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Yaar, great direction. Nice part. Write soon.
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great
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Episode no.21

Anita:-kahan reh gayi thi tu????
Anjali:-ab aa gayi naK.
Anita:-tu theek to hain na......
Anjali:-haan main bilkul theek hoon..
Anita:-pakka?????
Anjali:-chal naaK..pakkaa.
Anita:-theek hain chalK.
Anjali:-kya baat hain aaj to tu bahut khush lag rahi hain..
Anitaƒthinks about angad) bas yuhiK..
Anjali:-tu aur yuhi khush ho jayeK..yeh baat to hazam nahi huiK..bata naK
Anita:-abhi chal baad mein batati hoonK.
Anjali:-promiseK.
Anita:-tu bhi naK.acha baba promiseK..
(in the hall)
Teacher:-students after 1 hr. we will leave for the tripKK.register yourself and do take a breakK.
Anjali:-cha cafeteria chalet hainK
Anita:-chalK.
Anjali:-ab bataaK
Anita:-kya?
Anjali:-acha kya?
Anita:-haanK..
Anjali:-yehi kit u itni khush kyun hainK..
Anita:-main?
Anjali:-anitaK..
Anita:-theek hain bataati hoonKKangadK.
Anjali:-kya eri khushi ki wajah angad hainKK
Anita:-haan anjali wo bilkul badal gaya hainKK
Anjali:-matlab?????
Anita:-aaj wo ladkiyon ki izzat karta hainKKaur isi badlaav se main bahut khush hoonK..
Anjali:-kahin tu angad se?????
Anita:-pata nahinKK.mujhe lagta hainKpata nahinK
Anjali:-main bahut khush hoon tere liyeK.
Anita:-sach?
Anjali:-haan varnaK..

Break

Anita:-varna kya????
Anjali:-varna sab tere tarah khushkismat nahin hote hainK..ki pyar ek khushboo banker aaye aur pure zindagi ko khushiyon se mehka deK.
Anita:-maine jyada zindagi ko nahin parkha hain par haan jitna jaana hain usse yeh to zaroor
Jaana hain ki zindagi mein haar usi ki hoti hain jo zindagi se haar jaate hain...
Ladna hi duniya ka dastoor hain....
Anjali:-jaanti hoon lekin kabhi kabhi insaan ka
Aatma-vishwas use is kadar jhakjhor deta hain ki usme aur ladne ki himmat nahin hoti hainK.
Anita:-lekin yeh toh tumhaari haar hoti hain naK
Anjali:-pata nahin....
Anita:-to jaan lo ki tumhaare haar ka matlab
Tumhaare pyar ki haar hain...
Kya apne pyar ko haarte hue dekh paaogi....????????
Anjali:-jis pyar ke liye ladh rahi hoon .
Wo pyar bhi toh sath nahin hain....
Anita:- pyar toh sath na hoke bhi paas hainK.
Anjali:-dur hoke bhi dil ke sath hainK.
Anita:-hothon par na hoke bhi aankhon mein hainK
Anjali:-haathon par hath na hoke bhi mann ke paas hain.....
Anita:-dimaag mein nahin balki saanson mein hain...
Anjali:-har taraf usi ki muskarahat hain....
Anita:-uski saansen har pal ko haseen bana deti hainK
Anjali:-wo pyar hi hain jisse zindagi khubsurat lagne lagti hainK
Anita:-wo pyar hi hain jisse ki jeene ka man karta hainK
Anjali:-aaj agar wo sath hain toh har mushkil apna raasta tai kar leti hainK
Anita:-sach kaha hain kisine ki agar pyar na ho toh zindagi bilkul feeki lagti hainK
(both start laughing)
Anjali:-dekh ab toh tub hi pyar ko samajhne lag gayi hainK
Anita:-pata nahin agar yeh pyar hain tohK..
Rahul:-to mat do apne aap ko dhokhaK.

