pyrasa bandhan updated pg40 on 06.02.07 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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GR8 parts 👏 nice FF keep it up 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ice parlour scene was gd 😉 but kk having asthma sounds very sad 😭 🤢 😭 but then too the overall was fab 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey i just started reading ur fanfic and think its absolutely great. like all the parts 👏 . keep up the good work 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wowwwwwww dear...ths s soooooooo fab 😳

lovely scene of their meeting 😃
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haye 😍 lovely meeting
continue soon dear 👏 👏
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it was just to good cont soon 😃
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lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy storyyyyyyyyyyy 👏

yaar sachchi muchchiiiiiiii....bohut sweet hai...write soon 😛
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Originally posted by: verni

lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy storyyyyyyyyyyy 👏

yaar sachchi muchchiiiiiiii....bohut sweet hai...write soon 😛

thanx for the appreciation.will post tomorrow surely

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hi guys i m back.

Previously-kk gets an asthma attack and faints outside the ice cream parlour.su and sharman help her and they cum 2 know about each other.


Part5:
kk-oh to aap mr.sumit wadhwa hain....

su-aur app ms.kumkum.......

they laugh for sometime.

su-lagta hai humein ek dil pehle hi milna tha..

kk-shaayad bhagwan ko yahi manzoor tha.

su-aur haa...ye mera bhai...sharman wadhwa.aur pratha aapki behen hogi..right...

kk-nahi ...pratha meri ...

pratha-bua....

su-achha to pratha aapki bua hai...

pratha-nahin uncle bua meri bua hain....
they laugh...

they reach kumkum's house.
kk is still not well enough to walk herself but hesitates to ask sumit for help.she tries to get up but falls due to giddiness.

su-wait..i m coming.he opens the door and holds her hand.

kk-lokks a little lost.

su-aaram se aayiye

sharman-aur pratha meri godi main ayegi..

pratha-haaan....

kk gets a little disbalanced but sumit holds her tightly.

su-aapki tabiyat abhi itni thik nahin hai.aap abhi dr ko bula lijiyega.aur haan kal ki meeting main cancel kar doonga.

kk-arre nahi mr.wadhwa.i m fine now bas thoda thak gayi hoon, thodi weakness si lag rahi...i'll b fine by tomorrow..

su-no way...maine decide kar liya hai ki aap kal meeting main presentation nahin doge bas...
kk smiles...

they go inside.rohit and anjali are calling everywhere but are unable 2 get any news of kumkum.

anjali-kumkum gayi kahaan hogi...raat ke 12:30 ho rahen hain aur abhi tak aayi nahin

rohit-aur pratha bhi gayi hai

anjali-kk ke saath hai to mujhe pratha ki itni chinta nahin hai par....

kk-bhabhi.
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anjali and rohit rush towards her.

anjali-kaahn thi tu kk...hum kitne pareshaan they..

rohit-itni raat ho gayi thi...tune phone bhi nahin kiya.

they notice sumit holding her from back.

rohit-arre mr.wadhwa aap?

sumit-hi mr sharma.Pehle aap apni behen ko sambhaliye..she is not well..

rohit holds her and makes her sit on sofa.

rohit-kk kya hua tu thik...to hai na

anjali runs towards her

anjali-kk kya hua?bata na...tu thik nahin hai ruk main dr.ko phone karti hoon..

kk-bhabhi kuch nahin hua hai mujhe..aap bekar mein pareshaan ho rahi hain.


sumit and sharman are touched by the family bonding.

rohit-mr wadhwa pls have a seat.baithiye na

they sit.

anjali-kk bata to sahi hua kya....

kk-oh god...bhabhi kuch nahin hua bas halka sa attack aaya tha.i m fine..

anjali-tujhe...tujhe...phir se attack aaya...inhaler to tha na tere paas.
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rohit-mr.wadhwa aap kaise mile kumkum se..

su-woh actually main aur mera brother hum bhi ice cream parlour gaye they.wahaan ms.kumkum ko attack pad gaya.koi chor inka purse lekar bhag raha tha...aur...

