pyrasa bandhan updated pg40 on 06.02.07 - Page 2

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ok! here is the next part:
Previously-kk's morning


Its 8 o clock.sumit is sitting in his room reading some files.His secretary calls
sec-sir woh aaj aapki 4 meetings hain aur phir bandra wali construction site par bhi jaana hai.
sumit-thanx amit.tumne yaad dila diya.saari files ready hain?
sec-yes sir.
Sumit-ok bye.see u in the office.
he switches off the phone and goes to the mandir.he stands in front of his parents photo and says.
Sumit-ma papa..aaj main jo bhi hun jahaan bhi hun sab aapki wajah se hoon.sab aapka hi aashirvad hai.bas aab iss sharman ka hi kuch karna hai.smiles and says.. ye mr. to abhi tak uthe bhi nahi hain.pehle to is ko uthana hai.aur aaj meri bahut important meetings hain.aap to hain hi mere saath.janata hoon meetings acchhi hi jayengi.accha main chalta hoon bye.



he goes to sharman's room.sharman is sleeping.sumit goes and strikes his hair
Su-shar. uth dekh 8 o clock ho gaya.tujhe college bhi jaana hai.uth
shar-bhai sone do na abhi
su-maine bekar mein hi pyaar se baat ki tujhse.tu aaj tak kabhi nahi maana to aaj kaise manega ab to roj wali trick hi use karni hogi.
su-goes 2 the bathroom and brings a bucket of water.and throws water on him.
shar.-arrey bhai uthta hoon na.i m getting up..
su-u better do it NOW.i'm getting late.main office ja raha hoon.samajha.
shar.-bye..geela kar diya.
su-bye.

he is going 2 office when methi chachca cumes and says.
mc-breakfast to karlo beta.
su-chacha aap sandwich de do.main raaste mein hi kha loonga.
mc-accha thik hai, lo.
su-shar. ko daant dijiyega khin phir na so jaye.bye.
he goes.

i'll write more later in the evening.post ur comments

Edited by jj thomson - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
hey guys tell me how did you find the story and pm me what should i write next
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hey noone replied.didnt u like the fanfic?
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wow 👏 wonderful story..continue soon ok
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Previously-A morning in kk and sumit's life.

Part:3

Kumkum and Rohit reach their office after dropping Pratha to school.Kk's cabin-
Rohit:Chal kumkum bye ab main bhi kaam par jata hoon.Arrey haan aaj tujhe merger ki baat bhi to batani hai na.
Kumkum:Merger?Kaisa merger kise saath?Par kyun?
Rohit:Ab itne sawal eksath puchegi to main jawab nahi de paoonga.Aur abhi ek meeting bhi hai.Aisa kar lunch time par tu mere cabin mein aa jana.OK?
Kumkum-Thik hai.Bye bhaiyaa.
rohit-bye.
And he turns around.Kumkum starts thinking about the merger.Rohit turns back.
Rohit-arrey ek cheez to bhool hi gaya.
Kumkum-Kya bhaiyya?
Rohit:ALl the best.Aaj project presentation hai na teri?
Kumkum-thanx bhaiyya.
Rohit hugs Kumkum and goes.



At Sumit's office:

Amit(sumit's secretary):Goodmorning sir.

Sumit:Goodmorning Amit.To aaj ka kaam shuru kiya jaye?

Meri files ready hain?

Amit:Yes sir, sir aaj merger ko lekar bhi kuch decision lena hai.

Sumit arey haan.To, lets have a board meeting @12.Board members ko inform kar do.O.K.?

Amit-Yes sir.


During luchtime at kk's office-

Rohit-Kumkum tune to kamaal kar diya.Kya presentation di!baaki sab to dekhte hi reh gayi.Kumkum, i m really very proud of you.

Kumkum-Thanks bhaiyya.Sab kuch aapne hi to sikhaya hai.Bachpan se aap hi ne to bataya hai ki mehnat se har manzil mil jaati hai.Bas sabkuch aapka hi to hai.

Rohit-(gets a bit emotional)chal ab yeh sab chod aur haaan... hum to merger ki baat karne wale they na?

Kumkum-Haan bhaiya ye merger ka kya chakkar hai?

Rohit-Kumkum hamari company Sharma group of indusrties Mr.Sumit Wadhwa ki company global Associates ke saath merge hone jaa rahi hai.

Kumkum-Per kyun bhaiyya?Iski kya zarurat hai?Aur wo cmpany? Mr.Wo Wo...

Rohit-Sumit wadhwa..

Kumkum-Haan whosoever he is, aap unko jaante hai?

Rohit-Haan main personally bhi usse do teen baar mil chuka hoon.He is an awesome guy.Jaanti hai, usne bhi zindagi mein bahut dukh sahe hain.Aur uski company bhi india ki leading companies main se ek hai.He is also a young achiever like you.Aur kal wo aa bhi raha hai hamare office.Actually aaj hi usne merger ka desicion liya hai.

Kumkum-Waise it sounds good.

Rohit-It ki he?Smiles naughtily.

