Members’ FF -***Epilogue/The End***- Pg 83 - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowwwwwww...
do continue....
its getting more intersting.. 😉 😉
hats off to all.. 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ab koi aur cont karo na pls...varna main kuch nayi beemari daal doongi.... 😉 😃 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
I just read all the parts 2gether.......good work everyone........like the little fights & sweet moments between them....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
Okk....... am here....... no tension bachchaaaaaaaa 😃 😃

well done all of uuuuu 👏 👏 👏

Su(in his cabin) : Yeh Kumkum..... kyun nahi aayi?????....... arey mini ne to kaha tha ki theek hai.... kahin raat ko phir to kharaab nahi ho gayi tabiyat? 😕 😕

Till then somebody knocks the door,

Su (without luking up) : Come in.

kk : Mujhe miss kar rahe the? 😉

Su (luks up and finda Kumkum) : Tum....... tummmmm aa gayiiiii 😃 😃

A Man : Sorry sir?? 😉 😆 😆

Su (seeing a man standing) : Ermmmm..... wo..... Aap wo file ... ermmmm.... le aaye.... yehiiii... yehi poochna thaa 😆 😆 😉

Man : jee..... 😕

Su : Okk , U may go.

Man is confused and goes. 😕

Su : main kyun yaad kar raha hun use? 😉 .... Arey usse to meri dushmani hai.... kitna tang karti hai mujheeee 😉 😉 Hunhhhh 😡

A knock on door again.

Su (turning back) : Come in.

It's Kumkum, 😉

Kk : To shart yaad hai naa? 😉

Su (turning) :.... Hunhhhhh.... not again.... I know it's not herrrr 😆 😆

Kk : Hello..... kaun???? kiski baat kar rahe ho????? 😕

Sumit goes near her.. and touches her. and hugs her tightlyyyyyyy 😉

Kumkum is shockeddd 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
Didi..fantastic.. 😉 ..abhi aap hi cont karo. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
wowowowowowow tht funnyy sumit hugges kumkum
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
ha to cute verni 😛 👏
abb cont next
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
Sooo sweet...you guys are doing a wonderful job writing..plz cont...I am gonna sit back and enjoy reading 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok me cont 😛
su is hugging kk
😉
kk:hello wht r u doing? 😡
su comes back to senses and say ki it was bet na that when ever i see u i need to hug u 😉
kk:isa kounsa bet tha i didnt say that.kudh ko badha hero samjraha 😆
su:i thought it was bet(leave tht matter type tone 😆)abb kisa feel kar rahii hii tum
kk:much better and thanks for everything kal mujha gar thak chodna ka liya
su:wht i cannt hear bit louder pls 😆
kk:says thanks again
bt su says again wht 😆
now kk is on verge of anger and says ki ur duffer{slowly} and thnks 😆 leaves the place in anger saying i will see u afterwords
here su is very happy and constantly smilling usa kuch samjh nahi ara ki usa kya ho raha hii 😆 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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After working for 4 hours at a stretch, Sumit is interrupted by Kumkum's knock.. 😳

Su-Come in...

Kumkum comes in with a file..

Kk-Ye file wo waali..

she starts coughing badly.. ..Sumit gives her a glass of water..

Su-Ye lo..paani.. 😳

Kk-ThankQ... 😳

She continues telling him something about the file but she again feels choked up..

Su-ek kaam karo..main khud dekh loonga..tum rehne do.. 😳

She takes his hanky from the table and covers her mouth... 😆

Su-Arrey..ye mera hanky tum kyun le rahi ho.. 😆

Kk-(weakly)...ajeeb insaaan ho tum..ladki bechari beemar hai...aur tum rumaal tak nahin de sakte ho...arrey waise toh Kumkum kabhie kuch nahin bhoolnti..par aakhir main bhi toh insaan hi hun na...kabhie kabhie bhoolti bhi...

She starts coughing again.. 😆

Su-Bas meri maa..ab apna lecture band karo...bhagwaan ne tumhe chup rehne ke liye hi aisa kiya hai...

But, her eyes start watering this time...Sumit's really concerned.. 😳

Su-Kk?..hey?..are u allrite?..kk?..

As he touches her forehead, he realises that she still has fever.. 😳
Edited by sumitwadhwa - 17 years ago

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