pratha-aur phir sharman bhaiyaa ne khub dhishoom dhishoom kiya aur usko markar bua ka purse le liya...
su laughs...

rohit gets worried for them..

rohit-aapko chot to nahin ayi

su-arrey nahin kuch nahin hua...par ur sis got fainted inko bahut zyaada chakkar aa rahe they...infact she is still feeling dizzy...

kk-mr.wadhwa pls dont bother about me...bhabhi believe me...i m fine bas thodi thakaan hai.

rohit-anjali tum kumkum ko uske room mein le jao.kk tu so ja.raat bahut ho gayi hai.aur aaj teri bhaabhi bhi tere saath hi soyengi...

kk-bhiayya...

rohit-no arguments....is waqt tu sharma group of industries ki vice president nahin hai...samjhi...

anjali holds kumkum and pratha also goes.

pratha turns and kisses sumit and sharman.

pratha-goodnight bhaiyaa

they also wish her the same and laugh.
sharman-bahut pyaari hai na?
sumit-haan.

rohit-haaan pratha aaj bhaiyaa ko hi dogi mujhe nahin..

she kisses rohit and says good night.

rohit-Mr.wadhwa aap to mere liye bhagwaan se kam hain hain..aapne meri kumkum ke liye itna sab kiya..

sumit-kaisi batein kar rahein hain aap mr.sharma...ye to mera farz tha...maine kuch nahin kiya..

rohit is a bit emotional and hugs sumit.

rohit-kumkum meri jaan se bhi badhkar hai.is duniya mein kumkum,anjali aur pratha ke siva mera koi nahin hai....jis tarah pratha meri beti hai ui tarah kk ko bhi maine beti ki tarah paala hai...

sumit-acchi tarah jaanta hoon main ki aap ke saath kya kya hua hai....par aap pareshaan mat hoyiye sab thik hai....

rohit-thanx.(controls his emotions)....shaayad hum dono ek doosre ko aachhi tarah samajh sakte hain..

sumit-kyunki humne apni zindagi main ek jaisi pareshaniyaan hi dekhi hain....

rohit-chaliye ye sab baatein chodite...main coffee banwata hoon..

sumit-pls nahin ab raat bahut ho gayi hai...

rohit-pehli baar aye hain pls... mana mat kariye mujhe bura lagega...

sumit-o.k.

Sharman-waise ms kumkum ka treatement nahin chal raha hai?

rohit-wo..actually asthma ki prob use bachpan se hi hai...aaj ki tarah use pehle bhi severe attacks pad chuke hain..

sumit-to tratement.?

rohit-wo manti hi nahin hai...actually pahle padhayi thi ab bussiness ...usne kabhi apne uppar dhyaan hi nhain diya..
..
the talk goes on other topics for sum time.

su-accha ab hum chalte hain...

rohit-ok.phir kal meeting main milenge...

su-nahin mr.sharma..maine meeting cancel kar di hai..
rohit-kyun..par..

su-woh aapki behen ki tabiyat thik nahin hai.unhe aapki bhi zarurat hai.to aap kal unke saath hi rahiyega...aur waise bhi merger to hona hi hai...to presentation to kabhi bhi ho jayegi...

rohit is touched by his concern.

rohit-thanx mr.wadhwa.

Sumit-waise ek baat kahun...?

rohit-oh sue..boliye na..

sumit-aap pls mujhe mr wadhwa, aap, mat kahiye...main chota hun aapse..pls sumit keh ke bulayiye...aur tum kahiye

rohit-thik hai....sumit....to TUM bhi mujhe mr sharma mat bulao..

sumit-ok aap mere liye bade bhai jaise hi hain...to main aapo bhaiyya bulaoonga...

rohit-perfect.

sumit-ok.bye bhaiyya...

rohit-bye sumit...

Sumit and sharman go.

Rohit thinks-bahut accha ladka hai...


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Posted: 18 years ago
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ur such a gd writer , 😊
this part was damm kool , 😉
waiting for some more sukk scenes 😳
Edited by wadhwaniki - 18 years ago

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