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Posted: 18 years ago
missing everyone 😭 😭

Previously

Kumkum - Antara ek bohat achi ladki hai..aur usne Sharman ko bhi teek kar diya...and i think voh Sharman ko pasand karti hai...tho kyun na....

Sumit - Antara aur Sharman ki shaadi?

Kumkum - well koi jaldi nahin...pehle dono se baat karke...aur Mr Bajaj se baat karke...dhekte hai

Antara had heard everything, she is very happy. Sumit and Kumkum are also happy about this

Part 34

Sumit - Kumkum mujhe nahin lagta Sharman haan kahega

Kumkum - kyun nahin? kab tak Rach ki yaadein ke saath voh jeeyega?

Sumit - lekin....

Kumkum - main yeh thodi na keh rahi hoon ke abhi shaadi kardo main tho baat karne ke baat kar rahi hoon

Sumit - teek hai main Sharman se baat karta hoon

Sumit goes to Sharman, he sees him looking out the window

Sumit - kya dhek rahe ho?

Sharman - kuch nahin Pa aap ko kuch kaam tha, mujhe bulaliya hota

Sumit - Sharman.....tumhari mom chahti hai...

Sharman - kya Pa?

Sumit - tumhari mom chahti hai ke tum fhir se shaadi.....

Sharman - dad! aap yeh kaise soch sakte ke main dosri shaadi karoonga? pa mere liye Rach ki illava kisi aur ke baare mein sochna.....

Sumit - kab tak Sharman? agar Rach dhek rahi hogi tho bohat dhuk hoga yeh soch kar ke tumne jeena chord diya hai...kya tum yeh chahte ho?

Sharman - nahin pa lekin shaadi....

Sumit - hum sirf yeh chahte hai ke tum is baare mein sochlo

Sharman - ladki kaun hai pa?

Sumit - antara.....

Sharman - aap ke liye main sochloon ga lekin ki promises nahin

Sumit - teek hai beta

A few days later Kripa and Angad are having dinner

Kripa - Angad....ek baat poochoon?

Angad - poocho

Kripa - agar mein yaadaash kabhi nahin wapas aati tho?

Angad (smiles) - tho kya? tho tum mujhse shaadi karlo

Kripa - Angad be serious!

Angad (quietly) - i am....

Kripa - kuch kaha?

Angad - nahin...dheko tumhari yaadaash aayegi fikar mat karo

Later Angad and Kripa are at home, Kripa is cleaning up, shes standing on a stool cleaning a shelf, she tiptoes and the stool moves, Kripa falls on the floor

Kripa - aahhh Angad!!!!

Angad comes running

Angad - kya hua!! tum neechee kya kar rahi ho?

Kripa - spider dhoond rahi hoon! stupid mein stool se ghir gayi....

Angad - so get up

Kripa looks at him angrily and tries to get up but her ankle hurts so she cant

Kripa -ahhhhhh

Angad - Kripa!! bilkul stupid ho tum, agar maine kaha ke kudh utho tho utne chali gayi!

Angad bends down and picks Kripa up in his arms, Kripa looks at him and sees love for her in his eyes, he puts her on the bed and massages her foot

Angad - stupid girl

Kripa - do you love me?

Angad (shocked) - kya!

Kripa - do you love me?

Angad - nahin tum jaisi pagal ladki se kaun pyaar karega!

Kripa - tum jaisa pagal ladka, sach batao kya tum mujhe pyaar karte ho?

Angad - Kripa tum yeh kaunsi baat lekar bet gayi

Kripa (upset) - teek hai mat karo pyaar..main bhi tumse pyaar nahin karti jao!

Angad - kya kaha?

Kripa - nahin jao!

Angad - you love me?

Kripa - nahin!

Angad - but i love you

Kripa looks at Angad with hapiness

Kripa - i love you too!!!!

Angad picks Kripa up and twirls her around, both are very happy, on the other side Sharman is on the verge of making his decision

Sharman - Antara tumse baat karni thi

Antara - kaho?

Sharman - kya tum is rishte se kush ho?

Antara (blushes) - haan....lekin agar tum nahin chahte tho.....

Sharman - hmm i see, meri ek baat sunlo

Antara - kya ?

Sharman - agar maine haan kar diya...tho main tumse shahid pyaar nahin karoon ga

Antara - main jaanti hoon ke tumhara dil sirf Rach ke paas hai main tum par koi zabardasti nahin karoon gi

Sharman smiles at her, he goes to his parents

Sharman - mom, pa maine faisala kar liya

Sumit - kis baare mein?

Sharman - main Antara se shaadi karne ke liye raazi hoon

Everyone is happy, Sharman goes to his room, he looks at Rach's photo

Sharman - aaj maine tumhare liye, is rishtey ko haan kar diya, main jaanta hoon ke tum jahan bhi ho, bohat kush ho....i love you.....

