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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Henna042

nahi...kyun key tum gussa kar rahe ho! to hum bhi gussa hogayenge!... 😆

jus kidding!!!

yeh Nidz is right..it takes alot of effort to write up scenes so u ought to give bac some apprectiation guyz!!!
trust me i know! 😉

n guys if nobody comments it looks as though ur not reading...

So plz do comment for Nidz 😃



i wont say thnks 2 u henna 4 putting up 4 me & u knw the reason 😳 ..........
aur vaise mujhe lagta hai ki is scene mein kuch khaas tha nahi comment karne ke liye, so i'll write d nxt scene 2morw, which i promise will be far more intersting thn this one & thn u all will have to post ur comments or compliments.......whatever u may wish to 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
again fantastic 👏 haaii sach mein u made me forget those worries of hu leaving kk 😕 😳
coming bak to ur fan fic!! sach mein after such a fight wid such handsome hu, who will b attentive in d class 😳 😳 nidhi apne aap ko to full lattu kar diya hu par!! 😉
waiting for d next part
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ashwinikumkum

again fantastic 👏 haaii sach mein u made me forget those worries of hu leaving kk 😕 😳
coming bak to ur fan fic!! sach mein after such a fight wid such handsome hu, who will b attentive in d class 😳 😳 nidhi apne aap ko to full lattu kar diya hu par!! 😉
waiting for d next part



arre lattu kar kya diya..........hum to pehle se hi un par lattu hain !!! 😉 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
okk ppl so here's d nxt part 😊 😃.........
SCENE 7

At Kumkum's home ::::
When Kumkum & Nidhi reach home, they find the door open. They both go inside with Sumit still in their minds, though in different contexts. There Kumkum's elder sis ekta is fussing over her younger sis anku.

Eks : Anku, ye kya hai?
Anku : Kya hai?
Eks : vahi to main poochh rahi hoon ki ye kya hai?
Anku : main bhi to yahi keh rahi hoon ki ye kya hai?
Eks : arre tujhe samajh kyun nahi aa raha, dekh idhar aur bata ki ye kya hai?
Anku : ye to TV hai, eks di!!
Eks : offo..........ye to mujhe bhi pata hai ki ye TV hai
Anku : to fir kyun poochh rahe ho?
Eks : main teri school dress ke baare mein poochh rahi hoon stupid.
Anku : to aisa bolo na, TV ki taraf dekh kar uniform ke baare poochhoge to mujhe kaise pata chalega???
Eks : ab to pata chal gaya naa?
Anku : haan
Eks : to ab bata ki ye kya hai, ye itni gandi kaise ho gayi?
Anku : ye..............vo kya hai naa ki meri ladaau ho gayi kisi se aur usne mujhe thoda sa dhakka de diya, diwaar lag gayi
Eks : diwaar lagne par dress itni gandi ho gayi???
Anku : vo kya hai na, vo building under construction hai, isliye uspar saari mitti thi
Eks : main nahi maanti ki kisi ne tujhe dhakka diya aur tu use yun hi chhod aayee, ye jhaansi ki rani chup baithne waalon mein se nahi hai!!!
Anku : offo Di.........main to use pehle hi maar chuki thi naa!!!
Eks : hey bhagwaan............tu ye school mein maar-pitaai karna kab chhodegi??????............kitna ziddi daag hai ye........ise dhone mein kitna time lagega.......ab main dinesh se kaise miloongi????

Meanwhile Kumkum & Nidhi had entered & were listening to all this.

Kumkum : kaun Dinesh Eks Di?
Eks : arre tum dono aa gaye........mujhe to pata hi nahi chala......baitho, main khaane ke liye kuch lekar aati hoon
Kumkum : pehle mujhe bataaiye ki ye Dinesh kaun hai?
Eks : bataaungi par tu daantegi nahi.....
Nidhi : fir to aap ise bilkul mat bataaiye, ye sab ko daant rahi hai aaj, achhe bhale logon se jhagda kar rahi hai
Eks : kyun kya hua..............college mein kuch hua kya??
Kumkum : college mein kya hua, kya nahi, ye main aapko baad mein bataaungi, pehle aap ye bataaiye ki ye Dinesh kaun hai??
Eks : Dinesh.........vo to........vo Zee TV pe jo naya serial shuru hua hai naa "Aashirwaad"........jisme vo khadoos baap hai.........us khadoos ki jo sundar beti hai naa, usi ka boyfriend hai Dinesh!!!!!
Kumkum : offo Eks Di.........aap fir shuru ho gayi........ye TV na ho gaya aafat ho gayi.......
Eks : dekh kisi aur ka gussa mujh par mat nikaal, jaa apne dimaag ko thoda shaant kar aur anku ki school uniform dho de
Kumkum : haan ye kaam to mujhe hi karna padhega, kyunki aapko to apne "Dinesh" se milna hai
Eks : aur nahi to kya.........tujhe pata nahi hai ki vo kitna handsome hai!!!

Idhar Nidhi ke khayalon mein Sumit ghoom raha tha...

