FF: Rewrite the Stars Part 10 (Page 30) - Page 2

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

nice cs.nice concept.looking forward to reading it.please try to introduce a new girl for rishab.it's sad to see both brothers falling for the same girl and leading to sibling rivalry

Originally posted by: abhiya23

Wohoo🥳great job girl. Keep it up will be waiting for next update👍🏼. And you are welcome

Originally posted by: kb_always_96

Good one yaar!! Waiting for next update😊

I know this is a bit short but i just want to set the scene for all of you. hope you like it.😳

PART 1 (Preeta's POV)

His final words echoed in her mind

RUN PREETA, and tell your mother I have always loved her '

Numbness engulfed her. No longer capable to gather the courage she had forged around herself for so long, she dropped on the cold ground. Stripped of her strength, her eyes widened with disbelief. Tears flowed until she was drowning in the pain of losing the only person who had ever loved her. Consciousness began to slip away as the burden of emptiness in her heart grew until it all became too much for her to endure.

She collapsed in the crimson pool in which he lay. The ceremonial fire was a silent witness as it illuminated the image of an unconscious bride clutching her father's lifeless hand...

Originally posted by: Angel2002

Nice start but y so short suspense is killing me