At Angads house, Kripa had been sleeping, in her dream she got flashes of her past, she wakes up screaming

Angad - kya hua? boraa sapna?

Kripa - i dont know...kuch tasveeren mere saamna aaye the

Angad - shahid tumhare ateet se......

Kripa (hugs Angad) - nahin Angad..ab mujhe ateet nahin tumhare saath aane vala kal dhekna hai....aaj main kehti hoon ke kaash meri yaadaash vapas na aaye

Angad - paagal ladki lekin main is paagal ladki se bohat pyaar karta hoon

A few weeks pass by, everyone is preparing for the engagement ceremony, Antara is with Sharman, she looks beautiful

Antara - i have to phone.....

Kumkum - Antara yahan aao

Antara - aayi....Sharman please is number se phone karo......

She hands him a number, he dials it, on the other side Kripa picks up

Kripa - hello

Sharman - hello

Both are confused about the voice they hear, they both feel as if its someone they know

Kripa - jee kahiye?

Sharman (thinks) - Rach.....(on the phone) jee aap?

Kripa - main Kripa...aap?

Sharman - erm one minute, Antara kis se baat karni hai

Antara - Angad se!!

Sharman - kya vahan koi Angad hai?

Kripa - tehriye, Angad!!!! yahan aao

Angad comes and holds Kripa from behind

Angad - kaho meri jaan

He kisses her neck

Kripa _stop it Angad, yeh lo tumhara phone

Angad - oh, hello?

Sharman - is that Angad?

Angad - yes aap?

Sharman - erm tehriye, Antara yeh lo

Antara - hello..Angad?

Angad - hey Antara how are you!

Antara - im great suno im getting married!!!

Angad - what thats great, kaun hai voh badkismet i mean khushkismet insaan?

Anatra - very funny Angad, jisne phone kiya vohi hi tha...Sharman Whadwa

Angad - cool im happy for you, congratulations

Antara - sirf khaali congrats se nahin chalega, aaj engagement hai tumhe aana hoga

Angad - aaj.....

He looks at Kripa

Antara - koi bahana nahin.....

Angad - but Kripa......

Antara - tho kya hua? usse saath mein le aana

Angad - Kripa....aaj Antara ki engagement hai

Kripa - Antara...oh tumhari dost? thats great

Angad - mujhse keh rahi hai ke vahan aajao

Kripa - haan kardo

Angad - ok jaan, hey Antara we will be there, zara address do

Antara - haan likho...Whadwa House....Mumbai....

Angad writes it down, he hands the paper to Kripa, she looks at it

Kripa - Whadwa House......

She dismisses any familiarlarities and puts it in her purse. She and Angad get ready. They get in the car and head for the Whadwa House, as they approach near Kripa feels weird

Angad - hey you ok?

Kripa - haan im fine....dheko tum jao andhar main aati hoon

Angad - ok

Angad goes inside, Kripa looks around

Kripa - mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai ke maine yeh jaaga kahin dheki hai

Inside Angad congratulates Sharman and Antara he hands them the gift he bought last minute

Antara - Kripa....

Angad - bahar hai aati hogi

Angad looks around, his eyes are almost on the photo of Rach with the mala on when someone stands in front of it

Angad - cool party, tehro main Kripa ko lekar aata hoon

He goes outside and gets Kripa, as she steps in the house, both Kripa and Sharman skip a heartbeat, they feel some sort of strangeness. Kripa lets go of Angad's hand and looks around, she is standing back to back with Sharman

kabhi khushi kabhi ghum
na judaa honge hum
kabhi khushi kabhi gham

kya bevaasi hai yeh kya majbooriyan
hum paas hai fhir bhi kitni hai dooriyan
kya bevaasi hai yeh kya majbooriyan
hum paas hai fhir bhi kitni hai dooriyan

jism tu jaan main teri pechaan main
milke bhi na mile hai yeh kaisa baram
yeh hai tere karam kabhi khushi kabhi gham
na judaa honge hum kabhi khushi kabhi gham


To be continued

Will Sharman and Kripa come face to face? or will fate intervene? keep reading......


Amany thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
all i can say is... 😲 ..this is soo exciting 😃 cant wait..hrry!!! 😃 😆
verni thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh wow rachu jaan...............now eagerly waiting for the next part.......... 😛 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
i love it RACH!!! I just wana read it...i dun want kripa n angad to be seperated but when it comes to sharman...i can't see him without RACH!! how can u make ur on9 husband suffer??? 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwww lovely comments guys.......ab shazia.....good thingz come 2 those who wait na 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok....by your words if I'm not mistaken it either means that I have to be more patient or Sharman is gonna be with Rach at the end-like you said good thing comes to those who wait!! BECHARA SHARMAN!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
very well written rach 👏 👏 👏
keep it up
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww missin all of my friends 😭 😭 😭 uff i hate uni...neways!!!!

