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Posted: 18 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: verni

how sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetttttttttttttttt 😳

a sweet cute ................beautifulllllllllllll part 😊
luv u 😊

aww so sweeet verni😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: aditi305

Great Work. Plaese make a serial much bigger then a Ekta serial and show Kumkum Sumit Love. You are a fab writer and have great imagination. Thanks a ton. Waiting for your next part eagerly.

Bye and Takecare

Aditi

so sweeet aditi😳 thnx a bunch
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Ektaj

Rach.. Fab part!! 👏👏 It was soo beautiful..so soft.. can totally imagine the scenario.. songs, flowers, teddies.. haaaaii, so romantic! 😳

Looking forward to the next part.. 😊

awww thnx a lot eks😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: ankuhujulover

hailaaaaaaaa we all shuld go there instead of crative writers 😉 ...u mustttttttttt n henna amrit verni...actually the whole kk forum 😆 😆

the song wowwwwww...the romantic soft scene...wowwwwwww 👏

ab jaldi se update...my bday is cuming na 😳 😳 😳

lol haan we shud lol tumhara bday roz aata hai😆😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Henna042

👏 👏 👏 Amazing!!!

Keep it coming Rach!

Nice Lyric by da way! 😉

Safe!

yea ill update sooon lol thnx😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
rach ji waiting eagerly for next part 😛 .
mujsa raha nahi dhaki jaari hai 😊 .
great song 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97

Previously

V - Sumit beta kiske kayalon mein khoye ho?

S - voh mom....chordiye na

V - nahin bata tho sahee, naam kya hai uska

S - Kumkum

V - bohat hi pyaar naam hai

S - mom shes so beautiful....lagta hai mujhe pyaar hogaya hai us se

V - aur voh?

S - voh tho apni dil ki baat kheti nahin

Sumit frowns and hugs his mom

V - koi baat nahin, mujhe yakeen hai, bohat jald kahe gi

S - i hope so mom!

Part 7

Sumit reached to work the next day and met the manager

M - Sumit, tumhare liye ek bohat hi achi offer hai

S - acha? kaunsi offer?

M - a concert

S - concert?

M - yes maine tumhare liye ek concert book kiya hai, dheko

The manager shows Sumit the concert flyers and posters

S - lekin....

M - is lekin ki vajaa se maine tumhe bataya nahin

S - main ye kaise?

M - simple....time se jagaa par paunch jao...fhir make up aur kapre pehnlo then do the show

S - teek hai sir jaise aap kahein

Sumit smiled then joined Rahul

R - hey buddy

S - tumhe pata tha?

R - kis baare mein?

S - concert ke baare mein?

R - oh...yes

S - tho mujhe kyun nahin bataya

R - kyunki tumne na kardena tha, ab chill buddy, aur concert ki tayariyan karlo

S - teek hai main jaa raha hoon

R - kahan?

S - Kumkum ko milne

Sumit left the cafe and went to Kumkum's college, he waited outside patiently for her. After about 1 hours worth of waiting Sumit got bored and decided to go inside the college, he went to the main reception

S - excuse me, i'm looking for Kumkum

R - surname?

S - surname...Kumkum....erm.....yaad nahin aah raha

R - ok....aap unke kya lagta hai?

S - family friend

R - aur koi khaas vaaja hai?

S - haan voh.....uske dada ji hospital mein hai, main unhe lene aaya hoon

R - ok sir, sit down, hum usse lekar aate hai

Sumit sat down......meanwhile Kumkum was gossiping with the girls in her class when she was called out by the receptionist

K - yes maam?

R - aapke koi rishtidaar aaya hai, keh raha aapke dada ji hospital mein hai

K - mere dada ji (thinks) voh tho bachpan mein mar gaye the....tho yeh kaun mujhse milne aaya hai (to receptionist) ok maam chaliye

The receptionist and Kumkum made their way to the front office, Kumkum saw Sumit's back and walked over to him, she put her hand on his shoulder and Sumit stood up

K - tum! yahan kyun aaye ho?

S - tumse milne.....chalo hospital jaate hai

K - hospital?

S (looks at receptionist) - haan voh tumhare dada ji ko milne chalo jaldi

Sumit held Kumkum's hand and took her outside, when they sat in the car Sumit began laughing, Kumkum hit him

K - ye sab karne ki kya zuroorat thi?

S - kabse yahan tumhara intezaar kar raha tha....tum aayi nahin thi tho main tumhe lene aah gaya

K - dada ji ka bahana banake? voh dadaji jo mar chuke hai

S - oh..sorry....mujhe aur koi bahana yaad nahin aah raha tha, ab larne ka koi faida nahin chalo

K - kahan?

S - lunch pe

K - lekin meri class?

S - ab class ko chordo....

Sumit started the car and drove to a nice restaurant and him and Kumkum ordered food, while they were eating....

S - tum aaj kya kar rahi ho?

K - pata nahin kyun?

