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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: JAMBO

please hurry up can't wait to read next part, you are amazing writer. we are so impressed with your ff. thanks a lot.

AWWW you are so nice for saying that and I am updating the post in just a few minutes so please stay tuned
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Guys I forgot to mention this before but from tomorrow on I might not be able to update as fast as I have been doing because my school is starting...I have already written two more parts but after that I won't be able to update everyday unless I have a lot of free time...So please don't be mad at me if I don't update right away but I do promise that I will try to post new parts as soon as I get a chance😃
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Part 11: Kabhi kisise naa pyaar karna😭

Sumit starts to walk away but Kumkum stops him

Kumkum: Sumit please meri baat sonlo😊

Sumit: Kumum please kuch maat kehna main is waqt bohut.....JUST LEAVE ME ALONE RIGHT NOW😡

Kumkum: Tumne mujhe choda tha jab main hurt ho rahi thi toh ab main kaise tumhain akela chod saakthi hoon😊

Sumit: Preeti ne mujhse jhoot bola😭...main kabhi sooch bhi nahi saaktha tha kay woh yeh harqat kare gi😡...Main uske hi liye Goa aya aur woh😭...

Kumkum: Sumit please calm down😊

Sumit: Kaise Kumkum😭?

Kumkum: Aao mere saath😊

She takes him to the nearest beach😊

Sumit: Mujhe yahan kyon layi ho

Kumkum: Sumit jab bhi main sad hoti hoon toh main beach par ati hoon it's really soothing😊

Sumit: Thanks for caring so much main tum par chalayaa I AM VERY SORRY😃

Kumkum: Sumit tumhari galti nahin thi I understand tum bohut shocked they lekin main jaanti hoon kay Preeti will have a good explanation for all this😊

Sumit: Tum sab dekh kar bhi Preeti ki side lay rahi ho kyon?😲

Kumkum: Tumne bhi toh sab dekh kar Rahul ki side li naa aur hum dunno ne yeh isliye kiya kyon ki hum jaante hain kay apne pyar koh itni jaaldi apne aap se dor nahin karna chahiya😊

Sumit: Lekin unhein bhi humain itna dookh aur dard nahin day na chahiyaa😭

Kumkum: Haan par woh bhi toh insaan hi hain na aur galti insaan se hi hoti hai😊

Sumit: Tu itni smart kyon hai😃

Kumkum: Well you know yeh toh main bhi uper wale se rooz poochti hoon but abhi tak koi answer nahi mila😆

They both laugh😆😆

Kumkum: Acha batao sand castle banaye kitna waqt hua hai tujhe😊

Sumit: Main 5 sal ka tha jab maine castle banaya tha😊

Kumkum: Toh get ready aaj tu eik aur banaye ga aur woh bhi mere saath😃

Sumit: Lekin eik promise karo us castle mein sirf main aur tu rahey gay Rahul aur Preeti nahin😉

Kumkum: Theek hai😃

They make a beautiful castle but as they are making it Kumkum gets sand in her eye.

Kumkum: AOOOOOOO bohut dard kar rahi hai meri ankhe

Sumit: Idhar ao main tumhari eye mein blow kar dayta hoon😉

He makes her lay down in his lap👏 and comes close to her face so close that they can feel each other's warm breath on their faces😊...Sumit gently blows in her eye and they both feel a little something for each other and start to stair into each other's eyes😃.