Preiviously

Angad - cool party, tehro main Kripa ko lekar aata hoon

He goes outside and gets Kripa, as she steps in the house, both Kripa and Sharman skip a heartbeat, they feel some sort of strangeness. Kripa lets go of Angad's hand and looks around, she is standing back to back with Sharman

Part 35

Kripa turns around slowly, she smiles at the person standing in front of her

Kripa - kya hai Angad?

Angad - kuch nahin, i had a phonecall we have to go

Kripa - teek hai, tum zara Antara ko bye kehdo, ill go outside

Angad - ok jaan

Kripa walks outside without seeing anyone, Angad goes to Antara

Angad - hey Antara, i have to go....

Antara - abhi?

Angad - haan ek phonecall aaya tha

Antara - ok remember shaadi mein zuroor aana its this weekend

Angad - definately

As Angad leaves, Antara and Sharman exchange rings, Angad goes in the car and takes Kripa home. When they get there Kripa lies down

Angad - kya hua?

Kripa - kuch nahin...bas i feel weird

Angad - kyun?

Kripa - jab hum Whadwa House gaye....aisa laga ke maine voh jaaga dheki hai

Angad - Whadwa House is very famous, papers mein dheka hoga

Kripa - shahid, Antara ne kya kaha? i didnt even meet her

Angad - it doesn't matter, usne kaha ke shaadi is weekend hai aur humhe zuroor aana hoga

Kripa - great!

Angad - kyun?

Kripa - duhhh more shopping!

Angad - oh god!

That night Sharman is in his room, he stares at the photo of Rach

Sharman - aaj meri engagement thi, jaanti ho mujhe ek pal ke liye laga jaise tum vahan thi, jaise tum sab kuch dhek rahi thi, ek ajeeb se ehsaas hua. Aaj main tumse ek vaada karta hoon, chahe jo bhi ho, chahe mere aur Antara ke bache kyun na ho, chahe hum saath saath budhe hojaye lekin main tumhe kabhi nahin bhooloon ga. I promise you that

As Sharman closes his eyes, he has flashbacks of all the times he and Rach had together, the song Tu Yaad Na Aaye by Himesh Reshmmiya plays in the background

tujhe bhool jaana jaana mumkin nahin
tujhe bhool jaana jaana mumkin nahin
tujhe bhool jaana jaana mumkin nahin
tu yaad na aaye aisa koi din nahin
tu yaad na aaye aisa koi din nahin

tujhe bhool jaana jaana mumkin nahin
tujhe bhool jaana jaana mumkin nahin
tu yaad na aaye aisa koi din nahin
tu yaad na aaye aisa koi din nahin

tujhe bhool jaana jaana mumkin nahin
tujhe bhool jaana jaana mumkin nahin
tu yaad na aaye aisa koi din nahin

tujhe bhool jaana jaana mumkin nahin
tujhe bhool jaana jaana mumkin nahin
tu yaad na aaye aisa koi din nahin

tera jaadu aisa chahya
har zeher mein tujhko paya
chahe mahul ho shoron ghul ka
chahe ho veeraana aalam
har pal hai maujoodagi teri
har mausam hai tera mausam

tujhe bhool jaana jaana mumkin nahin
tujhe bhool jaana jaana mumkin nahin
tu yaad na aaye aisa koi din nahin
tu yaad na aaye aisa koi din nahin

tujhe bhool jaana jaana mumkin nahin
tujhe bhool jaana jaana mumkin nahin
tu yaad na aaye aisa koi din nahin

main karta hoon lakh bahane
par bin tere dil na maane
jitna tujhko bhoolna chahoon
utna hi tujhe paas main pahoon
tu na jaane ey mehbooba
main tere ishq mein kitna dooba

tujhe bhool jaana jaana mumkin nahin
tujhe bhool jaana jaana mumkin nahin
tu yaad na aaye aisa koi din nahin
tu yaad na aaye aisa koi din nahin
tu yaad na aaye aisa koi din nahin
tu yaad na yaad na yaad na yaad na yaad na aaye aisa koi din nahin


The next morning Kripa and Angad do some shopping for some clothes to wear at the wedding and for a present for Sharman and Antara. Angad tries on some shervanis

Angad - yeh kaisa?

Kripa- hmmm nahin next one

Angad (tries next one) - yeh?

Kripa - shahid...next one?

Angad (tries on gold shervani) - aur yeh?

Kripa - perfect!

Angad - ok ill get this, tum jaake apne kapre try karo

Kripa smiles and goes to the ladies section, she sees



and completely falls in love with it, she gets Angad and drags him to it

Kripa - mujhe yeh lena hai

Angad - Kripa its too expensive

Kripa - so! i want it!