Nidhi : haan Di, aapne bilkul sahi kaha, vo bahut handsome hai
Eks : chalo kooi to hai jo mujhe samajhta hai....
Nidhi : main aapko poori tarah samajhti hoon.....
Eks : haan pata hai uski aankhen kitni khoobsurat hai?
Nidhi : haan pata hai.....
Eks : aur uske baal kitne achhe lagte hain, khaas kar vo chaar baal jo uske maathe par girte hain
Nidhi : 4 nahi 6
Eks : haan aur uski muskurahat to bas aisi hai ki kisi ka bhi dil aa jaaye us par........
Nidhi : haan mujhe poora yakeen hai ki uski muskuraahat aisi hi hogi
Eks : hogi kya matlab, uski smile aisi hai!!!
Nidhi : arre abhi tak dekhi kahan hai uski smile??
Eks : dekhi nahi........promo mein sabse pehle uski smile hi to dikhaate hain
Nidhi : promo........kaunsa promo??
Eks : Aashirwaad ka
Nidhi : Aashirwaad??? Aashirwaad se mujhe kya lena-dena??
Eks : arre abhi jo hum Dinesh ki baat kar rahe the, vo Aashirwaad mein hi to aane waala hai
Nidhi : Dinesh?? Kaun Dinesh??..........main kisi Dinesh-Vinesh ko nahi jaanti......
Eks : to fir tu kiski baat kar rahi thi??
Nidhi : Sumit ki!!!
Eks : kaun Sumit?
Nidhi : hamare college mein hai..........u wont believe it Eks Di......bahut hi handsome hai vo!!!!!! mera to dil aa gaya hai uspar!!!!
Eks : itna hi achha hai, to uski smile kyun nahi dekhi??
Nidhi : dekhna to chaahti thi, par aapki behen hai naa, usne bechaare Sumit se itni ladhaai kari ki poochho mat
Eks : Ye Kumkum bhi naa........kabhi nahi sudharegi.......... ab samajh mein aaya ki anku kis par gayi hai.........chal tu uski chinta chhod, mere saath TV dekh, main tujhe Dinesh se milwaati hoon , ye dekh, ye raha vo
Nidhi : haila.......Eks Di........ye to bilkul Sumit jaisa hai!!!

& there Kumkum was fuming at Eks, Nidhi & anku, besides Sumit.
Kumkum (to herself) : vo ladka apne aap ko samajhta kya hai......kahin ka hero hai kya.......aur ye Nidhi......usi ki side le rahi thi.......baar baar ek hi baat keh rahi thi.......kitna handsome hai.........smart hai......maana ki handsome hai, par iska matlab ye to nahi ki vo ladkiyon ke saath kaise bhi baat kar lega.........aur ye anku........ise bhi akkal nahi hai........kitni gandi kar di hai isne apni dress........aur Di.....unhe to TV se fursat hi kahan..........

just then she found something in Anku's pocket....

Kumkum (to herself) : ye ladki bhi naa........pata nahi kab sudharegi.....pata nahi kya kya cheezen rakhti hai apni jeb mein.......ye kya hai??.......ye.....ye to.......ye to meri earrings hain.......anku ki bachhi.......meri earrings school le gayi mujhse bina poochhe......aur apni ladhaai mein inhe tod bhi diya........ab teri khair nahi
Kumkum (shouting) : oye anku..........sun zara.........ab tu nahi bachegi!!!!!
Anku (to herself) : hey bhagwaan, lagta hai kumkum didi ko unki tooti hui earrings mil gayi..........baap re baap..........bhaago.........

& Kumkum runs after her in the whole house........Anku pleads to Eks & Nidhi to help her..........but both of them are busy in their Dinesh & Sumit respectively..........


i have tried to add comedy in it......now u ppl r gonna tell me how's it?? 😳 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 tht was sooo funnyyy"!!!!!! lol ekss going pagal over "dinesh" from zee tvv 😆 😆 😆 mujhe laga ekss ka boyfriend hai 😆 😆 😆 hahahaha and then nidzzzzzz lol 😆 😆 😆 was smiply great!!!!!! 👏 continue sooooonnnnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 omgggggggggggg nidhs ths ws sooooooooooo funny


eks dinesh k peeche 😆

too gud yaar...keep it up
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome Nidz!!!! Fantastic! 👏 👏 👏

really funny.... 😆

gr8 work! keep it up!
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Posted: 18 years ago
keep it up nidhi
awesum work 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome!! 👏 👏 4 nahi 6 nahi 5 baal i say 😆
i agree wid both eks and nids ki uski smile bahut achi hai aankhen bhi haila!! 😳 😳 😳
gud comedy esp b/w anku and eks 😉 😉
chal ab next part waiting 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome!! 👏 👏 4 nahi 6 nahi 5 baal i say 😆
i agree wid both eks and nids ki uski smile bahut achi hai aankhen bhi haila!! 😳 😳 😳
gud comedy esp b/w anku and eks 😉 😉
chal ab next part waiting 😳 😳

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