Sumit: Theek hua😊

Kumkum: Haan ab theek hai😊

Sumit: Chalo back to the castle😃

Kumkum: Waise clearly meri side zayaada pyari hai😉

Sumit: Acha madam khushfahmi hai aapko😆

Kumkum: Oh really Mr. Sumit...(she throws some sand on him) ab batao Mr. Khushfahmi😆

Sumit: Acha yeh lo phir(He puts sand in her hair)😊

Kumkum: How dare you? Abhi batati hoon (She holds him by his shirt and puts sand in it😉)

Sumit: Ab toh haad hogyi arre dar gyi kya abhi pakartha hoon tumhein😊

Kumkum: Arre tum MBA hi kar saakthey ho tumhein run karna bilkul nahin ata😛

Sumit: Acha tu rookh to zaara...(She runs towards the water and he finally catches her but slips and falls on top of her instead😃)

He starts to have feelings for her and leans in to get closer to her face😃😉 but then suddenly realizes what he is doing and he gets up and helps Kumkum too

Kumkum: Pura wet kar diya😡

Sumit: Waise wet tum pyari lagti ho😃

Kumkum: Woh toh main waise hi hoon lekin tum kafi heavy ho I mean face se lagtey nahin ho lekin weight tumhara hippo jaisa hai...meri toh sanse hi bandh hogyi thi abhi😆😆

Sumit: Acha madam well tum bhi itni halki nahin ho kal raat tujhe uta kar bed par rakha toh meri back toh break hogyi thi😆😆

Kumkum: You know what??😛

Sumit: Thanks😃

Kumkum: Huh😕

Sumit: Tumne mujhe bilkul calm kar diya hai😊

Kumkum: Kyon yaar mujhe tumhare hi dialogues repeat kara rahe ho 😉

Sumit: Kya metlab?😕

Kumkum: Metlab yeh: dosti mein no sorry aur no thank you😆

Sumit: Ok baba nahin kahoon ga😃

Kumkum: Acha hum wapis chalein woh competition bhi shuroo hone wala hoga😊

Sumit: Thodi waqt kay liye main woh zindagi bhool hi gaya tha😃...haan chalo😊

Hope you guys liked this part😃
Edited by KumkumisGR8 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

OMG Sehar woooooowwww
👏
yaar waaki mein aaj to main faint hote hote bachchi yaar
Pehle Noorya ki mindblowing ff meri hosh uradi aur ab tumhara
OMG itna romantic yaar tum aur Noorya tumdono ke boyfriends kitne lucky honge
Itna romantic persons ho tumdono..anyways

Loved the beginning how SuKk discuss about what happened
and yaar ye Rahul aur preethi ufff kab ye dono se chutkara milega😡
Aur maanti hoon main ke ghalti insaan se hojaate hain
Lekin ye dono shaitaan aur churail hain yaar
insse sirf ghalti hi ghalti hoti hain
Kaash main Rahul ko sabak sikha paati
Main aur Noorya milke usko itna maar te na
ke mazaa aajati aur ab to Simmie bhi aagayi hain..
Hum teeno milke uske band bajaa dete🤢

Anways dekhna hain Sukk kya karte hain inn ke saath
OMG loved the beach part yaaar
sooooo cuttteee and soooo sweettt
mujhe to bahut kuch hone laga yaar ye part read karke
uffff so cute....
When SuKk makin the sand castle awwwwww
and then sand going in her eye and the way Su blows in her eyes
OMG..yaar..kuch kuch hota hain..ufff amazing
👏
Itna beautiful and when they chase each other and then fall in the water
And they looked into each others eyes and felt something ufff
definetly Kuch Kuch Hota Hain yaar Amazing

OMG loved the comedy there yaar
when Kk says about Su weight and all
🤣
love their pyaara quarrell..itna cute hain ufff
and when Su says that Kk looks pyaari when wet
and Kk says she is even pyaari when not being wet
🤣
Awesome dialogues...
Kya Tum aur Noorya India nahin jaa sakte
Kk ke creatives ko madat karne romatntic aur funny parts mein😆

Uff yaar awesome..u made my day..i laughed and laughed
thanks for that..kyonke kal se phir roona shuru..
aggar Su nahi aaya to phirse roona shuru...
First Noorya made me laugh and now u thanks for that

And keep writing yaar
waiting for ur next part
and please don't stop with the cute parts
love it totally
and ur comedy is fabulous...
i hope my neighbours don't complaint
coz i was laughing so hard..😆😆

