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Posted: 18 years ago
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Gud u cont soon & ab yar me w8 4 sukk shadi hope we read veryyyy sooon that part Gr8 scene write btw Karan & nandni 👏 NOw W4 next part post soon yar
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plzz yar cont soon w8ing 4 the next 1
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ya i will sont very soon

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Originally posted by: juhi_hussain_lo

Gud u cont soon & ab yar me w8 4 sukk shadi hope we read veryyyy sooon that part Gr8 scene write btw Karan & nandni 👏 NOw W4 next part post soon yar

thanx a lota yar 4 lovely clap's & i try my best k 8 nov tak shadi karadoo yaha kyu k un last year shadi 8th ko hi hooie the & thanx 4 liking my story 4m start

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Posted: 18 years ago
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IN kitchen

Kumkum make cofee & talk
P – to bande ka naam sumit acha naam hai khud bhi to acha hi hai

Mihir standing out side
Mihir ne sab sun liya hai
Mihir come bak room
pari ki cofee bhi ban jati hai& she go room & give karan cofee

K - aare wha pari kya coffe banaie hai
P - ye to mere baie haath ka kaam tha plzzab aap tareef main shroo nhi hoojana kyu i koow k jo bhi mere tareef karta hai who thak jata hai per tareef hai k khatam hi nhi hooti
K - wise madam hai kya jo tarrf karoo ek cofee to ache banaie hia
P - aisa hia to wapas akroo mere coffe mere
K- ye loo
( cup khalii hoota hai )
P - ye kya saree khatm bhi kar dee
K - ha tumhe to cofee chiye the ye maine to wapas kardee
P ko tabhi ek idea aata hia
P - bro ab aap jaio mujhe need aa rahe hai
karan jata hia jise hi face trun karta hia kumkum apne cell se ringtone play kar deete hai
P - aare nandini ka phone is waqt
ye sab karan ki tarfa deekh k kahiti hai
K trune
K - pari deeekho to kya kahi rahe hai sab theek to hai
P apna cell karan ko deekhati hia
K- apri tum nhi sudrooge
P - bahi jab sudrooge to aap tab kahoge phele jise kab banege
K - nhi kahooga chaloo ab soo jaio gud night

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sumit in room
veena come
V- sumit kaha ja rehe hoo
S- main office or kaha
V - ye loo paise tum ja k pandit jee ko deena
S - per kyu ??
V - jisa kaha hai wisa karoo & maine tumhare rishte ki baat kardi hia bas ab larki waloo ke jawab ka intizar hai
S - maa phere se subha subah
v - sumit jaio l8 hoo rahe ho tum yaad kar k ye paise deete jan
sumit going
veena smile


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V H

mihir read newz paper
tulsi come
T - mihir main mandir ja rehee hoo tum bhi chalo
Mihir did not listine
T - kya baat hai aap kuch pareshan lag rahee hoo
M - main nhi to sab theek hai
T - mujhe se bhi cupa rahe hoo jo bhi bat hai
M - nhi kaha na kuch nhi hai hmmmmm tum kuch kahi rahe theeee
T - mandir chalna tha na tumhe mere saath aaj
M - haaa chlooo

both going mandir

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In MANDir sumit take pasaad frm pandit & tulsi &mihir trun
mihir sumit ko deekh k khammosh hoo jata hai
Tulsi deekh kush hoo jati hai
sumit bahir chala jata hai
t – deekha kitne ache sanskar hai
tulsi sumit ko awwaz deete hai
sumit trun bak

T – tum simit hi hoon
S – ha main sumit hoo aap ?????
T – main tulsi veena k frnd
S – ooo namaste aunty
Tabhi mihir aata hai waha
M – kese hoo beta
T - ye mere husband
S – heloo uncle
M – tum yaha
S – bas aise himkuch kaam tha
Sumit see time
T – kahi jana hai kya
S - nhi to kyu aunty
T – time deekha is liye pocha
Mihir dono hath sumit k sholder per rakhita hai &
M – tum se mil k kushi hooie
S – same here
T – chalee
M – ha chaloo
S – by anuty by uncle

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Mihir tulsi in car
T – deekha ba to aap ko pasand aaya hooga sumit
M – ha larka acha hai perr
T – phere se par
M – per yaqeen hi nhi hoo raha hai k mere pari ab itni badi hoogaie hai k us ko vida karma ka waqt aagaya hai hai
T – ye din kise na kise din to aanahi tha
Mihir smile
M – pari ko ye larka pasand hai
T – aap ko kese pata us ne bataya ???
M – nhi maine suna who raat ko kicten main sumit k bare main baat kar rahe the
Mihir batata hai k kya suna (likne ki zaroorat to nhi ooper hai likha hooia hai )

