude. He is a BCom pass. In ur ff ties, there Shaurya badly wants to be praised and accepted by Raghav, here it's Rajveer. Well, do you realize you broke the plot to me even before starting the ff because you gave me the cover request? Haha. Siya's anger melting towards Rajveer was nice. Raghav is so emotional, I wonder if Raghav had a twin unknown to him. Rajveer and Chandni dance was lovely. Raghav getting insulted and paying money to the goons to just warn Rajveer and asking them not to touch his body really makes me feel he has begun to form a bond with him as he doesn't want him to get hurt. Perfect pics, waiting for next

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