FF-Hadsa THE END pg-63 *24.8.08* - Page 41

vry nice 😛 ...keep on writing like this. 😃 its vry good yaar..cont. soon

abhi kk ko kuch karke su ko manana hoga
su cares abt kk and kk abt su
tht is so nice
continue soon

hey nice parts...ya su-kk have to do something for each other...yeh kk ko haesha preshiyan hoti hai...nice part and continue soon... 😉

nice part sonu 😛
abb aga kya hoga 😆

veryyy cute partt reallyy when sumit and kumkum fall in love with each other

Originally posted by: *Resham*

Sonu..why do u feel tht u r losing viewers to this ff 😳 ...

Aisa mat soch 😳 ..keep good writing like u do always 😛 ...

Nice part though 😳

ThankQ di...kal..bas aise hi..i was sleepy..n i rote all that rubbish..shorry...😃

Originally posted by: loveHussain&KK

wow sonu amazing part dear...wow u knw so much abt medicine 😆 😃 😛 ..

Thanks a lott Shilpa di...😊..

Originally posted by: Pearl29

It is soooooo sweet to c Su so much worried 4 Kk 4 every small little thing & KK 2 gets sad when she sees Su upset.......i just love the kind of relation they share.......it is beyond words.........u've described it so well.....

Yup..coz they r in love....Thanks 4 appreciaion..😳

Originally posted by: jasmine chhabra

nice part dear.. 😳
hope kk jaldi theek ho jaaye.... 😳
continue soon.

Thanks Jassuben...😳..well..Preeclampsia doesn't have any treatment so far..The medicines are aimed to releive the pain ...

Originally posted by: rah_akki

wow Sonu 👏 👏 read 2 parts consecutively 👏 👏 yeh saari medicines aur bhimaariyan tho mere sar se upar guzar jaati hai!! 😳 but I just love the realtionship u've created between Su & Kk.....aakhir pyaar ki shuruwat dosti hai!! 👏

The medical terms aren't tough di..u can ask me at any...at any moment...😳Thanks a lott..!!

Originally posted by: verni

Sonu..... this part was awesomeee 👏 👏 👏 I simply loved this part.... 😃 😃

and sumit is gaking very gud care of Kumkum..... keep writing bachchaa 😊

ThankQ didi...

Originally posted by: sweetpoorvi

vry nice 😛 ...keep on writing like this. 😃 its vry good yaar..cont. soon

Thanks Poorvi...😳

Originally posted by: panjwani

abhi kk ko kuch karke su ko manana hoga
su cares abt kk and kk abt su
tht is so nice
continue soon

Thanks Abreen di...😳..

Originally posted by: seemahujufan

hey nice parts...ya su-kk have to do something for each other...yeh kk ko haesha preshiyan hoti hai...nice part and continue soon... 😉

Thanks di...kk ki pareshaniyan sirf sumit hi door kar sakta ha na😳

Originally posted by: preethi

nice part sonu 😛
abb aga kya hoga 😆

Jo manzoor -e- sonali hoga..😆

Originally posted by: Shafoo

veryyy cute partt reallyy when sumit and kumkum fall in love with each other

Thanks shafoo..😳...soon

Originally posted by: nature

i really like the way you introduse medical details in the plot 😳 😳..
very well written sonali 👏 👏..
and dont think tht u rlosing readers.. aisa nahi hai 😳..

Thanks di...😳

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@ 9:30 PM...

Sumit is watching TV...when Kumkum enters with dinner for him...😳

Kk:Sumit..aaj tumhaara favorite palak banaya hai...taste kar ke batao...😳

Su:...........................................😕

Kk:Sumit...khana..😕

He doesn't even look at her and moves to the kitchen..Kumkum is confused .....She follows him..😕

Kk:Su?..tum kya kar rahe ho?..main khana layi hun...😕

Sumit is making his own food...without even looking at her....Kumkum gets touchy and she throws the plate, tossing it high...😡

Kk:MAINE AAKHIR KIYA KYA HAI JO TUM MERE SAATH AISE BEHAVE KAR RAHE HO ?...JAB SE CLINIC SE AAYE HAIN...EK SHABD NAHIN BOLA...SEEDHA ROOM MEIN JAA KAR LOCK KAR KE BAITH GAYE?...MAIN ISS HALAT MEIN NAHIN THI KI KHANA BANA SAKUN PHIR BHI MAIINE BANAYA ..AUR AB...😡

