PKA - Pt16 Pg29 Piyush's condition - Page 12

Previously

S - ab tumhe batana hoga ke tum Kumkum ko kaise jaante ho

J - jaan na chahte ho? teek hai aao mere saath

Jatin takes Sumt to his house, they sit in his bedroom, Jatin picks up a photo of Kumkum

J - Kumkum ko main pehli baar theen saal pehle mila tha......

Part 9

J - .....yahin Mumbai mein....tumhare aane se pehle.....

*Flashback*

Kumkum is shown shopping in Mumbai Town Centre with Ekta and Anku, she has lots of bags in her hands and is looking for something in one of them, she puts the bags down along with her handbag, she looks in the bag when someone snatches her handbag

K - hey ruko!!! chor!!!!

The girls chase after the guy but hes to fast, suddenly he falls on the floor as someone put their foot out, the guys gets up and starts to run away when another guy holds him and gets the purse off him, before anything could happen the thief runs away, the guy walks up to Kumkum, its Jatin

J - yeh li jiye aapka purse

K - thanks so much

Kumkum smiles and walks away leaving Jatin mesermised by her beuaty, weeks go by and Jatin forgets Kumkum.....he is entering the mandir to pray, he kneels down and prays, as he is kneeling up he catches a glimpse of Kumkum, he finishes praying and goes to her

J - hi

K - tum......oh yes, bag vale, hi

J - kaisi ho?

K - teek hoon...

J - tumhara naam?

K - Kumkum, tumhara?

J - Jatin.....tum kahin jaa rahi thi?

K - ji ghar par

J - aao main tumhe chord tha hoon

Kumkum hesitates but soon agrees and Jatin takes her home, she invites him in and he meets her parents, after this they meet frequently and begin to enjoy each others company, finally the day came when Jatin confesses his love for her

J - Kumkum...voh main....

K - voh kya?

J - voh main.....voh....iloveyou

K - kya?

J - Kumkum samjho karo! I......love.......you

Kumkum smiles and hugs Jatin

K - i love you too

Jatin and Kumkum hug and are both happy until some of Jatin;s friends come, the leader being Sasha

S - hey Jatin...who's this?

J - yeh hai Kumkum....aur Kumkum yeh hai Sasha, Machaan aur Shiv

K - hi

S - hi Kumkum.....wow so beautiful

Kumkum holds on to Jatin's arm, Sasha smiles wickedly

S - Jatin....ek minute aao

J - Kumkum yahan ruko

Sasha takes Jatin to the side

S - you want a drink?

J - nahin i'm ok

S - no i'll get you one

Sasha goes to the jeepand gets a bottle of coke, he mixes something in there and gives it to Jatin, who drinks it and feels light headed, Sasha goes to Kumkum

S - so Kumkum...tum aur Jatin ek doosre ko kaise jaante ho?

K - hum...dost hai

S - dost? wow...i don't think so....see Jatin tumse dosti sirf humhare liye kar raha tha

K - what rubbish!

S - no rubbish....humhare liye usne tumse i love you bhi kaha

Machaan touches Kumkum's hair, she moves back and screams for Jatin, who is now sitting in the jeep drinking more, getting addicted to the drug inside

S - Jatin ne tumhe bataya nahin....voh ek drug addict hai? dheko dheko

Sasha makes Kumkum look

S- us drink mein drugs hai....aur voh Jatin ko chahiye tha

Kumkum gets shocked, she goes to walk away but Shiv stands in front, Machaan pulls at her dupatta and she screams, Sasha picks her up and puts her in the jeep, she's screaming but its having no effect on Jatin

K - Jatin utho!!! koi bachao mujhe!!! help!!!!!

Sasha stops the jeep at his house and drags Kumkum inside, he pushes her onto the bed and begins taking his jacket off, Kumkum is crying but Sasha doesn't care, Kumkum looks at the side and sees a balcony door, she pushes Sasha and runs to it and looks down, she turns and sees Sasha heading towards her, before he could do anything she jumps

S - **** **** stupid girl....

Some people see Kumkum and take her to the hospital, the doctor operates on her, she regains conciousness andsees Rach, Anku and Ekta, she cries and tells them what happened, as she is hugging Rach, she sees Jatin by the door

K (crying) - kyun aaye yahan? dhekne ke liye ke kya main zinda hoon ya nahin?

J - nahin kumkum voh main....

R - shut up!

A - tumhari himaat kaise hui yahan aane ke liye?

E - get out, aur door raho humhari aur Kumkum ki zindagi se! door raho!

Jatin walks out

*Reality*

J - aur tab main yahan se chale gaya aur Delhi mein settle hogaya, vahan mujhe tum mile tumse dosti hui lekin Kumkum ko kabhi bhool nahin paya.....fhir ek saal pehle tum yahan aah gaya aur mujhe laga ke shahid main Kumkum se mil paoon tumhara bahana lekar....

S - tho kya usne tumhari baat kabhi nahin suni?

J - nahin voh sachai sun na nahin chahti....usse lagta hai ke main us se pyaar ka natak kiya sirf Sasha ke liye.....

Sumit sits down and thinks

S (thinks) - shahid Kumkum ab bhi Jatin se pyaar karti ho.....mujhe usko sachai batani hogi..agar voh maan jaayegi tho voh aur Jatin ek ho sakte hai....lekin....Kumkum se main bhi pyaar karta hoon

The camera focuses on Sumit, then splits in two and shows Sumit and Jatin, then shows Kumkum in between them

Kya baat hai, kya anti climax hai, cant wait to read more. Its a great story. I hope you will write soon. Cant wait for the next Part.

Thanks

Aditi

wow...rach...wat can i say...

apart from its smashing...wat a thriller! 😃

excellent... 👏 👏 👏

what a story 😃 .
what a clmax u gave rach.it is just superb,excellent 👏 .
wait 4 more.

wow!!!! 👏
cont soon but remember about kk-su..not jatin 😳 😆

wow director jee kya mod diya hai story ko.......????? 😃 loved it...........

write soon........ 😳 😊