Fanfiction with a major twist.Part-2

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Posted: 20 years ago
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STarring - sUMEET'S & kUMKUM'S DAUGHTER nEHA - JUHI DHRUV- AKASH OF YE MERI LIFE HAI &nb sp; kOYAL:REEMA OF YE MERI LIFE HAI &nb sp;MAHESH:RAJEEV {OLD SUJAL} SHAMU-ASHMIT OF YE MERI LIFE HAI &nb sp; Neha is the pet of the wadhwa family & is a spilt girl.Renuka pretends to be very nice to Neha.she tells her a false story:i &ur papa were g8 luvers like romeo-juliet.but ur mom..that wicked witch snatched sumeet from me.artificial tears come out from renuka's eyes.neha consoles her:aunty ,don't worry,i'll bring u back to papa's life.renuka smiles.neha sees her own reflection on the mirror.she becomes angry &threw the powder tin at the mirror & broke it.She:mom,i hate u.God,why did u giv me that witch's face?giv me a new face.renuka has a wicked smile on her face. & nbsp; Neha torture kumkum thru sharp words.sumeet slaps her.Neha:papa,4 a lady who destroyed ur luv ,u beat me 4 the 1st time.Sumeet:stop it neha.ur mom did'nt destroy my luv,she brought luv to my life.wadhwa members tried to make her understand renuka's true colour.she did'nt believe it:i'll save papa from that lady. & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; S umeet fixes neha's marriage secretely with mahesh & givs him an idea of her character & asks him to save her.Mahesh:i promise u that i'll save neha from the wicked people.   ; Mahes h walks behind neha to impress her.then there will be funny fight scenes between them & finally neha falls in luv with mahesh.   ;   ; Abhay chauhan ,chanda & vrinda's child die in an accident.kumkum brings shamu & also chanda's daughter Koyal to wadhwa.Dhruv falls in luv with koyal.kumkum supports it.neha scolds kumkum:u r spoiling bayya's life by showing him wrong ways.u always try to spoil the wadhwa family's peace. kumkum weeps.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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ahaahah nice storyline but dont u think its going some how like piya ka ghar ahahahaha
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Posted: 20 years ago
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I don't watch Piya ka ghar
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Posted: 20 years ago
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haha yeah shabzz.. resembles piya ka ghar!!

😭 i want young sumit😛

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Posted: 20 years ago
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we all want young sumit and young kumkum 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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i don't watch Piya ka ghar.so plz tell me how it resembles my fan fic.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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ur story is nice but sorry to say i dont like it bcoz i want young sumit!!!!!!😳

if u bring hussain as a young character in kk then ur story wud be super hit!!😊😉

yah it resembles with piya ka ghar!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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yeah it was a good story yaar
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Did i just read old sujal😃 hmmmmmmm my sweetie his so cute😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
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i also want young sumit😉

just imagine young sumit and young kumkum.....how kool😊

and your rite zara29 with young su & kk the story will be super hit😉😆

sry if i hurt some1 😭

take care..........later😊😃😉

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