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Part 3

Rakesh and Prakash Arora finally come face to face in front of statue with Pragya standing in between looking at them. Sid finds Alia in the crowd and goes to her

Sid : hi, how are you

Alia : hey what are you doing here (looks around)

Sid : I came here to seek blessings, so he can give me strength to woo you

Alia : what? (shocked)

Sid : just kidding

Rakesh : So finally you came in front of me, I heard enemies meet on battle ground but for first time in history two enemies are together for same goal and on a holy place

Prakash : well but there is also very old saying one should keep enemies closer than friends but it will be opposite in our condition

Sonia : Listen, it is time for the prayer, lets go

Rakesh : don't worry, our rivaly will not be over so soon

Alia is about do the prayer but stops when the priest tell that Pragya puts the offering first every year on the ceremony. The Durga prayer starts with Pragya doing the aarti. Later everybody heads to their home. Pragya decides to reveal her relationship to her dad.

Mehra house

Abhi is standing in his balcony looking at Tanu's picture in his phone.

Purab : bhai, you didn't sleep yet? what are you looking

Abhi : nothing I am not sleepy, what are you doing here at this time

Purab : I was going to kitchen to get water, bhai I wanted to ask you from long time about Tanu, I mean do you like her

Abhi : what does it matter, when you and I both know dad will never accept this relation

Purab : but bro, she might be from middle class family, as far as I know her she is very modern and today's generation girl

Abhi ; its not that easy Purab, we are very different, our lifestyles, background and I don't think Tanu will be able adjust in this house

Purab : I am sure she will, she has that capability, and you also wanted that type of girl right who could understand your workload and give in the time your spare time

Abhi : I know she is right girl for me but not this family, and dad too wants the daughter in law who can easily adjust in this family and who is able to understand the rules for this family

Purab : you are over thinking Abhi, nothing like that will happen and Tanu is smart and sensible, she will make her place in this house

Abhi : I guess you are right, but before giving any commitment to Tanu I want to know dad's opinion, and we don't know whats in Tanu's mind right now

Purab ; you leave that to me, you just talk to dad soon alright

Abhi : okay now you go, its too late, you have to leave for airport tomorrow right

Purab : oh yea I completely forgot about that I have to go for conference tomorrow, good night brother

Abhi : good night

Arora house

Pragya enters her main hall room to talk with her dad who is reading the book seating on the chair

Prakash : why are you standing there dear, come inside (says keeping his book aside)

Pragya : I want to talk something important with you dad

Prakash ; why are you so scared, you know I am like a friend to all of you children, say frankly what is the matter

Pragya (sits down ) : dad, you know that more than mom you are my best friend thats why I want to talk about my life today

Prakash : go ahead I am listening

Pragya : remember you told me that you want a guy for me who will love and respect me and I said I want that person to be like you and I found him dad, prince of my dream who will whisk me away in fairytale

Prakash : you took in reality the fairytales your mom told you all in childhood, dear its real life

Pragya : I know dad but he is the person I was waiting whole life

Prakash : who is he? (Says with seriousness)

Pragya : his name is Rajiv

Prakash : what does he do? is he well to do?

Pragya : actually dad, he is from a middle class family but he is very ambitious, he got a very good job in London and soon will get promotion in his job, he is a newspaper editor

Prakash gets in thinking after hearing his daughter's words. Though he never refused his children for anything he would not want them to do anything wrong

Pragya : what happened dad?

Prakash : Pragya, me and your mom always gave you all three freedom you wanted so you can cope up with this world, and you all never misused that freedom so I want to meet that boy before deciding anything

Pragya : really dad? (Says excitedly)

Prakash : but only on one condition, I have kept honor of your words now you too have to keep our honor, if I find anything wrong in that guy I will not let you marry him and you have to respect our decision

Pragya : I promise dad, I will never go against you and keep the honor of this family (puts hands on his)

The screen freezes on Abhi's tensed and Pragya's happy face. Next day at Mehra house everybody gathers on dining table for breakfast. Alia gets on thinking about Sid.

