FF: Rewrite the Stars Part 10 (Page 30)

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aqua.m7

@aqua.m7

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: kb_always_96

Toh woh gana tha? I'm weak in hindi songs! I read it yaar! Promise😭
Believe me😭

Yesss it was a song! One of my favourite songs in fact!

Its ok i believe you hahahaha

Ive been writing some poetry recently lets see if it fits any upcoming situations

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Muskanika

@Muskanika

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#242

I finally read it . From 2 days I was busy in completing my novel . Now I have done it , so I read your ff !

I love your deep words yaar and also your poems as well !

Iss part mein poem kyun nahi thi ?

Vaise are you sure aapki hindi strong nahi hai ? Aapke previous parts ki poems read karke toh aisa nahi lagta !

I loved the way you described Haya's inner turmoil ! Is Haya's part connected with Rishabh by any means ? SamIshti tashan-tashan meeting !

I want to learn to do poetry and these deep words from you please ! Please teach me !

Keep smiling😊

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aqua.m7

@aqua.m7

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: Muskanika
I finally read it . From 2 days I was busy in completing my novel . Now I have done it , so I read your ff !
I love your deep words yaar and also your poems as well !
Iss part mein poem kyun nahi thi ?
Vaise are you sure aapki hindi strong nahi hai ? Aapke previous parts ki poems read karke toh aisa nahi lagta !
I loved the way you described Haya's inner turmoil ! Is Haya's part connected with Rishabh by any means ? SamIshti tashan-tashan meeting !
I want to learn to do poetry and these deep words from you please ! Please teach me !
Keep smiling😊

Awww my smiley baby! Your comment brought a smile to my face.

First let mr ask you which novel you were reading? I love reading too!😃

Awww sweetie your words mean so much to me, i cant explain it.

And there wasnt a poem in this part because remember the poems are only written by karan so they will only be present in the parts where i add his point of view (real reason is that i havent wrote any new poems that fit the storyline yet hahaha... i wrote 1 yesterday -you wont believe it i woke up in the middle of the night with the ideas for a stanza, maybe it will make an appearence in the story lol😆)

Hahahaha my hindi is terrible(if you heard me speak its so broken lol) im semi-fluent in Urdu but english is my first language. But ive learnt alot in the last 4 years, im a huge fan of poetry, until this ff i only wrote english poetry but then one day i was inspired by the poem in jab tak hai jaan. And i thought i should try to write some. So i brushed up on my urdu lol

I love intense description, and thats the reasonfor me loving english literature when i was 16 i regret not taking it further 😭

As for your question... one day ull find out who the girl with green eyes is and who the guy with grey specs in his eyes is.. till then my lips are sealed 😆😆😉

Im glad u liked Shrishti and sameers meeting! I wanted to add some childish angry tashan baaz drama hahaha

Aww baby! Your too sweet! Everyone is a hidden artist (poet, writer, singer, dancer, actor, painter, sketcher) its all due to your heart. One day that uniqueness will be released and when it is youll feel contentment 🤗

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aqua.m7

@aqua.m7

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#244

^^WOW!

That was a longgg reply! Hahaha didnt realise

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Muskanika

@Muskanika

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: aqua.m7
^^WOW!
That was a longgg reply! Hahaha didnt realise

I too was thiking the same thing . Your reply is longer than my comment😆

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Muskanika

@Muskanika

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#246

Simsim di I also love reading . I was reading harry potter and the chamber of secrets . I got harry potter and the philosopher's stone on my birthday and finished it in 2 days . And I got harry potter and the chamber of secrets , and harry potter and the prisoner of Azkaban after my exams . I am a new harry potter fan . Harry potter books are awesome .JK Rowling has done some magic . Have you read any of the harry potter books or watched movie ? If not then give it a try . I want to watch harry potter movies too but tv connection is shut off for 4 months .

Will be waiting for your poems !

My first language is hindi . So it's not bad. English is my 2nd language and I can write fluent english but I am not habitual to speaking english so I doubt I can speak it fluently . I don't know a word of urdu. But I have learnt french for 3 years but my french is terrible (speaking at least ) . But I miss french now !

I also love writing stories , poems , etc. but I can't write as good and deep as you . So, I want to learn from you .

Will be waiting for the opening of suspense too!

Thanks for the taareef (praise) . Mai itni bhi khaas nahi hoon !

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aqua.m7

@aqua.m7

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#247

Smiley baby!!!

Im a huge harry potter fan!! Ive read the books and watched all the movies.

Hahaha i learnt french for 3 years too! Now its really rusty🤣

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Oxo

@Atript_aatma

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#248

Hey Mana Urdu and Hindi has very minute difference na? I don't know but I just love the feel of Urdu, the tehzeeb u know!😛

Sorry Mana, itne time baad yaha aayi that I forgot what ur story was and where did I stop! So can't read it also aajkal busy chaling mai🤣

Edited by Oxoacids - 7 years ago

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Hiba Husain

@HibaHusain

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#249

Amazing update! 😃

Haya tries to run away from her pain but lands up getting more hurt remembering everything! That night which was mentioned? What happened? Why does she feel he deserved better than her? 😒

Mystery! Yaar di I am your bareilly Ki barfi, your younger sister na! You know how I am! Can't bare suspense! 😆

Reveal the suspense soon! OK? 😆

Coming back, each emotion of Haya was described beautifully by you! I could feel it! 👏

Shrishmeer fight! Loved it! That was so so awesome! 👍🏼

Love you! ❤️

Update soon (if possible)! 😆

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Muskanika

@Muskanika

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: aqua.m7
Smiley baby!!!
Im a huge harry potter fan!! Ive read the books and watched all the movies.

Hahaha i learnt french for 3 years too! Now its really rusty🤣

Really ! I have read just 2 till now. 3rd is on going . Ok then I will ask you a lot of questions about harry potter .

And what about my writing/poetry lessons ?