FF- Is Pyar Ko Kya Naam Dun*Updatd Pg122* - Page 89

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Posted: 17 years ago
@ reshu : thanku bachchaaaaa 🤗 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
@ kashish : thanku bachcha ... 😳 glad u liked it.. 😊

@ nitz : thanku bachcha.. 😛 hope it was long enough 4 u... 😉

@ janu : thanku bachchaaa 😳 this , the sweetest... thankss 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
Just read this FF. Real good................
Keep going 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ Indiajapan : hey bachcha.... thanks for liking it. 😳 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Its such a long time without a new update 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
^^ Thanku and sorry..... 😳

Am so sorry bachcha log.. I lnow I am tooo lateee 😳 ab sazaa de do.. but am updating a longggggggggg part hope u all like it.. 😊



Kumkum was passing near Prachi's room, when she hears Prachi and her mom talking…

Pr : Mom kal shaadi ho jaayegi meri… mujhe miss karogi naa..?? 😳

Pr's Mom : nahi to.. waise bhi tu to yahan rehti hai Mumbai mein… aur hum sab Delhi mein… 😉

Pr : Mommmm…

Pr's Mom (holds her hands and Prachi hugs her) : Beta … tu meri pyaari bachchi hai.. aur beti kahin bhi rahe .. maa se door kabhi nahi ho sakti… samjhiii.. 😊 😳

Kumkum listens to the conversation and moves towards her room. She closes the door and sits on her bed. Then she remembers all the sweet moments spent with her family… 😳 A tear runs down her cheek… Till then her mobile rings. She wipes her tear and sees, it's Sumit. 😳

Kk : Hello… Sumit..

Su : Kya kar rahi thi?... Mere baare mein soch rahi thi? 😛

Kk : Hunh… (after a pause) Nahi wo… 😭

Su : To phir kiske baare mein? Koi aur pasand aa gaya kya? 😆

Kk : Sumit…

Su : Okk baba . mazaak kar raha tha… ab suno.. mujhe tumse milna hai aaj… infact abhi… 😛

Kk : Milna?.. Kyun? Kya hua? 😕

Su : Tumse milne ke liye kuch hona zaruri hai kya? Arey aise hi nahi mil sakta… 😛

Kk : Par sumit.. yahan itne log hain.. aur kal shaadi hai to… 😕

Su : Haan… pata hai… par aaj koi function nahi hai.. jo hai wo bade sambhalenge.. hamara kya kaam? 😉

Kk : Nahi Sumit.. koi rasam hoti hai wo… 😳

Su : Ohho.. kuch der ke liye milne mein tumhe kya ho raha hai? 😡

Kk : Nahi Sumit .. mujhe koi problem nahi hai par… 😳

Su : Rehne do Kumkum… koi bahana mat dhoondho… it's okk.. mat milo… bye. 😡

Kk : Hello.. Sumit….

He had disconnected, she was too tense already remembering her parents, now this… She kept the mobile and sat down with her head kept on her knee…..

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Kumkum had slept in that position, somebody knocks so she awakens.

Kk : Kaun hai?

A servant enters with food.

Kumkum luks at the food, she was already upset..

Kk : Khaana le jao… mujhe bhook nahi hai.

Then she stands near the bed.

Servant : Ma'am, Prachi ma'am ne bheja hai.. aur poocha hai koi problem hai kya? 😳

Kk : Nahi.. kuch nahi.. mujhe bas bhook nahi hai.. tum jao.. 😭

Servant : Lagta hai aap is shaadi se khush nahi hain.. ma'am abhi bhi waqt hai.. manaa kar dijiye.. 😉

Kk (angrily) : Tumhara kaam ho gaya to ab plz jao.. 😡

Then she goes and stands near window.

The servant closes the door… guessed right… it's Sumit… then he takes out his moustache and beard. 😉 😉

He slowly walks upto her and holds her by her waist… 😳

Kumkum was about to shout but then she felt Sumit's touch.. she recognized it.. 😳 😳

She turns, still, in his arms…

Sumit smiles and winks.. 😉

Kumkum hugs him tightly. Sumit too hugs her back and caresses her hair.

After sometime,

Su : Kumkum.. kya hua? Maine zyaada gussa dikha diya.. 😳

Kumkum doesn't answer, instead holds him more tightly. 😊

Su : Naraaz ho mujhse? 😳

Kumkum shakes her head negatively.

Su : darr lag raha hai? 😳

She nods positively, but very slowly.

Su : Main hun naa… tumhare saath… hamesha… achcha ab chalo mere saath… 😳

Kk (moving away) : kahan Sumit? 😕

Su : Phir sawaal.. bas chalo…

Kk : Parr…

Su : ssshhh… bohut bolti ho.. bas chalo… 😳

He makes her get ready as a maid and veils her.

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Sumit stops the car..

Kk : Hum yahan kyun aaye hain Sumit.. is hotel mein? 😕

Su : Arey car se to utro… bas aao… bina sawaal kiye… 😳

Then Sumit goes to the reception and asks something.. then he goes back to her..

