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Dr.Needa

@-VisheshTippani

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

hy guys this is my 1st ever story on KKB forum...

which is a horror story...

the idea came to me- why abhi the rock star scared of ghost...

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hope u all will like it...

continuation

of the story will depend up on response.

😊

waiting for ur likes & precious responses...

Edited by vishesh_Tippani - 9 years ago

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Dr.Needa

@-VisheshTippani

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

INDEX

Teaser on page1

Chapter1(A)- Background on page 3

Chapter1(B) Horrible on page 5

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Dr.Needa

@-VisheshTippani

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Character sketch

Abhi

Aliya

Purab

Vasundra

Will update other characters soon

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Dr.Needa

@-VisheshTippani

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Teaser of story -

There was over flowing of water from that toilet...

he was nt sure weather it was really the same hotel he had entered few minutes back..as it was stinking inside that toilet...as soon as he entered that toilet the door behind him closed with a loud thud ...

room suddenly changed its color & became all Red & dim lighted... he was now shouting for help as he got locked inside that ugly toilet which was even changing colors...

when He turned back he got shocked as he was witnessing most horrible scene... a nightmare bt that was nt the case as he was experiencing them all... which was beyond his imagination... the toilet had turned into a deadly horrifying view with a dead body of a young lady floating in bath tub with face all scratched up beaten.eyes burned & bleeding...marks of struggle on her body...bruised arms & legs...

He got all numbed...on seeing all that visuals he can't ever forget in his entire life...only if he will survive now!!!

and then he became more terrified& shocked!!! when he saw what she was holding in her hand...

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how's it guys...I know m nt good in explaining things bt m trying... hope u all will like it...

continuation

of the story will depend up on response.

😊

waiting for ur likes & precious responses...

Edited by vishesh_Tippani - 9 years ago

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Avleen ( Cj or sijay)

@Btsarmy

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Loved the idea, needa!

What was the girl ( probably she's pragya) holding in her hand?

How will it all lead to love? ;)

Wish to read more now.

Continue soon. :)

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Manocat

@Manocat

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

vishesh its good

The teaser is interesting

... Who is tht lady ...is the man dreaming ...who is the man ... Who is that lady...

The lady seens to be badly injured ...

M having alot of questions...😆

Btw m anxiously wa8ng for the chapter

Do continue soon

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Dr.Needa

@-VisheshTippani

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Manocat
vishesh its good
The teaser is interesting
... Who is tht lady ...is the man dreaming ...who is the man ... Who is that lady...
The lady seens to be badly injured ...
M having alot of questions...😆
Btw m anxiously wa8ng for the chapter
Do continue soon

Thank you BTW m Needa

Not vishesh😆

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Dr.Needa

@-VisheshTippani

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sijay.is.real
Loved the idea, needa!
What was the girl ( probably she's pragya) holding in her hand?
How will it all lead to love? ;)
Wish to read more now.
Continue soon. :)

Thank you

BTW sorry to disappoint u its not a love story
Sijay it's a horror story... Abhi h jisme