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poorvi

@sweetpoorvi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#131

too gud ambreen 👏 ....bas jaldi se kk su ko bata de...

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 17 years ago

#132

wowowowow nice part kumkum must tell sumit

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Janki Trivedi

@janu_kumkumjuhi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#133

Great, Mindblowing. Hamari Kumkum ab jaag chuki hai, 😉
Amazing. Great going, Continue soon.....................

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ambreen

@-Amby-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#134

thanks kashish
tanvi ko toh nikalna hi hoga naa

Originally posted by: kashishk
Hey ambreen fantastic part. Aur Tanvi ke bare mein maine jaisai socha tha use dus gunah zyada buri nikli. Abhi jaldi jaldi kk bhi sumit ko bataye, dono ke beech mein se tanvi naam ka to kaanta nikal jayegha (lol)
continue soon...

KASHISH

thanks verni

Originally posted by: verni
Lovely part bachchaaaaa

The write up was very well written....

thanks

Originally posted by: Irika
fantastic part cont soon

thanks ya she is 😕

Originally posted by: Pearl29
fantastic, excellent, mindblowing part...............can't believe that Tanvi is so selfish........

this time please continue soon...........

thanks ekta toh can take lessons from u also 😉

Originally posted by: sumitwadhwa
Truly fantastic di..!!I didnt know u had such brains..(kekta cud take lessons frm u)

Luvd the sudden character change in tanvi..awesome..

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Originally posted by: preethi
love it ambreena
wht will kk do?

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Originally posted by: janu_2006
hey
gr8 part..
cont.soooon

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Originally posted by: sweetpoorvi
too gud ambreen ....bas jaldi se kk su ko bata de...

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Originally posted by: Shafoo
wowowowow nice part kumkum must tell sumit

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Originally posted by: janu_kumkumjuhi
Great, Mindblowing. Hamari Kumkum ab jaag chuki hai,
Amazing. Great going, Continue soon.....................

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ambreen

@-Amby-

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Posted: 17 years ago

#135

Part 11
**wht is kk doing??**

next day

it is sangeet

everyone dress up and sumeet along with his family comes to sharmas house

su enters inside and sees here and there

veena comes to him

v-su tanvi bad mein aa jayengi giggles

su-nahi maa main toh tanvi ko nahi

v-chal abhi rehne de

veena goes away

su-kaise batao main kisse

tht time his eyes goes to a girl who is running down the steps quickly

she is looking beautiful in a pink choli ghagra
and yes it is kk

kk comes to su

kk-su

su doesnt reply

kk waves her hands infront of him

kk-su

su-oh hmm

kk-mujhe tumse jarori baat karni hai chalo mere saath

su-kya baat

kk(herself)-di aakar yeh dekhe iske pehle mujhe su ko bahaar lekar jana hoga

kk-su pls main sab batati ho chalo toh

t-kk

tanvi comes there
kk looks at tanvi

tanvi smiles at kk

t-baat toh hote rahege abhi sangeet hai aaj chalo aapni behen ki sangeets mein masti karo bahar jaana abhi jarori nahi hai

kk looks at su then tanvi and goes away
t-su kaise ho

kk walsk away she is thinking wth to do
soon the sangeet ceremony starts

all are dancing and laughing and having a good time

kk again tried to talk to su but tanvi was a eye on her
she had ocme there and didnt let kk talk

kk was standing on the side and didnt know wht to do

kk(herself)-kal shaadi hai mujhe jo karna hai abhi hi
karna hoga kal mujhe sab kuch su ko batana hoga par kaise kya karo su bhi mujhe par kyun ishwas karega
mom dad ki terah wo bhi mujhse saboot mangega
agar main usse aise bhi kahogi toh woh nahi manega kya karo main mujhe kuch saboot lana hoga lekin kya kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha hai woh report di ne kaha rakh di hai pata nahi ek min mujhe hospital se report ki copy mil sakti hai naa

kk quickly goes away somewhere

kk comes to her room and calls tht hospital where tanvi had gone

kk-hello city hospital jee actually mujhe ek report ki dublicate copy chahti thi patient ka naam hai tanvi sharma jee kya nahi de sakte lekin kyun,,, mana kiya hai tanvi ne dekhiye main uski behen hu..lekin

kk keeps the phone down tnavi had told the hospilta not to give report to nayone and now kk couslnt get this also and now wht should she do

in the night
kk is lying on her bed

but she is not sleeping
she is very disturbed wht should she do to stop this marirage

she cant let tanvi spoil sumeets life
tomororw is marriage she has very less time

kk(herself)-mere pass waqt bahot kam hai kya karo main kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha hai

kk gets up and goes to tanvis room and sees her sleeping
kk gets a idea and quietly goes away to her room

the marriage day
next mornign

both houses are busy with activities

soem are running here there
to complete last minute work

the muharat is in sometime and tanvi is in her room getting ready kk is ready and also she has made up her mind for osmething

after getting ready and seeing some work she comes to tanvis room

she sees some friends with tanvi getting her eady

kk-di

tanvi looks at her

kk-di mujhe aapse alkele mein baat karni hai app log kuch der ke liye bahar jaa sakte hai kya pls

tanvi and kk are left alone in the room

t-dekh kk agar tujhe mujhse yeh kehna hai ke main yeh sab naa karo etc etc toh forget it tumhari yeh sab dialogues mujhe naho rok sakti bhool jao aur haa mujhe naa yeh sab bahshan sunna acha nahi lagta hai so pls u can leave

kk-di aap mujhe galat samaj rahi hai main aapse yaha maafi magne aaye ho

tanvi looks at her

kk-di mujhe aapka saath dena chahiya tha app meri di hai aur main maine galat kiya apno ka saath dena chahitha mujhe maine aap ke baare mein nahi soccha apni choti behen ko maaf kar degi naa aap

tanvi looks at her

kk holds her ears tanvi smiles evily

t-janti thi main meri behen hi hai tu chal maaf kiya
kk smiles at her

kk-di kya is bache ke baap ne apse shaadi karne se inkar kar diya

t-woh mujhe inkar nahi kk maine kiya woh su ke zaisa paise wala nahi hai naa isliye jab su ki baat aie toh maine su ke lliye usse inkar kar diya simple

k-lekin di

t-kk pls mujhe lectures mat do ok ab su ko is bache ka baap banakar main sab ko yeh waris do dungi aur phir kya sab paisa is bache ke naam simple aur agar su ko pata bhi chal gaya bad mein toh main sab paise le lungi

tanvi laughs and kk smiles at her

Edited by panjwani - 17 years ago

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poorvi

@sweetpoorvi

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#136

nice one ambreen 👏 ....hmmm...so kk has some plan...ab to su us tanvi se bach hi jayega..

cont soon dear.

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Rahila

@Rah_HuJu

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Posted: 17 years ago

#137

Good one Ammu 👏 👏 ...read 2 parts together....I have a feeling KK is recording all this somehow so she has evidence to prove what Tanvi is upto 😳 ...waiting eagerly for the next part!