Keep it up girl...😃

Edited by RuhaanSimifan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Looking forward to your comments Naz and Noorya😃

Edited by KumkumisGR8 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
sahar meri jaan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........MINDBLOWING part!!!.................yaar sach kaha ke its going to be very very cute!!!!..................and not only cute...that was soooooooo romantic also😳😃...

yaar pehle tho bohut dukh ho raha tha su ko lekar😭................poor guy he was very hurt by that besharam preety😡.............................but thank god kk ne uske mood theek kiya😃

and OMG.......the lovely moment between them😍...uffffffffffff....main tho sapna dekh rahi thi!! too cute....aur meri daroni sapne se tho bohut acha tha🤢....gosh soo scary😆😆...

LOVED the beach part......sooooooo cute.............and omg...su feeling something for kk😳...i was soooooooooooooooo happy.......and just loved the lovely dialogues...yaar was soooo real......i watching that epi in my mind😆....bohut maza aaya😉...

yaar me too going back to school tomorow😭😭😭..............bilkul maan nahin kar raha😕......but going only for a week uske baad have a training period for a month😃...then phir se holidays!!!😉.......so me too pata nahin kab apna ff aage bar sakungi...but going to post a part now😳😉..........and u!!...............keep up that AMAZING work!!!!!!...........love u sweety🤗
Edited by mdtafan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
seher exellent writting
one more creative mingd i kk forym
looking forward to your ff
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Posted: 16 years ago
the beach how romantic.....
Both Kk and Su are sooo sensitive.....
Totally love Kk cheeky response when Su said she was smart
Awwww sand castle how cute!! and the sand fight....
I could just imagine Lamho Ke Meeti Gaurazish playing in the background.....
OMG su..... getting all confused....and how romantic.....
And hehe.... omg the dialogue at the end...Sahar your soooo funny... hehe!!.... and sweety i go back to school tomorrow aswel so i dunno if i will be able to catch your FF but i will try my best... ufff yeh school bhi na...

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Posted: 16 years ago
tht was cuteee part plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mdtafan

sahar meri jaan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........MINDBLOWING part!!!.................yaar sach kaha ke its going to be very very cute!!!!..................and not only cute...that was soooooooo romantic also😳😃...

yaar pehle tho bohut dukh ho raha tha su ko lekar😭................poor guy he was very hurt by that besharam preety😡.............................but thank god kk ne uske mood theek kiya😃

and OMG.......the lovely moment between them😍...uffffffffffff....main tho sapna dekh rahi thi!! too cute....aur meri daroni sapne se tho bohut acha tha🤢....gosh soo scary😆😆...

LOVED the beach part......sooooooo cute.............and omg...su feeling something for kk😳...i was soooooooooooooooo happy.......and just loved the lovely dialogues...yaar was soooo real......i watching that epi in my mind😆....bohut maza aaya😉...

yaar me too going back to school tomorow😭😭😭..............bilkul maan nahin kar raha😕......but going only for a week uske baad have a training period for a month😃...then phir se holidays!!!😉.......so me too pata nahin kab apna ff aage bar sakungi...but going to post a part now😳😉..........and u!!...............keep up that AMAZING work!!!!!!...........love u sweety🤗

AWWWWWWWWW you thought it was CUTE AND ROMANTIC😃 thanks...I told you I will make it up to you by posting a happy part...I know I was picturing them in my mind while writing😆...Sumit is going to start to feel a whole lot of something for Kumkum sooooooon👏...I and not excited about school either vacation par toh bohut sara Kumkum dekha lekin phir bhi dil kar raha hai aur dekhoon but your are lucky you are going to have holidays again😃 I have to go until spring break unless there is A LOT OF SNOW😃(hoping)...I really hope that you keep continuing your ff...I will update as soon as possible(which hopefully is tomorrow😃)
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: tsaian

seher exellent writting

one more creative mingd i kk forym
looking forward to your ff

Awww thanks for liking my ff but I think you are a much better writer than me...Stay tuned😃

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