Short FF: Drifted Apart :Part6 :pg17/10/07/09

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sonali

@IsabellaCullen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: marrukhkhan
good start but nafrat bhara witing for next
Thanks marrukh..m riting now..😳

Originally posted by: sweetpoorvi
hiii sonu....so....my fav writer is back wid another great story...👏 aww...thanks di..😳

starting me hi itna suspense create kar diya...cant wait for next part yaar...😆 arrey ..😆 m riting ..

great start sweety...thanks..

cont soon...sure..

Originally posted by: panjwani
hii sonu hi di...

yeh kya huwa kaise hua?..😆

su is bad ohhhh nooooooooooooo😲

now su has to go behind kk and wht was he telling her to do yes...😉

something bad

now kk will hate him and he will realize it when she isnt in his life keep guessing..😆

continue soon sonu sure..

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sonali

@IsabellaCullen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: nirmola
oyeeeeee starting is very puzzled but i'm 100%sure it will be best.

so all the best.

Thanks a lott..😳

Originally posted by: sweetie4eva
wow!!!
nice beginning!

wow alot of nafrathe??

well..thanks for appreciating..i hope u like it..😳

Originally posted by: seemahujufan
hi its really nice to see u back yaar...well nice begining and unique one with nafrat....so am eager to know morw...continue.......thanks di..m riting now...

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sonali

@IsabellaCullen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Shafoo
plzz contuied i hope sumit have reason for hatingg kumkum i hope soon hee love her back .
oh..thanks dear..😳

Originally posted by: miss.sonia
hey updtae ssoon suree,,😳

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sonali

@IsabellaCullen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

Part-1

All the female workers of the office arrange their dresses properly, whispering into each others' ears....All the people stand up...

"Goodmorning sir.."..😊

"Hmmm.."Replies he...😕

Without even looking at a single face, he heads to his cabin, leaving every person behind him holding his heart..⭐️

"Uff..he's so dashing..."Maria dreamily exclaims...😉

"File..???.."He asks sternly...😳

"Si..sir...sorry sir...sir .."She fumbles..😳😳

"I said...Give me the files..."He repeats...

"Yes sir.."She hands over the file and he leaves, shrugging his shoulder...😉

"Silly fools.."he sighs...😛

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"Morning honey..!!"Sumit hugs his secretary, Neeti..😳

"Morning dear..."He kisses her neck, pushing her against the wall..☺️

Throwing his file away, he pins her down against the wall, kissing her neck passionately...She moves her hands at his back...☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

"Smelling awesome..mmm.." Unbuttoning her top buttons, he moves to her lips,bruising them with hard kisses ...☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

"Sumit...meeti...met..meetinggghhh.."...☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

"SUMIT...!!!" someone calls aloud...😕

"Oh no...tum phir..!!" Sumit groans...

"You may leave Neeti...Sumit..!!"She looks sternly at him...😲😲

"Yaar..kumkum...its my personaaaa...."He holds his ear as she twists it hard.....😆😆😆

"Personal life ke bacche...wahaan main wait kar rahi hun aur yahaan sahab ka romance chal raha hai...ppl are waiting for the meeting to begin...chaaaaallloooooo"She drags him out...😆😆😆

So, this was his life...Sumit Wadhwa's life...Being alone, he had had unlimited and unrestricted rights..His parents, Kulbhushan Wadhwa and Veena Wadhwa had divorced when he was only 10 and he hated even mentioning them...

His business empire, Sumit group of Industries was the fruit of his toil..He did, what fancied him...His life was painful but he tried to minimize the loneliness in his own ways..

And his ways had been made "famous" by the shutterbugs...Often, he covered the first page of the newspaper, with his "partners"..who used to change every week...It wasn't lust, which drove him but, an irresistible urge to destroy the loneliness..