Rakesh ; Arpita, I want to talk something important today

Arpita : what is new in that? go ahead

Rakesh : I have found suitable partner for Abhi

Everybody stays surprised on Rakesh's casual behavior

Arpita : are you serious? and you did not bother to tell me, its my son's life, at least tell us who is that girl

Rakesh : that girl's name is Tanushree Agarwal

Abhi's coffee slips from mouth hearing the name

Arpita : is that girl working in our office, Abhi's personal assistant

Rakesh : yes you are right, Abhi what do you think, final decision would be yours

Abhi : whatever you say dad

Purab : wow bro, you are so lucky, that dad is agreeing to your relationship

Rakesh : I can hear everything

Arpita : but how did you agree to this knowing Tanu's background

Rakesh : because my son loves her, and if I cannot do a small thing for him what is the use of this prestige

Abhi is delighted to hear his dad's words and goes to seek his blessing

Rakesh (makes him stand up): Abhi, so what if I don't talk to you about your personal life but I can read your eyes and mind but you have to promise me something today

Abhi : yes dad, anything for you, I didn't expected that you could agree to make Tanu daughter in law of this house

Rakesh : I know in past I had another perception about middle class people but I always want happiness for my family Abhi so you have to make a promise that you will not let the honor of this family let down at any cost

Abhi : I promise you dad no matter what I will never put this family's honor at stake

Arpita : fine then lets call her family and meet them once

Purab : she only has a elder brother who is Abhi's best friend

Arora house

Rajiv comes to meet Prakash at home. He gets nervous though Pragya told him that her dad is very open minded about everything. He keeps looking at the door bell when Pragya opens it

Pragya : are you going to ask that door bell for my hand or come inside

Rajiv : sorry I was just nervous

Pragya : come inside now (drags him)

Sarla : who is it Pragya (shouts from kitchen)

Pragya : its Rajiv mom,

Bulbul : oh so you are my future brother in law (comes in jumping like kid and gives him high five which he gives too)

Rajiv : yes if your sister and I are set up (starts getting along with Bulbul to irritate Pragya)

Pragya : stop it both of you or else I will show you both right now

Bulbul : wow, jiju my sister is already getting jealous, we will make her more jealous by going on date, what say

Prakash : Bulbul go inside right now (says sternly)

Bulbul : okay (goes inside)

Prakash : so you are Rajiv (shakes his hand)

Rajiv : yes sir, I am Rajiv

Sarla : come dear, lets have breakfast together and we will chat while eating

Prakash : so you are a newspaper editor, I must say it is quite impressive work, who else is in your family

Rajiv : I only have a younger sister, my parents died 8 years ago

Prakash : so at small age you had the responsibility

Rajiv : well I didn't have to work too hard because my sister is talented and I don't think even in future I have to take anybody's favor, I trust myself enough

Prakash is quite impressed with Rajiv's self confidence and attitude

Prakash : Sarla, won't you bring the sweet for our son in law

Pragya : that means you agree for this relation dad (goes to hug him)

Prakash : Rajiv come here dear, Pragya is the honor of this family and I always gave my children everything they wanted and they never misused that freedom

Rajiv : I know sir

Prakash : sir? call me dad, and Rajiv don't hesitate to scold her if she makes mistake (looks at Pragya who pouts hearing it) my daughter is very naive take care of her

Rajiv ; I will not give you chance for any complain, I will keep her always happy

Prakash : god bless you

Rajiv : I just have one request, dad actually I want this marriage to be done as soon as possible because I will get call anytime for my job in London, and if I get married then Pragya will be able to go with me

Prakash : okay then we will call the priest and ask the auspicious date

Rajiv : okay, I am getting late for work

Prakash : alright go ahead, work comes first

The priest tells the auspicious date for wedding of Rajiv and Pragya is after three days.

Sarla : three days? thats such less time

Bulbul : you are right mom, when will we do the shopping for then

Pragya : its okay mom, we will do the rituals later when we come back

Sarla : okay fine then lets start the preparation soon enough


Precap : Abhi fill vermillion in Pragya's head to save her from humiliation much to the shock of both families.


Edited by ashpat3 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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per-cap is shocking i will wait for your update
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

per-cap is shocking i will wait for your update


Obviously because real story will start from now 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg...such a big twist...how...?????????
Thx fr pm ya
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Amazing update. Loved it.
Eagerly waiting for next update do Continue soon please.
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Part 4

Abhi decides to send Tanu for the conference out of country

Tanu : but Abhi, are you not coming? it is such a big deal and what will I do without you

Abhi : you are going with Purab, so you will not be alone (says typing on his computer)

Tanu : okay, when will i have to go

Abhi : you, Purab and some other employes are going together tonight

Tanu : tonight? okay fine I will get ready

Abhi : be ready by 8, flight is at 9:30, I will come pick you up

Tanu : alright, I will wait (is about to leave but Abhi stops her)

