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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Ektaj

Fab Nids.. 👏 👏 👏

Rach ki bhi entry ho gayi.. woh bhi kya mast entry thi.. Just too good.. Chachhundar..chipkali.. lage raho! 😆 😆 😆

Looking forward to the next part..

😆 😆 😆 .......lolz....ab rachuu jee ka intezaar hai.....dekhna hai vo kya kehti hain apni entry ke baare mein 😉 😉.....& i'll b postin nxt part v.soon 😳 😳......

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Posted: 18 years ago
arre nidz tera writing style is jus 'KYA KEHNA!'

brilliant part! 👏 👏

absolutely loved it...now u can teach me how to write as well as u!!! 😉 😆 😆

maza agaya!!! Honestly! 😉

(aur haan i'm at home now 😈 ...kitni shucki ho tum!!! 😆 )
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 👏 👏 mast part tha,,..cnt w8 fr rachuu ji 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Henna042

arre nidz tera writing style is jus 'KYA KEHNA!'

brilliant part! 👏 👏

absolutely loved it...now u can teach me how to write as well as u!!! 😉 😆 😆

maza agaya!!! Honestly! 😉

(aur haan i'm at home now 😈 ...kitni shucki ho tum!!! 😆 )

bas bas bahut tareef ho gayi meri.........m blushin now 😆.......

& gud ki u r at home.....varna......

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ankuhujulover

👏 👏 👏 mast part tha,,..cnt w8 fr rachuu ji 😆 😆 😆

me 2 waitin 4 her 😳 😳.....

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Posted: 18 years ago
bcoz m free for a li'l tym.....so i thought ki main nxt part bhi likh daloon 😳 😳 .......to compensate 4 d loss earlier 😛 😉....
so here it is....coming in while 😳....
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Posted: 18 years ago
Previously : Rach enters as Sumit's friend, Sumit tells her everything that happened at the college, they both start thinking ways of teaching Kumkum a lesson, suddenly Rach gets an idea.

SCENE 9


Rach tells her idea to Sumit, in his ear so that Jatin may not hear it. After her suggestion :

Rach : toh Mr.Chachhundar.....i mean Mr. Sumit Wadhwa....kaisa laga aapko mera idea??

Before Sumit could say anything, some one else said : bilkul bakwaas!!!
It was a girl, standing at the door of Sumit's room, completely opposite to Rach in appearance, in full Indian attire, with long hair tied in a neat plait.

Girl : Rach tu apne ye bekaar ideas dena kab band karegi???........Sumit ko us ladki ko sabak sikhana hai, usse pit ke nahi aana

Sumit : ek minute.......pehle tu mujhe ye bata ki tujhe ye sab pata kaise chala......aur tune hamari baatein kaise suni....Rach ne toh mujhe kaan me bataya tha...

Girl : offo....mujhe sab kuch bahar Jatin bhaiyya ne bataya....aur jahan tak Rach ki baat hai, toh janaab aap bhool rahe hain ki main uski judwaa behen hoon......vo kab kya kehti hai, kab kya karti hai, mujhe achhi tarah se pata hai...

Sumit's mom, Veena, enters the room.

Veena : arre Rach......Ash......tum dono yahan??.......tum kab aayee....maine toh tumhe dekha hi nahi....

Ash : vo aunty hum bas abhi thodi der pehle hi aaye hain...

Rach : hey aunt....wassup??

Veena : hey bhagwaan.......ye ladki kab sudharegi....kabhi toh ladkiyon ki tarah behave kiya kar.....dekh apni behen ko....kitni achhi lag rahi hai vo salwaar-kameez mein....aur tu...

Rach : arre aunty...fir se nahi....abhi aap jaao....hume Sumit se kuch important baat karni hai...

Veena : kaisi important baat??

Ash : kuch khaas nahi aunty...bas uski ek roblem solve karni hai...

Veena (to Sumit) : Sumit...sum zaraa mere saath 2 minute bahar aa

Sumit goes outside with her.

Veena : ye kya hai Sumit??......tu apni problems fir in dono ko bata raha hai.....tujhe kitni baar kaha hai ki ladkon ko apna dost banaa.......unke saath apni problems share kar.......par nahi tujhe toh sunna hi nahi hai...arre in dono ki shhadi ho jaayegi, tab kya karega???......inhe bigaad mat...samjhaa??

Ash : aunty.....aapko lagta hai hum bigadne waalon mein se hain??

Veena : rehne de rehne de......dekh apni behen ko....bilkul ladkon ki tarah rehti hai voh....

Sumit : offo mom....aap bhi naa..har baar ek hi baat....aap jaao yahan se....mujhe baat karne do inse...

Veena looks angrily at Sumit & then leaves.

Sumit : haan toh maataaon......ab aap meri madad karenge ya nahi??

Ash : haan haan bilkul karenge....sun mera idea...

Ash whispers something in Sumit's ear, Sumit nods & smiles brightly.

Next Morning

Kumkum & Nidhi waiting at the bus-stop for the bus. Suddenly a big car pulls up in front of them.

Nidhi : vaah yaar.......kya gaadi hai.....kaash aisi gaadi apne paas hoti.....vaise mere paas hai toh sahi....lekin aaj dad ne lekar aane nahi di....varna hum dono bhi shaan se usme baith kar jaate....

The door of the car opens & someone steps out. It's Sumit. He sees both of them & comes near.

Sumit : want a lift?

Kumkum : jee nahi….hume aapki lift nahi chaahiye…

Sumit : aapse poochha bhi kisne hai……main toh us khoobsurat ladki se pooch raha hoon jo aapke saath khadi hai (& points towards Nidhi)
Nidhi is fully surprised.

Nidhi : main???........aap mere baare mein keh rahe hain???

Sumit : aapke baare mein nahi toh kya main is chhipkali ke baare mein baat karunga??......aap hi se poochh raha hoon......kya aap mere saath gaadi mein chalengi Miss...ummm...??

Nidhi : Nidhi !!!

Kumkum : jee nahi.........ye aapke saath nahi jaayegi....ye mere saath jaayegi....right Nidz??

Nidhi : (to Kumkum) wrong Kumkum....arre yaar itne handsome ladke aur itni badiyaa gaadi ko chhodke kaun bevkoof tere saath is khaatara bus mein jaayega....
(to Sumit) jee main aapke saath chalungi...

Sumit : aur aapki ye dost??

Nidhi : ye apne aap bus mein aa jaayegi....bahut strong ladki hai....akele travel kar sakti hai...

Nidhi goes towards the car.

Sumit : (to Kumkum) bubbye...Miss Chhipkali!!! have a nice journey!!!

Kumkum : tumhe to main dekh loongi chhachhundar!!!

Sumit : dekhna toh tumhe padhega hi!!!

Nidhi : chalein???

Sumit : yeah sure...

Sumit comes and opens the door for her....She sits inside & they both drive off....Kumkum is standing alone at the bus-stop.


so ppl.....this scene also comes 2 an end 😳......although i had thought much more....but i have no more strength left to type 😳 😳 😳...hope u all like it 😳 😳....
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Posted: 18 years ago
wahhhhhh nidhs fultoo line mari jaa rahi hai sumit pe 😆 😆 😆

nice part
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG!!!! Nidz kaise dost hai tu... 😲

ladke ke liye u left ur friend

i admit that he is HOT but...dost ko chor diya... 😕

neways keep da story coming...going great!!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part nidhi 👏 👏 👏
kk ka chehra dekhne layak hoga na 😆
now i suppose a fight is going to happen b/w kk n u 😆

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