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Nidoo

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Posted: 18 years ago

CHARACTERS :

SUMIT - main hero

KUMKUM - main heroine

JATIN - Sumit's elder brother

Nidhi - Kumkum's best friend

Anku - Kumkum's younger sister

Eks - Kumkum's elder sister

Rach - Sumit's childhood friend

Ash - Sumit's childhood friend, Rach's twin

Henna, Verni, Amrit - Kumkum-Sumit's Classmates

SCENE 1 - page 2

SCENE 2 - page 3

SCENE 3 - page 7

SCENE 4 - page 9

SCENE 5 - page 11

SCENE 6 - page 13

SCENE 7 - page 14

SCENE 8 - page 18

SCENE 9 -page 21

SCENE 10 - page 24

SCENE 11 - page 27

SCENE 12 - page 30

SCENE 13 - page 34

SCENE 14 - page 36

SCENE 15 - page 39

SCENE 16 - page 43

SCENE 17 - page 48

SCENE 18 - page 51

SCENE 19 - page 55

SCENE 20 - page 57

SCENE 21 - page 62

SCENE 22 - page 63

SCENE 23 - page 68

Edited by nature - 17 years ago

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Ankita

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Posted: 18 years ago

wowwwwwwwwwwww nidhs...gr8 idea yaar...

jaldi se gv ur 1st part 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ankuhujulover
wowwwwwwwwwwww nidhs...gr8 idea yaar...

jaldi se gv ur 1st part 😳

itni bhi jaldi kya hai anku madam...............intezaar karo...................sabr ka fal meetha hota hai😉

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Tara

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Posted: 18 years ago

yep agree wid anku fantastic idaea nidhi best of luck jaan cn't w8 2 raed it all tc luv tara1 👏

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Ankita

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nature

itni bhi jaldi kya hai anku madam...............intezaar karo...................sabr ka fal meetha hota hai😉

are yeh intezar hi toh mushkil hai....isse nahin kiya jaata

ab jaldiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii se likho😉

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Sumra

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Posted: 18 years ago

Hey itz good but let me tell you that this will be the 5th fanfic not the 4th!!

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hersha

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Posted: 18 years ago

Great idea!! i ope everyone has fun! 😊

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*Resham*

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Posted: 18 years ago

Gr8 idea dear, now post the 1st part... quick

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Nidoo

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Posted: 18 years ago

thnks ppl 4 ur appreciation 😳
ok here's d 1st part 😊

kumkumianz introduced in d 1st part r : ankuhujulover (ankita)
SCENE 1

Samundar ka kinaara, shaam ka waqt, suraj baadlon mein chupne se pehle chaaron or apni laali faila raha hai, aur is khoobsurat nazaare ko char chaand lagati ek ladki, jo laal salwar kameez pehne khadi hai. Uski aankhon se aansoon beh rahe hain aur vo apne saamne khade ladke se keh rahi hai, "Tum kahan jaa rahe ho, tumhare pyar ke sahaare hi to main zinda hoon. Tumhine mujhe jeene ka maqsad diya hai aur ab tum hi mujhe chhod kar jaa raha ho. Tum se meri har saans judi hai tumhare bina main kaise jee paaoongi. Main tumhare bina mar jaaoongi, mujhe chhod kar mat jaao Sumit, please mujhe chhod kar mat jaao."

Tabhi ek aawaaz aati hai, "Cut it." Ye aawaz hai Vishal Malhotra ki jo "Director" ki kursi par baitha hai. Vo us ladki ke paas aata hai aur kehta hai, "Ye tum kya kar rahi ho Kumkum. Tum baar baar vahi galti kyu kar rahi ho. Ye 25th retake tha aur tumne fir se vahi kiya. main tumhe kitni baar bata chuka hoon ki hamari film ke hero ka naam Avinash hai, Sumit nahi."

Kumkum Vishal ki taraf dekhti hai, uski aankhon mein aasoon hain, aisa lag raha hai maano ye koi film ka scene nahi balki uski zindagi ki kahaani ho. Vo Vishal se kehti hai, "I'm sorry Vishal, par main apne bas mein nahi hoon. If you don't mind, kya hum baaki ki shooting kal kar sakte hain?" Vishal use dekhta hai aur kehta hai, "Theek hai!"

Kumkum apni make-up van mein jaati hai aur kapde change karke api gaadi ke paas aa jaati hai. Vahan par ek ladki, jo ki umr mein usse chhoti hai, uska intezaar kar rahi hai. Vo ladki usse kehti hai, " what happened?"
Kumkum : Kuch nahi
Girl : To aapka chehra itna bujha bujha sa kyun hai?
Kumkum : Kaha na kuch nahi hai
Girl : Main nahi maanti, kuch to zaroor hai
Kumkum : Offo Anku, tumhe samajh nahi aata kya. Ek baar keh to diya ki kuch bhi nahi hai, ab jaldi ghar chalo, main bahut thak gayi hoon.
Ye Anku hai Ankita, Kumkum ki chhoti behen.

now evry1 plz post ur honest comments 😳

Edited by nature - 18 years ago