Kumkum(blushes)-Kya bhaiyya aap bhi na!

Rohit-Chal ab jaldi se lunch kar.Abhi bahut kaam
hai.pending na reh jaye.


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Sumit's home at night-

Sumit and Sharman are having dinner.

Sumit-Sharman aaj college mein kya hua?

Sharman-Kuch nahi bhai, aaj ek maya se breakup ho gaya aur dusiri mil gayi.Proffessor se thodi daant padi aur haan..

Sumit-Shut up main yeh sab nahi pooch raha.Aaj kau kaun si class hue?

Sharman-Kya bhai ye koi poochne ki baat hui?

Sumit-Sharman jaanta hai mujhe kabhi kabhi bahut tension hota hai ki tu kab responsible banega.Sharman ab tum bade ho gaye ho.Tmhe apni responsibilities ko samajhna hoga.

Sharman-Samajh jaaoonga na bhai tension kis baat ki.

Sumit-Sharman tension hai.aaj to main hoon par agar main tuhare saath kal nahi raha to? Ye company, saara bussiness to barbad ho hi jayega saath hi tumhara future bhi daanv pe lag jaayega.

Sharman gets up-Nahi bhai ye...ye...matlab kya hai aapka...kehna kya chaahte ho aap...kahaaan jaoge aap mujhe chod ke?

Both of them have tears in their eyes.

Sumit-Sharman dekh

Sharman-Kuch nahi dekhna aur samjhna hai mujhe ..agar aap mujhe chod kar gaye na to main bhi ye duniya chod doonga.Mere liye to aap hi duniya ho bhaiyya...
u r ,my world....Mujhse aisi baatein...(he cries and runs to his room)

Sumit-Sharman...sun to sahi..(he too,is crying)

Sumit goes 2 his room.And sits on the bed with Sharman.
Both of them cry.

Sumit-Idiot, tu kya samajhta hai?tu mere liye kuch bhi nahi hai.tu meri jaan hai stupid.

Sharman-hugs sumit tightly.to phir kyun kate ho mujjhse aisi baatein?

Sumit-taki tu thoda mature aur sophesticated ho jaaye.

Sharman-aise bologe na to kabhi nahin honga.

Sumit-paagal.waise tuhe ek baat batata hoon...

sharman-kya?

sumit-tu ekdum ladkiyon jaisa emotional hai...

Sharman-bhai aisi mat bolo mera ego bhii hai.

Sumit-acchaa..

sharman-sach mein-...

sumit acchaa...and does tingling...
ab bol teri ego ke baare mein...

sharman-cathes a pillow and throws on him.

Both have a pillow fight.
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wow pilliow fight sounds so nice 😉
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Originally posted by: wadhwaniki

wow pilliow fight sounds so nice 😉

same here niki thanx for the appreciation.😃ur story is awesome 2

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wowwwwwwww dear ths s awesummmmm 😃

just read...must say gr8 going 👏 👏

pillow fite so cute 😳
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that's great....... good job.........
pillow fights sounds good........
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Part4:

previously-u-sharman have a pillow fight.Merger decided.


at kk's home-
everyone is having dinner.

kk-bhabhi aapk kya sochte ho merger ke bare mein?

anjali-main kya bolun.tune aur tere bhaiyya ne thik hi kiya hoga. 😉

kk-kal mr.wadhwa aayenge na bhaiyya?

rohit-kyun?intezaar...? 😆

kk-bhabhi bolo na inko ye mujhe bar bar chidhate hain. 😳
anjali-waise ladka kumkum ke liye kaisa hai?

kk-bhabhi aap bhi?chalo pratha hum in dono se nahin bolenge.jaldi finish karo phir hum dono ice cream khne chalenge.aur inko nahin denge.ok?
😊
pratha-ok.

anjali-kk, we were just joking.

kk-but i m not joking ab aap dono ki icecream gayi.

rohit-chalo ye saza mil rahi hai hamen.

kk-bilkul. 😆

pratha-bua chalo.

kk-chalo.

They drive to an ice cream parlour.

Sumit and Sharman-

Sharman-bhai, ab mujhe daanta hai to saza bhi milegi. 😊
Sumit-accha bacchooo.chal bata

Sharman-ice cream khilao na.

Sumit-ice cream?

Sharman-haan....chalo...naa.

Sumit-accha chal

They 2 go 2 the ice cream parlour.
On the way.

Sumit-Sharman jaanta hai kal hamari company ka merger sharma group of industriees ke saath ho jayega
.
Sharman-aachha ye comp. kiski hai?

Sumit-mr.rohit sharma aur Ms.kumkum sharma, bhai behen hain

Sharman-ms kumkum? 😆

sumit-haan..Ms kumkum kyun?

Sharman-Bhai ladki khubsurat hogi na?nahi hogi merger mat karna. 😉

sumit-spanks him -tu bahut maar khayega sharman. 😳

Sharman-bas bhai mat maro, i was joking.

