FF-Hadsa THE END pg-63 *24.8.08* - Page 53

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Posted: 17 years ago
so Sumit knows the truth . that was a nice part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey..!!I hope u wont have forgotten me or the FF yet..!!😆..Its sonali..back..to updating..!!Its a long one..(4 preethi di) hope..u all like it..Thanks to all..!!😳😳

Anjali walks up and down the room.."ye sab tab se shuru hua...jab hamari shaadi ki baat chali...main jaan gayi thi...ki mere bhai ne hi tumhaara rape kiya....maine khud sazaa dene ki chaahi apne bhai ko...magar.."😕

Flashback..

Sumit throws up his hands in agitation.."tumne socha bhi kaise ki main tumse shaadi kar loon iss waqt.."😕

"Matlab..?..Agar shaadi nahin karni thi toh...ye engagement..?.."😕

"Mera..mera wo matlab nahin hai..par..iss waqt...tum jaanti ho iss waqt kumkum ki kya haalat hai..she's under depression...main kaise aise mein chod doon use akele..?."

Anjali rolls her eyes away.."sumit...she's a mere friend of urs...uske kaaran hamari shaadi toh nahin ruk sakti..aur.."

"she's NOT a mere friend..ye baat yaad rakhna.."😳

Sumit leaves...

Flashback ends...


Anjali:Pata nahin kyun...sumit ki ek baat ne mere mann mein shak daal diya..aur phir ek ke baad ek...sumit ki harkaton se meraa shak yakeen mein badalta gaya...sumit ka tumhaara had se zyaada khayal rakhna...dheere dheere mujhse door jaana.....phir he started accusing me ...aur..tumhaare kareeb aana.."

"AISA KUCH NAHIN THA AUR HAI..HAMARE BEECH..."Kumkum shouts...

"TU...EK SHABD NAHIN BOLEGI AAJ...BAND RAKH APNI ZUBAAN.."..She plants a hard slap on her cheek...😲

"ANJALI..!!!!"Sumit roars...😭

The force of Anjali's slep, makes her slightly dizzy.."Su..sum..sumit.."

"KU..KUCH NAHIN HONE DOONGA MAIN TUMHE..KUMKUM...KUCH NAHIN KAR PAYEGI YE..."Sumit struggles to get off the ropes...😭

Anjali is in tears, acting like a cynical.."tumne..mujhse?..mujhse oonchi aawaaz mein baat ki?...iss...iski wajah se..?...iski..?.."

She hits her head with a vase kept nearby...Kumkum's head begins to bleed and she ends up fainting...😭

Prithvi, gets up, having a bite of the apple n his hand..."wait sissy...main iska kaam abhi khatm kar doonga..."😲

He rudely kicks kumkum's chair, making her fall down, in an unconscious state...Sumit is still struggling hard to save her...😳

"Main...main haath jodta hun...tum logon ke aage..pls..usko kuch mat karo..usne kya bigaada hai tumhaara...pls..pls..usko kuch mat karo.."Sumit is in tears, pleading hard...😭

When, some miracle happens, a medicine pouch inside his pocket, kept at a certain angle, tears the rope, making its strands weak...Within a few minutes, he cuts the rope and plants a kick on Prithvi's back...👏

"KHABARDAAR ....MERI KUMKUM KO HAATH LAGANE KI BHI KOSHISH MAT KARNA..."⭐️

He's bashing him up...pushing away anjali, whenever she comes in between...finally, he gets hold of the revolver.."HEY..!!DOOR HATO KUMKUM SE...DOOORR..!!!"😳

Pritvi takes charge of Anjali and moves aside...Sumit, without a moment of delay, takes kumkum in arms...patting her face, trying to revive her.."Kumkum?..shh...kumkum..???.."😕

Her condition was not well at all...Sumit cheks her pulse...it was low..Apparently, her blood pressure was high...😭

As he decided to run for the injection, she needed...he got hit from the back...!!!😲

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Sumit gets disbalanced, but the urge to save kumkum was a lot bigger and influential than the physical weakness...😳

Prithvi, gets hold of him and bashes him up...while Anjali moves towards kumkum, with blood in her eyes...a desire to finsh..to end...😲

She moves forward with an iron rod...while Sumit's still struggling with Prithvi..