Sumit luks at her and again keeps cooking...😡🤢

Kk:SUMIT..TUM MUJHE AISE IGNORE NAHIN KAR SAKTE....MERI TABIYAT ITNI THEEK NAHIN HAI KI MAIN TUMSE BEHAS KARUN...😡

Su:......................................................... ...................😕

Kumkum now pulls him closer by holding his shirt...😳

Kk:SUMIT...MAIN ZINDAA HUN....MERI BHI EXISTENCE HAI...MERA BHI EK ASTITVA HAI....AUR BINA GALTI KE TUM MUJHE SAZA NAHIN DE SAKTE HO....AGAR TUMHARA MAKSAD MUJHSE DOOR JAANA HAI TOH MAIN CHALI JAOONGI....TUMHE TAKLEEF NAHIN DUNGI BUT YOU CAN'T BEHAVE LIKE THIS..😭😡

Su:SShhhh....bas...ab bahar aa mere saath...😳

He takes her arm and makes her sit on the sofa...😳

She's crying silently...staring at him...

Su:pehle toh ye kahunga tujhse...ki doosron ki khamoshi bhi tujhe chubhti hai..aur jab tu doosron ko chot pahunchati hai toh?...😳

Kk;Maine kya kiya?...😕

Su: mera maksad ab poora ho gaya hai...tune jo abhi abhi kaha tha na..ek baar phir soch uske baarey mein..Kk...tera bhi wajood hai...tera astitva hai...aur tujhe koi bina galti ki saza nahin de sakta...toh phir tu kyun khud ko saza de rahi hai?...kyun apne saath hi anyay kar rahi hai?..😳

kk:(crying)...main??..

Su:hmm...tu...tune jab wahan clinic mein itni kadvee kadvee batein boli wo?...I am hurt kk...tu hi bata...kya hum dono ke beech ab koi rishta nahin hai?...main tere liye kuch nahin kar sakta hun?...😳

Kumkum luks at him through tears...😳

Su:Arrey jab tu zindagi-maut ke baarey mein kuch jaanti hi nahin....toh tu marne ki baatein kaise kar sakti hai?....😳

Kk:Sorry..main..(crying)..😭

Su:Ye accha word hai..sorry bas galti kar aur bol de sorry...kisi ko kya fark padta hai...hai na?...Khoon kar ke phir maafi mang lo..

Kumkum bows her head..

Su:jo teri banavati khushi hai na..tu mere saamne kabhie iss fake feeling ko chupa nahin sakti...😳

He realises that she has understood everything...😳

Su:bas...ab khush rahegi...aur keval meri girlfriend ke baare mein sochegi..theek hai?...😕

Kk:(choked)..mat...matlab?...Anjali ke baare mein?...😕

Su:Nahin stupid...Teri aane wali beti...wo toh meri girlfriend hi hogi na?...😆

Kumkum cries more...He takes out his hanky and wipes her tears and even nose..😆

Su:Bevakoofi ka toh copyright hai na madam ka...tu jaanti hai ki rone se stress hoga...aur facial swelling shuru ho jayegi..lekin nahin....tu toh bevkoofiyon ke liye patent lekar baithi hai...😆

He moves to the floor and picks up the plate and cleans the mess...Kumkum goes to him...😳

Kk:Main..😳

Su:no...aap wahan ja kar baitho..main karta hun...aur tu zara ek kaam kar de mera...wo pata nahin kis channel par ek dog show aa raha tha..use dhoondh kar laga de...pls..😳

She agrees...and does it..sumit cleans up the mess and re-serves the food for both of them...😳

Su:Why did you throw away the plate?..kyun nahin...tu toh dushman hai na meri...jalan ho jati mujhe thoda zyada khate dekh...😆

Kumkum giggles..and he puts an arm around her...😳

Su:Bas..aise hi hansti raha kar...khush raha kar...acchi lagti hai...😳

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Nice part sonu 😳 ...good all sorted out 😛 ...