FF- Love Me! Hate Me! Part 5 pg 12 - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
haan reshu....henna horse se bhi gr8 hai....usse bhi aageeeee 😆

waiting henna..........na na.....not for ff.......for 18th to get over...phir ff ka wait karungiiii 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: coolpal

Hey Henna, i just started reading your FF and it's too good!! 😊 Great concept, something different and refreshing. Loved every bit!!Keep it up!! 😃



awww thnku... dats so sweet of u...😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: verni

haan reshu....henna horse se bhi gr8 hai....usse bhi aageeeee 😆

waiting henna..........na na.....not for ff.......for 18th to get over...phir ff ka wait karungiiii 😉



verni yaarrrr....*sighs* ab tujhe kya kahun? 😳....

concentrate on ur exams not on wat names reshu is calling me☺️

will be waiting verni 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
Ahem ahem henna..I m not giving u any names 😆 😆 ...

Just writing facts..okk 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55

The apartment:


Might be a little different from that described in part2 But not that different. Just to help u guys visualize it all better.


Part 3-


After a while Sumit steps out of his room. He sees the girl conversing on the phone lost in her own world. Sumit goes and stands behind waiting for her to turn and look at him. At first he waits patiently, after a while his patience starts wearing thin.

He clears his throat loudly. The girl turns around looking annoyed at the disturbance. She thinks to herself the guy doesn't have any manners at all. She continues her conversation on her mobile. Sumit being unable to stand anymore of the waiting cuts in.

Sumit: Suno...

The girl tries her best to continue talking. Sumit interrupts her again.

Sumit: Oye, karwahut ki rani.

The girl turns towards his giving him the most envious look she can manage. She asks the person on the phone to hold on a minute. Angrily she asked Sumit what he wants.


Girl: Ab kya hai?

Sumit: Kuch nahi, bas tumhe yeh chaabi dehni thi.


The girl rolls her eyes thinking couldn't this wait. She puts her hand out waiting for Sumit it to drop it onto her hand. Sumit looks at the way she perceives him and doesn't approve. He answers her rudeness back by ignoring her gesture and placing the key on the table beside the girl.

The girl looks at Sumit, mouth wide open convincing herself the he has no manners. Sumit straightens his collars; pleased with himself he leaves the apartment. The girl watches him leave muttering under her breath.


Girl: Acha hua apartment hi chodke chala gaya... nahi toh... urrghh!!


She goes back to her conversation on her mobile feeling a little annoyed now. The person on the phone can sense this and asks what the matter is.

Person: Kumkum, tu itna gussa kis pe kar rahi hai? aur yeh kaun hai jisse tu abhi abhi baatein kar rahi thi?

Kumkum: Koi nahi hai Anju, bas ek pagal hai jo mere galleh pad gaya hai.


Kumkum tells her friend the whole story from the beginning. She tells her how the landlord got greedy on seeing the rivalry between the guy and her, leaving no other option for her but to share. Anjali (Anju) sighs on hearing this. However, she assures Kumkum that all is not too bad.

Anju: KK, dekh tujhe rehne ke liye jugah toh mil gayi na. Aur tujhe kya chahiye?

Kumkum: Haan yeh toh hai Anju, lehkin woh ladka uff!

Anju: Shukar kar ke woh bhi hindustani hi hai. Kuch toh tameez hogi na usse.

Kumkum: hmm

Anju: kya hmm?... acha tu iske baare mein zyaada mutt soch. Bol cheezein wahan kab shift karni hai tujhe?

Kumkum: abhi hi kar lehte hai Anju. Woh abhi bahar gaya hua hai, thank god! Beech mein taang adhaane ke liye koi nahi hai.


Anjali laughs to herself trying to not let Kumkum get wind of her finding the whole situation amusing.

Anju: Acha chal theek hai aati hoon kuch dair mein tera samaan leke.

Kumkum: acha theek hai, bye!


Kumkum hangs up the phone and looks around the apartment and sighs. Just as she does so her gaze falls upon the bedroom door. She gets a little curious, then a little more curious. Finally giving into her curiosity she goes to the door. She wonders to herself what the room looks like. Although she saw if briefly before Kumkum feels she missed the fine detail of it.


On the other hand, Sumit reaches his old flat. Unwillingly he goes inside. Everything is just where he left it in a mess. Sumit not wanting to look around hurriedly he picks up a few boxes he had packed beforehand and puts them into the hallway. Just before he turns to leave, he glances back towards a room. The door is firmly shut. He looks at it coldly feeling angry. His eyes fill up with tears. Trying not to let his tears escaped he shuts his eyes and leaves the flat closing the door behind him.


Finally u have the girl's name... hope ur happy now...😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
He he 😆 😆 ..thank u henna for letting us know the girl's name finally 😆 .. jaise ke humein pata hi nahi tha 😆 😆

And wht a diff way to present ff 😉 ..layout of the apt 😉 ..for once I thought I m looking at some resort project of my university 😆 😆 ...

Keep going..fantastic writeup 👏 👏 ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
awwwwwww such a cutee part Hennie 😳 😳 ..Loved it completely...lovely pic 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
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simply amazing too goood awesum mindblowing yaar..n that apartment..just love it
yaar ab y sumit has tears in his eyes..he shuld b happy k issi bahane wo kk se mil gaya hai 😳 😆 i guess dheere dheere samjhega
continue asap..plz...itni w8 mat karwaya karo
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
finally name is out ithna suspence tho detective story may bhi nahi hotha 😆 😆 .
heena tell me beside flats r vacent na i am booking one 😆 (if not also i will make it vacent) 😆 .
dont make us wait more now cont 😳 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: amrit23

yaar cant w8 4 long now..
the story is going gr8..wanna read more n more of it..
after all..there will b no veena , kul dada dadi etc etc 😆 n no knocks on the door 😆 😆
continue soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon henna 😳



ohho sorry yaar... tera comment forgots ... abhi hi noticed...😳 sorry...

yaar chote patience plzzz.... I know tujhse wait nahi hota... 😆

yup no dadi wadi... who dadi? 😆

young ppls ff hai yeh...

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