FF-pyar pg149 *Romance..SIZZLING HOT..!!* - Page 70

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Posted: 17 years ago
😭 😭 i knew something is not right
poor kk and su
both are right on their part 😕
continue soon
IsabellaCullen thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ Preeti di-haan kar doongi par shaayad..

@ Buddy-thanQ...

@ Jasmine-thanQ...haan bhai sab theek karne ki..KOSHISH karungi..

@ Raina-Aww...thanks a lot buddy..

@ Ambreen di-dekha...aap kitna sahi sochte ho
*Resham* thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
I knew it was nt tht easy here for both the characters 😳 ...

Continue writing..m too speechless at the moment 😳
verni thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
M speechles.....

I will say just one word,

This is the best part in any of ur ffs

I mean I luv it.
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Posted: 17 years ago
yes sad story part its really not fair kumkum yy she as to weakk she can give birth to babyy sumit love kumkum sooo much he cant she her in pain
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Posted: 17 years ago
😳 😳 just too awesum for words 😳
IsabellaCullen thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ Reshu di-ThanQ didi...

@ Verni di-ThanQ again... 😳

@ Shafoo-Well, thats the reality for her dear....Things will be better in future..lets hope so..


😳

@ Anku di-What do u mean speechless?.. 😡 sab aisa hi kahenge toh comment kaun karega...?.. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
A week has passed since the incident. 😭 Kumkum has been mentally stressed and upset due to the whole thing.She had been trying to pursue Sumit but he is firm on his decision.. 😳 They have not been in talking terms due to their differences.... 😭

Its 2:30 AM...

Sumit comes back from office after an overnight and finds Kumkum crying while sitting near the window. 😭 His heart aches to see her.He keeps his laptop bag on the sofa and sits besides her, placing his hand on her shoulder.. 😳

Su-kk?..dhai baj gaya...soyi kyun nahin tum?.. 😳

Kk remains silent.. 😭

Su-kab tak iss tarah roti rahogi tum?.. 😭

Kk-Main nahin ro rahi hun... 😭

Sumit-toh ye aanson?... 😳

Kk-(still crying)jao...main nahin ro rahi hun.. 😭

Su-aansoon chpaana hai toh jhooth bol rahi ho?...

She finally breaks down into sobs, placing her head on his chest.He caresses her hair.. 😳

Kk-Please mujhe treatment ke liye mana mat karo...please Sumit... 😭

Su-dekho kk..mera faisla tum sun chuki ho..bas ab iss baarey mein hamare ghar mein koi baat nahin hogi...chalo..aao main sula deta hun..thak gayi ho tum... 😳

Kumkum looks at him through tears..
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At the breakfast table next day:

Sumit is talking to someone on his phone when he looks at Kumkum, who's carelessly stirring her juice...
😳

He ends his call and goes to her.He touches her forehead..Kumkum looks at him..

Kk-huh?.... 😳

Su-tabiyat theek hai?...kya hua?..

Kk-i am fine..

Su-tumhe batana tha ki kal subah mujhe Delhi ke liye nikalna hai...2 din ka tour hai..zaruri hai varna tumhe chod ke nahin jaata..please ye may samajhna ki main tumse door jaana chahta hun...

Kk-su...mujhe hospital ke liye der ho rahi hai...

She leaves the table and Sumit looks on...
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Its time to leave for Sumit...

for the first time, Kumkum isn't awake to bid him goodbye.. 😭 She's still sleeping peacefully.. 😡

After getting ready, sumit sits besides Kumkum....

"aaj pehli baar tum mujhe chodne ke liye bahar tak bhi nahin aaogi....naraaz to hogi hi..par jo kuch hai...tumhaare liye hi hai..I won't blame u...kyunki ye jo ho raha hai..usmein tumhaara kasoor nahin hai...

tum bas apna khayaal rakhna...aur himmat mat haarna..I'll miss you..."

As he leaves, Kumkum holds him by his waist and cries..

Kk-bina baat kiye mat jao... 😭

Su-uth gayi munna?...

She hugs him tightly...He too, hugs her back... 😳

Su-apna khayal rakhna... 😳

Kk-tum bhi rakhna...aur mere liye bahut saari chocolates laana.. 😆

Sumit smiles and affectionately pulls her cheek... 😳 😆

Su-le aaonga...

Kk-chalo...der ho jayegi varna..

She bids adieu from the main gate and returns back with a promise...."tumhaari kumkum bhi apna faisla nahin badlegi...main ilaaj karva rahi hun.."

She calls Armaan..."main aa rahi hun..armaan tu ready rehna..."
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At 9:30 PM...

Riddihma is pacing up and down Kumkum's room when Arman and Riddhima enter... 😳 Kumkum is visibly tired and pale.. 😳

Ri-tera dimag kharab ho gaya hai?.... 😡

Kk-Riddhi...tu..

Ri-SHUT UP!!!....tune kis se puchkar treatment shuru kiya?... 😡

Kk-riddhi...meri tabiyat thek nahin hai..please abhi... 😳

Ri-tu jawaab degi...mujhe bhi aur Sumit ko bhi... 😳

Armaan-Dr.Riddhima...she's weak at the moment..pehle injection 2 ghante pehle hi diya hai...aap please..

Riddhima slaps him out of anger.."TUM KAUN HOTE HO KUMKUM KA ISS TRREATMENT MEIN SAATH DENE WAALE...KIS SE POOCHKAR TUM KUMKUM KO PUNE LE GAYE?..."

Kumkum-RIDDHI?..HOW DARE U..

Riddhi-SHUT UP NOW..!!..KHABARDAR TU EK BHI SHABD BOLI TOH..

Riddhima keeps showingg her anger on Armaan but, Kumkum's getting confused as the words seem to echo inside her mind...Her vision gets blurred and ultimately gets unconscious, holding the bed... 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi... 😊
first one to reply as i said 😛
very sweet part nce again..
yahan bhi armaan ridz ki ladai.. 😆 hadd hai yaar!! 😆
sumit vaapas kab aayega?? 😕
uske aane tak kuch gadbad mat karna 😆 😆
continue soon[my pet dialogue for u] 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
hmm nice one 😛 ...u r writing very very well day by day... 😉

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