One is a lonely number (OS for Miths)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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(This is dedicated to Miths aka vivkriti). I know this is nothing compared to Shabbo's birthday gift to you, Miths, but please accept this little one.🤗

One is a lonely number

"Abhi!!!, I love you, Abhi.. one and only ROCKSTAR, Abhi!!!!", the fans screamed on the TV at the concluding song of Abhi's concert. But Abhi did not hear the noise.

Because Abhi was in his room, and had fallen asleep, watching the recording of his own concert that he had performed a few hours ago. He was exhausted.

But the soul inside him was awake. The soul hadn't been able to remain at peace for a while now. The concert tired Abhi's body but the soul was still perturbed, as usual.

It peeked out of Abhi's body.

"ABHIII!!!", the fan souls started running out of the TV screen, towards Abhi's soul.

Some souls ran so fast that they caught him. Abhi's soul tried to smile, wish them a hello, but some pulled his hand, some hugged him, some kissed him and the soul felt stroppy all of a sudden. It ran out of there escaping them.

"Chaaachu!!", Bunty and Babli's souls rushed to Abhi's soul. Abhi's soul kissed them and walked down the stairs, letting them continue their play in the corridor.

Abhi's soul went to kitchen to get a glass of water. It saw Mitali Bhabhi's soul, who tried to hide something that was in her hand. Playing unnoticed Abhi's soul got itself some water.

"I knew you were doing something awful", Abhi's soul heard Raj Bhaiyya's soul, talking to Mitali Bhabhi's soul. Raj Bhaiyya's soul noticed Abhi, just gave a smile and continued talking to Bhabhi's soul.

Abhi's soul then saw Tayiji's soul eavesdropping in order to hear what Raj Bhaiyya's soul was saying; Tayaji's soul was shouting for it to come inside the room.

Leaving the kitchen, Abhi's soul walked towards his room and suddenly saw Aakash and Rachna's souls talking to each other. They stopped talking as soon as they realized Abhi's soul's presence. Abhi's soul smiled at the sleeping baby soul in Rachna's arm and wished them goodnight.

Abhi's soul didn't feel like sleeping. It decided to go to the balcony. As it watched the stars, it found crying Bulbul's soul up in the sky. "Hey Tweet Tweet, Bulbuls don't cry", shouted Abhi's soul. "I am fine Jiju", said Bulbul's soul turning away.

As Abhi's soul turned to leave the balcony, it stalled to see a gun pointed at it. It was none other than its baby sister Aaliyah's soul. "You will not be happy, Bhai. I won't let you be. You are proud that you are a rockstar, hmm? I will take your everything away", said Aaliyah's soul crying with anger. "Aaliyah, don't do this to yourself", Abhi soul begged. Suddenly Aaliyah's soul saw Bulbul's soul and started chasing it and both souls disappeared to the oblivion.

Breathing deep sigh, Abhi's soul walked inside but saw Sarla Maa's soul walking in a hurry. "Auntyji, you here", asked Abhi's soul. "I.. I came... Pragya.. I wanted to see Pragya...", stammered Sarla Maa's soul. "Are you okay, Auntyji? Where is rockstar Daadi?", enquired Abhi's soul. "Yeah all is well, all will be well, Betaji", Sarla Maa's soul tried to leave. "Auntyji...", Abhi's soul tried to stop her but then got distracted seeing Purab's soul jumping the wall.

"Purab, what are you doing here man? In the middle of the night?", Abhi's soul ran to question Purab's soul.

Purab's soul tried to hide a CD that was in it's hand. "Abhi, I just had to give something to.. to Pragya Di.. ". "What's in your hand?", asked curious Abhi's soul. "Nothing, just a.. CD, oh your concert one.. full version", said Purab's soul turning away to walk off. "Come yaar, let's watch the concert together, like the old times.. and let's have a drink", offered Abhi's soul. "Not now, Abhi.. I got to go... I have to give it to Pragya Di...we will watch the concert tomorrow, for sure..", rushed out Purab's soul. Abhi's soul sighed.

Abhi's soul saw Suresh's soul standing by a window peeping at him. The souls exchanged a smile that was not a smile.

"ABHIII, your baby, our baby, marry me, just marry me NOW", came running Tannu's soul holding a baby soul in her hand. "Abhi just marry me, I want you, all of you with the enormous fame and name, I have dreamt of it all for this baby. Marry me, damn it", before Tannu's soul reached near Abhi's soul, it saw Nikhil's soul and hid behind a door.

"I wonder where is Pragya", thought Abhi's soul and tried to walk inside it's room. But it heard Pragya's voice from the room nearby.

"Purab, we have to make sure this CD...", Pragya's soul stopped as it saw Abhi's soul at the door. Purab's soul excused itself out of the room.

Abhi's soul was stunned to see Pragya all Fuggy- the Pragya he knew of. "Fuggy", it ran to it and embraced it. "I love you, Fuggy. Where had you been? I was waiting for you all this while", cried out Abhi's soul. "I haven't gone anywhere, I am always with you", consoled Fuggy's soul. "Then why do you keep running away", complained Abhi's soul tightening the hug.

Right then, some noise was heard. "I got to go, I have to trap her.. she will destroy you. She will take all your money. She will separate us..", said Fuggy's soul, releasing itself from the hug. "Who, Fuggy? What are you talking about? No one can separate us as long as you are with me", Abhi's soul held Fuggy's hand.

"Please leave me. I have to go. I have something important to do", said Fuggy's soul.

"What is more important to you than hugging me? You worry that we will separate and you yourself want to be separated from me", questioned Abhi's soul.

"I can't tell you anything now. I have to go.. bye...", Fuggy's soul ran looking back every moment.

Abhi's soul was left with open arms for Fuggy's soul. Again.

Abhi's soul started crying. It felt alone. Again.

The only person it could think of was Daadi's soul. It ran into Daadi soul's room like a kid. Daadi soul was talking to Indu Daasi's soul. Abhi's soul placed it's head in Daadi's soul's lap.

"My Raja beta, are you okay?" asked Daadi's soul as it caressed Abhi's soul's head.

"Now I have started to feel okay", said Abhi's soul as it almost went to sleep. Right then, Daadi soul's phone rang. It slowly put Abhi's head away on the bed thinking it is fully asleep.

"He is sleeping. Now tell", Daadi soul talked in whispers. Seeing Indu Daadi's soul trying to hear, Daadi's soul moved away. "Okay Pragya, I will come. He will not know for sure", said Daadi's soul and found her chappals to walk away.

Abhi's soul opened its eyes.'Daadi too!' Abhi's soul couldn't help with its tears. It went back to its lonely room crying alone. It saw the guitar on the table and started to play it.

"Love love, happy love", played the guitar. Abhi's soul forgot every one of its loneliness for a second.

"Abhi!!!, I love you, Abhi..one and only ROCKSTAR, Abhi!!!!", the fan souls screamed on the TV.

Abhi's soul was shaken by their voice. It ran back to hide inside Abhi's sleeping body to escape the fan souls.

It was lonely inside. It was lonely everywhere.

Abhi was lonely. One and only, one and lonely.

One is a lonely number.

Edited by -Tia- - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow... awesome Edit. One of the best birthday gift. Really loved how beautiful you wrote Abhi condition. He is truly alone all around him are playing with his feelings only his fans are truthful to him. Superb OS Tia. Thank you very much for this lovely birthday gift.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tia...
Awesome Tia.. As like always you wrote beautifully..

I had tears in my eyes... Sad for Abhi, but HIS Music is always there to FORGET EVERYTHING😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww! Abhi! :((((

Great one Tia!

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