Kumkum, pratha and Sharman,Sumit reach the ice cream parlour.Both parties haven't yet looked at each other.

kumkum-pratha kaun si khayegi?

pratha-mmm
orange...nahi....chocolate....nahi...vanilla...nahin...straw berry...
😃
Kumkum-pratha bas kar main saari nahin kharidne

wali.just choose one.

pratha-jo aap loge wahi.

sumit and sharman also join.

Sharman-bhai kaunsi?

sumit-chocolate.

kumkum-chalo hum dono bhi chocolate hi le letein hain.
sumit and kumkum both say together-2 CHOCOLATE ICE CREAMS 😆

Both look at each other.Sumit is mesmerised by her beauty 😛 .Kumkum is also lost in his face.Both are spell bound.Sharman and pratha interrupt-
Pratha-bua icecream. 😳

Sharman-bhai..mm...ahem.ahem..icecream 😳

Kumkum and sumit are interrupted

kumkum-ye lo pratha

sumit-ye le sharman.

They sit on tables opposite to each other.

kumkum-is eating her ice creams but stars feeling uneasy.

Pratha-kya hua bua?

Kumkum-kucch nahi pratha tum khao na...

she feels more uneasy and starts sweating.

She says to pratha-Pratha ek minute yahin baitho main aati hoon.
She is feeling suffocated.so, goes outside the parlour.

Sharman and Sumit are also enjoying their ice cream.Sharman notices kumkum leaving without pratha.

Sharman-wo dekho us bacchi ko wahin chod gayin...arey.

Sumit-arrey kuch kaam hoga tu kyun pareshan hai?chup chap ice cream kha. 😆

Sharman-ok bhai jaisi aapki aaaagyaa.

Outside,kumkum starts feeling dizzy.She speaks to herself

kumkum-mera inhaler....ouch..

She is panting and is unable 2 stand properly.Sumit notices that she is not well.

Sumit-sharman wo dekh ...shaayad unki tabiyat kuch thik nahin hai.. 😳

Sharman-bhai...ab aap chup chap icecream khao. 😆

sumit-par sharman....

Outside-

Suddenly a man cumes and snatches her purse away and runs.
Pratha sees this and cries bua.
Sumiit runs towards her and carries pratha and asks kya hua beta? 😊

Pratha-bua..unka purse..bua...

Sumit and Sharman run towards kumkum.

Kumkum is feeling very dizzy.she is panting, sweating and is crying.

Kumkum-pls mera purse.
..in...innn..innhaler...hhheellp...

She faints and is about to fall when sumit cumes and holds her. 😳

Sumit-maam, dekhiya aap thik to hain.Pls open your eyes.

Pratha-bua ka inhaler purse mein hai...cries

Sumit-Sharman get the purse from the thief...run

Sharman-ok.bas 1 minute.

He runs towards the running thief.After sometime he gets him and dhishoom-dhishoom. 👏 ..he beats them.kicks and knocks him down. 👏 He snathches the purse and runs towards kumkum-sumit.

Ppl have gathered towards them.

Su-pls bhid mat lagaiye.inhe suffocation ho jayega.pls move aside.paani lekar aayiye..pls..quick.

He carries he to his car and makes her lay down.someone brings water and sumit sprinkles it on her face.She is sweating very badly.

Sharman cumes.

Sharman-bhai purse.

Sumit-inhe asthma hai.Bag bacchi ko de.

Pratha takes the bag and removes the inhaler.

Sumit uses the inhaler and agin sprinkles some water on her face.
She opens her eyes and tries to get up but starts feeling giddy.Sumit holds her hand. 😳

Sumit-pls abhi uthne ki koshish mat kariye aapko chakkar aa rahein hain.aap baithi rahiye.

She uses the inhaler herself again and feels a lil better.

sumit-ab kaisa feel ho raha hai?

Kk-better.

Sharman-bhai inhein dr. ke paas le jana chahiya.

Kk-nahi pls aapko maine waise bhi bahut tang kar liya hai.ab aur nahi karna chahti.Ghar par bhaiyya bhaibhi bhi pareshan honge.mujhe ghar jaana chahiye.

su-hum aapko chod denge..

kk-par...

su-aap abhi drive karne ki haalat main nahin hain.u'r still feeling dizzy iss tarah chakkar aa rahein hain..kuch ho gaya to...

Sharman-bilkul sahi bhai.main aapki gadi lekar aata hoon.

kk- ok

pratha is crying.

kk-hugs her pratha i m fine now ro mat

su-luks at them lovingly. 😛

su-chalo pratha sharman bhaiyya ke saath peeche baitho hum ghar chalenge ok? 😃

pratha tells them the way.

su asks kk to close her eyes for sometime as she'll get relief frm dizziness. 😳

kk-aapne hamari itni help kari.main aapka naam..

su-sumit wadhwa aur aap?

kk- surprised mr. wadhwa ...? 😃

su-kyun?

kk-hamari comp. ke saath aaapki comp ka merger ho raha hai. 😃

su- matlab aap kumkum sharma?

kk-ji.
oh!nice meeting u.


More tomorrow
and haan guys thax for ur moral upport.

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