FF-Hadsa THE END pg-63 *24.8.08* - Page 40

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sumit is so sweet as always....another fab part 👏 .
hope both of them realise their love soon.... 😉 .

Originally posted by: nature

first of all congratulations for completion of half century 👏 👏...

the part ws really sweet 😳 😳.. Sumit should now finally realise the worth of Kk in his life 😳... and i'm wondering y kk ws crying and wat she's upto wid those bottles??

Thanks for following the Ff di...i have been losing readers...n hope...sumday parts get interesting enuff..

Originally posted by: preethi

sweet part par su didnt say anything to anjali 😡
bt when will he realise 😭 😭

Soon ..😳

Originally posted by: Shafoo

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Thanks a lotttttttt shafoo....😳

Originally posted by: sweetpoorvi

sumit is so sweet as always....another fab part 👏 .
hope both of them realise their love soon.... 😉 .

Its so nice of u poorvi to appreciate the work..thanks a lot..😳

Sumit has been knocking kumkum's door since last 15 minutes...😕

Su:Kk..??..dekh darwaaza toh khol...tu..?...kk??...accha..kuch pareshaani hai toh bol toh sahi...aise..😳

Ultimately, he finds the second keys and unlocks the room...He closes his eyes..😆

Su:are you descent??...aa jaoon?..😆

kk:hmm...😳

Sumit opens his eyes and finds her limbs excessively swollen...He sits on the bed, examining her feet...😳

Su:(tensed)...ye kya hua?..itni zyaada swelling?..kumkum?..aur tune darwaaza band kar liya..tu paagal hai kya??

She bursts into tears, crying loudly...Sumit takes her into arms...😭

She too, holds him by his waist...😳

Su:Ye kya?...ro kyun rahi hai?..Kk?...Pagal..tu..

But she keeps on crying...He caresses her hair...😳

Su:Kk?...kya hua baba?...kk?...accha...bata toh sahi...kaisa feel kar rahi hai?..kk??...😳

she holds him tightly and cries bitterly...He sits down on the bed and places one hand in her hair and one at her back and caresses her...

Su:..Apni takleef nahin batayegi toh main kaise kuch karunga..?Kk?..idhar dekh...

He makes her look at him and finds that her face, too, is quite swollen..

Su:Kk?..dekh..face par bhi swelling hai...aur..tu royegi na...toh sujan badhegi...chalo..rona band karo...pani piyegi?..kk?..

Kk:(still crying)...maine..oil..(sobs)..lagaya tha....raat mein....par...jab subah ...uthi toh...swelling phir bhi thi...(sobs)...aur...subah ...numbness hone lagi...(sobs)..koi sensation nahin hai...

Su:Haath-pairon mein sensation nahin ho raha hai?..

He makes her drink water...

Su:Pareshaan kyun ho rahi hai tu?...aisa karte hain..chal..hum abhi ma'am ki clinic chalte hain..aur..

Kk:Nahin...main ..(sob) nahin jaungi...please...

Su:theek hai...par royegi nahin ok?...aur agar 1 ghante mein swelling kam nahin hui toh tu chalegi..isske aage i don't need to ask you...hmm...

She again hugs him by his waist, as he begins getting up...He hugs her tightly...

Su:Kk..ro mat ...rone se kya hoga?...bata?..agar aise rone se tabiyat theek ho jayegi toh ro le...par rone se toh keval pareshaani badhegi na?...hain?...

He cups her face...

Su:shh...bilkul rona nahin ab...theek hai??...main abhi treat karta hun..tu ro mat bas...dekh waise hi face mein swelling hai aaj...tu ro mat pls...

He wipes her tears and calls Professor Vera..

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Sumit is patting her feet with excessively hot water..

Su: Kuch feel hua?...Kk

Kk:nahin...(crying)...

Su:Bas..abhi inject kiya hai na?...theek ho jayega 5-10 minutes mein...hmm??...chalo..close your eyes..kuch mat soch..

She closes her eyes...and lies down silently..

He massages her feet and arms with ice ...and she falls asleep, holding his shirt..

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Next morning @ Dr.Keerti Vera's clinic...

Dr:Headaches hote hain kk?...

Kk:jee..

Dr:kya frequency hai?..aur kaisa feel hota hai jab headaches hote hain toh?...kisi ek point par pressure padta hai?...

Su:Nahin ma'am kehti hai ki poore sarr mein dard hai..aur ...sometimes when the pain becomes intolerable, toh rone lagti hai...

Dr:Sumit...??..iska swelling pattern ?..

Su:Ma'am har doosre din swelling rehti hai..kal toh subah abnormal swelling thi..even face bhi swelled tha...

Dr:hmm...kumkum?...mere saath aao..

Kumkum follows her...Dr.Keerti returns back with a grim face...

Dr:Iss waqt bhi BP high hai...sumit its something serious..hum akele mein baat karein?..

Kk:Nahin ma'am....wo waise hi mere liye bahut kuch kar raha hai...aur ...waise bhi..main uske upar koi burden nahin banana chahti hun..pls aap mujhe hi batayiye...

