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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: verni

bachcha write more.......waiting eagerly......... 😊

will definitely write more........but now i have got xams coming up again 😡................will try to update b4 my xams......😳.....

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Posted: 18 years ago
its okk...........kar lenge intezaar........
perseverance........is always gud. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 great ff continue sooon plzzzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago
GR8 part dear & all the best 4 ur exams & contsoon
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Posted: 18 years ago
aare yar abhi tak exams hai kya ba w8 nhi hoo raha hai 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey ppl thnks 4 all ur appreciation 😳 😳....
my xams have not yet finishd.......but i m havin a week's break....so thought of continuing my fan fic 😉 😛 😃.........will do so in a day or 2 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

okk evry1.....so here's d next part 😃 😃...

Previously : Kumkum runs after Anku in the whole house........Anku pleads to Eks & Nidhi to help her..........but both of them are busy in their Dinesh & Sumit respectively..........


SCENE 8

Anku is sitting on the bed, holding her leg, as it was paining a lot. Kumkum standing at the side of the bed holding a bat in her hand. Ekta trying to find the band-aid, but could not, coz she could not keep her eyes off her Dinesh. & Finally Nidhi roaming around, singing "maar daala, allah, maar daala"


Kumkum : tu bilkul chup ho jaa Nidhi varna ab main tujhe bhi maaroongi, samjhi??

Nidhi : "dost dost na raha"

Kumkum : hey bhagwaan ye ladki toh poori tarah se paagal ho gayi hai....are eks di aap kya kar rahe ho.itni der se sspko ek first-aid box nahi mila.....hatto main dhoondhti hoon

& the paagalpan continued.....

Jahan Kumkum ke ghar par sab paagak ho rahe the, vahin Sumit ka bhi yahi haal tha. Sumit enerts the house with Jatin, both arguing.

Jatin : Sumit ruk jaa...
Sumit keeps on walking.

Jatin : meri baat toh sun...

Sumit : nahi bhaiyya, aaj main aapki baat nahi sunoonga, aap us chhipkali ki hi tarafdaari karenge, jo mujhse bilkul bardaasht nahi hoga....

Jatin : aisi bhi kya ho gaya jo tujh se bardaasht nahi hoga?

Sumit : bhaiyya aap sab kuch jaante hain, fir bhi....

Jatin : sab kuch jaanta hoon isliye keh raha hoon ki aisa kuch nahi hua jisse tujhe itna gussa aa jaaye.......mujhe dekh...mujhe toh bilkul gussa nahi aa raha.....

Sumit : aapko toh kabhi gussa aata hi nahi....lekin mujhe aata hai........agar mujhe vo chhipkali donara mili na toh main....

Voice : toh kya kar loge tum uska??.........voh bhi akele??

Both Sumit & Jatin turn around & find a girl, who was dressed completely like a tomboy, was standing there.

Sumit : akela kahan hoon main......mere saath tu jo hai.......vaise main tujhse bahut naaraz hoon.......kahan thi itne dino se??

Girl : arre yaa naaraz mat ho....main tujhe sab kuch bata dungi baad mein.....pehle mujhe ye bata ki ye chhipkali ka kya chakkar hai??

Sumit : yahan nahi, varna bhaiya fir se shuru ho jaayenge mujhe samjhaane........chal andar chal ke baat karte hain

Jatin : ek minute.....arre pehle use sab se mil toh lene de....kuch kha toh lene de......jaa Rach kitchen mein jaakar kuch kha le

Rach : nahi bhaiyya, abhi mujhe bhookh nahi hai.....pehle main apne dost ko pareshaan karne waali chhipkali ke baare mein toh jaan loon....uske baad aaram se khaati rahoongi...

Sumit & Rach go inside his room & he tells her everything.

Rach : ye ladki samajhti kya hai apne aapko..........arre maana ki tu dikhta hai chaachhundar jaisa..... Sumit looks at her sternly .....par iska matlab ye toh nahi ki tujhe muh pe bol diya jaaye.....

Sumit : tu meri side hai ya uski??

Rach : arre yaar main toh teri hi side hoon.......lekin sachaai bhi toh kabhi kabhi bolni chaahiye naa....tu galatfehmi mein na rahe isliye ye kadwa sach bar-baar tujhe yaad dilaana mera farz hai......aakhir teri dost hoon main.....

Sumit : vaah kya dost hai......koi idea bataane ki jagah meri hi buraaiyaan kar rahi hai....

Rach : achha baba......pareshaan mat ho....main sochti hoon kuch..tab tak tu bhi thoda dimaag laga....arre....main toh bhool hi gayi...tu apna dimaag nahi laga sakta.......kyunki uske liye dimaag hona bhi toh chaahiye naa.....

Sumit : dekh Rach.....tu.....

Rach : achha baba sorry.......dobara kuch nahi bolungi.....khush?

Both started thinking of ways to teach Kumkum a lesson........ suddenly......

Rach : IDEA!!!!


i m writin after such a long time.......plz comment on ths part 😳 😳......

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Posted: 18 years ago
👏

kya bolun..................................hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm welcome back................ 😃

a gr8 part.............lovely..........chal ab jaldi se unki achchi si ladai karva de...........

😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesum part nidhi 👏 👏
i can imagine sumit's anger 😆
continue soon acha..waiting 4 the next bit
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: verni

👏

kya bolun..................................hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm welcome back................ 😃

a gr8 part.............lovely..........chal ab jaldi se unki achchi si ladai karva de...........

😊

hehe....th***......oops i wont say d word 😳 😳.....

& sure.....main unki ladhaai karwaa doongi jaldi....lekin uske liye u'll have 2 wait n watch n read 😛....

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