Preeran ff :Is it our destiny or not ?(part 7 updated on page 7)

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jaanulovejaanam

@jaanulovejaanam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: aqua.m7
Welcome to the forum! So happy to see so many fanfictions!
Lots of good luck from one writer to another!

Please continue!🤗

Thanks for ur warm welcome !😊

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jaanulovejaanam

@jaanulovejaanam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Part 2

Preeta remembers how much she hate karan ...and tease him like he tease her ...still how everytime he was with her in problem ..

Karan :ye ladki na ...khud to pagal hai hi ...mujhe bhi pagal karke chhodegi ...apne saath !

But mujhe iske saath pagal hona bhi manjoor hai !

He adores her

Her hairs fly

And shrishti comes

She coughs ...

Preeta comes in concious and shouts ...

Mmm

Karan removes his hand from her mouth ..

Preeta :tum !

Karan :haan mein ...kyun .?

Preeta:ughhh

Karan :tum khush nahin hui mujhe dekh ke ?

Shrishti hears her mumma calling she goes...

Preeta says in attitude :not at all khusad khaan !

Karan :but mein khush hua khusru .

Preeta:uuufff...khusru kaun hai !

Karan :khusad ki frd khusru ...

Preeta :tum itte time baad aye to ye nahin..ki ek achchhe ladke ki tarah araam se milo ...tum..

He hugs her tightly .

Preeta smiles and gets a bit angry too

She breaks their hug ..

Bas bas ab jao bahar dadi tumhara wait kar rahi hongi

Unse bhi millo !

Karan :preeta arora!mein sabse mil liya ...ab tumse milna hi baki tha..

Preeta :hmm ab mil liye na ...?

Karan :but tumne mujhe miss nahin kiya kya bolo ...?

Preeta :nahin !

Karan grabs her towards him ...:yahi baat meri aankhon mein aankhein daalke bolo ...

Preeta sees innocence in his eyes and her heart starts beating..

Naino ne dil mila diye yun

Ankhon hi ankhon mein batein hum karne lage hain

Tere yun ...hone lage hain ...

Tere yun hone lage hain ⭐️

Dil na maane kyun ...anjaane hum bante yun ...

Fir bhi tere hone lage hain ...!!😳

Preeta :tum kyun nahin batate pehle ..

Did u ..

She is about to speak and shrishti comes.

Shrishti :didi aaj no fight pls ...

Karan itne time baad aya hai ...pls use upset mat karo ...

Karan :dekha !ek shrishti hai jo tumse bhi jyada achchhe se samajhti hai mujhe

He holds her hand and they go outside ...

Preeta talks to herself:tu bhi na preeta ...kyun nahin bola use ki tune bhi use bohot miss kiya..itna miss kiya jitna shayad usne bhi kabhi tujhe nahin kiya hoga ...

But wo bhi na ...

Shrishti comes...and interrupts... :didi apne aap se baatein baad mein kar lena pls abhi chalo na ...!

She holds her hand and takes her outside ..!

Karan sees preeta and thinks :ye bilkul bhi change nahin hui !!

Waisi ki waisi hai puri !

Hum 2 mahine baad mil rahe hain ...but ye hai ki !!

He is in angry mood ..because of preeta !

Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 7 years ago

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Muskanika

@Muskanika

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Cute update! And double treat . I like people who give double treat . Continue with this double treat formula . And welcome to the bhoot bangla . I just have one confusion . What is preeran's age in your ff.

Keep smiling🤗

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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+ 11

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

karan scaring preeta from behind n preeta's reaction n prewta closing his mouth when he laughed was funny.karan adoring preeta getting lost in her was romantic

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Niraj

@Niraj19

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Fab Update ! 😊

Please continue ! 😛

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jaanulovejaanam

@jaanulovejaanam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Part 3

It was a beautiful morning .preeta feeling so fresh and full of dreams she is lost in ...

Her hairs flying..and she is trying to continue writing her diary

She starts writing..

Mein kabhi shaadi nahin karna chahti thi

But itna jaroor chahti thi ki agar koi rishta jude kisi se ...to wo rab ka taufa ho ..!

She writes

Mana kisi ko khuda ka roop ya chhavi !