S - mera ek concert hai....manager ne book kiya, tum aao zuroor

K - concert? wow so exciting!! yes i'll definitely come with my friends

S - very good

After lunch

K - ab mujhe college chordo please

S - uff hoo teek hai

Sumit dropped her off.......that evening Kumkum and her friends got ready for the concert, when they got there Kumkum realised they had no tickets (😆)

R - tu bhi na....jab voh tumse milne aaya tha, tab yaad nahin aaya

K - nahin aaya yaad...ab kya karein

E - usko phone kar

K - ok (phones Sumit) hello Sumit voh hum aah gaye

S - tho andhar aah jao

K - lekin humhare paas tickets nahin hai

S - oh, erm koi baat nahin main Rahul ko tickets ke saath bej tha hoon

K - ok (hangs up) uska dost aah raha hai tickets lekar

The girls wait for a while when Rahul comes with the tickets.

Rah - here you go

K - thanks, chalo girls

The girls went inside, it was very crowded, they made their way to the front somehow, soon the announcer came on stage

A - good evening ladies and gentlemen, welcome to the first ever gig of new sensation Sumit Whadwa! give him a huge round of applause

everyone cheered and clapped as Sumit came on stage

S -THANK YOU EVERYONE!!!

The lights dimmed, Sumit looked for the girls and saw them in the first row cheering him on, the music began, a spot light shone on Sumit showing him wearing a blue sleeveless shirt and blue trousers with a microphone headset. He began singing Main Deewana from Ganesh Hegde

dilruba manaa hai qatil teri aadaa

lakhon hai aashiq tujh pe fidaa

humko bhi tu azmanaa aaa aaa aaa

jaane jaan ek baar meri baahon mein aah

tujhko sikadoon hai pyaar kya

aur kya hai dil ka lagana aa aaa aaa aaaa

main deewana hoon main deewana

aise jaane na doonga jaana

yun na humse nazrein churana

hoga humse hi dil lagana

dilruba manaa hai qatil teri aadaa

lakhon hai aashiq tujh pe fidaa

humko bhi tu azmanaa aaa aaa aaa

(Sumit looks directly at Kumkum)

jaane jaan ek baar meri baahon mein aah

tujhko sikadoon hai pyaar kya

aur kya hai dil ka laganaa aaa aaa aaaa

main deewana hoon main deewana

aise jaane na doonga jaana

yun na humse nazrein churana

hoga humse hi dil lagana

denaa dena kisi na kisi ko hai

mera saath de de tu

khonaa khona kabhi na kabhi tho hai

yeh dil aaj kho de tu

itna sa bas mujh pe ehsaan karde tu

apni jawani mere naam karde tu

denaa dena kisi na kisi ko hai

mera saath de de tu

yeh haseen pal yun na khona

door mujhse ab tu na honaa

faisila aaja mita de lagja gale

mokha mile ya fhir na mile

ye pal haseen na gavanaa aa aa aaaa

main deewana hoon main deewana

aise jaane na doonga jaana

yun na humse nazrein churana

hoga humse hi dil lagana

all i ever wanna do is get a little loving girl

let me take you high in another world

give it to me now give it to me now

let me dig let me dig let me dig that body

give it all i got cuz im never gunna let you go

lets get inside shut the door turn off the lights

get out your clothes let me take you down to the ground

and love you like you never know

ajaa ajaa hothon se lagake

in zulfon se kheloon main

na jaaa na jaa jaana tarsaake

aah baahon mein leloon main

teri in aankhon se kajaal churaloon main

gore baadan pe sitare sajadoon main

ajaa ajaa hothon se lagake

in zulfon se kheloon main

dhadkhane ab bad rahi hai

hadh se guzarne ko keh rahi hai

bekabar jaaogi bachke humse kidar

paaogi humko jaao jidar

jo chahe karlo bahanaa aaaa aaaa aaaa

main deewana hoon main deewana

aise jaane na doonga jaana

yun na humse nazrein churana

hoga humse hi dil....

main deewana.....na nazrein churana

haan main deewana...jaane na doonga jaana

main deewana hoon main deewana

aise jaane na doonga jaana

yun na humse nazrein churana

hoga humse hi dil lagana

main deewana hoon main deewna

aise jaane na doonga jaana

yun na humse nazrein churana

hoga humse hi dil lagana

The crowd cheered, Sumit looked into the crowd and saw Kumkum, he smiled at her and blew a kiss, she blushed, the crowd shouted for more. Sumit sang some more songs making the crowd go wild, each time he would look at Kumkum but during one song she wans't there......Kumkum had gone outside for some fresh air, while she was there she bumped into someone, she got shocked

K - tum.......

Edited by Gaurav's Love - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98
tummmmmmmmmmmmm.............ab kaun.......well a gr888 part 👏

arey crowd to wild hoga hi......... 😆 😆

will be waiting for next one soon.... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#99
awesum part rach 👏 👏 cont. soon..but i beleive u make us wait 4 too long 😆
newayz ab kaun mil gaya kk ko?? hope he/she doesn't troubles kk-su's love story 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
it was just mind blowing.
superb 👏 .

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