" I want to ask you something, tell me honestly" says Abhi holding her hands

Tanu : what is it (says nervously)

Abhi : you know ever since you joined this company, I considered you more than a employee, but today I want to ask you something

Tanu : yes tell me what happened

Abhi : you know that I always wanted a girl that would understand me and my workload time, who could live with the spare time I get, and I found that girl whom can fulfill the lack in my life

Tanu : who is she? (Says looking at other side)

Abhi takes her to the mirror which shows her reflection

Tanu : Abhi? do you know what you are saying

Abhi : why not? if you have some concern you can tell me or if there is somebody in your life

Tanu ; its not that but I can't tell you how different are we

Abhi: I know you might be thinking that we are from different background, but that does not matter to me because if anybody who understand my feeling its you, so will you take care of me like this forever (forwards his hand)

Tanu hesitant;y puts her hand on his as she too likes Abhi which makes him happy.

Tanu : but your dad? will he accept

Abhi : don't worry, I talked with my dad, and he agreed, now it is time for your dear brother's permission

Tanu : oh yeah I completely forgot I didn't even meet him yesterday properly

Later Tanu and Abhi goes to meet Rajiv at his office

Tanu : bro, I am so sorry (hugs him) I could not talk to you yesterday

Rajiv : stop battering me. you were so busy in your work that you don't even remember your brother great

Tanu : I said sorry na and that should be my dialogue, now that you are getting married

Abhi : what? (shocked) why didn't you tell me about this

Rajiv : if you both are done with your complaining can I say something

Abhi : what are you waiting for ?

Rajiv : Pragya's mom called me that the auspicious day is after three days, and I have to leave too because I would get call for London soon, so Pragya can come with me

Tanu : Three days? no bro its too less and I am going out for office work for 5 days right Abhi

Abhi : yea, but Tanu you can stay back if you want thats fine

Rajiv : no way work is first, thats fine and anyway we are not doing the wedding in grand way, I don't know how will all this happen so quickly when are you leaving

Tanu : tonight bro, thats so not fair I will miss your my only brother's wedding

Rajiv : my dear sister, you don't worry we will make your wedding go grand that whole city will remember

Tanu shyingly looks at Abhi noticed by Rajiv

Rajiv ; what is going on in these eyes signals

Abhi : nothing at all

Rajiv : I know what is going on, Tanu tell me what is the matter

Tanu : why don't you ask your friend (runs outside with too my shy)

Rajiv : I don't believe this Abhi, my sister is blushing so much

Abhi : actually today your sister has found prince of her dreams,

Rajiv : what? (gets shocked) who is it

Abhi : who do you think? you know that guy very well, he is your best friend

Rajiv gets into thinking and realizes Abhi is talking about himself

Rajiv : oh my god, Abhi but when did this happen and how

Abhi : Rajiv, you know me from years that Tanu is the type of girl I want, and even dad agrees that she will be able to adjust in my family very well too, so when can I take your sister

Rajiv : what else a brother wants when his sister is getting such a good family

Abhi : then its settle, you do dinner at my house today before Tanu and Purab leaves for conference, and you can talk with dad too

Rajiv : okay see you in evening

Pragya calls Rajiv for shopping

Rajiv : yes my would be wife, what can I do for you

Pragya : Rajiv, its only two days of our wedding and you started ignoring me

Rajiv : now what did I do

Pragya : you promised me we will do the shopping together

Rajiv : I am so sorry sweetheart but I have very important meeting today and then Tanu is leaving tonight

Pragya : fine, you enjoy your work and your friend (hangs up angrily)

Rajiv : Pragya, listen to me, this girl is crazy

Abhi : thats what I am telling that from the whole world you have found very unique girl

Rajiv : stop it yaar, i don't know for what you both have been fighting from years

Arora house

The house is full in swing for the wedding, The girls come to put henna in Pragya's hand.