As she gets near her..the evil smile on her face widens..."goodbye kumkum.."😭

and she directly, hits her belly...😲

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"aaaaaaayyyyyyyeeee..!!"Sumit pushes Anjali..but, it was too late, the rod had hit her...Kumkum was not conscious..😭

Sumit had hatred in his eyes..seeing a ferocious anjali, laughing with anjali, he took the rod in his hand and did something, which had he had never even thought to do..😲

He hit her head, with full momentum and repeated it 3-4 times...😲

a loud crack was heard..Probably, it was the breaking of her skull bones...and she immediately, collapsed to the floor...without even being able to scream...😭

Sumit was not guilty, nor was he sad..but, he blankly left the rod on the floor...and looked at her body...blood was oozing out of her ears and nose now..😲

Prithvi's anger flared up and he ran towards her.."sssssumiiiiiiiit.......!!!"😭

sumit didn't try to defend himself..He was standing blank...Prithvi was hitting him and he was standing without any expression..😡

"I WILL KILLL YOU..!!"He kepts hitting him with almost verything, that came his way..😭

Sumit stirred, only when he heard a cry from kumkum..."Aaaaaaaaaaah..!!"

sumit looked at her..She was in terrible pain..clutching her stomach tightly..she had started to bleed.."SUMIIIIIIIIIIIITTT..!!"she screamed in pangs of immense and uncontrollable pain..😭

Her cry brought his senses back.."Kumkum?.."😳

He turned, rushing towards her..but, his one move, was proving to be fatal..as soon as he turned, Prithvi got hold of the rod and led sumit, in a fierce manner.."AAAAAAA"😡

Kumkum, without caring about herself, crawled towards the revolver lying a cubit away from her..and struggling hard..she reached it..😲

"Sumittttttttttt"he shouted, a millimetre away to hit him..Sumit turned...but, he fell down..sumit looked at kumkum, whose hands loosened, leaving the revolver...😭

Prithvi fell to sumit's feet..sumit looked at him, stunned..😲

"aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh"Kumkum screamed again..making sumit run towards him...😭

She was sweating badly...twisting her body in lots of pain..Sumit took her in arms.."Kumkum...kumkum?..ku..kuch nahin hoga tujhe..mai...main hun na..hmm?..main..chal..hum.."😭

she was biting her lips in extreme pain..."Me..Mere..bacche ko..mere..bacche..ko..bacha..loge..na..??..W..waaada..waada karo...tu..tum.."😭

"Kuch nahin hoga..na tujhe..naa..iss bacche..ko..theek hai..tu.."😳

But, she had lost her conscience, after struggling with another wave of pain..😭

Sumit took her in arms and ran out of the house..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Sonu,
This was a little violent I felt...which generally I dont expect in ff's😭😳...nways good write up though😳...
Edited by *Resham* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Welcome back Sonali after a long time...............missed u a lot & ur ff's...................hope u continue writeing like this..........this was a very very emotional & a sad part..................Su killed Angali & KK killed Prithvi..................ab kya hoga ..................don't tell me that kk will loose her baby too...don't let that happen or Sukk ko milva do please & do
please continue soon..................just waiting 2 c what happens in the next part........................
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Posted: 17 years ago
thnks fr it sonu🤗
bt thu ya kya kiya saab katham hogya😭😭😭
bt it was very sweet do cont😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey sonali..😃
m bak!!!u remember me???😉
well..juz read all the parts..jahan se chodkar gayi thi...😳
and after reading them..i dunno wat to say..u hv left me speechless dear😳..loved each n evry dialogue😛....cud actually imagine dat....😊
so..anjali ws the culprit!!!i had a doubt!!
feeling so bad for sukk..😭
and i love the way sumit and kumkum take care of eachother..😳
hope now evrything will be alright...😊
do continue soon...if u hv time..😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi , how r u??
hmm really this is a night of terror, what a fight!!! plzzz now dont say that su is going to jail for killing anjali. if it happnd thn what will happn kk???
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi how r u Sonali do u know me who i am i am Annie(Fan of Juhi) any ways great work i appreciate 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
feeling bad 4 sukk..
cont,sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: *Resham*

Sonu,

This was a little violent I felt...which generally I dont expect in ff's😭😳...nways good write up though😳...
I know di..thats y ur FF is all goody-goody..😆 but i m a bad girl..luv ladai..n dhishoom dhishoom..😉



Originally posted by: Pearl29

Welcome back Sonali after a long time...............missed u a lot & ur ff's...................hope u continue writeing like this..........this was a very very emotional & a sad part..................Su killed Angali & KK killed Prithvi..................ab kya hoga ..................don't tell me that kk will loose her baby too...don't let that happen or Sukk ko milva do please & do

please continue soon..................just waiting 2 c what happens in the next part........................

Thanks priya di..for all you support throught the ff..m riting now..



Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey

gr8 part..
feeling bad 4 sukk..
cont,sooon

Hey..thanks jaanu




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