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Posted: 16 years ago

kumkum decide that k she will give a gudha to kumkum so that gudha will always remain with gurya and with this she can fullfill her promise which she had done wth her childhood freind

sumit was searching 4 kumkum in party and he havent find her . he was wondering that where kumkum left

then su also keft party and go his home he was very upset

summit to himself: mainay yeh soocha hi kyun k meray aur kumkum k bech mai kabhi dosti kay ilawa koi aur rista bi hosakta hai

kumkum to herself: mai nahin janti kay mera tum say kia rishta hai , lakin mai nay bachpan ki us mulaqat k baad hamesha hi tumhara intezar kia

summit: ajj hum pass ho ker bi kitnay door hai

kumkum: hum door rah ker bi kitnay pass thay

summit: mai tumhain aik dafa batana chata hoon kumkum kay mainay tumhara bacpan say intezar kia

kumkum: mai tum say milna chati thi , dekhna chati thi jiska intezar mainay hamsha kia

sumit: lakin

kumkum: lakin

sumit: shayat mera ish sach ka batanay ka ab koi fahida nahin

kumkum: shayat abb hamaray milnay ka koi fahida nahin

sumit: mai tumhain kabhi bhool nahin saktha

kumkum: tumhain bolana khud ko bhoolna hoga

summit: ajj tum kisi aur ki hogai

kumkum: mai kisi aur ki hoker bi sirf tumhari hi dost ban ker rehna chati hoon

summit: shayat mainay dosti ko pyar samaj ker ghalti ki

kumkum: mujhay maloom hi nahin chala k mainay kab apni dosti ko pyar bana dia

summit: tum jarahi ho lakin hamari dosti ki nishani gurya ko mai hamesha pass rakhoon ga

kumkum:hum nahin mil sakhay lakin hamari dosti ki nishani in gurya gudha ka milan zaroor hoga

both kumkum and summit were upset

kumkum see gudha and close her eyes and she sees summit and she open her eyes and she ger shoked that why she see summit with her close eyes

kumkum: yeh kia hogaya mainay summit ko kyun dekha. kyun bar bar jab bi mai apnay bachpan k dost k baray mai soochti ho to summit ka khayal ajata hai. pata nahin lakin haan yeh sach hai k agar mainay apnay bachpan kay dost kay baad kishi aur ko dost samjha hai to wo summit hai .

summit reached home and he take gurya: lo tum to meri zindagi say door jarahi ho .shayat mainay apna pyar kho dia lakin mai apni dosti nahin kho saktha .tum meri sub say pyari dost ho

kumkum and summit both feel restless . kumkum decide to call summit as she think that summit is the onle a person to whom she share her problem

sumit: hi

kumkum: hi

sumit: kia hoa kumkum tum nay ish waqt call ki

kumkum: kia mainay tumhain disturb kia

sumit: yeh konsi nahi baat hai ab to disturb honay ki adat hogai

kumkum: ishka mutlub kay tumhain kafi pareshan kerti hon

sumit : haan yeh kah ker tum mujhay zyada parshan ker rahi ho

kumkum: dil cha raha ha kay kisi apnay say baat karoon ish liyay tumhain call ki

summit: yeh sun ker kushi hoi k tum mujhay apna samajthi ho

kumkum: mujhay kuch tum say poochna hai

summit: poocho

kumkum: agar app say koi door jaraha ho . lakin ap usay door nahin hona chatay , aur app uskay pass bi nahin jasaktay , to apko kia kerna chaiyay

summit: pata nahin , kyun kay yehi sawal mai khud say ker raha hon

kumkum: kia tum say koi dur ja raha hai

summit: mujsay haan , app wo itni dur chali gai k cahoon bi to uskay pass nahin ja sakta

kumkum: mausay bi , mera bi koi bohot dur hogaya aur mai usay rokh nahin sakhi , lakin tum nay apnay ap ko usay k dur ker lia

summit: q k shayat uskay door janay mai i uski kushi thi , aur tumnay

kumkum: shayat mera uskay kareeb jana usay dukh day deta

summit: waisay tum ajj kafi kush hogi na , tumhari wedding fixed hogai

kumkum: nahin ............................................................. kyun nahin

sumit tear in his eyes : congrates

kumkum too had tear: thanks

kumkum in low voice sumit kal miltay bye sumit

sumit: bye

kumkum to herself:nahin sumit mai kuch nahin ho ,

sumit to him self: tum kush ho to mai tumharay liyay kush hon

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Posted: 16 years ago

AMAZING JOB AIMEN👏...I was waiting for your part😃...I was studying psychology and suddenly saw that you updated and immediately started reading😆...THANKS SO MUCH FOR UPDATING...main itni bore ho rahi thi study karke toh thodi si break mil gayi😃...Anyways VERY EMOTIONAL PART and I LOVED IT😊...the way you portrayed the scene: VERY PROFESSIONAL...BRAVO👏....this line- Ajj hum paas hokar bi khitnay dor hain...Hum dor reh kar bhi khitnay paas they...it brought tears to my eyes😭...hun I could picture them saying the lines...I just hope the misunderstanding clears up and Sumit realizes that Kumkum is not happy with the marriage😕...I LOVE THE WAY STORY IS DEVELOPING...YOU ARE GOOD AT KEEPING ME EXCITED😃...Please update soon CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT????😃

Luv Alwayz Sahar😳
Edited by KumkumisGR8 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG Aimen soooo emotional yaara...😭
Totally loved how Kk imagined Su....uff beautiful idea sweety!!
The dirction that the story is taking is heart breaking but I can't wait to find out
How they both realise that they were Childhood sweethearts....
I can't wait for the next episode....
Keeep up the amazing job Di!!!
Loveeeeee You🤗




Edited by .x. Simran .x. - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wowow tht was cool part i love it
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG Aimen!!!.................sweety wonderful part!!😛😛.....ufff was impatiently waiting for your part yaara.......just loved it

Omg kitna emotional part tha..........................and omg sukk phone convo ne tho meri jaan li😭...........

but yaara u wrote sooo well it was fabulous!!👍🏼......keep up your fantastic job..........aur yaara plz mujh pe rehem kar aur sukk ko jaldi milao........main aur doori bardash nahin kar sakti😔😳.......kam se kam kk ko malun pade that su is her childood friend naa😉...

great job once again😃
Edited by mdtafan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
it was a emotional part continue soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
Good one Tsaian. Keep rocking😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Just loved all the emotions that's expressed between Sukk.............really beautiful part but waiting 4 KK 2 know that Su is his childhood friend.................continue sooooonnnnnnn...........
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Posted: 16 years ago
Haila Aimen
the part is awesome yaara
omg sooooo emotional
mere to aankhon mein se ansoo behte rahen
OMG the both thinking part is so emotional yaar
uffff awesome dialogues there..i could actually hear
Sukk say that..ufff mindblowing
and also the phone conversation
between Sukk is sooo emotional
awwwww Kk saying she is khush
and then saying she is not khush
omg i could feel the pain both are feeling
uff i hope SuKk reallizes their loive for each other
and then Kk says bye to avinash and goes with Su...
waitin to read next part...
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG!!!!!!!!! Aimen
great part dear
but it was really emotional😭
really loved that imagination part
it was really nice.........

the story is going really great.......but at the same time its
soooooooooooo emotional
keep it up
do cont soon
love afreen

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