Break

Anita:-rahul tum??????
Rahul:-haan mainK.
Anita:-baat kya hainK.
Rahul:-main tumhe aagah karma chahta hoonK
Anita:-kisse??
Rahul:-is insaan se
(points towards anjali and anjali looks down)
Anjali:-rahul yeh tum kyaK.
Rahul:-shut upK.
Anita:-rahulK.
Rahul:-aaj tum is ladki ki sachaai nahin jaanti ho lekin ek din yeh tumhe bhi dhokha de degi jios tarah isne mujhe diya hainK..
Anjali:-tum ek baar meri baat to sun loK.
Rahul:-apni yeh manghadan kahani kisi aur ko sunanaK..
Anita:-rahul agar wok eh rahi hainK.
Rahul:-kehti hi toh aayi hain yeh lekin ab iske kisi baat ka asar mujhpar nahin hogaK.iske chehre se naqaab hat gaya hainKaur iska asli chehra mere saamne aa gaya hainK.
Anjali:-aisa kya sach tumhaare saamne aaya hainK
Rahul:-bano matK.tum ache se jaanti ho ki amin kya keh raha hoonK
Anita:-rahul tum bina sach jaane asisa nahin keh sakteK.
Rahul:-agar main nahin jaanta toh tum hi bata do ki sach kya ahinK.
Anita-theek hain main tumhe aaj sach batati hoonK
(anajli holds her hand)
Anita:-anjaliK.
Anjali:-anitaKK
Rahul:-bas ho gayaK..kaho na sach kya hainK.tum jaanti ho ki main hi scah keh raha hoonK.
Anita:-ek din tum zaroor sach tak pahuchoge aur us din tum bahut pachtaaogeK..
Rahul:-is jhooth se toh koi sach nahin hainK.yeh ladki upar se neeche tak sirf ek chalaava hainK.
Anjali:-bas rahul basK..main ab tak chup rahi lekin ab tumne wo kaha hain jiske liye main tumhe maaf nahin karungiK..
Aaj tumne mere rishto ko dhokha kaha hain jin rishto ko maine sache dil se nibhaaya ahinK.tumne mere aatma samman par ungli uthaayi hain aur iske liye &n bsp; &n bsp; &n bsp; &n bsp; main tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karungiK.
(anjali leaves and so does anita, rahul keeps looking)

End
Precap:-rahul gets to know the truth and is broken down
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Episode no.22

Anita:-anjali ruk ja anjali ruk toh…..
Anjali:-mujhe akela chod do anita…
Anita:-anjali ruk….
(anjali stops)
Anita:-tu wahan se bhaag kar kyun aa gayi….
Anjali:-toh aur kya karti apna aur mazaak bante hue dekhti....
Anita:-par bhaag kar aane se tu is ilzaam se toh nahi bach sakti ji ki rahul ne tujh par lagaaye hain....
Anjali:-jaanti hoon ki main jahan bhi jaaungi yeh ilzaam hamesha mere saath rahega lekin...
Anita:-lekin kya....
Anjali:-lekin....main jaanti hoon...
Anita:-tu kuch nahi jaanti
Anjali:-tu nahin samjhegi...
Anita:-main nahin samajhti....
Anjali:-anita kya hum is baare mein baat karna…
Anita:-nahin jo tum chahti ho wo nahin ho sakta...
Anjali:-main kya karoon….main aur nahin she sakti….
Anita:-agar nahin seh sakti toh sach kyun nahin bata deti use …
Anjali:-jahan vishwas nahin hota hain wahan koi bhi baat kitni bhi sach kyun na ho….jhhooth hi lagti hain…
Anita:-toh kya sari zindagi isi bojh tale rahogi….
Anjali:-sahayd yehi meri zindagi hain hain…
Anita:-zindagi ko naseeb ka naam mat do…
Anjali:-ab main kuch nahin kar sakti...
Anita:-tu nahin kar sakti toh main karungi....
Anjali:-tu aisa kuch nahin karegi...
Anita:-par kyun???
Anjali:-kyunki main ab rahul ke baare mein kuch nahin sunna chahti...
Anita:-theek hain…main usse kuch nahin kahungi…lekin tujhe…..


