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-Nive-

@-Nive-

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Nainuuu!!!! I wish I could write like you when I comment on your beautifully woven stories. *trying to control my excitement.*

More on the story in few minutes as I couldn't stop me from telling this instantly. Your writing is just ❤️

I am starting to fangirl Nainu, the writer !!

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-Nive-

@-Nive-

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Thank you for showing us this side of Pragya. What Pragya thinks about herself, her expectations and her dreams. I love how it's basically about HER even though other people play important roles.

I am glad that I had known the song and it's meaning already (so that I could get how she was feeling). She had tears hearing the song? Poor soul. I loved her reaction after seeing the red sari. So like a kid.

Pragya trying to flirt?😲 😳 We may have seen it in the show now. But this Pragya trying to flirt is something cute. She doesn't give him the chance to speak. How smart Pragzy!! Is she trying to fulfill her small wishes of spending moments with a nice hubby? I liked how you put the red sari back in the story again. I have to learn words more than like and love.

And how could I leave Abhi? He noticed her tears and spoke gently to her. So he was noticing her admiring the red sari while pretending to be on his phone (Am I assuming?). He genuinely complimented her at the end. Oh my, I have to stop as I think I am going to start the comment all over again. 😆

I am not an avid reader. But as far as I have read, some writers give importance to actions rather than thoughts and some give importance to thoughts than actions. But you are giving us a perfect blend of thoughts as well as actions.

I feel that there is a slight difference between the Pragya in the show and your diaries. The difference is your Pragya retains most of the traits from the soap but she is more human and natural. 😃

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anamika.viji

@anamika.viji

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Nainu...❤️...no words coming up... enjoying those moments with pragya !!

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Naina

@Naina-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: -Nive-
Nainuuu!!!! I wish I could write like you when I comment on your beautifully woven stories. *trying to control my excitement.*
More on the story in few minutes as I couldn't stop me from telling this instantly. Your writing is just ❤️
I am starting to fangirl Nainu, the writer !!

Awww 😳 Nivs, thank you SO SO much!! Incredibly humbled that you like 'em! 🤗

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Naina

@Naina-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

And Nivu, thank you for analysing it! Such a long comment by Nives makes me so happy! And I'm so glad you see both the similarities and the differences between the Pragz from the show and the one I write.

Like Abhi, I feel like Pragya's sudden love for him was too quickly executed on the show. So wanted to show that she had these feelings starting to develop for him at some eariler point in time.

Thank you Nivu once again for reading and commenting! ❤️

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Naina

@Naina-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: anamika.viji

Nainu...❤️...no words coming up... enjoying those moments with pragya !!

Veej!! Thank you dear, I'm so glad you liked it!! 🤗❤️

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Mina

@-mina-

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Nainu!!! Your stories make me cry. In the best possible way. It's something I'm afraid of - a story that hits too close to the heart. Good stories are supposed to make you feel, but there's something scary and intense about a reading experience that takes you unexpectedly deep into a character's small moments of anguish, which is how your two OSes feel to me. The beautiful thing in your stories, though, is that it's possible to surface back at the end, exhilarated by the emotional journey. I don't know how you manage to end the stories at those perfect points of not quite resolution, where something happened start to finish but the deeper problem remains unsolved. That's so very lifelike but it's another thing that scares me in fiction - yet you make it work so perfectly. I'm so glad you're sharing these Nainz! I check in on them because I adore you and I love your take on the characters, and though they take me out of my comfort zone I feel thrilled to read and re-read each story. One thing I wanted to ask you, are they all taking place in the same universe, or is each like a completely different timeline? Whichever it is, I'm fascinated for more please! Thank you for posting!! 🤗

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Sowmii_cutiee

@Sowmii_cutiee

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Nainu Nainu... Love it yaaarrr ... Bigg bigg Hugg 🤗

It felt sooo good ready this Os... I really wish u didnt leave me hanging to my imagination of wat Abhi did with the picure.. I hope u give an Epilogue for this OS...

Love how Abhi noticed tat she cried.. n later tat she was admiring the red sari.. ❤️

tat Abhi giving peak was surprising..

RES... will comment more soon 😆

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Naina

@Naina-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: -GrilledCheese-
beautifully written!

Thank you!! 😳

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Naina

@Naina-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: -mina-
Nainu!!! Your stories make me cry. In the best possible way. It's something I'm afraid of - a story that hits too close to the heart. Good stories are supposed to make you feel, but there's something scary and intense about a reading experience that takes you unexpectedly deep into a character's small moments of anguish, which is how your two OSes feel to me. The beautiful thing in your stories, though, is that it's possible to surface back at the end, exhilarated by the emotional journey. I don't know how you manage to end the stories at those perfect points of not quite resolution, where something happened start to finish but the deeper problem remains unsolved. That's so very lifelike but it's another thing that scares me in fiction - yet you make it work so perfectly. I'm so glad you're sharing these Nainz! I check in on them because I adore you and I love your take on the characters, and though they take me out of my comfort zone I feel thrilled to read and re-read each story. One thing I wanted to ask you, are they all taking place in the same universe, or is each like a completely different timeline? Whichever it is, I'm fascinated for more please! Thank you for posting!! 🤗

MINAMA!!! Where do I start?

Thank you SO SO much for your feedback!! I'm actually at a loss of words on what to say, because this was just too sweet. And coming from someone who I so genuinely and tremendously admire, I'm honored that you took time out of your busy schedule to not only read the OSes, but write such a heartwarming comment. ❤️

@Bold-My face has been plastered with the biggest grin ever since I read this half an hour ago. 😳 I adore you and your stories too!!!

And regarding your question, its a diary, so I guess, yes, they're from the same universe. But unfortunately, I didn't write the OSes in chronological order in terms of KKB time, so even though its a diary (and the whole point of a diary is to see the transition of a person through their written words), the time stamp of each OS will not be chronological. But yeah, these characters are the same Abhi and Pragya from the last OS. Hopefully that made sense loll...

Again, Minamaaa, I cannot thank you enough for such a sweet comment. Totally melted my heart!! 🤗

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