FF: Rewrite the Stars Part 10 (Page 30) - Page 3

Mana, Dr have to tell u dat..U definitely know how to hook us!!! Isnt it?😉 beautiful dr..Do continue soon👍🏼

Originally posted by: l-NiklausFan-l

Mana, Dr have to tell u dat..U definitely know how to hook us!!! Isnt it?😉 beautiful dr..Do continue soon👍🏼

Suspense... How mean mana?😛😆

My goodness 😲 you cannot do this to me. Such small update, I want more next time 😉. 👏

Heyy! I am new Here!😉 So nicee it is. Cant wait for the next one.😊 Please put it a big one!!😛 Your writing style is awesome😃👏. Loving it soo much! I am Sudee😃😳

Hi sudee! Welcome to the forum!
thankyou for your lovely words! I'm so glad u liked it! ❤️

Ok so this is the revised version of Part 1, I made it longer as per all your requests. hope you like it! thank you all for the comments and likes, it really encourages me. let me know how you like it so far.. Oh and in the final scene imagine an old railway station.

PART 1 (Preeta's POV)

His final words echoed in her mind

RUN PREETA, and tell your mother I have always loved her ''

Numbness engulfed her. No longer capable to gather the courage she had forged around herself for so long, she dropped on the cold ground. Stripped of her strength, her eyes widened with disbelief. Tears flowed until she was drowning in the pain of losing the only person who had ever loved her. Consciousness began to slip away as the burden of emptiness in her heart grew until it all became too much for her to endure.

She collapsed in the crimson pool in which he lay. The ceremonial fire was a silent witness as it illuminated the image of an unconscious bride clutching her father's lifeless hand.

The next morning

Preeta woke up with the throbbing pain in her head. She held up one arm to block the sunlight only to realise her arm and the rest of her was drenched in red. Flashes of the fatal incident once again woke the fear and pain within. Her eyes darted across the room in search of her father.

Baba, baba, where are you, this can't happen. You can't take my father away'' she screamed hysterically across the cold, empty room.

From the corner of her eye, Preeta could see a tall dark silhouette. As he came closer, his unmistaken evil smirk caused her to remember the unbearable pain he had inflicted upon her. She could feel the pain exhausting every inch of her soul. Her brain reminded her of the rapidly approaching danger but her body could not find the strength to move.

Deepak moved closer until he towered over her, he gently tilted her chin so that she could face him.

I hope you slept well?'' he asked with fake concern. Preeta stared at the fire expressionless. With the other hand he violently grabbed her hair, forcing her to meet his eyes.

LOOK AT ME WHEN IM TALKING TO YOU! After all I am your fiance and in an hour we will be married. Then everything you own will be mine'' He taunted.

He seized her arms and slammed her against a pillar, blood began to trickle down her forehead. The impact caused her to wince in pain as she could feel her ribs crack.

You know Preeta I should say thank you. You believed all my fake love confessions and without you I would never have convinced your father to make me his son in law''

You were just a pawn in my life! You were the key to everything I deserve. I didn't want to kill your father but what could I do? He found out about my reality and whilst saving you he lost his own life. Pity! ''

The rumours about you are true, YOU ARE BAD LUCK!'' he growled as his grip tightened around her arms.

Preeta's bangles broke and the sharp edges pierced her skin. Tears stung her eyes but she suppressed them.

You heard me, you bring misfortune to everyone''

First you mother abandoned you and now you caused your father's death. If it wasn't for you, maybe he would still be alive today! You will marry me right now and give me everything which was meant to be mine!'' dragged her by her hair around the embers of the agni.

Preeta finally came out of her daze and screamed at Deepak to leave her. She tried to free herself from his grasp but all her efforts went in vain. Her father's death replayed in her mind and his last words RUN' echoed in her ears.

She had to escape, she had to free herself from the devil, she couldn't let her father's death go in vain, he had saved her and she had let him die...

Her father's words gave her strength to move her bruised fingers towards the embers; she refused to feel the pain of the fire burning her skin and quickly threw it at Deepak. He screamed in agony and his grip loosened for a fraction of a second allowing Preeta to run.

Get her! Don't let her escape! '' he commanded his goons.

She did not care about the pain she was in nor the sharp rocks embedding themselves into her bare feet. All she could think of were her father's last words RUN'.

She had to fulfil the promise she made...

The railway station

Bleeding, Battered and bruised, Preeta finally reached the railway station. The goons were still behind her. Overcome with exhaustion and excruciating pain, She could feel the world spinning with every stride she took. Between each blackout, she could just make out a rusty, brown train in the distance. Mustering the last ounce of strength left in her she ran towards it with only the thought of escaping from Deepak's clutches in her mind.

The train began to move and Preeta could feel her eyes become heavy and her muscles tiring. She could feel herself succumbing to her injuries and each stride she took became more painful than the last.

Suddenly, she saw a hand emerge from the train, just a few meters away. She heard someone shout

grab my hand. RUN!'' reminding her of her father.

Had she failed him? had she given up? Baba's face kept coming to mind as the clock struck midnight. Her breathing faltered and her heart no longer had the strength to carry on. All she could do was wait for death as someone pulled her inside the train. She smashed into his muscular chest and a blanket of his cool breath eased her pain. The darkness finally won and consumed her into a peaceful slumber...

Wow! Mana this is amazing!! 👍🏼

Wow, like I run out of words for this story 👏. The words you use just touch my heart. I believe CV's should hire you for writing dialogues and script. 😊. Great update as always, will be waiting for next.

Amazing update I am sure the guy who helped her is karan update soon