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@juhimerijaan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#71

yar GR8 part prty main kya hooia pata hi nhi chala & karna nandini r maried???? aur sumit ne na kahayar kina saspence rakaha hai tum ne ab jaldi se shadi kara doo kumkum sumit ki .w8 4 next part 😊

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@juhi_hussain

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#72

HI
V – per beta
S – maa bas
Say this & leave room

kul in hall
K-sumit kya hooia
sumit see kul
&
sumit bahir chala jata hai
vena sumit ke peeche aati hai
Kul stp vena
K - kya hooia
V- maine su se sahdi ki baat ki
K - veena tum samjti kyu nhi
V - ab mujhe nhi sumit ko samajina hooia main apne bete ko her per guta hooie jeente nhi deekh sakti
K - to main deekhi sakta hoo kya main to bas intizar kar raha hoo un dino k jab sumit phele jisa hoojaiega
V - main ja rahe hoo sumit k pass
K - veena rukooo VEENAAAAAAAAA

sumit assman ki oor deekh raha hai
& veena us ke sholder pe haath rakhiti hai & sumit face trun karta hai
S - maa maine kaha na
V- bas kar ab bohat suni tere & mane bhi ,,,,,maine to phele bar kuch kaha tha tuj se main to samjti the k mera bata mera sumit mere liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai perr...........................
S - per kya maa main to abhi bhi aap k liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoo per sirf aap liye
V - to ha kahe dee mere liye mere kushi k liye
S - aap ki kushi k liye main kuch bhi kar sakta hoo per main us larki ki zindagi k saath nhi khel sakta
sumit apne aap ko kahita hai
(jis main apni patni ka darja na dee sakoo main us ko kabhi bhi pyar nhi dee sakooga mere dil main sirf or sirf simran hai theeee rahegeee hameesha)
V - mujhe poora yaqeen hai to us ko apna pyar zaroor deega
S see veena
S - maa mujhe waqt doo
V - nhi main kal hi tumhare engagement ki date fix kar k aati hooo
veena Say & leave
S - maaaaaaa maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
S- ab maa ko kise samjahio main nhi ...............................

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VH

Mihir - pari kaha hai mujhe
PAri - main yahoo
M - yaha aaio
P - yes papa
M - ye dress deekhoo main laya hoo kese lage
P - ache hai ,papa wise aap bahi k sahdi kab kar rahe hoo mujhe bhabhi is ghar main chaiye
M - ha beta per abhi nhi kuch ya pher next month tak w8 karoo aap
P - sachiii
tabhi karan bhi office se aajaata hai
K - hi pari
P - bro i have a GR8 newz 4 U
K - 4 me tell me wht is ?
P - aisa hai k
K - k,,,,,,,,,,,,,
P k,......
K - bati hoo ya jaio
P- w8 bro
K - plzz call me bahi
P - ok bahiya papa ne aap ki sahdi ki dete next month fix ki hai
K- kya such
P- ha to mera GIFT
K - ha deedoga jab shadi hooge tab ek suit dooga ook ab main chala freesh hoone
P smile
tabhi veena aate hai & P door k pass hi hoti hai
V - kese hooo beta
P - main theek per aap ko
V - main aap ke mumma ki frnd hoo
P aunty aaieye na main muma ko bulti hoo
T - aare veena tum
V - ha yaha se guzar rahe the to socha
T - acha keya jo aagaie
veena tulsi kafe der tak baate karte hai
V - tulsi mian chiti hoo k kumkum mere ghar ki bahu bane .................
T - kya tum kumkum ko ....
V - ha mere sumit k liye main kumkum ka rishta mangne aaie hoo mujeh jaldi nhi tum sooch samj kar hi mujhe jawab doo ye rahe sumit ki tasveer

T - sumit kitna bara hoogaya hai chota tha tab deekaha tha
V _ main chalti hooo ab der hoo rahe hai
T - main tumko phone karooge
V - main intizar karoge
veena chalijati hai
tabhi kushi aajati hai
K - heloo aunty
T - kese aaj itne der kyu kar dee kumkum w8 kar rahe kab se tera
K - pari w8 or mera
T - ye pic ja k kumkum ko deekha & poch kesa hai
tulsi sab batati hai

ab pic kumkum k room main hai

deekhite hai kya hoota hai aage

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@juhi_hussain

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#73

SOrry gyz
EID ki wajha se cont nhi kar paie the i hope abhi aap mere story reda karne main interst rakhite hai gara nhi tooooooo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz mujhe bataye main likhina band kar dooge story plzzzz GUYZ such batayega im W8ing 4 ur comments 😊