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Anjali:-lekin mujhe kya?????
Anita:-tujhe mere aankhon mein dekh kar kehna hoga ki tu rahul ko bhula sakti hain…
Anjali:-haan main us bhool sakti hoon…
Anita:-aise nahin tujhe yehi baat meri annkhon mein dekh kar kehna hoga….
Anjali:-anita yeh kaisa mazaak hain….
Anita:-mazaak toh tu kar rahi hain anjali….main toh sirh sach keh rahi hoon…
Anajli:-yeh sach nahin hain…
Anita:-toh sach kya hain….
Anjali:-sach yeh hi hain ki main ab theek hoon aur is baare mein aur kuch nahin sunna chahti….
Anita:-kisse jhooth keh rahi hain…
Anjali:-aakhir tu chahti kya ahin….
Anita:-main sirf itna chahti hoon ki tu khush rahe…
Anjali:-main khush rahungi…
Anita:-yeh tu bhi ache se jaanti hain ki pyar se dur hokar koi sirf saanse le sakta hain aur naki zindagi jee sakta hain…
Anjali:-lekin ab meri kismat mein yehi hain…
Anita:-par tu yeh kaise keh sakti hain ki yehi teri zindagi ki kismat hain….
Anjali:-kyunki yeh uska ishaara hain aur uske banaaye is khel mein hum sirf uske liye khiladi hain jiski har ek chal uske ishaare par hoti hain…
Anita:-ek baar koshish toh kar ke dekh ho sakta hain ki teri ismat ka likha kuch aur hi ho….
Anjali:-agar kuch aur hi likha hain phir bhi main use nahin maanungi…
Anita:-par kyun??????
Anjali:-kyunki aaj jo usne kaha hain wo har ek lafz is kadar the ki mujhme aur shakti nahin hain ki main apni sahaai uske saamne keh sakoo…
Anita:-main jaanti hoon…
Anjali:-aaj usne meri beizati nahin balki mere mann mein base uske liye pyar ka mazaak banaya hain….aur main yeh bardaast nahin kar sakti…
Anita:-kya tu use maaf nahi karegi…
Anjali:-main phir bhi insaan hone ke naate use maaf kar du lekin us payr ke naate main use kabhi maaf nahin kar sakti jiska usne mazaak bana diya hain….aur ab agar tu mujhe khush dekhna chahti hain toh please uske baare mein baat karna bhul ja….please…
Anita:-theek hain agar tu isi mein khush hian toh main kuch nahin kahungi…ab chal…
Anjali:-chalo….
(robby over hears all the conversation)

Break

Robby:-nahin anjali main tumhaare is aihsaan ko tumhaari kismat nahin banne dunga….tumne mujhe mere pyar ko dilaane mein jo madad ki hain aur ab meri baari hain…
(robby goes to rahul)
Robby:-rahul mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hain…
Rahul:-lekin mujhe tumse koi baat nahin karni hain…
Robby:-aaj toh tumhe meri baat sunne hi padegi....
Rahul:-maine kaha na .......
Robby:-aur maine bhi kaha na ki tumhe meri baat ko sunna hi hoga...
Rahul:-aisi akun si baat hain ki tum mujhse is kadar kehna chahte ho...
Robby:-anjali....
Rahul:-anjali...oh so sorry ya yeh kahoon ki tum apni girlfriend ke baare mein mujhse kehne aaye ho...kahin....
Robby:-shut up rahul...
Rahul:-kis kis ka muh band karoge robby.....
Robby:-muh toh us insaan ki band karne ki zaroorat hoti hain jinke dimaag mein sirf gandagi hoti hain….
Rahul:-ab tum mujmhe bataaoge ki kaun saccha hain aur kaun jhootha...
Robby:-sach aur jhooth ko koi parde ki zaroorat nahin hoti hain....dono mein sirf nazariye ka faasla hain....
Rahul:-wow...itni achi baatein toh tumhe wo anjali hi sikha sakti hain....she is nothing but a .....
Robby:-rahul….
Rahul:-kya hua maine kluch bura kaha kya…..
Robby:-bure tumhaare baatein nahin balki tumhaari soch ho gayi hain…
Rahul:-aur use bura kisi ne nahin balki usio ladki ne banaaya hain jisne hum dono ko faasa…
Robby:-kitna zeher badha hua hain tumhaare andar….
Rahul:-tumne toh sirf us zeher ko dekha hain lekin jitni nafrat mujhme hain wo toh tum andaaza bhi nahin laga sakte…
Robby:-itni aag se mat badho….kabhi kabhi yeh aag hi hume us jagah le jaati hain jahan yeh hume hi apne jhapte mein l;e leti haoin aur hum kitni bhi koshish kar le in lapto se nahin nikal sakte…
Rahul:-mujhe aur in baaton mein nahin ulajhna hain……us jhuth ke baare mein mujhe…..
Robby:-jhuth yeh hain ki wo mujhse pyar karti hain…
(rahul stops and shocks)
Robby:-jhuth hain jo tumne dekha…..jhuth hain jo maine kaha….jhuth hain wo haalaat jisne use majboor kliya ki wo aisa kahe……aur jhuth hain uske liye tumhaari nafrat ke ilzaam…. In sab mein ek sach hain ki usne tumse sirf tumse hi payr kiya….par afsos tum use hi nahin samajh paaye…..tum nahin samajh paaye…..kami usme nahin balki tumhaare pyar mein thi….
(rahul crying and turns back with eyes filled with tears and broken down soul)

