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Posted: 17 years ago
#91
Yaar, aur kitni galatfemiya. Plz, jaldi ek kardo. Great going magar jab tak woh dono ek nahi hote likhna chalu rakkho.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#92
hi friends,
sorry for making u all waiting for a long time.... 😭
i and jj will try to update the ff within this week .... 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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part 21

kk gets shocked on hearing this.....
tears fill her eyes and without saying anything she goes to her room and locks it...

kk breaks down and starts crying "maine socha ki ab main su ko apne pyaar ke baarey mein bataoongi par
phir ek bar su ne meri viswas ko toda....ab main kya karoon.....kaise su ko samjhahon ki main
usse bahut pyar karti hoon..."

kk cries a lot and sleeps.....

the next morning.....
su gets up .....and sees coffee ready on the table ....
he drinks it and goes inside the bathroom ....there towel is also ready....
after bath su comes out and sees all his things his wallet,his mobile,his pen etc are kept ready
on the bed....su gets surprised "ye kya hai..mera sab samaan taiyyar hai...kisne kiya hoga....kk ne hi kiya hoga
par kk ye sab kyun kar rahi hai...."

as su is thinking about this the phone rings and su takes it....at the same time kk also takes the phone
parallely...

kk: hello....
the other end:hello....kk ...main rishi bol raha hoon...
su gets annoyed and sliently hears their conversation....
kk:rishi...tum...kaise ho....
rishi:tumara intezar karte karte main kaisa hoga??tumhari aawaz sunkar hi meri jaan mein jaan aa gayi...
kk:hmmm....mujhe pata hai....
su is hearing this and gets angry.....
rishi:kk...mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai....
kk:rishi.....isme darne ki kya baat hai....tumne pyar kiya hai isme kuch galat to nahi hai....
rishi: phir bhi kk...
kk:rishi....main hooon na....tumhe ghabrane ki koi zaroorat nahi...tumne pyar kiya aur tumare pyar ko
anjaam tak pahunchane ki koshish kar rahe hain hum..isme kya bura hai...
su is fuming with anger.....
kk:aur ....waise bhi main hoon na tumare sath..main tumari har koshish mein tumare sath hoon...hamesha ...
su cant hear further so he keeps the phone....
su "maine kabhi nahi socha ki kk itna gir sakti hai...buaji ne theek kaha...ab mujhe
jald hi kuch faisla lena hoga.."
rishi:kk...thank u very much.....
kk:its ok.....tum kal hi aana... main tumare parents se baat karoongi...mujhe vishwas hai woh man jayenge...
aur uske baad anju ke sath tumhari shadi...
rishi(shies):bhabhi.......
kk:are sharm aa gayi kya...theek hai main rakhti hoon...su ka khana lagana hai...
rishi:theek hai...
kk:haan...rishi...ek aur baat..tum su ko iske barey mein kuch mat kehna....unko surprise denge hum...
rishi:haan....acha idea hai....main kal subhah 9'o clock apko lene aaoonga ...taiyyar raheyega...
kk:zarooor....
kk keeps the phone...and goes to make breakfast for su...

su still in angry mood comes out of his room ...
kk:su...khana laga diya hai maine....aao...
su gives an angry look at kk and goes and sits.....kk serves breakfast to him...
kk:su...aaj sab khana aapka favourite hai....khakar batayiye kaisa hai....
su takes a piece and puts it in his mouth....
suddenly su spits it and takes the plate and throws it on the floor...and starts shouting at kk...
su:ye..kya khana hai...maine tumhe khana banane ke liye kaha hai kya?? kyun tum bar bar aisa natak kar rahi ho???
yahaan to koi nahi hai na ....to tumhe natak karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...."
kk is completely shattered keeps on starring at su....
su:main to yahan chain se kuch din ke liye rehne aaya hoon..mujhe plsss disturb mat karo...ghar wapas jaate hi
is musibat ka koi na koi solution dhoondna hoga mujhe....ab mera dum ghutne laga hai...is ke phele main
mar jaoon mujhe tumse aazad hona hai...
kk is really very much hurt on hearing su's words...
kk:su aisa mat kaho...main kisi par bhi bojh bankar nahi rehna chahti hoon...agar tumare dil main yahi hai...to
main india wapas jate hi wadhwa parivar ko chodkar jaoongi....ye mera wada hai....
su doesn't tell anything and leaves for office.....

in the office su is not able to do his work as all the things happened in the morning keeps on
disturbing him a lot ....
kk "ab mujhe ye pata chal gaya hai ki su ka pyar mujhe kabhi nahi milega.....main su ki kushi ke liye kuch bhi
karoongi...agar su ki khushi mere jane se hi hai to main woh bhi karne ke liye taiyyar hoon...
main su ki yaadoon ke sath apna jeevan bita doongi..."
kk cries the whole day .........

the next day su leaves for office.....
on the way su finds that he has forgotten a file and so he decides to return back home to get it....

at home....
rishi comes to take kk....
both rishi and kk start to leave...
as rishi and kk get in the car to leave su comes there and sees them....
su gets shocked and follows them....
rishi and kk reach rishi's house and both get in.....
su too reaches dere and gets confused....
su"rishi aur kk....rishi ghar kyun jaa gaya hai...mujhe pata lagana hoga.....yeh sab kya hai..."
su comes near he window and starts watching wats going on inside...
rishi introduces kk to his parents...
rishi:ma..pa..yeh hai kk...su ki patni......
they both welcome kk and start talking ....
after sometime.....
kk:uncle...aunty....mujhe aap se ek zaroori baat karni hai..
rishi's mom:haan...kaho kk kya baat hai...
kk(with hesitation):woh....main....meri behan anju aur rishi ki shadi ke bare main bat karni hai....
rishi's parents get shocked....
su standing outside too gets shocked......


Edited by jj thomson - 17 years ago
preethi thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#94
u stoped at wrong movement 😭 .
great story 😛 .cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#95
yes please continue soon.............waiting for the next part.please don't delay it for long....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#96
hope ab su ki galatfehmi dur ho
😊

carry on 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#97
👏 👏 awesum part
cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#98
please continue quickly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
#99
hi

thansk for this. great woek. keep it up

norzar
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great, kash Sumit ko sab pata chal jaaye aur KUMKUM KO APNE DIL SE APNALE> Magar great, really too good ab jaldi likho, ruko mat.

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