Angad - Kripa just choose another one

Kripa - nahin!!!! mujhe yehi lena hai

Angad - Kripa shhh log dhek rahe hai

Kripa - dhekne do! tum yeh lete ho ya main chilaoon?

Angad - acha baba chilao mat! ill get it ok! happy

Kripa - yes (gives him a kiss on the cheek)

Kripa and Angad leave the clothes shop to find a present, as they are walking Kripa sees Shravan and Aman, she feels uneasy seeing Shravan, she slightly recognises him

Angad - Kripa aajao

Kripa - haan aah rahi hoon

Angad and Kripa walk in the shop just as Aman and Shravan pass by.

**The Wedding Day**

The Whadwa House is beautifully decorated as the wedding will be taking place there. Sharman is shown in his room dressed as a dhula once again, he looks at Rach's photo, as he turns around the wind blows the mala off it, he turns around and sees, he gets shocked

Sharman - yeh kaisa sandesa hai.....

He pickz the mala up and puts it back on the photo, and goes outside to the main hall and sits by Antara who is shown dressed as a dhulan she looks beautiful. Pre wedding fun is happening, Aman and Shravan sing Sajan Ji Ghar from Kuch Kuch Hota Hai

kabse aaye hai tere dhule raaja
ab dher na kar jaldi aaja
kabse aaye hai tere dhule raaja
ab dher na kar jaldi aaja


tere ghar aaya main aaya tujhko lene
dil ke badale mein dil ka nazarana dene
tere ghar aaya main aaya tujhko lene
dil ke badale mein dil ka nazarana dene
meri har dhadkhan kya bole hai sun sun sun sun


sajan ji ghar aaye sajan ji ghar aaye
dhulan kyun sharmaaye sajan ji ghar aaye

ey din chalega ab na koi bahana
gori ko hoga ab sajan ke ghar jaana
mate ki bindiya kya bole hai sun sun sun sun


sajan ji ghar aaye sajan ji ghar aaye
dhulan kyun sharmaaye sajan ji ghar aaye


Kripa and Angad are shown getting ready for the wedding, they leave and get in the car

deewaane ki chaal mein
phaas gayi main is jaal mein
ey saakhiyon kaise bolo bolo


haan mujhpe tho hai dul ruba
teri saakiyan bhi fida
yeh bolengi kya poocho poocho


jaa re jaa jhoote taarifen kyun loote
jaa re jaa jhoote taarifen kyun loote

tera mastaana kya bole hai sun sun sun sun

sajan ji ghar aaye sajan ji ghar aaye
dhulan kyun sharmaaye sajan ji ghar aaye


Angad is driving the car, Kripa is fixing her make up, both are very happy

na samje nadaan hai
yeh mera ehsaan hai
chaha jo isko khedo khedo


chehre mujhko jaanke
badle mein ehsaan ke
de diya dil isko kehdo kehdo


tu yeh na jaane dil toote bhi deewaane
tu yeh na jaane dil toote bhi deewaane

tera deewana kya bole hai sun sun sun sun

sajan ji ghar aaye sajan ji ghar aaye
dhulan kyun sharmaaye sajan ji ghar aaye


Kripa tells Angad that she loves him, Angad stops for petrol

mehndi laake gehne paake
mehndi laake gehne paake
hai roke tu sab ko rulake savere chali jayegi
tu bada yaad aayegi tu jayegi tu bada yaad aayegi
tu bada yaad aayegi yaad aayegi

mehndi laake gehne paake
mehndi laake gehne paake
hai roke tu sab ko rulake savere chali jayegi
tu bada yaad aayegi tu jayegi tu bada yaad aayegi
tu bada yaad aayegi yaad aayegi


tere ghar aaya main aaya tujhko lene
dil ke badale mein dil ka nazarana dene
meri har dhadkhan kya bole hai sun sun sun sun


sajan ji ghar aaye sajan ji ghar aaye
dhulan kyun sharmaaye sajan ji ghar aaye
sajan ji ghar aaye sajan ji ghar aaye
dhulan kyun sharmaaye sajan ji ghar aaye


Everyone is having fun at the Whadwa House, Kripa tells Angad they are getting late, Angad drives the car faster. He is talking to Kripa at the same time, he doesn't see a car ahead of him and swerves the car. They crash into a tree. Flashes of the past come before Kripa's eyes.

To be continued!!!! Final Part.....surprise 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg this is o exciting...but one question..when u said final part..did u mean ur ending this fanfic 😭 if u r ..pleze dnt..if u rnt then u better not even tthink of closin it..lol..nywayzz....increadible story..havent read nythin liek this..keep it uop 👏 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
even i'm wondering...r u ending it or what? it was awesome but the whole part was like as if u r in a hurry!! everything was fast!!

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