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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
@ reshu :haan haan likh naa.... apni bhi entry kar as u want to.... 😉 😉

@ nitz : thanx bachchaaaa 😃

@ shilpa di : diiiii bohut shweettttttttt 👏 hmm to ab apse tuitions lene hongeee 😉 😉

ab aage kaun likh raha hai? 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
guys I changed page one slightly... do have a read.. I've also added an archive so that this story is easy to follow...

@Eveyone: thnku for appreciating my write up n for the generous words. 😳

@Verni- writing at super speed aaj kal 😆 😆 gud gud!

@Shilpa- loved it! 😆 lehkin ek baat bata... already we are squashed with donny on our bench now u have joined 😆 😆 how big is this bench! uff! I fear it's gonna snap soon... 😛 😆
Edited by Henna042 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63

Okk now I will continue:


The class is dismissed...and all come out one by one...

Just to catch with Su...Henna, Anku, Nids, Verni...and for a change with some notes ka bahana Shilps too go near him 😆 ...

Donny is getting jealous of seeing Henna's closeness to Sumit 😆 ...

And then:

When everyone is coming out at that point:

One girl comes running in the corridor...

and calls Sumit 😉 ...

Its Reshu..a plain decent girl..known for no nonsense attitude 😆 ..and who always has fights with Nids and Shilps over small small things 😆 ...

Reshu: Hii Sumit...meri aaj fir class miss ho gayi 😆 ...

Su: Tu hamesha der se kyun aati hai 😉 ?

Reshu: Mujhe bhi sau kaam hote hai 😆 ...

Nids understands her reactions and speaks out:

Nids: Toh tera kya matlab hai? Hum faaltoo mein aate hai yahan par 😡 😆 ?

Reshu doesnt pay any attention to her. She sees Kk coming with Donny and Saara...and..

Reshu: Hii Kk..kaisi hai 😳 ?

Kk: Main theek hoon..tu bata...tu aaj bhi der se kyun aayi 😡 😆 ?

Reshu: Arey kuch pooch mat...chodd 😆 ...

Reshu: Sumit..aaj kya hua class mein 😛 ...

Sumit: Pehle tu theek se khadi reh...main tujhe notes de deta hoon 😉 ...

Now Shilps speaks up...

Shilps: Hum bhi toh notes de sakte hai 😆 ...

Reshu: Mujhe tujhse notes nahi chahiye 😆 ...

Verni: Haan haan...sab samajh mein aata hai 😆 ...

Sumit: Ohho..class ho yaa bahar..tum log ladhti he rehti hoo 😆 ...

Kk: Lets go to canteen...wahan baat karte hai...
agar yahan ladhte jhagadhte rahe..toh Principal ke office mein sabko khada hona padega 😆 ...

All get to go for canteen area 😳 ...

Now continue:



Edited by *Resham* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
😆 😆 Reshuuuu ki entry... 😆

nice piece reshu!

gud gud everyone's getting the drift slowly slowly.. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
Okk ab koi aur likh raha hai ya main likhun???? 😆

@ reshu : nice one bachcha... 😉 👏 👏 yaar ladne mein jo mazaa hai wo aur kahannnn???? 😆 😆 😆

@ henna : haan ab speed to achchi hogi hi... aur usi speed se teri aur ehem ehem ki love story bhi likhungii 😆

okk main baad mein likhungi.... pehle nids aa jaaye... xams khatam karke aur wo likh le... aakhir maine uska naam jo bhula diya tha.. to uska haq banta hai mujhpe gussa karne kaa.... aaja nidsoo 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
@verni - verni ki bachhii... tune mujhe mera hi naam bhula diya 😡 😆...

vaise kya baat hai.. evry1 writing at super speeds 😃...

chalo ab meri baari.. guys i'm now going to pick up the story from where reshu left 😉. so plz dont continue in between 😳..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
Anku, Nids, Henna Donny, Verni, Reshu, Saara, Shilpa, Sumit and Kumkum, all head towards the canteen. Since theirs is a huge group, they need to occupy two tables and join them together. But there is no vacant table in the canteen, so all the girls send Donny to make people get up and vacate seats for them. As usual, Donny is successful in this bhaigiri type ka kaam as he's used to doing all such stuff. Then Donny and Sumit, both join the tables so that everyone can sit and eat together. There are 4 benches, two on opposite side of each table, each bench accommodating 3 people.

Henna sits on a bench with Shilpa on the inner side and Nids on the outer side. But before Nids could sit there, Donny squeezes himself on the bench and sits there with Henna. Donny makes a cute face and apologises.

