Members’ FF -***Epilogue/The End***- Pg 83 - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
hey this is very nice one. so come on think think and dream as i had dreamt 😳 well verni and rahilla keep i tup. i know u r good writers but no need to show me and jealous me 😳 😉 keep it up.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
Okk boss.... 😆 😃 😃 .... will write soon....

rahi u have written beautifullyyyy 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sumit picks up the phone and dicsonnects it, without talkingggg 😛

su (to himself) : Dimaag kharaab kar rakkha hai subah se.... 😡 😡

Then he sees that somebody keeps a glass of water infront of him, he raises his head and sees Kumkum smiling.... 😉 😉

Su : Tummm....kya kaam hai? 😡

Kk : Arey itna gussa mat kariye... ehat ke liye theek nahi hai.,.... paani pijiye 😆 😆

Sumit stands up ans luks at her doubtfully,.

su : Tum yeh sab kyun keh rahi ho..??? 😕 😕

Kk : Shah Rukh ki wajah se.... 😆

Su : Kya????? 😆 😆 😕

Kk : Haan.... kal Chak de dekhi... usme yeh dialogue tha naaa 😃 😃 Kya acting ki hai mere SRK ne... Hayeeeeeeeeeeeee 😃 aur pata hai jab usneeee

Su : Bassssssss 😡 😡 (controlling his anger) bas.. (smiles fakely) ab main paani piyun.... phir shaam ko project pe baat karni hai okkkk 😆 😆

Kk : Haan haan to piyo naa.... maine kab mana kiyaaaa 😆 😆 😆

Su : Thanku aapki permission ke liyeee 😆 😆

Kk : U r always welcome... 😆 Okk ab paani peekar kaam karna thoda relaz hoke... sab theek hogaaaa 😉 😉

Sumit nodssss 😉 😆

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At night,

Sumit is tired and angry bcoz again he had a tiff with his father. . He sits quietly angrily .... then his eyes fall on the jug and glass, he goes and takes a glass of water and remembers Kumkum's wordss 😉

He smiles and drinks water.... 😉 😉

Su : Pata nahi.... but am actually feeling gud. 😃 😃 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
ha verni it was to nice abb meri bari 😆

su drinks another glass of water after tht he plays guitar and he closes his eyes fr some time thr he sees a girl standing thr bt the girls face is not clear 😕
su gets up and see ya kya hii again he tries to sleep this time he falls asleep

it early mor su gets up goes fr jog
here at kk house kk mama is scolding her ashking her to get up so finally she cannt bear anything gets up and gets ready fr jog

sukk enter the park fr diiff direction
su is busy doing jogging and kk in sleeping mood is also doing the same suddenly su was looking at other side and kk with sleepy eyes just bump at each other both say ki tum tum ya par bhi

cont it
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
👏 👏

Su: Oh God!!tum ne kya kasam li hai meri jaan lene ki?? 😡 😡

KK: (sleepily) Sir aap jaa kar apna dimaak check karwaye.....kisi se takrane se koi marta hai kya?? 😆 😆

Su: haha very funny 😡

He then notices that KK is still sleepy & he smiles to himself.Then he removes his water bottle from his pocket,opens it & pours the water straight on KK 😆 😆

KK gets a terrible shock & starts spluttering & shivering....then looks up & sees Sumit laughing....she pushes her hair out of her eyes...

KK: aaj tho tum gaye kaam se 😡 😡

Sumit starts running,still laughing non-stop 😆 😆

Su: main tho sirf tumhe jagaa raha tha...kahin neend main jogging karte karte kahin khadde main gir jaati tho 😆 😆 😆

KK runs after him,all the while giving various gaaliya..whatever she can think of...Sumit keeps saying *beep* & then *beep* 😆 😆 this makes KK even more angry & she runs faster...soon she's worn out & stops to catch her breath...Sumit also stops & watches her warily from a distance 😉

KK: tu..tho..tho...tho...ra...ruk....main....ab....ab..abhi...tu ...tu...tujhe...sab...sabak...sikh..sikhati hoon...

Su: KK tujhe pata hai main tumhara Boss hoon aur mujhe TU keh rahi hai???

KK makes a face at him & says 'darr...darraa kisse rahe ho??

Su: tch tch main khud tumse dartha hoon...tujhe kya daraunga?? 😆 😆 main sirf tumhe respect karna sikha raha hoon...

KK: (holds her stomach)ouch!!haiiii.....

Su: (gets worried)kya hua KK??tum theek tho ho na 😕

KK: (still holding her stomach)bahut dard ho raha hai....aiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Su: (gets scared) dard??kahan??kaise??kyun?? 😕 😕

KK: tum wahin ruko main dard se yeh saare sawaal poochhthi hoon 😆 😆 abhi mujhe kya pata kahan se kidhar se achanak dard churu hogaya 😡 ...haiiiiiii

Su: achha tikh hai gussa mat karo....tumhari is gusse ki wajah se hi tumhe dard ho raha hai...ruko main aa raha hoon...