End
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continue soon
hope rahul goes to anjali and says sorry
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hi great part.continue soon.having fun while reading. 👏 👏
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Great, great, great. It's such a memorable part, magar woh dono ek ho iska intezar hai muje to please, jaldi likho.
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Episode no.23

Rahul:-yyyeeeeehhh kkkkyyaa keh rahe….rahe ho tum….
Robby:-kyun nikal gayi na pairon tale zameen…..
Rahul:-tumhaara matlab i...
Robby:-taras aata hain mujhe tum par......kitne badlismat ho tum....
Rahul:-nahin yeh nahin ho sakta….
Robby:-nahin to wo hona chaiye tha jo ki tumne ab tak kiya haiin…
Rahul:-yeh sab kya keh rahe ho tum….
Robby:-main wok eh raha hoon jo ki mujhe bahut pehle kah dena chahiye tha par….
Rahul:-par kya??????
Robby:-par mujhe anjali ke kasam ne baandh kar rakha tha…..
Rahul:-kaisi kasam…
Robby:-kasam us sacchhai ko chupaane ki jise wo tumse kehna chahti thi…..par tum sunna nahin chahte the….
Rahul:-saaf saaf kaho …
Robby:-sun paoge ……..itni himmat hogi tumme…
Rahul:-haan main sunna chahta hoon wo sach…
Robby:-toh suno…..
Rahul:-kaho…
Robby:-anjali jaisi ladki kismet waalon ke naseeb mein hoti hain…..par…
Rahul:-yeh nahin ho sakta..maine khud kripa ko dekha anjali se kehte hue ki wo aur tum…
Robby:-kabhi kabhi hum baatoan ko nahin samajh sakte….
Rahul:-kya matlab???
Robby:-matlab ki yeh ki tumne jo kuch bhi suna wo sirf ek dhokha tha….
Rahul:-aisa nahin ho sakta….
Robby:-aaj tumne toh apne hi pyar ko kitna chota kar diya….tumhe apne pyar par hi vishwas nahin tha …..tumne kisi ki baat maan li….
Rahul:-maine khud anjali ko is baat ka ikraar karte suna tha…
Robby:-tumhe pata hain ki jab ek bandar apne maalik matlab ki madaari ke ishaare pe naach raha hota hain apne saath us bandariya ke saath toh uska isme koi faayda nahin hota hain ...yeh sirf uska pyar aur izzat hain apne saathi ke prati aur jab koi aur bandar usse sawaal karta hain ki wo apne saathi se payr karta hain ki nahin to uska jawaab sirf haan hota hain....tab uske is jawaab ko bilkul galat tarike mein dusri bandariya le leti hain.....
Rahul:-tum kehna kya chahte ho...
Robby:-is kahaani ke kirdaar hum hi hain…..