Tulsi bohat kush hoojati hai



VH
Tulsi kumkum se pochne jati hai
T say evrything to kumkum

k- say mumma main is bare main kya kahoo maine to kabhi soocha hi nhi & kya ye zaroorre hai
T - beta ye din aanahi tha tumhare zindagi main
K - kya ab main aap k liye boooj ban gaie hooo???
T hug her & sat
T - ye kya kahi rahe hai tuu aisa kabhi hoo sakta hia mera tu yaqeen kar sumit tujhe her kushi deega who bohat acha larka hai
K- mumma aap ko jo theek lage who karoo aap ,,,mujhe koie itiraaz nhi hai aap jisa chite hoo wisa karoo main kuch nhi kahooge
T - agar beta tu kise or se p mera matlb kise or ko pasand karti hia to mujhe batadee main tere saath zaror dooge
K - nhi mumma ye kya kahi rahe hoo aap mere pass aap k deeye hooie sanskar hai main akbhi bhi iasa nhi karooge
tulsi smile & kiss kumkum 's forhead


sab kush hoojate hai k kumkum ne bhi ha kahi deee

tulsi call veena

tell her that ye rishata paka hai humare tafse to ab aap ki kya raie hai
V also become very happy

V – hum kal shaan ko aaiege mithi le k or apni bahu ko milne
T – jisa tum theek samjoo
V – hum sagaie bhi dhoom dhaam se karege mere sumit ko shadi yaqen hi nhi hoo raha hai acha tulsi main sab batadoo main phone rakhiti hoo

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Wh
Veena is sooo happy
D – aare veena kya hooia
V – maa jii sumit ka rishta paka hoogaya hai
D – such
V – hum kal kumkum ko deekhine jaiege
D – such veena tumne to ache khabar sunaie hai per maine abhi tak apne potee ki hoone wale biwi ko nhi deekha
V – maa jee hum kal hi un k yaha chalege

Every 1 soo happy


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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx a lot u read my story 1st time right????

thanx a lot 4 comments😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nxt day

morning

V h

karan & kushi in kumkum 's room

K - mere piyari behineya bane gi dulnani

tabhi kumkum say

P - bahi stop it

kushi start sing song

Ku- sun sun pari there liye ek rishita aaya hia

pari kushi ka moo band kar dete hai

tabhi karan start ing again

K - darvaze pe tere barat lage ga doolo main bitha k tujhe le jaiega

Ku- aaiega oo dulha aaiega aaiega dulha aaiega

tulsi come

t - ye kya ho raha hai karan offiice nhi jana kya

kumkum - mumma deekhoo na ye done mujhe tand kar rahe hai

tulsi - tang per kese ???

kushi batai hia tulsi ko

per tulsi bhi gaana gati hai

banoo rani tujhe syani hona hi tha hoonahi tha kise raja ki rani hona hi tha hoona hi tha

p -mumaa aap bhi

pari leave room

karan us k peeche aajata hai

K - pati sun to

P- abhi im angry with u

K - sun to

pari ruk jati hai

K - aare pagli hum to mazaq kar rahe the per such baat ye bhi k mujhe bohat kushi hooie k tum

P - k main ab yaha mehimaan hoogaie hoo

mihir - nhi beta is ghar k liye tum jo ab hoo who shadi k baad bhi hooga is ghar ki jaan hoo tum tere bina yaha koie bhi poora nhi hia

P - papa i love u ur the Gr8 papa in howl world

karan smile

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WH

veena kul

V - aap aaj office se jaldi aajaiye ga

K - kyu

V - aare kaha to tha aaj tulsi k yaha jana hia engagiment date fix karne

K - per abhi abhi kahi raha ho sumit se ek bar phere pochoooo

V - who jab deekhe ga kumkum ko to khud shadi jaldi karane ko kahega

K - tum kahito hoo to thek main aajaioga & sumit ko kaha to hia phere bhi aap us ko apne saath lete aana aap .