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123460

Suspended

Posted: 18 years ago

#74

oh it's luvly yaar 👏 👏
i read the whole story again it's awesum
apecially the way u present it
just wonderful
keep it up n do cont. soon

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@juhimerijaan

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#75

thank GOD u cont ur story
GR8 part yar plzzzz now cont soon & dnt stop a FAb Stry
👏
realyy GR8 prt finaly 😊 sumit razi hogay shadi k liye ab yar jaldi se shadi kara doo & sweeT scene bhi hoo 😳 W8ing 4 next part hope u cont soon . 😊

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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#76

after long time u cont

GR8 part 👏

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@juhi_hussain

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: amrit23
oh it's luvly yaar 👏 👏
i read the whole story again it's awesum
apecially the way u present it
just wonderful
keep it up n do cont. soon

thanx Amrita 4 comments😃

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@juhi_hussain

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: juhi_hussain_lo
thank GOD u cont ur story
GR8 part yar plzzzz now cont soon & dnt stop a FAb Stry
👏
realyy GR8 prt finaly 😊 sumit razi hogay shadi k liye ab yar jaldi se shadi kara doo & sweeT scene bhi hoo 😳 W8ing 4 next part hope u cont soon . 😊

omg im soo happy yar k aap abhi bhi mere stry pasand hai 😃thanx u yar 4 such a lovly commets i try my best to add romnce a lotttttttttttttttt 😳thanx again 4 reading my story😊

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@juhi_hussain

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Rajeev_gr8

after long time u cont

GR8 part 👏

thanx rajjev_GR8 4 comments dear😃do read my story

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@juhi_hussain

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#80

HIiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

tulsi tell evry thing 2 kushi
& pic dekahti hia
k- aaare aunty pari to mile hai is se shopping mall main jab hum karan bhai k gift lene gaie the na to apri ka taqer hooia tha is se naam kya hai iss ka
T - naam SUMIT hai is ka
K - ok aunty main pari se baat karooge
T - phele yu us se poch baad main mihir se baat karooge
K- ok

kushi in KUMKUm room
K=kushi ,P=pari (KUMKUM)

K - hi P wht's up ?
P- nothing W8ing 4 u
K - 4 me but y ?
P - B/C mujhe film deekhine hai , tu aagaie hai to chale
K- tic hai tere pass ?
P - yes i have
K - film kon se hai
P - salman ki Jaaneman
K - ok chalte hai per .........
P - kya
K - ye pic deekh ,is ko kahi deekha hooia lagta hai
P - aare ye ha deekha to hai per kaha ???????
P- yaad aaya us din shoping mall main taqer jo hooie the hum dono ki
K-aare ha ab mujhe bhi yaad aaya
P- tere pass is ki pic kya kar rahe hai ????
K- kesa bol phele to bataio
P - deekhne main to handsome hai per gusee wala bhi deekhita hai
K - tujhe kese pata
P - pic deekh k koie bhi bataie ga k guse main pic nikalvaie hai
K - acha ab chal film k liye L8 hoo raha hai
both came out frm room
P - mumaa hum film k liye ja rahe hai
both leave VH

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garden

nandine w8 4 karan

K -sorry main l8 hoogaya
N - main 1 gante se w8 kar rahe hoo tumhare ye kahene se main maan jaioge aisa lagta hai kya tumhe
K - kyu nahi manooge kya
N - nhi
K - nhi , ok to main chlata hoo kal baat karte hau phone pe
N - ok , main chalti hoo
K - ok by kahoo to main chor doo ????
both lokking each other & smile
karan hug NANDIne
K - chaloo film k liye chalte hia mere pass tikets hai
N - to janb is wajha se l8 hooie hai chaloo
ye dono bhi Jaaneman deekhne k liye ja rahe hai

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4 ki set's ek saath hi hoote hai

karan buy colddrink
pari buy barger's & cold drink

karan nandine phele aaate hai
kushi & pari show start hoone k baad aate hai
nanadine pari ko deek lete hai
N - karan kumkum yaha hai
K - kya kar rahe hoo film deekhoona
N karan ka face kumkum ki tarf karti hai
K heeran hoo jata ha
K - N ab kay karege
N & K gabra jate hai
P see K & N
P – aare aap yaha oooooooooo
K – aare tum yaha
N – humie pata hi nahi chala k tum bhi yahi aaie hoo
P – bro fiqer na kroo ghar pen hi batioge k aap bhabhi k saath Jaaneman deekne aaie hoo
N – aise koie baat nhi main I mean hum alag alag aaie the iase hi deekhne
P – mujhe pata hai k mera bahi kitne films deekh tha so dnt very kise ko pata nhi chalega

