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Posted: 16 years ago
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episod # 10 kk asked sumit to come in sumit: no yar some other time kumkum: ok as your wish and thanks again 4 your lift sumit: thanks to u too tht u sit on my bike both smile and bye each other & sumit leave from there and then he go 4 his job nad then he return in his home at night
sumit mom: kia baat hai beta aj kafi kuch lag raha hai
sumit: nahin maa aisi koi baat nahin
sumit mom feed sumit a sinner and then she go 4 sleep . sumit go to his room and stat his studies. then sumit go 4 sleep
su see himself in a beach . sumit wear a white pnt shirt. then sumit saw a girl coming from a beach . the giek had wear a white scut browse. her hair was open and in a dry curl condition
su was just starring to that girl and the girl is none other then kumkum
and a back ground music
" meray khaloon ki markha caroon taraf teri shaya rai " asond of josh
after a song sequence kk come to sumit and asked utho collage nahin ana hai kia
then he suddenly see her mom saying utho sumit collage nahin jana
uth jao late ho jao gay
sumit wake up from half dream
and realize the he see him self witk kumkum in a dream
and he then move from a bad and said to himself k kumkum tum to khaboon mai aur bi koobsurat rakthi ho
and then he say to himself ohay sumit tujhay kia ho raha
then sumit go 4 a shower and he came infront of a miror and seeting his hair style . he change a plenty of costume k mai ajj kaisay lag raha hoon
then he imagine kumkum in her . kk said u wil look good in a blue dress and she disappear
sumit take a blue tshit and wear and get ready and leave 4 collage
sumit reached to a collage
karan was waiting 4 sumit
karan: kia baat hai aj bohot late ho ghay
sumit: haan mahin yar rastay mai kafi traffic thi
karan: acha by the way mai bi aj usi rastay say aya hoon jissay tum rozana ata ho. mujhay to koi traffic nahin mila
sumit: yar abi hogaya na
sumit eyes is searching to somebody
karan: abhi tak wo nahin ayee
sumit : kon
karan: wohi jissay tumhari ankhain dhun rahi hai
sumit : kia bak raha hai mai kasi to kyunn dhunnon ga
karan: rahnay dai kal mainay taxi stand mai dekha tha
sumit: yar uskay pass transport nahin thi isi liyay usay lift day di
karan: abhy chup ker kabhi hamain to lift nahin di infact ajj tak kisi ko apnay bike kotouch kernay nahin dia
sumit: yar kia fltoo ki bat ker rahay ho
kumkum reached collage and she is coming near to karan and sumit. karan see kumkum
karan: to mai faltoo baat ker raha hon
sumit : bilkul
karan : ishka matlub tumhain kumkum achi nahin lagti
sumit: nahin lagti
karan: dekhlo kumkum sumit to tum achi nahin lagti
sumit : kia
karan: look at your back kk tumharay peechay khari hai
sumit turn back and get shoked to see kumkum . and espacially her blue dress
kumkum: to mai buri hoon . aur ap mijhay pasand nahin kertay
sumit: nahin mai ti
kumkum: mai to kia
sumit :mai ti mai to yeh kah raha tha k kumkum band baloon mai achi nahin lagti ; ussay apna hair style change kerna chaiyay . yeh sirf mera aik opinion hai
kumkum and karan shoked to hear this fron sumit
episod end
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Posted: 16 years ago
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episod#11 kumum: kia sumit: kuch nahin mai to aisay hi kah raha tha k tum apnay baal hamesha tie q rakthi ho , kumkum: hmmmmmmmmmmmmm sumit: sorry , kuch zyadi hi hogaya na kumkum: no its ok , ok yar i m leaving class ka time horaha hai sumit& karan: bye karan start laugh at sumit
sumit: yar karan to bi na , to bata nahin sakta tha k kumkum peechay hai
karan: yar waisay tu nay baat ko kafi acha sambhala . khulay baal
and then he leave
sumit to himself: nahin yar mainay bat ko sambhala nahin. balkay jo kaha dil say kahta hon . k kumkum tum waqai boot khoobsuray ho
he smile on himself and leave
kumkum go to her class. jasmine and seema was waiting 4 kumkum
jasmine: kia baat hai ajj tumhari cousin nahin ayee
kumkum: haan ajj wo bzy thi
seema: acha hai waisay bi aker konsa parthi hai
jasmine laugh
they take all classed and reached to canteen sumit with his gang was already theer
kumum , jsmine and seema move to sumit gand
jasmine: hi guys
gang: hi where the fourth one
jasmine: aj absent hai
kumkum: kia baat hai guys tum sub bohot miss ker rahi ho sara ko
karan: miss nahin thanks god kah rah hai k woo nain ayee
and after that all laugh
sumit to kumkum: kaisi rahi classes
jasmine: hum bi nahay student hai hamara bi second say hai ish collage mai. lakin humsay to kisi nay nahin poocha
sumit; mera matlub ab sub say tha
kumkum: achi rahi managment kafi interisting hai aur micro econmics kafi hard
karan: econonmics!! sumit is expert in economics he will surely help u . q sumit sahi kah raha ho na
sumit: yeah why not
kumkum: thanks . anyway guys kuch soocha play k baray mai
karan: sumit nay sooch lia hoga waisay bi indinoon wo mohabbat k topic pay kafi researchker raha hai
jasmine: seriously sumit
sumit: no guys asal mai hamara karan ka thora swrew loose hai isi liyay wo kuch bi bhol deta hai dont take hi seriously
jasmine: sumit u r look too good in blue dress
sumit : thanks alot . actually some one recommened me blue colour
karan : haan ishsay pahlay to hamaray sumit ko blue colour say alergy thi . pata nahin aj blue colour kaisay oahn lia. hota hai aksar aisa hota hai
sumit: shutup
karan: by the way kumkum jee aj apnay bi to blue dress pahna hai . and u r looking too pretty ,kahin apko bi to kisinay blue colour recommend nahin kia
kumkum: jee , nahin blue is my farvourite colour
then kumkum give sumit a gift pack
sumit: yeh kia hai
kumkum :its our friendship gift. tum nay mujhay kal apna lucky band dia as a friiend ship gigt aur ajj mai day rahi hoon
sumit was about to open kk sto him and said ghar jaker kholay ga
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83
Both episodes are wonderful!!! I love the direction that the story is taking.........
Awwww I love the song in the dream sequence very very very cute di!!!
And i bet su looked HOT in the blue t-shirt!!!
I have to say i absolutely loveeeeeee Karan... hehe
Thank god he is making Su realise that he is starting to have feelings for kk!! Karan you Rock!!
OMG i can't wait to find out what KK packed in the gift box... I can't wait to find out!!! update soon!! hehe ......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
thanks siimi 4 giving a quick response
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
thats really wonderful aimen your ff is great
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
thanks alot afreen 4 liking my ff
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87
Another lovely part tsaian. Keep going!!

Arya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#88
hi
great work
so su is flaling in love hmm
slowly slowly
good
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89

Beautiful, wonderful..................very very nice part...............but i won't be able 2 read any more parts butt u keep writeing...........love the way Su has fallen 4 kk instantly............

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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
ohay aimoo
yar tussi to writter ban ghai
keep it up yar

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