Bulbul : hey girls put the mehndi very carefully on my sister's hand

Sarla : kaka, take all this flowers to the hall, it is the wedding house, nobody is concerned, come on hurry up everybody

The girl is about to write the name on Pragya's hand but a bowl of water drops on her hand due to which it gets spoiled

Pragya : mom, look what happened

Sarla : this is not a good sign

Bulbul : mom, sis you both are very superstitious about everything, chill it happens, girls put that again

Girl : but it cannot be put again because it got all spoiled and this marks will not go easily

Bulbul : thats okay, sis you go wash hands

Pragya gets tensed about the incidence

Mehra house

Rajiv and Tanu goes to Mehra house for dinner in evening

Tanu : hello aunty, uncle

Arpita : come in dear, I must say you both are very punctual, no wonder my Abhi chose you, I am proud of my son

Rajiv : thank so much aunty

Tanu ; aunty where is Alia, I didn't meet her from so many days

Arpita : she is in her room, but you both come quickly for dinner okay

Tanu : sure aunty

Arpita : Rajiv, I am sure you would have known everything today, thank you dear

Rajiv : don't embarras me aunty, infact I am very happy that Tanu will be getting married in this house, and I have one request from you

Arpita : yes dear

Rajiv : aunty my sister is very naive, if unintentionally she makes any mistake please forgive her

Arpita : don't worry dear, I promise she is equally like my Alia

Rakesh : hello young man, so you are Rajiv

Rajiv : yes sir, how are you

Rakesh ; don't be so formal, call me uncle now we are going to relatives soon

Rajiv : sorry uncle, why don't do the engagement ceremony after Tanu comes back from conference

Rakesh : give us some time to think, lets have dinner right now

Purab : hey congratulations dude, Abhi bro just told me about it

Arpita : what are you congratulating for?

Purab : mom, he is getting married tomorrow

Arpita ; why suddenly? is everything alright

Rajiv ; actually aunty, I have got promotion to London and after that I will have very least chance to come back to India so I thought I would take her with me, and you all have to come in my wedding with Abhi

Arpita : who is that lucky girl? and why would we not come

Rajiv : Pragya Arora,

The family gets startled to hear it that Rajiv is getting married to their enemy's daughter

Rakesh : Rajiv : dear we won't be able to come there but very congratulations

Rajiv : okay uncle as you wish

Later after the dinner the family goes to drop Purab and Tanu at airport

Abhi : Purab, take care of her alright

Purab : bro we are going for office work, you don't worry I will bring back your fiancee safely

Tanu : okay uncle (touches his feet)

Rakesh : god bless you dear, now when you come back you will return as your daughter in law, I will waiting for that day

Tanu : I promise you uncle, I will not give you chance for complain

Rajiv : take care, you are happy na (takes her aside)

Tanu : yes bro, and i like Abhi too, I am sure I will be very happy with him

Rajiv: okay now you leave, you are getting late

Next day Rajiv and Pragya gets ready for their wedding. Pragya gets dressed and blushes in front of mirror. She sees her sister sitting sadly

Pragya : hey what happened to my princess, why are you sad

Bulbul : you will be leaving today, and very soon you will go to another country, who will I fight, share my feelings (gets in tears)

Pragya : whats this, its my farewell and you are crying why so, and I am just going to another house, not far from you

Bulbul : i will be alone in this house

Pragya : look at me Bulbul, you know that your sister will be always with you, nothing can separate us, if there is anything you will first tell me before mom alright

Bulbul : yes sis (hugs her) I will miss you a lot

Pragya : I will miss you too my princess, and take care of everybody alright

Sid : hey my dear sister (looks at her) is looking like angel today

Pragya : thank you bro, and my brother is also looking handsome, today so many girls will hoover at you

Sid : look at her, why her mood is off today

Pragya : nothing, she just got emotional today

The trio share emotional moments together

Mehra house

Abhi asks his dad to join with him to Rajiv's wedding

Rakesh : Abhi, I did not tell Rajiv anything because he does have anything to do with our family enmity, but you know everything about it

Abhi : but dad

Arpita : Abhi, no more arguments, you can go if you want but we will not go alright

Abhi : alright mom, I am leaving (leaves)

The baarat arrives at the venue. Abhi too joins Rajiv in the procession. Everybody is happy about the occasion. Pragya's heartbeat start to pump faster as time is coming near. In the midst Rajiv gets call from somebody . After a while Bulbul and Sarla brings Pragya down. Prakash is overwhelmed to see his daughter

Pragya : dad (is about to touch his feet)

Prakash : no dear, you know in this family children's place is in our heart (hugs her emotionally)

Pragya : I know till today you have given me everything I wanted, but today I need your blessings to start my new life

Prakash : I will only say one thing to you today, in future don't do anything that will hurt your self respect, I have raised you all with one hope that you would never get chance to bow down in front of anybody

Sarla : Pragya, lets go, time is running out

Later Sarla welcomes the groom and the ceremony starts. The groom fill vermillion in Pragya's head and takes the vows. After the ceremony everybody is astonished to see Abhi as the groom not Rajiv. This comes to big blow to Pragya and Prakash. He is about to slap Abhi but Sarla calms him down. But Pragya slaps him hardly and asks about Rajiv.