He comes slowly forward,still wary of her 😆 😆 He reaches her & holds out his hand...

Su: chalo main tumhe doctor ke paas leke jaata hoon...

KK looks at him,a grin spreading on her face...slaps his outstretched hand,pushes him back & starts dancing..

KK: yipee!!!yay!!!yipee!!

Sumit looks at her in wonder....bechaari,lagta hai dard sar that pahunch gaya hai 😆 😆 pehli baar dekh raha hoon kisi ko dard se paagal hote hue 😆 😆

He slowly moves forward,but then KK comes backwards & he quickly steps out of the way,avoiding a collision 😳

Su: KK...KK...

KK: Sumit ko ullu banaya!! 😆 👏

KK starts clapping....kyun??mujhse panga haan??abhi dekha gadha kaun???...Sumit!!...idiot kaun???...Sumit!!...she starts laughing again...

Sumit finally realises what she did...tho yeh naatak tha?? 😡 😡 meri tho jaan hi nikal gayee thi 😡 😡aaj ke baad main tumhaari kisi baat pe vishwaas nahin karunga 😡 😡

KK: ab kyun gussa ho rahe ho???ab pata chala na kaisa lagta hai koi tum par mazaak karta hai tho 😡 😡

They're standing facing each other & screaming at the top of their voices...

Su: main tho tum par favour kar raha tha...tumhe neend se nikaal raha tha thaaki tumhe koi nuksaan na pahunche 😡

KK: tum meri fikar karne waale ho kaun?? 😡 😡

Su: main...woh...main...koi....

KK: (watching him with raised eyebrows)...woh main kya?? 😆 😆

Sumit just stares at her,then takes a step towards her..KK moves back getting confused...Sumit takes another step still staring at her unblinkingly...KK moves back again now getting scared...Sumit continues advancing towards her & KK continues moving backwards...

KK: Sumit kya hua hai tumhe???meri taraf kyun aa rahe ho??dekho main tho sirf mazaak kar rahi thi..tum itna seriously mat lo...

Sumit still continues towards her with a strange look in his eyes.....KK still moving backwards slips & is about to fall when Sumit catches her elbow,brings his face close to hers,looks into her eyes & says

Main tumhara Boss hoon!!! 😆 😆 😆

He then makes her stand upright & starts laughing 😆 😆 😆 he laughs so hard he has to hold his stomach 😆 😆 ...tumhaari shakal 😆 😆 😆 ...oh...oh God!! 😆 😆 😆

KK is looking at him furiously,completely at a loss for words 😡 😡 😡

Sumit,still laughing,gives her a wink 😉......kaam par milenge KK....then he gives her a flying kiss & waves...then jogs home...KK just stands,her hands balled up into fists & vows to take revenge....then she also stiffly walks home 😆 😆

who's next? 😉


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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi

awesome writeups everyone

loving it

keep it up

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow....mindblowing writeups evryone... 😃 😃
juz loved it 😛 😛
continue soon.. 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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weeellllllllll .........meinnnnn

next bothsu kk at office.....kk is working on the project given by su ....is tensed .....bu then su srrives ....sees kk tensed ......he behaves then as if hee is tensed .....su moves soon &gets a coke for her......k lifts her head up & again says ......tummmmmm.....co workrs ..see strangely...kk realises &slowly sayssss ///sii...rr..rrr......su says mmmmmmm like ......

kk doent know wht to says .....she just says thnks &says in mind aa gaya hero badi madat karne ,,,

su:seeing towards kk so lovingly &speaks ...tum kuch keh rahe hoon....

kk:areeee?///////...yeh to ..confused ....then sudenly nahi meine kuch nahi ...kahaa ....su goes on seeing her

kk:ab aise kya dek rahe hoon......
su:haannnn.mmmmmm kuch nahi ...mujhe kuch announce karna tha .

su:tho karo naa mujhe tukur tukur kr kya dekh rahe hoon....
su takes a liht breath then announces........so guyss aaj weekend hain.....we all often work so ithougt why dont we hav some fun party &all tht ..........

evryone says okkkk......

kk:badi soauk hain acchanak party karne ki..........
su:specially goes towards kk &says ..tum bi aana bak bak .........

kk:thinks let me go or not .........i wiil ask mini
goes to home & themn asks minnie .....she to says mujhe nhi pata bk bak .....jan hai tho jaaon ..i dont care .....
kK...THIS IS TOO MUCH MIINNEI ...& gets out
mini :agar mein aisi nahi bolti tho tu jaati nahi naaa..........