Kumkum, a middle class girl from USA, was more of a friend than, a personal assistant since last 2 years......Being an orphan, she knew, what loneliness meant and sympathized him in her own ways...She was he only one,with whom, sumit could laugh, cry and show his real emotions..For the outer world, he was a piece of stone but for her, he was a precious jwell...

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"What do you plan for future...."Somebody asks.."Only future will tell..."He replies curtly making the attendees of the press meet murmur...

"God..!!He's got such an attitude.."a lady mumbles to a cameraman..

Listening to all this, Kumkum smiles..."They don't know him...the real sumit.."

"Kumkum?...file please..."He looks at her..😳

"Just a minute.."she gets the file..."Thanks .."he smiles..😊

"Pehle toh nahin dekha ise.."they murmur...😕

"Maybe, the a new bird.."A man winks to other...

"His new toy....pick of the week..."a lady whispers...

Its has been her first public appearance with sumit ...She felt uneasy at their constant comments...Sumit's eyes fall on her..he gives a questioning look..

"Nothing."she replies in gestures and flashes a warm smile...😊

"And did you find out why your parents divorced?...Have you ever thought of seeking revenge from them???"...

The question made him freeze... He couldn't show a single expression...It was the most dreaded question for him ..His dazed eyes closed and he left the place..Kumkum ran after him..."Sumit..!!...Sumit..!!!"...

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"Sumit?...you ok???..."She sat quietly besides him..Yes, he was crying...She came closer, like she always did when he was upset..😳

"Sumit..Its ok...I mean...see.."He hugged her tightly, sobbing in her arms....She pulls him closer..caressing his hair.."Sumit..."

She closed her eyes, and felt him breathing..She didn't know, who initiated it, she or he, but the moment got passionate as they kissed each other...She felt guilty first, but the fervor got to her head..She kissed him back with equal fervor..☺️☺️☺️☺️

The kiss was passionate enough to arouse his lethal instincts...He enveloped her in arms and showered passionate kisses on her neck..Half-of her brain wasn't ready for the upcoming things, but the other half, quite willingly, made her enjoy the moments...Passion took over guilt and she lost herself to him...Soon, he took over and they spent some blissful moments of togetherness......☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Edited by sumitwadhwa - 16 years ago

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coorg.japan

@coorg.japan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

Hey hey!! We are having some sweet treat here!!!

Enough of Seeing Sumit and Kumkum crying in Starplus😛 You made it beautiful!! Continue soon

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sonali

@IsabellaCullen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: coorg.japan
Hey hey!! We are having some sweet treat here!!!

Enough of Seeing Sumit and Kumkum crying in Starplus😛 You made it beautiful!! Continue soon

Oh..thanks a lott di..actually i was scared after writing the part..nervous lol..thanks..😳

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Maulik

@patem031

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

vry nice prt, nd again a new gul
i hope he doesnt do anything wrong wid kk after sleeping wid her
continue soon😃

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San

@sanw

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Posted: 16 years ago

#48

Sonali,

althoug I was reading it & trying to imagine our sumit KK in your story I wasnt able to picture this with their images.

probably because we havent seen our sumit in this type of charater in his 1st birth nor his 2nd one.

& kk is a much controlled girl in both her births too.

but otherwise, good imagination & very well written.

I didnt know we had such good writers in our forum!

keep it up!

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sonali

@IsabellaCullen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: patem031
vry nice prt, nd again a new gul
i hope he doesnt do anything wrong wid kk after sleeping wid her
continue soon😃
Well, only time will tell what happens..thanks for appreciation...😳

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sonali

@IsabellaCullen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: sanwak
Sonali,
althoug I was reading it & trying to imagine our sumit KK in your story I wasnt able to picture this with their images.

probably because we havent seen our sumit in this type of charater in his 1st birth nor his 2nd one.

& kk is a much controlled girl in both her births too.

but otherwise, good imagination & very well written.

I didnt know we had such good writers in our forum!

keep it up!

Well, i second you on that..actually, I had a storyline in my mind and i just used that..!! But with time, you'll be able to identify them with su-kk..😳

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