Pragya : Abhi, he was with you where is he, you cannot do this, where is my Rajiv

Abhi does not respond to her questions and remembers something

Flashback

Abhi does not find Rajiv anywhere and calls him who is driving to airport

Rajiv : Abhi, there is big problem yaar,

Abhi : what happened now,

Rajiv : boss called me, I have to leave immediately for London right now

Abhi : what the hell? why didn't you tell him its your wedding he cannot do that

Rajiv : actually its my fault, I didn't tell him anything so he wants me to leave today

Abhi : how can you be so careless? now you cannot go like this

Rajiv : Abhi, please understand this job is very important me and I am doing this for me and Pragya, I got this job after so much difficult and I cannot afford to lose

Abhi : how convenient, you can leave your bride in altar but cannot lose your job, no way I will help you but you are not going anywhere

Rajiv : Abhi, please, and as far as concerned she is very strong girl she will understand my problem

Abhi : do you have any idea how much she will be humiliated

Rajiv : Abhi, today I am asking favor from you

Abhi : what is it ?

Rajiv : you get married to Pragya

This anger Abhi to the core who is not ready to take the step

Abhi : have you lost it Rajiv? I cannot do that, and what about Tanu then

Rajiv : you don't worry about her, I will explain her everything, I am getting late I will talk to you later bye (hangs up the phone)

Flashback ends

Pragya : no this is not true, he cannot do this to me, and I don't believe this marriage (breaks the tied bond and runs to her room)

Bulbul : sis (goes after Pragya)

Sid is about to hit Abhi but Sarla stops him.

Sarla : calm down both of you

People start to taunt Prakash about getting his daughter married to his enemy's son

Sid : I will not spare that Rajiv for what he did to my sister

Pragya starts breaking things in her room and looks at the vermillion and mangalsutra that Abhi tied in her neck.

Bulbul : sis please, calm down

"NO, this cannot happen, I don't believe this marriage, Rajiv cannot do this to me" Pragya's loud voice echoes in the room

Bulbul tries to console her sister but in vain. Sarla tells Prakash that Pragya has to go at Mehra house

Prakash : you have gone crazy, Sarla, you know very well that family will not accept our daughter at any cost

Sarla: marriage is not a joke, and we have to accept whatever happened

Pragya ; no mom I will not go at that house, and if you have problem I will this house but never go there (says sternly) this marriage is nothing for me

Pragya leaves for Goa to get peace of mind for few days

Flashback ends

Pragya goes to her flight for Mumbai from goa after writing her diary. She reaches Bombay in few hours.


Precap : Abhi brings Pragya at Mehra house as his wife which brings rift between father and son. Arpita too gets angry at Abhi

"Abhishek Mehra, you made a very big mistake by marrying with me, and I will make you pay heavy price for this "Pragya says looking at Abhi's picture in the room

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Hello Ash! Sorry for my indefinite absence...finally read this wonderful story amidst a lot of troubles...I mistakenly emptied the entire PM Box. So all the 50 PMs I received is out in the bin 😭 Thankfully my mail has the stories name so came back after searching in the forum...
Wow! You have written nearly 30 stories...superb dear! I want to read all of them...will do it soon...

Thanks for the PM.
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Good...both Pragya's parents and Anhi's parents approved of their childrens' relationship...wedding bells are gonna ring soon too...But this Rajiv created a big disaster in their life! Hopefully a beautiful disaster 😆 Abhi married Pragya...but he too did it for his friend right? Why is Pragya showing her anger on him?...Maybe after getting settled in London Rajiv will again come to India to ask for Pragya's hand by divorcing Abhi?...Ok I am talking too much...I will stop here.
What will be Tanu's reaction? Will the Mehra family ill treat her? I don't think Aliya would be like that...hehe that clears Sid's way to get her!
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Amazing update. loved it.
Continue soon please
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Part 3
Nice part so abhi & pragya marriage fixed .& precap what was dat ??? I guess from now on the story will start.
Part 4
Omg ye Kya hua 😲. & that rajiv how could he so easily leave pragya just for a job & abhi his friend said get married & he agreed . On top of dat sarla wants to tie her daughter in relation that to without her consent . Abhi & rajiv both did wrong. Precap how could pragya agree to go with abhi .
Nice part do cont. Soon

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