Kk:gts ready is looking beautiful with jeans &top....gets on her scooty &moves saying bai to minnie,........

on her way to the palce ....while driving ..there are 3 boys ..they see drivig kkk..a scoty & says woww ..kay figure hai yaar.........kk is wearing the helment covering half of her face ........boys ask mujhe bi lift doge .....
kk hers &is full of angry........

she drives back to them ....by then she opens her helmet su to comes driving his rocking bike ....here at same time kk opens her helmet ........she puts back her hair .....in a stylly manner....su tht side is impressed to see her loks ..yahhan boyss biiiiiiii

KK:siting on the bike ......dekha naa ..figure ...ko ab hya haroge lirt karoge ..pyaar ...karoge //ya shaad karogee.....now she is fully angry.....gets down the bike ....&slaps to both of the boys ....su is seein on side of the road ....

kk:kaameeno .....akeli ladki mile tho kuch bim karroge naa......ladkiyoon ki front back sabi tum logo ko teezing parts hain kya ........by then many people come tehr &start scolding themmm......

kk escapes frm there & moves ....on scoty ..su sees kk moving ...su is seeing & is thinking ..of kk kitni haungama karti hain ..hey ....

the boys talk on yaar us ladi ka peechha karo ...all move on follow kk ...su sees this sr yeh kya ho raha hain ....&puts on his helmet .....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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kkmis driving joy fully ..teh she see sin mirror tht boys following her ....she tris to escapre but those r followin her ....

su is to back of tem ...kk leaves her scooty & moves in some khandar ......shes hiding ...waha bi ba bak ...aaj agar woh su party nahi raktha tho ye sab nahi hota ....

those boys find her .....&opens chaakoo...kk :haan chaako ...deko mujhe chakko se bahut dar hain pls haan iam corry plsss haan mujhe chod do ....

by then our hero enters with a bike ....h gets down with his helmet ...on the head ...comes towards them &says chodo use....guys says tu kaun hain be.....jaa
su starts hing them ...goes on hitinthem ...kk think who is this helmet hero....
she goes on saying areee ....itn bi mat maaro agar mar jaayega tho ..su hits hitw .....

then comes towards kk ..ab chale ...kk haan chlo chalo ...kk then moves by then his helmt..hits hr head....are par pehle apna helmet utaarke shkl tho dikaon.....
su:teek hain bak bak ...kk:haan bak bak ....kahin pe suna hain....then she forcly opens helmt ..
su:awww.....slowly.....kk;tummmmm.........
su :yes meeeeeeee.....kk:tho tumne bachhaya mujhe ...su:haan ...dekha kitne bahdur strong hon na mein ........kk:bakwas mat karo mein tho tumaare nia bi unse nipat leti thi ...

tum jaise ladko ko mein acchi tarh se jaanti hoon ..yun aise hero ke jaise helmet pehnke ladki ko filmi stle mei tum mujhe bacchooge ....phir isse impress hoke mein tumse pyaar mein pad jaaoongi ...tmari ada judaoon see ...right ....

su ..heeloo stoop stop stoppp....brek fail hui loaded gaadi ki tara dhaudte hi mat jaonn.....itni sarree scene nahi mada mmmmmmmmm..........i dont want to be ur adamm......
kk:kyaaa........tumaari yeh himmat ...tum jaao mujhe tu teri party kuch nahi chaayiye ....sab kuch tumaari vajjah se hi tho huaaaaaa..........

mein bi akele
hi jaa sakti hoon ........

oooffffffffff iam tired gys continue plssssssss
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ok..i'll continue..

As she sits on her scooty, she finds it punctured... 😉

Kk-oh god!!...isko bhi abhi puncture hona tha...

Su-ok...main jaoon?... 😆

Kk-Sumit...pls le chal..pls..

Su-chal?..

Kk-matlab..chaliye...

She blinks her eyes sweetly... 😆

Su-baitho peeche...chalo.. 😳

She sits behind him with crossed legs...

Sumit drives at a speed of 120km/hr...

Kk-SUMITTTTTTTTTT!!...

Su-pakad lo...mujhe...

She holds his waist desperately... 😆

Su-pahunchne mein 1 ghanta lagega...wo raasta band hai jis se hum aaye they..THEEK HAI?....

Kk-HAAAAAAAAAAN...

Su-MERE KAAN MEIN MATT CHILLLAAAAAAOOO....

KK-OKKKKKKKKKK....

😆

Soon, Kumkum falls asleep leaning on him...

Su-ye...KUMKUM...SEEDHE BAITHO..KYA KAR RAHI HO?...

Now, someone else continue please.. 😆

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