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W H

Veena kush kush lag rahe hai

D – aare veena kya baat hai tum aaj kush lag rahe hoo
V – maaje aap bhi sune ge to aap bhi bohat kush hooge
D - aisa kya hooia ha
V - sumit ne ha kar dee shadi k liye
D – such ye to tum ne bohat dinoooo baad ache khaber sunaie hia
V - maine tulsi se rishte k baat bhi ke hia bohat hi ache larki hai abhi abhi wahi se aa rahe hoo
D – un hine ha ki ??
V – nh tulsi ka phen aaiega
D – bas ab Is ghat ki kushiya kabhi bhi kaam na hoo

V H

Tulsi & mihir

Mihir reading file

T – Mihir mujhe aap se bat karne hai
M – ha bolo kya hai
T – file to band karoo na aap
M – main sun raha hoo aap kaho kya baat hai ?
T – kumkum ki liye
M – pari ne kuch manga hai kya?
T – mera kahina hia k kumkum ki ab shadi ki umer hoogaie hai ek rishta hia mere nazar main
M close file
M – kya aare pari ki shadi nhi abhi umer hi kya hia nahi ye nahi tum kya kahi rahe hoo
T - mujhe pata hai k aap kumkum k bina nahi rahe sakte per ab kabhi na kabhi to shadi hoone hai na
M – jab who waq aaiega tab deekhe ge
T – mihir yahi to waqt hia shadi ka kumkum ki itna acha larka hai ye deekhoo aap ,aaare who kumkum ke room main hai main lati hoo
Tulsi kumkum k room main jati hai & pic lete mihir bhi tulsi k saath kk k rrom main hai
T –aare yaha aap deekhe ye hai SUMIT

Mihir see pic

M – ye deekhoo ye larka kumkum k liye theek nhi hai deekho kitne gusse se tasveer main karha hai mere pari ne to kabhi ooche awaz bhi nhi sune
T – aap is larke main koie na koie burai zaroor deekhaieg dege
M – ye bas theek nhi hai pari k liye
T – ek bar mil le pher fesla karege hum mil k ab room main chaloo aap

Both go in room
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when they go room us kuch deer baad

kumkum came

seedhe room main chalijati hai

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M – wese aapne pari se poch hai is bare main us ka kya kahina hai & who hai kaha ab tak nhi aaaie ????
T – ha maine kushi ko kaha tha ab aaieg to kushi se pochoo ge main…..kumkum abhi kushi k ghar main kuch der main aajaiege … theek hai
M –theek kya tum main tum ne mujhe to pareshani main daal deeya
T – kumkum bohat pyar hia na iss liye us k door jane se dar rahe hoo aap …… ab aap dar k o pareshani ka naam dee rahe hoo
M – such kahi rahe hoo pari ke bina jeene ki aadat jo nhi
T – ab aap soo jaio subha baat hooge

KUMKUM's ROOM

Kumkum bed se saaman utha rahe hia soone k liye wahi us ko pic milti ha sumit ki

Kumkum see pic
K – baat to hai is bande main ,handsome hai &……….

Tabhi karan knock the door

Kumkum open the door

Karan – pari mujhe neend nhi aarehia to tere saath baat karn aagaya
P – theek keya aap ne
Pari apna haath karan ki taraf point karti hia
Karan see pic & kumkum leeta hia
K- ye kon hai
p- pata
K – to pic tere room main kya kar rahe hai,,,aur ye to who WADHIWA Grp of comp: ka MD hai naam ………………………………………….
K- haa SUMIT naam hia is ka
P- hooga mujhe kya pata ye to pic kushi laie the
P –aare aap yahi beethoo main coofe bana k aaie peyoge na
K – tum pilaioge to peeyoga
P ok w8 main abhi aaie

IN kitchen

Kumkum make cofee & talk
P – to bande ka naam sumit acha naam hai khud bhi to acha hi hai

Mihir standing out side
Mihir ne sab sun liya hai

AB kya hoo w8 4 next part
LOVE
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