K - ok by

veena go to dadi & dadaje

V - maaje aaj aap ko sumit or kumkum ki sagaie k date fix karni hai

D - beta ek sumit mil to le us larki se bad main date bhi fix hoojaiege

V - maaje per ....

dadajee- beta veena rajeshvari theek kahi rahe hia ,, kahi bad main sumit ka irada badal jaie to .ek bar un ko aqle milne doo tab sumit se pochina date thek hai

Dadi - haa aap bilkul theek kahi rahe hai

veena leave

veena call sumit

v – sumit shaam ko jaldi aana

S – muma aap jaio na main kya karooga waha

V – kumkum ko khud bhi deekhoo

S – kya farq parega mere na ddekhine se

V – sumit tumhe aana hia bas aana hai

S – mumma mumma

Veena phone band kardeti hai

EVEING

VH

VEENA kul & dadi aate hia

Tulsi – kese hai aap maajee

D- main theek tum bataio tum kese hoo

T – main theek

Karan say namaste

V – ye karan hia kya ??

T – ye karan hai

Veena hug karan

V – kese ho beta

K – main theek

T – sumit nhi aaya kya?

K – jee who aa raha hai

V- kaha bhi tha k apne saath lete aana per nhi aap to

T – kya hooia ??

V – kuch nhi

Mihir come

M – namaste jee

Kul hug mihir

Sab beth jaate hai

After 30 mint

Sab baate kar rahe hai

Veena see time

V – sumit abhi tak nhi aaya ?

Tabhi sumit enter VH

Karan see sumit

K aran sumit ke pass jatahia

Intro deeta hai

Sumit hug karan

K – nice meeting u

S – same here

Veena – aare aagaie tum aaio aaio

Sumit sab se milta hai

Sangita – aare bhabhi ab sumit bhi aagay hai to apni kumkum leke ate hai na

T – ha el mint kushi beta jaio kumkum ko leke aaio

Ku—ok aunty

Karan – kushi main jaio pari ko lene ??

T – tu chal ja

V – ye pari kon

M – hum kumkum ko pyar se pari kahite hai

V – acha

Kumkum come

Dadi say

D – kise ki nazar na lage kitne pyari hai

Sumit also see kumkum

Both looking each other

Sumit smile

Kumkum shy

Kul – ab humari baati to hooti rahege,,kyu na sumit or kumkum kuch der aqle baat karne ko deeya jaie

M – ha ha kyu nhi pari aap sumit ko apne room main lejaiye

Sumit – uncle its ok mujhe kuch pochina nahi hai in se

T – beta aap dono to ek dosre k liye anjan hoo jaio aap kuch der main ek dosre ko Janine ki koshish karooo

Pari uthiti hai sumit bhi us saath us k room main jata hai

Kumkum fell nervous

Kumkum – aaiye

sumit room main karha hai

k – aap bethiye

sumit sit

dono palkhe neeche kar k bethe hia

koie kise se baat nhi kar raha

sumit ke moblie ring bajti hai

s – heloo

sameer – hi yar where r u ?

S – main who kyu koie kaam hai ??

Sameer I wana talk with u ? kyat u aaj waha gaya tha aunty walo k saath

S – to ye baat hai main whi hoo & …….

Sumit cut kar deeta hia call

S – sorry jo mere frnd ka

K – its ok

K – aap ko kuch bochina nhi hai mujhe se ???

S – nhi

K – kyu

S – kyu k jis main khobsurati hoo us ki sirf tareef karni chiye sawal nhi

K shy

S – ab kafi der hoogaie chale bahir

Kumkum smile & both going out side

Sumit – nice to meet u MISS PARI

Kumkum pari naam sun k heeran hoo jati ha

K – same here per ye naam

Tabhi kushi kumkum k pas aajati hia

Ku- sumit jee mere frnd se to baat kar li ab hum se bhi karee

S – aap ki tareef

Ku- tarref to us khuda ki karoo jis ne humie kumkum ka dost banaya

Sumit & kumkum smile

Ku- wiase pocha hai to batan to hooga …… Hi me kushi & kumkum ki

S – dost hoo aap ..

Ku- gud jitna jaldi janle aap utnahi faida hooga aap ka

S – faida ?? mean

Ku – kumkum k bare infor jo dooge main aap ko

S – oooooo

Sumit – chaleee ab

3 hi hall main aajate haii………..

Edited by juhi_hussain - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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guyz plzzz commets yar me w8inh 4 comments

Edited by juhi_hussain - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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fab story 👏 👏
do continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: amrit23

fab story 👏 👏
do continue soon 😊

thanx a lot yar 4 erading my story & keep alsi read in futer

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