Su : Chalo..

Kumkum knew he won't answer any of her questions so she follows him… then Sumit stops a place.. he turns towards her..and keeps luking at her… 😳 😳 😕

Kk : Kya hua?... aise kyun dekh rahe ho? 😕

Sumit keeps his hands on her shoulders and says,

Su : Ab meri baat dhyaan se suno… 😕

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Sumit opens a door, of a room. He enters slowly… then we see… Balbir, Kumkum's father stands up.. Manjeet also stands seeing him … Sudha and Chanchal also luk at Sumit… 😊

Bal : Tum… Tumne hume yahan bulwaya…. 😕

He luks at Manjeet confused…

Bal : Kya main jaan sakta hun kyun?.. aur tum hume kaise jaante ho? 😕

Su : Kumkum… aapki beti hai naa… 😳

Bal (shocked to hear about Kumkum) (mutters) : Kumkum… (speaks aloud) uski maut ho chuki hai… 😡 🤢

A tear runs down Manjeet's cheek.. she wipes it.

Su (luks at manjeet and then at balbir): jeete jee kaise maa sakte hain apni beti ko…

Manj : Tum jaante ho Kumkum ko.. wo.. 😭

She is about to take a step towards him, when Balbir holds her.

Bal : Aap kisi aur Kumkum ki baat kar rahe honge… 😡

Su : main sab jaanta hun uncle… sab kuch.. Bohut naraaz hain aap Kumkum se… jaanta hun… 😳 😳

Bal (surprised) : Tum.. Tum kaise…?

Sumit opens the door and Kumkum enters wearing a red and white saree… 😳

Balbir, manjeet and Sudha are shocked…

Chanchal goes near her and hugs her… they hug each other and cry for sometime… 😭 😭

Bal : Chanchal… (to Sumit) Yeh hamari beti nahi.. 😡 😭

Su : Uncle.. main jaanta hun Kumkum ne bohut badi galti ki hai.. khaas taur pe ek maa-baap ke liye yeh bohut zyaada badi galti hai.. par use bohut sazaa mil chuki hai… wo khud ko bohut sazaa de chuki hai.. aap log bhi to khud ko sazaa de rahe hain… aur uncle Kumkum ko apni galti ka ehsaas bhi hai… to aap log plzz ise maaf kar dijiye… 😳 😳

Manj : par tum Kumkum ko kaise jaante ho?

Sumit luks at Kumkum…

Su : Kal hamari shaadi hai… 😳

All four are shocked…

Su : Kumkum aap logon ki marzi , aap logon ki khushi ke bina yeh shaadi karke kabhi khush nahi reh paayegii… main jitni chahen koshish kar lun.. 😳 😳

Bal : Par tum Kumkum se kaise mile? 😕

Sumit tells them everything…

Su : Uncle.. aaj aap jis Sumit se mil rahe hain .. wo aisa nahi hota agar Kumkum meri zindagi mein nahi aati… Usne mujhe jeena sikhaya.. nayi zindagi di mujhe… 😳 😳 aur yahi nahi.. aapki beti ne bhi nayi zindagi paayi hai.. Kumkum pehle mujhse sirf pyaar karti thi.. magar ab wo pyaar ke saath mujhe samjhati hai… ab.. ab wo.. doosron ki khushiyon ka khud se zyaada khyaal rakhti hai.. main bas itna keh sakta hun ki Kumkum aapki beti hai.. maaf kar dijiye ise.. plzz 😳

He joins his hands. Kumkum luks at him through tears… 😳 😭

Bal (walks upto him) : To agar main is shaadi ke liye manaa kar dun to? 😕

Kumkum is shocked.. Sumit too..

Su : To yeh shaadi nahi hogi.. par phir kabhi bhi Sumit ki shaadi nahi hogi.. aur main daaw se keh sakta hun.. Kumkum adhoori reh jaayegi… 😳 😊

Bal : Meri bachchi ne bilkul sahi insaan chuna hai.. 😊

Then he goes to Kumkum… and caresses her hair…

Kk (hugs him) : I am sorry papaji… plzz mujhe maaf kar do.. 😭 😭

Manjeet also comes nearer…

Sumit is happy to see this… He smiles and leaves Kumkum with her special moments… 😊

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Kumkum comes out of the room, she was searching Sumit… she was very happy… as her parents had forgiven her and this happiness was given to her by Sumit… 😛 😃

At the reception,

Kk : Excuse me.. Mr. Sumit wadhwa.. 😛

Rec. : Ma'am he is in the hall… that side..

Kk : Thanku.

She goes there… and enters the hall.. and was surprised..

