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Posted: 17 years ago
sorry for delay i will continue soon
Part 14
**begining of a new life**
kk didnt know where to go and wht to do
first she thought her father is only angry now maybe he will open the
door later for her
she waited tht whole night there for tht door to open but it didnt
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next morning she lost hope and got up
she went to a mandir and prayed to the gods idol
kk-bhagwan kya maine jo kiya woh galat tha??kya su ki zindagi ko bachakar maine galat kiya meri madat karo bhagwan kyun jab mein galat nahi ho mujhe saza mil rahi hai kyunnn kya yehi hai saza sach bolne ki bataye mujhe kya yehi hai sach app hi bataye main kaha jao kehiye
kk drops down and cries she cant take it anymore
she lost everything
wht she has to do in this world now
she cant live like tht
she is alone in this big world no place to go and no place to call hers
kk-kya karo main
a voice brings kk back to the world
"kumkum"
kk looks behind and sees someone hwo can she call her own for whom she lost everything but she doesnt regret this she is happy she saved hsi life
yes there was su and veena
su was leaving to office when veena told him to accompany her to the mandir
when they both reached the mandi they saw kk talking and crying to the gods idol
he had heard eveyrhting and was shocked tht she was removed from her home
su came to kk and kk hugged him tightly and cried
su didnt knwo first wht to do
but then he too hugged her back and let her cry and talk to him
kk slowly understood wht is she doing and moved back
su holded kk and made up get up
veena came to them and kk hugged her too
su-kk yeh sab tanvi ne kiya naa batao
but kk didnt speak and just looked down
su-batao
kk noded her head in a yes
su-main jakar aunty uncle ko sach batata ho
kk holded his hand and told him not to do so
su--kyun kk kyun
kk-kyunki woh uski batao main aa choke hai woh nahi meri baat sunnege aur nahi aapki baat aap dono ko meri fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi hai main kahiin chali jayungi kuch kar lungi aur zindagi jee loungi
su-kaisi baate kar rahi ho chalo hamare saath hamare ghar chalo
kk-nahi su pls agarmain tumhare saath chali toh sab ko yakeen ho jayenga ke main tumhere liye aapni behen ka naam kharab kiya hai pls nhai
veena-kk beta aisa kuch nahio hoga agar hum logo ki fikar karege naa toh hum kabhi woh nahi kar payege jo hum chahte hai isliye pls hamari baat maan lo aur chalo
kk-nahi aunty yeh sahi
but su stopped her in between
su-kk pls hamari dosti ke liye
kk looked her su and veena and said yes
veena prayed and all 3 of them reached wdhwa house
kk wasnt agreeing on this but she didnt want to break veenas and
sumeets heart
who were speaking to her soo nicely
all 3 entered the house
dada and dadi and omi were in the hall having tea when they saw su caoming with veena
all 3 got up when they saw kk with them
kk had her head down and was crying
dada came to kk
dada-beta kya huwa
su-dadaji yeh kuch nahi bolegi tanvi ne isse ghar se bahar nikal diya hai
dada-kya
su-ha
dada came to kk and kk hugged him and cried more
dada-su beta bahot acha kiya ke tumne isse ghar lekar aaya chal beta rona nahi hai abhi tujhe chal rona band kar
kk-dadaji mein jald se jald job karogi aur kahi chali jayongi
dada-dadaji bhi kehti hai aur paraya bhi kar diya hmm chup ho jaa kahi nahi jaa rahi hai tu samji
kk cried more
su took kk to the guest room which will now be her room
veena got some clothes for kk
and told her to change into them
veena went away
tears dropped down her cheeka again
su came to her and wiped her tears
su-nahi kk agar tum roagi toh tanvi ka irada poora ho jayenga uska irada tumhe ghar se bahar nikalna hai hai balki tumhe dukh pohchana hai isliys rona cad karo aur main janta ho ke tum aapne maa baap ko miss kar rhai ho naa lekin kk agar tumhe wapis aapne maa baap ke pass jana hai toh tumne rona nahi hai ladna hai samji
kk looks at su and noded her head
su smailed at her and wiped her tears
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some days pass by
kk si trying to adjust to her new life
dada dadi veena and omi all love kk alot
and keep her as their daughter
kk is also very happy with this family
however she remembers her parent alot she only prays to god to keep her parents safe and when they come to knwo abt tanvi give them strenght to accept it
kk helps veena around the house
she also does small works for su
like keeping his tififn ready, giving him prasad which he always refused to have since he didnt believe in all thsi but kk made him have it and told him tht one day he will believe in god
kk also looked after dada and dadi she gave them medicines and looked after them

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one morning
kk is doing pooja like normal
she is looking beautiful as she is wearing a white salwar kameez and is doing the aarti
tht time su is going towards the hall when he hears her signing a bhajan

Man Mohana Man Mohana
Kanha Sunona Aaa
Tum Bin Paun Kaise Chaina
Tarsu Tumhiko Din Raina

Chodke Apne Kashi Mathura
Chodke Apne Kashi Mathura
Aake Basao More Nain
Tum Bin Paun Kaise Chaina
Kanhaaa
Tarsu Tumhiko Din Raina

