ff-pyara rishta**coming soon**note pg28 - Page 16

Oh My God i don't believe this.........Tanvi can be such a ***wonder what's going to happen to kk now........please continue soon with the next part........we'll we waiting..........

Gud going bachchaaaaa 👏 👏 👏

Am sure she got miscarried 😡 😡

well continue soonnnn 😊

i hate that tanvi😡
she is sooo...eegggghhh
plzz continue soon
and lett everyone knoww soon i mean
about the truth of tanvi
but it's a amazing ff 👏 👏

Do update soon di..m already missing it.. 😆

thanks ya they will i will make sure of tht 😆

Originally posted by: preethi

hii amby get well first
yaar jab saach samaayaga then they will regret

thanks

Originally posted by: Fan of Juhi

Thank u Great story

thanks alot i am trying my best to write well

Originally posted by: Rah_HuJu

Poor KK this Tanvi is really like those evil sisters in Cinderella ....get well soon Ammu coz u have to write a lot of parts as great as this one!

thanks sonu will make everything fine soon thanks

Originally posted by: sumitwadhwa

Poor kumkum..!1 ab kya hoga uska..hope u make everything fyn soon di.

It was really wonderful..!!

thanks kashishk

Originally posted by: kashishk

Ambreen the part is fabulous, brillant,
bechari kk ko muft ka taoad para
continue when u are ok, we will wait

Kashish

thanks

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon

thanks

Originally posted by: sweetpoorvi

hii ambreen...nice part dear...& get well soon...

thanks

Originally posted by: Shafoo

tanvii is such a bitchh sister she didnt somting say to doc then she smilingg something is fishii is going on in tanvi mind so kumkum never find an other truth of tanvi

thanks

Originally posted by: Pearl29

Oh My God i don't believe this.........Tanvi can be such a ***wonder what's going to happen to kk now........please continue soon with the next part........we'll we waiting..........

thanks verni

Originally posted by: verni

Gud going bachchaaaaa

Am sure she got miscarried

well continue soonnnn

thanks alot

Originally posted by: miss.sonia

i hate that tanvi
she is sooo...eegggghhh
plzz continue soon
and lett everyone knoww soon i mean
about the truth of tanvi
but it's a amazing ff

sorry for delay and when u updaitng ur old ff??missing tht

Originally posted by: sumitwadhwa

Do update soon di..m already missing it..

maybe i mostly update on sundays only now cause my college has started but if i can i will update before also if i get time

Part 13

**kk in pain**

kk si abt to go to her room when raj stops her

r-ruko kk
kk turns and looks at raj who is angry at her

raj comes to kk and slaps her hard on her face
priya has tears in her eyes 😭
and tanvi smiles 😡


kk-papa 😭
tears roll down her cheeks😭

r-chup jab tanvi ne muhje kaha ke tum ne yeh sab jan mujkal kiya hai toh maine usski baat nahi mani aur ab main kya kaho tun mear gurur thi kk tum aaj mujhe aapne aap par gussa aata hai ke maine tum jaisi beti ko kabhi aapna gurur samja 😕

kk is not able to listen to all this😭

she starts crying openly now without ccaring tht someone is watchin her😭

kk has always kept her ftaher very close to he rheart but today her father is telling her all this the person who is th emost important in her life is telling her all this wht should she do except crying 😭😕😭

r-aaj tumne apni behen ki shaadi todi aaj tumne apne hi maa baap ko neecha dikhaya aaj tumne mujhe TUMSE NAFRAT karaya hai kk 😕


kk cries more at this point 😭

p-pls raj aap yeh

r-nahi priya aaj nahi bahot ho gaya kk ne bahot galat kiya hai agar woh aapni behen se jalti thi toh mujhe batati main uske liya su se bhi zyada paiso wala ladka dekhta 😕

kk-nahi papa aap mujhe galat samaj rahe hai pls kuch bhi kijiye mujhe mariye lekin yeh mat kehna ke aap mujhse mafrat karte hai pls papa 😭