The hall was decorated beautifully… and was filled with balloons, flowers, Big Soft toys, cards.. 😃 Kumkum couldn't stop smiling… she went in and kissed a teddy bear… 😆 😃 danced with balloons on the floor… threw the flowers and chuckled… 😃 😃 😛 she was too happy to stop… Then she sees something written on the wall.. 😳

Thanku… Meri zindagi mein aane ke liye… Luv Sumit… 😊 😳

She smiled.. and luked around for Sumit… then she hears a voice near her ears…

" I Luv U" 😳

She smiles and turns… and finds Sumit standing…

Kk : Sumit… 😛

Sumit keeps finger on her lips…

Su : Ssshhh.. kuch kehne ki zarurat nahii… tumhara chehra sab keh raha hai…aur plz… thanku to bilkul mat kehna… 😳 main jaanta tha ki tum apne mummy-papa se tab se milna chahti ho jab se maine tumhe propose kiya.. aaj bhi isiliye tense thi naa.. jaanta hun… isiliye London se aate hi tumhe surprise dene ka plan kar liya tha… 😳

Kk : Mujhe thanks to kehne do… 😳

Su : Bilkul nahi… 😉

Kk : To tumne mujhe thanku kyun bola?.. 😳

She points towards that wall…

Su : Kyunki… tumhare bina to main jee hai sakta tha.. aur na sakunga… maine kuch galat nahi kaha tha Kumkum.. tum waqai meri zindagi ho…. 😳 😳

Kk : Main bhi tumhare liye jee.. apni zindagi tumhe saunp di… to mujhe yeh haq kyun nahi? 😳

Su : tumhe sach mein thanks karna hai… 😉

Kumkum nods innocently… 😊

Sumit comes very close to her…

Su : To karoo…. 😉 😉

Kumkum blushes as he meant that she should kiss him..

Kk : Su.. sumit… 😳 😳

Su : Kya hua? Main khud le lun apna thanks… 😉

Kumkum luked down and blushed…

Sumit went nearer and kissed her.. then slowly kissed her cheek… then he kissed her neck… 😳 😳 Kumkum had already surrendered her self… 😳 she turned her face a little.. but Sumit pulled her closer… 😉 😉 and kissed her again… 😳 😉

Then Sumit's mobile rings… Kumkum moved away and was red due to embarrassment.. 😳 😳 Sumit held her by waist and then received the call…

Su : Hello..

Pr : Bhai saahab.. dulhan ko lekar kahan gayab ho gaye? 😆 😆

Su : Haan Prachi .. wo main…

He explains her everything..

Pr :Ohh wow.. chalo jaldi lekar aao.. am waiting.. 😃

Su : Okk.

Kumkum was still blushing due to what happened few minutes before… 😳 😳

Su : Ab chalo.. warna uncle aunty kahenge.. ki kahan gaayab ho gaye… 😆 😆

He kisses her forehead and they move..

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Theyreach the room and see Balbir and Manjeet ready with the bags.

Su : Uncle… aunty.. aap log…. 😕

Bal : Beta humne Kumkum ko maaf zarur kar diya.. par hum yahan nahi reh sakte… hum apne ghar mein us kasbe mein hi theek hain… 😳 😳

Su : magar Uncle.. 😕

Manj : Haan beta.. hum yahan nahi reh paayenge.. par ab hume Kumkum se koi shikayat nahi… hume khushi hai ki tum ho iske saath…magar hum yahan nahi reh sakte… 😳 😳

Su : magar …

Kk : Nahi Sumit.. Mummyji-papaji apni jagah sahi hain.. (she goes to balbir) aap log chale jaaiye papaji magar apni beti ko aashirwaad to de dijiye.. 😳 😭

Bal : Puttar hamara aashirwaad hamesha tumhare saath hai.. 😳 😳

Kumkum hugs him.. and then her mother…

Kk : papaji.. par Sudha aur Chanchal ko rehne dijiye.. 😳 😭

Su : Haan Uncle.. shaadi ke baad main unhe khud waapas bhej dunga… 😳

Manj : beta…

Su : Nahi aunty.. humne aapki baat maani.. ab aap hamari ek baat maan lijiye…plzz 😳 😳

Bal : Theek hai beta..

Kumkum smiles.. she hugs her parents and sumit takes blessingsfrom them.. and bid them adieu.
😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
verni it was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet 😛 😛 😛
loved it 😛 abb sara kushi kushi sukk k zindhagi may 😛
fantastic verni 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey verni it's brillant yaar.
I agree, it was a long part lekin itna acha tha ke pata hi nahi chala ke time ka, brillant, fabulous work, u write it very beautifully 👏 👏 👏
continue soon

Kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
tera to jawaab nahi yaar...that was soooo briliant. 👏 .
finally kk se sir se bogh utar gaya... 😛
ek hi part romance bhi..aur emotions bhi... 😛 👏

vaise saza to milni chahiye naa...
bas aise hi shandar parts likhti rehna...hamesha...dis is yr saza.. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Di😍
kya part lekha hai...o ho i'm speechless.. 😳 😳 😳 ...aap nai mujai batai tha na ki u will update.tab sai daily check kar rahi hu.. 😳 ..see how sweet i'm.. 😳 😆 ..any ways the part was SUPERB,,OUTSTANDIND di. 👏
👏 .kya bolu i'm speechless..sabd nahi hai actually..

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