Su:Shut up now..!!room ke bahar jakar baitho..main baad mein baat karta hun tumse...

Kk:nahin sumit..

Dr.Kirti smiles..

Dr:Theek..you both pls keep quiet...

Su:jee ma'am sorry...

Kk:Sorry..

Dr.:Kk...its a case of preeclamsia...

Both are shocked...

Su:Par..dr.. she's only in her late 3rd...aur abhi..?..I mean..

Dr:mujhe bhi bas isi baat ki fikr hai ab sumit...

Su:High BP..Swelling...Headaches...maine pehle kyun nahin socha ye...aur urine test reports mein bhi protin was higher than normal amount...how can I...par Dr.?..

Dr:Thankfully...abhi severe nahin hai..warna bahut dikkat ho sakti thi...kumkum..you are aware of the problem na?..

Kk:Jee...I know..

Su:Ab..Dr?..calci-magno..ke supplements...

Dr.hm..aur ek baat jo fikr ki hai..woh ye hai ki..she's still in her teenage..19 yrs .?..aur ye delivery premature hi hogi...aaj tumhaare Rh tests bhi karein hain..bas pray karna hoga ki baby ka aur tumhaara Rh match ho jaye..warna tumhaare liye dikkat ho sakti hai..

Kk:Dr. pray ka karna....bhagwaan ki jo marzee...agar wo mujhe bulaana chahega toh...

Doctor Kirti closes her eyes...

Su:CHUP NAHIN RAHA JATA HAI TUJHSE....HUM BAAT KAR RAHE HAIN...TU BEECH MEIN EK AKSHAR NAHIN BOLEGI..

Su:Dr. ye aisi hi hai...aap fikr mat kijiye...par ab...

Kk:Namak ka intake ekdum regular hoga...Sumit..except the meals..ise kuch bhi namkeen mat khane dena...aur water intake bhi..ab pehle jaisa nahin...

Su:jee..i'll take care...aur abhi medicines..?..

Dr:..sumit..iski reports kal tak aayengi..reports ke baarey mein uske baad hi kuch kaha jaa sakega...

Su:ok...Dr. aur kuch...

Dr:aur..bas wahi circulation se related baatein...zyaada der tak..khada rehna ya ek hi position mein baithna avoid karna...aur baaki kal tests ki reports aane par call karke bataoongi...

Su:jee Dr. thankyou...chalo..(to Kk)

Both of them get up...

Dr:Ek minute sumit...tum niklo..tab tak main kumkum se baat karungi...

Su:jee..kk..main gaadi nikalta hun...tum bahar aa jana...

He leaves and Keerti hugs her...

Dr:Beta...tumhe khush rehna hai ab...aur jitna ho sake apna khayaal rakhna theek hai?...aur phir main toh hun na?...kabhie bhi..kisi bhi samay...agar maa ki zarurat ho..toh mujhe yaad karna..

Kk:Jee..auntie..

Dr:ab jao..varna sumit gussa ho jayega...

Kk:jee..

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Sumit is waiting for Kumkum in the car..He's somewhat angry with kumkum for her negative and pessmistic atitude...On the other hand, he's quite tensed about how she will undergo the hardships of the condition, she's about to face..

Kk:Main aa gayi hun sumit?..

He comes out of his thoughts and luks at her..

Su:huh..?..haan..

He shows his anger...and starts the car without even talking to her..

Kk:Pareshan hone ki koi baat nahin hai...main thik ho jaungi..

Su:......................................................... ............

Kk:Dr. keh rahi thin ki...bas zara si care karungi toh koi khatra nahin hoga...

Su;......................................................... ...........

She hesitates to talk further and luks out of the window....

Kk:Tum naraz ho?....mujhse?...

Su:......................................................... .........

Kk:I am sorry agar...mujhse koi galti hui ho..par ..

Su:......................................................... .........

She sits quietly...After half an hour..

Su:Ghar aa gaya...

He walks inside the house and directly goes to his room, locking the door behind him....Kumkum is helpless...😭

Sonu..why do u feel tht u r losing viewers to this ff 😳 ...

Aisa mat soch 😳 ..keep good writing like u do always 😛 ...

Nice part though 😳

wow sonu amazing part dear...wow u knw so much abt medicine 😆 😃 😛 ..

It is soooooo sweet to c Su so much worried 4 Kk 4 every small little thing & KK 2 gets sad when she sees Su upset.......i just love the kind of relation they share.......it is beyond words.........u've described it so well.....

nice part dear.. 😳
hope kk jaldi theek ho jaaye.... 😳
continue soon.

wow Sonu 👏 👏 read 2 parts consecutively 👏 👏 yeh saari medicines aur bhimaariyan tho mere sar se upar guzar jaati hai!! 😳 but I just love the realtionship u've created between Su & Kk.....aakhir pyaar ki shuruwat dosti hai!! 👏

Sonu..... this part was awesomeee 👏 👏 👏 I simply loved this part.... 😃 😃

and sumit is gaking very gud care of Kumkum..... keep writing bachchaa 😊