Donny – shorry Mids Didi…

Though Nids is amused, but she pretends to be angry with him. She turns her face and goes towards the bench where Sumit is about to sit. Before anyone else could interrupt her, she goes on to sit with him. On the other side, Kumkum sits on that bench. Anku and Saara share the same bench, while as Reshu and Verni sit together.

Sumit (whispers to Nids) : Tum yahan aake kyun baith gayi…

Nids (whispers back) : meri marzi main kahin bhi baithun.. aur haan tum pe ye yellow color bilkul suit nahi kar raha…

Sumit : mujhe toh lagaa tha achha lag raha hai…

Nids : bilkul bhi achha nahi lag raha…

Reshu : ye kya khusar fusar kar rahe ho tum dono…

Nids : tujh se matlab…

Reshu : achha theek hai… main nahi poochhti tujh se kuch bhi.. vaise bhi tu ab tak bhool gayi hogi ki kya bol rahi thi Sumit ko… apna naam bhi toh bhool gayi thi naa tu..

Everyone laughs.

Nids : oh hello… voh ek baar galti se.. mera dhyan kahin aur tha issliye..

Henna : issliye bolti hoon Nidoo jeej pe itna dhyan matt lagaya kar.. vaise bhi voh abhi shooting mein busy honge..

Donny : bilkul Henna ki tarah…

Henna raises her eyebrows at Donny.

Henna : meri tarah??

Donny : haan.. tum bhi toh shooting kar rahi ho… you are shooting with your eyes… aisi goliyaan jo seedha mere dil pe lag rahi hain…

Meanwhile Saara has found another bakra for her mischievous acts, and this time Anku is her partner in the act.

There is a girl sitting nearby, talking on the phone.

Girl : I know baby… even I wanna come for the movie… but kya karun.. college hai naa… and these tests.. ufffffff….

Saara and Anku begin imitating her. They both hold their cell phones close to their ears and start speaking loudly.

Saara : I knowww… these goddamnn tests.. ufffff…

Anku : yeah baby… I cant even relax… bas I sleep for 10-12 hrs a day during the tests…

Saara : see no sleep at all… aur uske baad I go to gym for 5-6 hrs…

Anku : gym se I get refreshed naa… but after returning from gym I start studying…

Saara : yup… and I study contiiiiiiinuously… I don't get up before full 20 minutes pass….

Everyone has a good laugh over their act, while the turns and looks at them angrily. She snaps her phone shut, comes over there and talks to them.

Girl : oye.. what are you doing??

Shilpa : ermm.. I guess they were imitating you Shabu…

The girl is another member of the gang, Shabu. She is the laziest person of all and hates to work, but loves boasting and using her favourite clauses like "ufff" and many more, which can be seen from the conversation below.

Shabu : "shut up everyone".. why are you all laughing…

Verni : bachha kyunki hum logon ko hassi aa rahi hai.. issliye we all are laughing…

Shabu : you all naa.. wait till I get my AK 47…

Reshu : and from where will you get it??

Shabu : my bro will give it to me.. hai naa Donny Bro??

Donny : Shabu didi.. your act made my Henna laugh… shorry didi but I wont give u my AK 47…

Shabu gets angrier.

Shabu : "getlost" bro..

Henna : Don't get upset shona… u knw naa thy all r joking…

Nids : haan haan lazy bum… just chill.. vaise itni laziness theek nahi hai… you missed the first class of today..

Kumkum : haan … you should have seen our cool dude, Sumit, flirting with the teacher..

Sumit : I didn't flirt with her.. she flirted with me.. aur vaise Shabu relax.. baith jaa… and have something..

No matter how much angry Shabu is, she can never say NO to Sumit. So she immediately calms down and sits besides Reshu and Verni.

Sumit : okk.. toh chalo ab kuch order karein…

Now someone else plz continue 😳....
Edited by nature - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
Shabu ki entry 😆 😆 ...as usual Nids picked up so well on Shabu 😆 ...

Kaash woh hoti yeh padhne mein 😆 ...

Waise good write up nids... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
Thnks 4 appreciating everyone 😛 😛 😳

@reshu : Kya entry hai tumhari 😆 .. loved urs yaar 😛
@ Nidz wow yaar amazing 😛 😃.. waise mera sirf ek hi dialog? 😆 😆

@ hennu: yaar bench par jagah miley n miley... par humare dil mein toh bahut jagah haina 😉 😆 😳

now can i continue plz? 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
hahahah 😆 😆 😆lazy bumbbb 😆

mast write up nidz.. 😆

gangs so big already ki can occupy the whole canteen 😆 n uff plz sumone separate donny from me na

sab chance maaring with Su in turns😆 😆

n shilpa.. yaar don't ask na.. demand to write! 😛 😆 nahi toh aise it makes others uncertain if u will write ya nahi... 😳

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