FF-pyar pg149 *Romance..SIZZLING HOT..!!*

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Priya

@Pearl29

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#1051

Oh God!!!!!!!!!!!!! KK is crying again................ab please jaldi make her well............can't c her crying anymore........now waiting 4 the happy moments........

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*Resham*

@*Resham*

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#1052

Yaar sonu, make kk smile a little..😆

Kitna royegi aur sahegi...

Good part waise

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ambreen

@-Amby-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#1053

ohh

so sad

hope thsi time nothing gets wrong

continue soon

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nitya

@preethi

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#1054

sonu yaar phir sa kk ko roladiya make her smile thoda😆.

yupp good part and good ki u explained meinings of science terms warna would never understood it😆😆.

aga ka part

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Jasmine

@Jasmine...

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#1055

yaar now m on a "Kumkum Hasao Strike"!!! 😆 kya dushmani hai teri kk say?😆thoda sa toh hasaade yaar😆

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Rahila

@Rah_HuJu

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#1056

Originally posted by: *Resham*
Yaar sonu, make kk smile a little..😆

Kitna royegi aur sahegi...

🤣 Resh!!😆😆

Awesome part Sonu👏...I love the way ur weaving the 2 love stories together...it's really cute!😳

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preeti

@preeti4huju

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#1057

hey sonaliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii..................this is my first reply ...i recently started to read the ff.........

its.rally goood ...........but u know there r lot much things missing .........

kyun tum har baar kk ko bed par leti rhti honnn ...

why u ha made her cry so much .........asli series mein bi kabi nahi royi hogi itna ..........

wel i would lke to se much of romance & pyaar bari baatein ..........

meeti nok jhok ......but its like much of dukh bari daasstaan ...........

well now good things r more in ur ff

acchi baat hain tune sukk ko akle rakha imean not with tht family trroop,tho i think u can make good use of tht concept .............

matlab ......ye bacche ke khel se thoda hatke.............

aur sumit se hodi bahut gussa jataaon ..........would like to see more of their bachapn ka flash backs ........in college ...beor marriage ..how did they get to marry ..............

but all the way i rate ur ff with 7 marks for 10.........

but ur dialogues r to good .....let sukk to be loing each othr always ...........& bring stil more creative things yaar ,,,,..........

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shreya

@shreya baldwa

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#1058

hamare kk ke aason bht kemte hain and mai ye kemti diamonds ko khona nahi chahti.ab kk aur su ke life mein happy moments shuru karne chahiye.what say?till now too good sonu di