Banne laga dheere dheere wo pehchaan yun meri ..

Anjaani hai kismat se apni ...ye do dil ke kinaare !

She remembers karan ..how he told her he love her ...

He grabbed preeta from her stomach and expressed

His feelings to her.

Karan is sad in drawing roop ...

His eyes r all searching for preeta only

Karan starts going from drawing room nd colab with preeta

Surprises coming...

Will continue story soon ...

Keep commenting

Thx...to all !😳😊

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Muskanika

@Muskanika

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

It was a really fab surprise . Your poem made me speechless ❤️Karan proposed preeta !when? Oh gosh ! Preeta is also feeling the same...It is clear from her poem . But why is karan sad? Is he thinking about her reply? Short but very exciting update . As you said waiting for the upcoming surprises

Keep smiling

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Hiba Husain

@HibaHusain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

I love surprises and loved this one too!❤️

Waiting...😛

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jaanulovejaanam

@jaanulovejaanam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Part 4

Karan and preeta both going in same direction and unknowingly...bumps on each other...

Preeta :auuchh!

Karan :when karan is here no need to fear..!

Both sees something in each other eyes...

That innocence ...true love in their eyes for each other...

Preeta :mein abhi haan nahin keh sakti ...u know !

Karan :what ??

Preeta ignores that topic..

Kuchh nahin ...

Karan :tumhe yaad hai hum pehle kaise ajnabi se dost bane the

Preeta starts walking

Haan yaad hai kyun ?

Karan :are kyun kya ?

Wo kitna unique special tha na

Preeta :haan but humari frdship sirf ...!

Karan :haan ! To meine kab kaha ki kuchh aur tha..!

Preeta stares him in angry look

She thinks ..:isko mujhe chidane ka ya apne uljulool baton mein fasane ka bahana chahiye hota hai bas...

Karan :eeyy kahan kho gayi ?

Preeta :kuchh nahin !

She starts going...

But he hold her hand ..

Karan :kya tumhara mujhse baat karne ka man nahin karta khud kabhi !

They stare each other..

Manu khuda ka taufa ya karishma hai

Pyaar hai ya dosti ka paigam ye

Janu na kyun hai hum ek dhaage se bandhe yun

Doore jate par fir paas aajaein yun

Janu na kyun hain hum ek dhaage se bandhe yun!!

Karan and preeta are confused souls

Preeta is confused in the game of love and friendship and her motive

Karan is confused in understanding this unique girl preeta ...

Both r trying to find answers of their questions in each other eyes...

Teri khushi hi hai ab ...meri khushi

Yaadon mein teri jeena yun sikha humne

Bin tere na lagda jee ...

Tere hum yun hogaye kyun

Tere bin na jeena kyun

Khud ko tera mana hai!

Tujhko hai mana mera...

Preeta :mujhe pata hai ...

Tum mujhse yahi puchhna chahte ho na ki mera jawaab kya hai

So mera jawaab hai

Ki we r bestest besties ...but baaki i dont know !

Mujhe time chahiye ...

Mere and tere raste alag hai shayad bohot ...

So hope u understand ...

Karan :preeta mujhe koi jaldi nahin hai bas umeed hai ki apni life mein us rab ke taufe ko tu bhi pehchaan paye jise meine pehchaana hai ab !

Preeta :bye

Karan :bye !

Their eyes speaking volume and telling each other some unknown story which they cant tell...

Ankhon mein batein hone lagi

Kyun hum teri or yun khichne lage ...

Dil ko na samajh paye

Preeta confused ...her heart beating fastly..

Rab ki marji kyun na jaan paye !

Kuchh to connection hai tera mera..!

Jo humne jana na o sanam ! O sanam !

😳

Hope u guys r enjoying

Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 7 years ago

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jaanulovejaanam

@jaanulovejaanam

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Muskanika
It was a really fab surprise . Your poem made me speechless ❤️Karan proposed preeta !when? Oh gosh ! Preeta is also feeling the same...It is clear from her poem . But why is karan sad? Is he thinking about her reply? Short but very exciting update . As you said waiting for the upcoming surprises
Keep smiling

Thanks for ur lovely review

Keep enjoying and reading !😳⭐️

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