Ek Pal Ujiraya Aaye
Ek Pal Andhiyara Chaye
Maan Kyun Na Dhabraye
Kaise Na Dhabraye
Maan Jo Koi Dhara
Apni Rahon Mein Paaye
Kaun Disha Jaye

Tum Bin Kaun Samjhaye
Tum Bin Kaun Samjhaye

su looks at kk she is looking very beautiful
her voice is like music to hsi hears
first time he comes towards the mandir and removes his shoes and stands at the door listening to kk
Raas Rachiyan Brindavan Ke
Gokul Ke Basi
Radha Tumhri Daasi
Darshan Ko Hai Pyaasi
Shaam Shalone Nand Lala Krishna Banwari
Tumri Chab Hai Nyari
Mein To Hoon Tan Man Hari
Mein To Hoon Tan Man Hari

Man Mohana Man Mohana Man Mohanaaaaa Man Mohana
Kanha Sunona Aaa
Tum Bin Paun Kaise Chaina
Tarsu Tumhiko Din Raina

Jeevan Ek Nadiya Hai
Lehron Lehron Behti Jaye
Ismein Man Ki Naiyaa
Doobe Kabhi Tar Jaye

Tum Na Khewaiya Ho To
Koi Tat Kaise Paaye
Majdhaar Rehlaye
Tu Tumri Saran Aaye
Haan Tumri Saran Aaye

Mein Hoon Tumhari
Hai Tumhara Yeh Mere Jeevan
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Tumko Hi Dekhon Mein
Dekhun Koi Darpan
Bansi Ban Jaungi
In Hooton Ki Ho Jangui
In Sapno Se Jalthal
Hai Mera Maan Agan
Hain Mera Hmmm Hmmm

kk looks at su
she is suprised herself as he is standing at the door
and listening to her song
su looks at kk and smiles at her
kk smiles back and comes towards him and gives him the aarti
su-kk
kk-su pls
su smiles and knows she wont listen so he takes the aarti and she gives him prasad
su again looks at kk but she smiles at him
and he takes it
kk smiles and goes in the hall and gives aarti to all
kk goes back in the mandir room
su comes there and stands at the door
su-kk
kk-hmm
su-tum hmm tumhari aawad bahot achi hai bahot acha gaati ho tum
kk smiles and looks at su
kk-thanks
both smile at each other

kk and su come out
all sit to have breakfast but as usual kk serves everyone

kk-dadaji yeh kya aapka special breakfast idhar hai yeh lijiye
kk-dadima yeh aapke liye
kk-dadaji breakfast ke baad yeh milk aur uske saath eyh medicines lelena ok
dada-beta pata nahi tum nahi thi toh mein kya kar raha tha
kk smiles
su looks at all this and is amazed tht hwo can kk look after all and everyones needs and she doesnt even complain at the same time
she who has gone through so much she believes in god and doesnt compalin to him also
kk looks at su and both smile at each other
Edited by panjwani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome,Mind Blowing,Beautiful,Well Done,Superb,Great Work ,Fantastic,Fabulous,Marvelous i really appreciate your work very good concept these were very few words to say👏u deserve this 👏
And Kumkum and Sumit will be looking very sweet while smiling😃
With Love
Annie😳
Edited by Fan of Juhi - 17 years ago
preethi thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
lovely amby
good too see kk is fne and wh
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Posted: 17 years ago
Amu PM karna bhool gayee nah!!!😕...no probs can understand buddy!😉...waise this was a fantastic part esp the first SuKk hug!!😳👏...lage raho!👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great part...............loved it ..................now please continue soon this time...........
-Amby- thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh ya sooooooo sorry next time wont forget😃

Originally posted by: Rah_HuJu

Amu PM karna bhool gayee nah!!!😕...no probs can understand buddy!😉...waise this was a fantastic part esp the first SuKk hug!!😳👏...lage raho!👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
happy to see u after a long time, anyways fabulous part, su takes kk to his house, i hope they will love each other soon, continue soon

Kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
fabuluos part dear....& yes..loved tht hug....eagerly waitin for next part ........
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Posted: 17 years ago
i love new beginning of kumkum and sumit life
-Amby- thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks alot i try my level; best to update soona nd to write better than the prevouius onesorry for dely i will try to continue soon

Originally posted by: Fan of Juhi

Awesome,Mind Blowing,Beautiful,Well Done,Superb,Great Work ,Fantastic,Fabulous,Marvelous i really appreciate your work very good concept these were very few words to say👏u deserve this 👏

And Kumkum and Sumit will be looking very sweet while smiling😃
With Love
Annie😳

thjansk and sorry for delay

Originally posted by: preethi

lovely amby

good too see kk is fne and wh

thansk and sorry for delay

Originally posted by: Irika

superb part cont soooon...

thanks i try my best to write well like u all
and sorry for delay

Originally posted by: Rah_HuJu

Amu PM karna bhool gayee nah!!!😕...no probs can understand buddy!😉...waise this was a fantastic part esp the first SuKk hug!!😳👏...lage raho!👏[/QUOTE

thansk and sorry for delay
thanks and sorry for delay
thansk and sorry for delay
thansk and sorry for delay

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