r-bas kk tum yeh sab karti ho aur kehti ho ke main tumse nafrat na karo

kk-papa tanvi did ne kuch kiya hai papa maine yeh sab

r-BUS KK bahot ho gaya 😕


witht hsi raj wlaks off to his room and priya runs behind him

kk is crying standing at the same spot 😭

tanvi comes to her and she is smilling 😡

kk looks at her and is crying more


t-dekha kk agar mujhse dushmani karogi toh yeh hi hona hai naa and laughs😡
yeh sab kaise kyun yeh hi soch rahi ho naa well jab tumne kaha ke main doctor ke pass jayo subha mein i knew tum mujhe appne doctor ke pass lekar jayongi so raat ko maine aapne doc ko phone kiya and hospital aage aur maine abortion kawa liya 😡
kk maine tumse pehle bhi kaha than eyh bacha meri liya koi important nahin rakhta hai toh yeh jiye ya mare ismein mujhe koi parak nahi parta hai
tanvi apne sapne pure karne ke liya kuch bhi kar sakti hai kkuch bhu 😡


kk-DIII oh sorry tanvi sharma mujhe aapko dii bhi bulane se mnafrat hoti hai yeh aapke liye galat sound hota hai
aap kya kissike liye sochegi aap toh apne hi maa baap ko dokha de sakti hai aur yeh hi nahi aap toh aapne bhi bache ko mar sakti hai aapse kya baat karna tanvi sharma aap toh sabki nafrat ke layak bhi nahi hai yeh yaad rakhna


t-uff kk bas (shakes her ears )
tumhara demag kharab ho gaya hai kys kitna bolti ho uff bacha oh mere liys koi bhi rista important nahi hai toh yeh bacha jo is duniya mein aya hi nahi woh kya importance hold karega
aur tum mujhe di bulao ya nahi tumhari marji naa kk mujhe isse koi farak nahi parta hai ok aur maa paa uff unka kya soochna woh hi toh meri shaadi karwa rehe the 😡



at this point kk cant take it anymore and slaps tanvi hard 👏

and tears fall down kks cheecks again not because she slaped tanvi but because she had to break her dads given sanskar which said tht she should respect her sister😭


at thsi time raj and priya come out of their room
tanvi sees them

t-papa

kk turns

t-papa dekha aapne kk ne mujhe mara maine sirf itna kahaa ke woh yeh sab kyun kar rahi hai woh mujhe bata deti toh main sab thik kar deti lekin usse mujhe mara😕

kk-papa yeh galat 😭

r-ENOUGH KK😕


raj comes to them and holds kk hand
kk looks at raj and then at her hand 😭

raj pulls her towards the door

priya runs behind them and tanvi smiles

raj pushes kk out and kk si shocked 😕

r-out get out 😕


kk is crying she comes to raj and sits near hsi legs and cries and says😭

kk- pls papa mera yakeen kijuye pls 😭

kk catches his legs and pleads to him 😭😒

kk-pls papa tears fall on the ground

priya comes there

p-pls raj


r-NAHI😕

he pulls kk up and pushes her out 😒

r-chali jao hamari meri zindagi se door mujhe tumhari shakal bhi nahi dekhna hai samaj gaye tum 😭

and with tht raj closes the door on kks face

priya is crying for kk

and kk is crying

kk falls on the ground and cries out loudly 😭

kk-KYUN baghwan kyun meri kya galati thi is mein kyun kiya 😒😭

and she keeps crying
she remembers all the good times with her family
her dad
her mom

now this was her family

tanvi who was her di she cant believe did this to her 😡
kk kept crying

it started raining heavily
but she didnt move a inch 😭

and kept crying 😭

Lovely update bachchaaaaa 👏 👏 👏

really liked itttt 😳

Great, superb, mindblowing. Yaar, tum to kamaal ho. Keep going. Vaise college kaisa hai? Pls continue..............................................

This was so emotional part.........i can't believe Tanvi can go to such limits.........i will be waiting 4 her to be punished...........
Don't make KK cry 4 long.........Will be waiting 4 ur next update........

Bechaari KK 😭 😭 😭 how can Tanvi be so stone-hearted?? 😡 😡 very well-written Ammu....now I just hope someone helps KK 😕 , most probably Sumit! 😉