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Robby:-anjali ne sirf apne dosti ka farz nibhaaya…
Rahul:-matlab??
Robby:-matlab yeh ki anjali ne apne pyar ko andekaha kar mere pyar ki rakhsha ki …..
Rahul:-tumhaara pyar…..
Robby:-haan mera pyar…
Rahul:-par tum toh anjali se….
Robby:-anjali ka acha dost hoon…..
Rahul:-dddooooossstttttttt…..
Robby:-haan dost….pyar main kisi aur se karta hoon…
Rahul:-kisi aur se......
Robby:-haan jo ki anjali nahin hain...
Rahul:-kaun hain….kaun????????
Robby:-kripa…..
Rahul:-krrriiiiiippppppaaaaaa???????
Robby:-haan kripa……..
Rahul:-toh phir us din…
Robby:-us din job hi hua wo sab ek dhokha tha….kripa angad se pyar karti hain jo ki sirf uska istemal karta hain aur isiliye…
Rahul:-isiliye kyya??
Robby:-isiliye anjali ne kripa ke saamne mera pyar hone ka naatak kiya taaki uske dil mein jalan hoye aur wo mujhse…..
Rahul:-iska matlab??
Robby:-iska matlab ki anjali ne apne dosti ka farz bakhoobi nibhaaya…..arey us ladki kya kisi ko dhokha degi…..wo toh dusro ke liye hi jeeti hain aur tumne usi par dhokhe ka ilzaam laga diya…..samajh nahin aa raha hain ki tumhe badkismat kahoo ya phir tumhaare bewakoofi par hasoon…
Rahul:-us din caf mein bhi usne kaha...jab main copy lene aaya tha....
Robby:-tumne anjali ko toph dekha lekin kripa ko waha khada nahin dekha……..
Rahul:-yeh kya…..
Robby:-sach kaha hain kisi ne adha sach pure jhuth se bhi khatarnaak hota hain….
(rahul looks up and sits down)

Break

Rahul:-yeh mujhse kya ho gaya …maine…
Robby:-tumne us anjali ka dil dukhaaya hain jisne sabse jyada tumse….
Rahul:-mujhse??
Robby:-haan tumse aur sirf tumse pyar kiya.......
Rahul:-aur maine uska kitna apmaan kiya….yeh mujhse kya ho gaya...
Robb:-rahul.....i m sorry….
Rahul:-tum kyun maafi maang rahe ho....
Robby:-kyunki kahin na kahin tum dono is haalat ka zimmedar main bhi hoon.....anjali ne mere liye hi yeh sab kiya.....
Rahul:-galti sirf meri hain….
Robby:-nahin meri hain lekin bas aur nahin aur main use aur udaas nahin dekh sakta tha isiliye maine tumse yeh sab kaha…
Rahul:-tumne mujhe pehle kyun nahin….
Robby:-kyunki main majboor tha anjali ne apni kasam mujhe di thi par ab main aur chup nahin reh sakta tha….
Rahul:-meri kismet toh dekho tum jisse pyar karte ho wo kisi aur se payr karti hain aur tum apne pyar ko pane ke liye kitni mehnat kar rahe ho aur ek main hoon jisne khud apne pyar ko apne se dur kar diya…
Robby:-rahul zaindagi aisi hi hain hum jise chahte hain use pane ke kiye humse kuch na kuch zaroor leti hain….
Rahul:-par maine kho diya…
Robby:-nahin rahul…abhi bhi kuch nahin bigda haiin…
Rahul:-nahin maine jo kiya…
Robby:-pyar ki raah itni aasaan nahin hoti aur jo haar maan jaye wo pyar ke kaabil hi nahin…
Rahul:-par ab main kya karoon…..
Robby:-jo tumhaara dil kahe….ab main chalta hoon…..
Rahul:-hey bhagwan aapne jo galti mujhse karvaayi hain uska prayschit karne ka waqt aa gaya hain aur main chahe duniya bhi mujhse ruth jaaye main apne pyar ko apne paas laakar hi rahunga aur tumhe na chhte hue bhi mera saath dena hoga……aa raha hoon maianajli apne pyar ke liya pane ikraar ke liye aa raha hon…..aa raha hoon….

End

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great, akhir Rahul ko sach ka pata to chala,Keep it up. Aage jaldi likho.

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